Check to See if Your Roleplay has been Accepted (v.2)

[Skymin]

Fossil Fusion's Pokemon Rainbow Canyon is accepted!

Inferna's The Illusion of Stallant is accepted!

Eeveelution Co-ordinator's Performing for Sinnoh! is declined.
You could really develop your storyline a little more, perhaps go into more detail why the players are going into co-ordinators and perhaps go into more detail about about the evil organisation. Also, you have no rating.

Miss Doronjo's PokeKhermia: The Flow of Mana is accepted!

Wild_Squirtle's Defenders Of The Night is declined.
This really has potential! You really need to develop the storyline more, perhaps add a backstory about the different gangs and their relationships.

[Skymin]

Jake♫'s IC thread is accepted!

雷影　イチロ's Atlantis Awakening is accepted!

Wild_Squirtle's Defenders of the Night is declined.
This is better, but you'll need just a little more. You've got the background all sweet, but I think you'll need a paragraph outlining what is happening between the groups right now.

StinkomanFan's Lime Light is declined.
Um... I really don't understand what this roleplay is... the storyline is really... a one person thing. It doesn't feel like something that needs more than one person.

StinkomanFan's Five Trainers on a Search for an Exit is declined.
The storyline sounds okay, but you really need a backstory to explain why scientists would build something like this. You also need a sign up sheet and a rules section!

[Skymin]

gimmiepie's IC thread is accepted!

StinkomanFan's Five Trainers on a Search for an Exit .02 is accepted!
Please though, do keep a cap on the gore to a reasonable level.

Fenne-kun's A Rocket's Diary is accepted!

~Genevieve~'s 12/21/12 is accepted!

雷影　イチロ's IC thread is accepted!

[Skymin]

-DeepImpact-'s War Between Pokémon and Humans: Foreshadows of Hoenn is accepted!

Ewery1's Pokemon Plasma is accepted!

StinkomanFan's OOC is accepted!

Fenne-kun's IC is accepted!

[Skymin]

-DeepImpact-'s IC is accepted!

Miss Doronjo's [/TAMERS] and its OOC is accepted!

Ewery1's IC is accepted!

gimmiepie's Pokemon Survival Challenge v2 is accepted!

~Genevieve~'s IC is accepted!

[Razor Leaf]

Yo, filling in for Skymin while she's away!

WolfOfEve's IC is accepted!

Limanya's Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Roads of Light and its OOC are accepted!

miley810's Shattered Reality is accepted!

chaoticlapras' Hunger Games is declined.
It sounds alright but a good amount of background information on what the original Hunger Games actually is would be needed since not everyone knows that.

[Razor Leaf]

gimmiepie's Pokémon Survival Challenge v2 is accepted!

darkhaven3's Machinations of Dementia: Descent into Madness and its OOC are declined.
You're mostly sorted story-wise and rating-wise, but your rules and sign-up form leave much to be desired. They're pretty vague and not formatted very well and just aren't very clear or helpful for RPers. Look at some other threads, spruce them up a wee bit, and you're grand.

Deathbot's Chicken Apocalypse is declined.
You've no real filling in your storyline telling us how we arrived at this, uh, apocalypse. You need to be building on that quite a bit. You've also no sign-up form and no rating. Go have a look around the section for examples of what's acceptable for a storyline and add a rating and an SU form.

[Razor Leaf]

Dements' Pokémon Crisis is accepted!

Crimson0191's Pokemon City Life is declined.
You presently lack a rating and a rules section - these are the main problems. A bit more of a story would be nice too; right now it seems to be mostly people battling Pokémon in a school which is fine to start with but a wee bit of direction'd be grand, or just some ideas to work with really.

[Razor Leaf]

Bleacher's Pokémon Johto Journeys- Dreams & Nightmares is accepted!

Oshy's The Seventh Door is declined.
As it stands, you lack a rating and a rules section. Add these and I'm fairly sure you're grand.

[Razor Leaf]

Darkhaven3's The Machinations of Dementia I: Descent into Madness is accepted!

Oshy's The Seventh Door is accepted!

[Razor Leaf]

Dements' Pokémon Crisis is accepted!

TheSiranna's Kingdom Wars: Fight of Shadows is declined.
The first thing I noticed is that you lack a rating. However, reading through your plot, there are a lot of loose ends. What were the evil wizards you mentioned looking for? Why did the kingdoms go to war? A lot more explanation's needed; right now it's a fair case of "this happened and then this happened and then..." which makes for a hard-to-follow storyline.

[Patchisou Yutohru]

Luxia's Any rooms in the chat for rp? was declined. Not an RP thread, just a simple question. No, we don't have roleplaying chatrooms.

Red's Hawt Chibi Pelippers's ✜ CHECKMATE : redux (IC) and OOC was accepted!

AppleMan's Mysterious Thread was declined. Lacks any real plot, lacks a rating, no rules, doesn't even contain more than 50 words. Flesh it out with these things and try again!

[Skymin]

TheSiranna's Justified is declined.
You've got a potential plot right there, but you really need to explain just what Xe is. Not in specificity, but the history behind it. You make it seem like an old wives tale, so is that what it is? How known of a story would it be among characters? And why is it destroying the land? And who is this person that corrupted it? Is it common knowledge among the players? And just what exactly is it? An item? An imaginary power? You really have to let the players know what they are getting into in this roleplay.

TurtleKing's The Elite Army is accepted!

TurtleKing's Digimon Genesis is accepted!

ORegan's PokeSentai is accepted!

[Razor Leaf]

Bleacher's Pokemon: Johto Journeys- Dreams & Nightmares is accepted!

rliberto2's Let's Play is declined.
We have a section for Let's Play threads right here.

[Skymin]

EliteBeats's HOMESTUCK // SHENANIGANS is accepted!

WolfOfEve's Wolf's Rain - Extinction is accepted!

Midnight-Umbreon's Let the Games Begin is accepted!

[Skymin]

Synthet's X-Men: United is accepted!

Ray Maverick's The Age of Heroes is accepted!

~Genevieve~'s Final Fantasy XIII- Dawn's Reckoning is accepted!

DeLaMuerte's DEADMAN.exe is accepted!
Just keep in mind to not get too gory.

lacoste's Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Pirates in Punta Cabeza! is accepted!

[Skymin]

PinkSapphire's Sword Art Online: Sanctuary is accepted!
I will need you to put either a black CSS background or change the colour of the text to automatic because it is unreadable for those with white background themes.

Ray Maverick's IC is accepted!

Crimson0191's Pokémon - The league stands strong is declined.
You have no rules section and no rating. Other than that, it's great!!

Greiger's Adlania : The Land of Change is accepted!

[Skymin]

Crimson0191' Pokémon - The league stands strong is accepted!

gimmepie's Connections is accepted!

WolfofEve's IC is accepted!

~Genevieve~'s IC is accepted!

PinkSapphire's IC is accepted!