[Dead] Pokemon Chocolate Green

[EnglishMilkshake]

Pokémon Chocolate Green Version

Doctor Pine is very upset that this game is considered "the Worst in PokeCommunity". Cheer Pine up by giving Chocolate Green support. Is it at least better than Emerald?

This game is being made with RPG Maker XP using Pokemon Essentials v11.

It all happened a long time ago, when Dr. Pine was a little boy. A mysterious disaster is happening to the region, even worse than turmoil. Perhaps this has something to do with the attack on legendary Pokémon. For years, the mountains break up and the plants overgrow, causing pollution and suffering. Who would cause such an attack that would do such a things?

Years later, a new Pokémon League was being created, and it is up to you, a Trainer from Grazure, to investigate the region, battle trainers, and become a Pokémon Master.

You meet Pine's assistant, Mona, and recieve your starter Pokémon, you then meet up with a Mysterious Boy who challenges you to a battle. Mona, impressed, gives you a Pokedex and PokeBalls. After catching 10 different species of Pokémon, you set out on your journey and meet Dr. Pine, who gives you the PokéGear.


To be continued...

Features

-An amazing region.
-All 15 starters avaiable
-Ability to catch all 649 official Pokémon (Only around 20 or so in current version.)

There will not be any fakemon, only official species.

Screenshots
Want Screenshots? No problem.

Spoiler:

Please note that most of the sprites are placeholders.

Currently Available Pokémon

Spoiler:

#001 Bulbasaur: Must choose as a Starter
#002 Ivysaur: Must Evolve
#003 Venusaur: Must Evolve
#004 Charmander: Must choose as a Starter
#005 Charmeleon: Must Evolve
#006 Charizard: Must Evolve
#007 Squirtle: Must choose as a Starter
#008 Wartortle: Must Evolve
#009 Blastoise: Must Evolve
#010 Caterpie: Grazure City Backyard
#011 Metapod: Bronze Forest
#012 Butterfree: Must Evolve
#013 Weedle: Grazure City Backyard
#014 Kakuna: Bronze Forest
#015 Beedrill: Must Evolve
#016 Pidgey: Grazure City Backyard
#017 Pidgeotto: Must Evolve
#018 Pidgeot: Must Evolve
#019 Rattata: Grazure Sewers
#020 Raticate: Must Evolve
#021-038 are not available in the current version.

Spoiler:

#021 Spearow:
#022 Fearow:
#023 Ekans:
#024 Arbok:

#025 Pikachu: Must Evolve
#026 Raichu: Must Evolve
#027-028 are not available in the current version.

Spoiler:

#027 Sandshrew:
#028 Sandslash:

#029 Nidoran (f): Route 2
#030 Nidorina: Must Evolve
#031 Nidoqueen: Must Evolve
#032 Nidoran (m): Route 2
#033 Nidorino: Must Evolve
#034 Nidoking: Must Evolve
#035 Clefairy: Must Evolve
#036 Clefable: Must Evolve
#037 Vulpix: Bronze Forest
#038 Ninetales: Must Evolve
#039 Jigglypuff: Must Evolve
#040 Wigglytuff: Must Evolve
#041 Zubat: Grazure Sewers
#042 Golbat: Must Evolve
#043-051 are not available in the current version.

Spoiler:

#043 Oddish:
#044 Gloom:
#045 Vileplume:
#046 Paras:
#047 Parasect:
#048 Venonat:
#049 Venomoth:
#050 Diglett:
#051 Dugtrio:

#052 Meowth: Route 2
#053 Persian: Must Evolve
#054-057 are not available in the current version.

Spoiler:

#054 Psyduck:
#055 Golduck:
#056 Mankey:
#057 Primeape:

#058 Growlithe: Route 2
#059 Arcanine: Must Evolve
#060-128 are not available in the current version.

Spoiler:

#060 Poliwag:
#061 Poliwhirl:
#062 Poliwrath:
#063 Abra:
#064 Kadabra:
#065 Alakazam:
#066 Machop:
#067 Machoke:
#068 Machamp:
#069 Bellsprout:
#070 Weepinbell:
#071 Victreebel:
#072 Tentacool:
#073 Tentacruel:
#074 Geodude:
#075 Graveler:
#076 Golem:
#077 Ponyta:
#078 Rapidash:
#079 Slowpoke:
#080 Slowbro:
#081 Magnemite:
#082 Magneton:
#083 Farfetch'd:
#084 Doduo:
#085 Dodrio:
#086 Seel:
#087 Dewgong:
#088 Grimer:
#089 Muk:
#090 Shellder:
#091 Cloyster:
#092 Gastly:
#093 Haunter:
#094 Gengar:
#095 Onix:
#096 Drowzee:
#097 Hypno:
#098 Krabby:
#099 Kingler:
#100 Voltorb:
#101 Electrode:
#102 Exeggcute:
#103 Exeggutor:
#104 Cubone:
#105 Marowak:
#106 Hitmonlee:
#107 Hitmonchan:
#108 Lickitung:
#109 Koffing:
#110 Weezing:
#111 Rhyhorn:
#112 Rhydon:
#113 Chansey:
#114 Tangela:
#115 Kangaskhan:
#116 Horsea:
#117 Seadra:
#118 Goldeen:
#119 Seaking:
#120 Staryu:
#121 Starmie:
#122 Mr. Mime:
#123 Scyther:
#124 Jynx:
#125 Electabuzz:
#126 Magmar:
#127 Pinsir:
#128 Tauros:

#129 Magikarp: *CLASSIFIED*
#130 Gyarados: Must Evolve
#131-151 are not avaiable in the current version.

Spoiler:

#131 Lapras:
#132 Ditto:
#133 Eevee:
#134 Vaporeon:
#135 Jolteon:
#136 Flareon:
#137 Porygon:
#138 Omanyte:
#139 Omastar:
#140 Kabuto:
#141 Kabutops:
#142 Aerodactyl:
#143 Snorlax:
#144 Articuno:
#145 Zapdos:
#146 Moltres:
#147 Dratini:
#148 Dragonair:
#149 Dragonite:
#150 Mewtwo:
#151 Mew:

#152 Chikorita: Must choose as a Starter
#153 Bayleef: Must Evolve
#154 Meganium: Must Evolve
#155 Cyndaquil: Must choose as a Starter
#156 Quilava: Must Evolve
#157 Typhlosion: Must Evolve
#158 Totodile: Must choose as a Starter
#159 Croconaw: Must Evolve
#160 Feraligatr: Must Evolve
#161 Sentret: Route 1
#162 Furret: Must Evolve
#163 Hoothoot: Grazure City Backyard (Night Only), Route 1 (Night Only)
#164 Noctowl: Must Evolve
#165-166 are not available in the current version.

Spoiler:

#165 Ledyba:
#166 Ledian:

#167 Spinarak: Grazure Sewers
#168 Ariados: Must Evolve
#169 Crobat: Must Evolve
#170-171 are not available in the current version

Spoiler:

#170 Chinchou:
#171 Lanturn:

#172 Pichu: Bronze Forest
#173 Cleffa: Route 3
#174 Igglybuff: Route 1
#175-190 are not available in the current version

Spoiler:

#175 Togepi:
#176 Togetic:
#177 Natu:
#178 Xatu:
#179 Mareep:
#180 Flaaffy:
#181 Ampharos:
#182 Bellossom:
#183 Marill:
#184 Azumarill:
#185 Sudowoodo:
#186 Politoed:
#187 Hoppip:
#188 Skiploom:
#189 Jumpluff:
#190 Aipom:

#191 Sunkern: Route 1 (Day Only)
#192-251 are not available in the current version

Spoiler:

#192 Sunflora:
#193 Yanma:
#194 Wooper:
#195 Quagsire:
#196 Espeon:
#197 Umbreon:
#198 Murkrow:
#199 Slowking:
#200 Misdreavus:
#201 Unown:
#202 Wobbuffet:
#203 Girafarig:
#204 Pineco:
#205 Forretress:
#206 Dunsparce:
#207 Gligar:
#208 Steelix:
#209 Snubbull:
#210 Granbull:
#211 Qwilfish:
#212 Scizor:
#213 Shuckle:
#214 Heracross:
#215 Sneasel:
#216 Teddiursa:
#217 Ursaring:
#218 Slugma:
#219 Magcargo:
#220 Swinub:
#221 Piloswine:
#222 Corsola:
#223 Remoraid:
#224 Octillery:
#225 Delibird:
#226 Mantine:
#227 Skarmory:
#228 Houndour:
#229 Houndoom:
#230 Kingdra:
#231 Phanpy:
#232 Donphan:
#233 Porygon2:
#234 Stantler:
#235 Smeargle:
#236 Tyrogue:
#237 Hitmontop:
#238 Smoochum:
#239 Elekid:
#240 Magby:
#241 Miltank:
#242 Blissey:
#243 Raikou:
#244 Entei:
#245 Suicune:
#246 Larvitar:
#247 Pupitar:
#248 Tyranitar:
#249 Lugia:
#250 Ho-oh:
#251 Celebi:

#252 Treecko: Must choose as a Starter
#253 Grovyle: Must Evolve
#254 Sceptile: Must Evolve
#255 Torchic: Must choose as a Starter
#256 Combusken: Must Evolve
#257 Blaziken: Must Evolve
#258 Mudkip: Must choose as a Starter
#259 Marshtomp: Must Evolve
#260 Swampert: Must Evolve
#261 Poochyena: Route 1
#262 Mightyena: Must Evolve
#263 Zigzagoon: Route 1
#264 Linoone: Must Evolve
#265 Wurmple: Grazure City Backyard, Route 1 (Headbutt Common), Kitchery City (Headbutt Common)
#266 Silcoon: Route 1 (Headbutt Rare), Kitchery City (Headbutt Rare)
#267 Beautifly: Must Evolve
#268 Cascoon: Route 1 (Headbutt Rare), Kitchery City (Headbutt Rare)
#269 Dustox: Must Evolve
#270-386 are not available in the current version.

Spoiler:

#270 Lotad:
#271 Lombre:
#272 Ludicolo:
#273 Seedot:
#274 Nuzleaf:
#275 Shiftry:
#276 Taillow:
#277 Swellow:
#278 Wingull:
#279 Pelipper:
#280 Ralts:
#281 Kirlia:
#282 Gardevoir:
#283 Surskit:
#284 Masquerain:
#285 Shroomish:
#286 Breloom:
#287 Slakoth:
#288 Vigoroth:
#289 Slaking:
#290 Nincada:
#291 Ninjask:
#292 Shedinja:
#293 Whismur:
#294 Loudred:
#295 Exploud:
#296 Makuhita:
#297 Hariyama:
#298 Azurill:
#299 Nosepass:
#300 Skitty:
#301 Delcatty:
#302 Sableye:
#303 Mawile:
#304 Aron:
#305 Lairon:
#306 Aggron:
#307 Meditite:
#308 Medicham:
#309 Electrike:
#310 Manectric:
#311 Plusle:
#312 Minun:
#313 Volbeat:
#314 Illumise:
#315 Roselia:
#316 Gulpin:
#317 Swalot:
#318 Carvanha:
#319 Sharpedo:
#320 Wailmer:
#321 Wailord:
#322 Numel:
#323 Camerupt:
#324 Torkoal:
#325 Spoink:
#326 Grumpig:
#327 Spinda:
#328 Trapinch:
#329 Vibrava:
#330 Flygon:
#331 Cacnea:
#332 Cacturne:
#333 Swablu:
#334 Altaria:
#335 Zangoose:
#336 Seviper:
#337 Lunatone:
#338 Solrock:
#339 Barboach:
#340 Whiscash:
#341 Corphish:
#342 Crawdaunt:
#343 Baltoy:
#344 Claydol:
#345 Lileep:
#346 Cradily:
#347 Anorith:
#348 Armaldo:
#349 Feebas:
#350 Milotic:
#351 Castform:
#352 Kecleon:
#353 Shuppet:
#354 Banette:
#355 Duskull:
#356 Dusclops:
#357 Tropius:
#358 Chimecho:
#359 Absol:
#360 Wynaut:
#361 Snorunt:
#362 Glalie:
#363 Spheal:
#364 Sealeo:
#365 Walrein:
#366 Clamperl:
#367 Huntail:
#368 Gorebyss:
#369 Relicanth:
#370 Luvdisc:
#371 Bagon:
#372 Shelgon:
#373 Salamence:
#374 Beldum:
#375 Metang:
#376 Metagross:
#377 Regirock:
#378 Regice:
#379 Registeel:
#380 Latias:
#381 Latios:
#382 Kyogre:
#383 Groudon:
#384 Rayquaza:
#385 Jirachi:
#386 Deoxys:

#387 Turtwig: Must choose as a Starter
#388 Grotle: Must Evolve
#389 Torterra: Must Evolve
#390 Chimchar: Must choose as a Starter
#391 Monferno: Must Evolve
#392 Infernape: Must Evolve
#393 Piplup: Must choose as a Starter
#394 Prinplup: Must Evolve
#395 Empoleon: Must Evolve
#396 Starly: Route 2
#397 Staravia: Must Evolve
#398 Staraptor: Must Evolve
#399 Bidoof: Route 2
#400 Bibarel: Must Evolve
#401 Kricketot: Bronze Forest (Night Only)
#402 Kricketune: Must Evolve
#396-411 are not available in the current version.

Spoiler:

#403 Shinx:
#404 Luxio:
#405 Luxray:
#406 Budew:
#407 Roserade:
#408 Cranidos:
#409 Rampardos:
#410 Shieldon:
#411 Bastiodon:

#412 Burmy: Route 1 (Headbutt), Kitchery City (Headbutt)
#413 Wormadam: Must Evolve
#414 Mothim: Must Evolve
#415-419 are not available in the current version.

Spoiler:

#415 Combee:
#416 Vespiquen:
#417 Pachirisu:
#418 Buizel:
#419 Floatzel:

#420 Cherubi: Grazure City Backyard
#421 Cherrim: Must Evolve
#422-430 are not available in the current version.

Spoiler:

#422 Shellos:
#423 Gastrodon:
#424 Ambipom:
#425 Drifloon:
#426 Drifblim:
#427 Buneary:
#428 Lopunny:
#429 Mismagius:
#430 Honchkrow:

#431 Glameow: Grazure City Backyard
#432 Purugly: Must Evolve

Spoiler:

#433 Chingling: Not available in the current version.

#434 Stunky: Grazure Sewers
#435 Skuntank: Must Evolve
#436-494 are not available in the current version.

Spoiler:

#436 Bronzor:
#437 Bronzong:
#438 Bonsly:
#439 Mime Jr.:
#440 Happiny:
#441 Chatot:
#442 Spiritomb:
#443 Gible:
#444 Gabite:
#445 Garchomp:
#446 Munchlax:
#447 Riolu:
#448 Lucario:
#449 Hippopotas:
#450 Hippowdon:
#451 Skorupi:
#452 Drapion:
#453 Croagunk:
#454 Toxicroak:
#455 Carnivine:
#456 Finneon:
#457 Lumineon:
#458 Mantyke:
#459 Snover:
#460 Abomasnow:
#461 Weavile:
#462 Magnezone:
#463 Lickilicky:
#464 Rhyperior:
#465 Tangrowth:
#466 Electivire:
#467 Magmortar:
#468 Togekiss:
#469 Yanmega:
#470 Leafeon:
#471 Glaceon:
#472 Gliscor:
#473 Mamoswine:
#474 Porygon-Z:
#475 Gallade:
#476 Probopass:
#477 Dusknoir:
#478 Froslass:
#479 Rotom:
#480 Uxie:
#481 Mesprit:
#482 Azelf:
#483 Dialga:
#484 Palkia:
#485 Heatran:
#486 Regigigas:
#487 Giratina:
#488 Cresselia:
#489 Phione:
#490 Manaphy:
#491 Darkrai:
#492 Shaymin:
#493 Arceus:
#494 Victini:

#495 Snivy: Must choose as a Starter
#496 Servine: Must Evolve
#497 Serperior: Must Evolve
#498 Tepig: Must choose as a Starter
#499 Pignite: Must Evolve
#500 Emboar: Must Evolve
#501 Oshawott: Must choose as a Starter
#502 Dewott: Must Evolve
#503 Samurott: Must Evolve
#504 Patrat: Grazure City Backyard
#505 Watchog: Must Evolve
#506 Lillipup: Routes 1, 2, and 3
#507 Herdier: Must Evolve
#508 Stoutland: Must Evolve
#509 Purrloin: Route 1
#510 Liepard: Must Evolve
#511 Pansage: Bronze Forest (Music Player)
#512 Simisage: Must Evolve
#513 Pansear: Bronze Forest (Music Player)
#514 Simisear: Must Evolve
#515 Panpour: Bronze Forest (Music Player)
#516 Simipour: Must Evolve
#517-518 are not available in the current version.

Spoiler:

#517 Munna:
#518 Musharna:

#519 Pidove: Grazure City Backyard, Route 1
#520 Tranquill: Must Evolve
#521 Unfezant: Must Evolve
#522-526 are not available in the current version.

Spoiler:

#522 Blitzle:
#523 Zebstrika:
#524 Roggenrola:
#525 Boldore:
#526 Gigalith:

#527 Woobat: Grazure Sewers
#528 Swoobat: Must Evolve
#529-539 are not available in the current version.

Spoiler:

#529 Drilbur:
#530 Excadrill:
#531 Audino:
#532 Timburr:
#533 Gurdurr:
#534 Conkeldurr:
#535 Tympole:
#536 Palpitoad:
#537 Seismitoad:
#538 Throh:
#539 Sawk:

#540 Sewaddle: Bronze Forest
#541 Swadloon: Must Evolve
#542 Leavanny: Must Evolve
#543 Venipede: Bronze Forest
#544 Whirlipede: Must Evolve
#545 Scolipede: Must Evolve
#546 Cottonee: Bronze Forest
#547 Whimsicott: Bronze Forest (Music Player)
#548 Petilil: Bronze Forest
#549 Lilligant: Bronze Forest (Music Player)
#550 and beyond are not available in the current version.

Spoiler:

#550 Basculin:
#551 Sandile:
#552 Krokorok:
#553 Krookodile:
#554 Darumaka:
#555 Darmanitan:
#556 Maractus:
#557 Dwebble:
#558 Crustle:
#559 Scraggy:
#560 Scrafty:
#561 Sigilyph:
#562 Yamask:
#563 Cofagrigus:
#564 Tirtouga:
#565 Carracosta:
#566 Archen:
#567 Archeops:
#568 Trubbish:
#569 Garbodor:
#570 Zorua:
#571 Zoroark:
#572 Minccino:
#573 Cinccino:
#574 Gothita:
#575 Gothorita:
#576 Gothitelle:
#577 Solosis:
#578 Duosion:
#579 Reuniclus:
#580 Ducklett:
#581 Swanna:
#582 Vanillite:
#583 Vanillish:
#584 Vanilluxe:
#585 Deerling:
#586 Sawsbuck:
#587 Emolga:
#588 Karrablast:
#589 Escavalier:
#590 Foongus:
#591 Amoonguss:
#592 Frillish:
#593 Jellicent:
#594 Alomomola:
#595 Joltik:
#596 Galvantula:
#597 Ferroseed:
#598 Ferrothorn:
#599 Klink:
#600 Klang:
#601 Klinklang:
#602 Tynamo:
#603 Eelektrik:
#604 Eelektross:
#605 Elgyem:
#606 Beheeyem:
#607 Litwick:
#608 Lampent:
#609 Chandelure:
#610 Axew:
#611 Fraxure:
#612 Haxorus:
#613 Cubchoo:
#614 Beartic:
#615 Cryogonal:
#616 Shelmet:
#617 Accelgor:
#618 Stunfisk:
#619 Mienfoo:
#620 Mienshao:
#621 Druddigon:
#622 Golett:
#623 Golurk:
#624 Pawniard:
#625 Bisharp:
#626 Bouffalant:
#627 Rufflet:
#628 Braviary:
#629 Vullaby:
#630 Mandibuzz:
#631 Heatmor:
#632 Durant:
#633 Deino:
#634 Zweilous:
#635 Hydreigon:
#636 Larvesta:
#637 Volcarona:
#638 Cobalion:
#639 Terrakion:
#640 Virizion:
#641 Tornadus:
#642 Thundurus:
#643 Reshiram:
#644 Zekrom:
#645 Landorus:
#646 Kyurem:
#647 Keldeo:
#648 Meloetta:
#649 Genesect:

Credits
Maruno,Poccil,P-Sign,Clowcardruler,Venom12,FL - Pokémon Essentials v11
chimcharsfireworkd, turtwig2 - Tilesets
Litera-sure - Trainer Sprites

Please note that I am in no affiliation of Nintendo, the owners of the Pokemon franchise. This game was made for fun.

Current Version
Version 1 Episode 3 Release 1 (Alpha) (2 Gyms)
How do you play it? The link is right here!

http://www47.zippyshare.com/v/97782665/file.html

Hope you enjoy the game! If you have any suggestions for future releases, leave feedback. Your opinion counts.

Episode 4 has been canceled due to a messy region map. Pokemon Virus Lavender will be a successor to this project.

[EnglishMilkshake]

Sorry about having to double post, but I feel that nobody has tried out the demo. Where is everyone.

Anyway, micro update to keep the thread alive. I'm planning on adding some items scattered on the ground in Grazure City and Grazure Sewers, as well as fixing a few oversights. I'll upload it on the next update, so be sure to try out the demo and give back your opinions of the game so far.

Doctor Pine, the Pokemon Expert in the region, is looking forward to people trying out the first brief demo.

[Rayd12smitty]

I'm going to be frank with you, because I want to help. This is not good.

I would like to offer some criticism though.

-the town is WAYWAYWAY too big and empty. It took me literally 5 min to find the lab.
-a lot of tiles you messed up on. I can walk through a lot of things I shouldn't be able to
-the door to the sewers needs to be opened by clicking it
-the indoor maps are also way too big and empty. the lab could be half the size and be just fine. the house should be smaller as well, and the tile you used for the outside of the house is for a pokemon center.
-the pokemon center is way too big and empty too. also, nurse joy should be next to the machine. it looks strange when you heal as the pokeballs just appear on the machine.
-its better to have placeholders than no sprite for trainers. its kind of strange.
-trainers pokemon should be higher than level 3. look at official games for reference
-same thing with the second town. way too big and spreadout. easy to get lost


some positive things
-all the starters isn't a bad thing at all. it gives a lot of choices that people will like. You may want to change the rival's pokemon though. purrloin seems too plain
-i like the sewer instead of the normal route 1
-its good to have an extra strong trainer like the old man and his garden


I lost the will to continue when I lost to the old geezer and would have to go through the sewer again to get back to the second town. I hope i didn't sound rude with my comments. I hope you take this advice and make things better.

[EnglishMilkshake]

Sorry about that. Update has been released. The third release is out. Now contains placeholder sprites for half of the new trainer classes, still couldn't find good placeholders for the Trainer Classes that still don't have placeholders. Sorry...

Also edited some maps, Grazure City is still large though.

I'm not having trouble with battling the old geezer who protects his garden. Once you beat him, you can gain access to new Pokemon like Caterpie, and even Glameow, if lucky enough.

In order to progress to the third city, you need to catch 10 different species of Pokemon. However, this is not implemented in the current demo, as getting past the gate is the end of the episode. Once you get past the gate, Doctor Pine will meet you on Route 1. Good luck.

Very ingenious, as it gives an incentive to "catch 'em all".

BTW, there are multiple rivals, and Jason isn't your main rival.

If you have any suggestions on future updates, drop a line!

[EnglishMilkshake]

Update: I did some adjustments due to sheer boredom. Unfortunately, you cannot access Route 1, the Demo still ends when you get past the gate after catching 10 different species. You can't get past the gate with less than 10 species to access Route 1. I programmed it that way. Anyway, try out the fourth release of Pokemon Chocolate Green. Doctor Pine would be upset if you don't.

Spoiler:

You don't meet Dr. Pine until you get to Route 1.

[Zerkrom The Hedgehog]

I'll Beta Test the Game for ya.

[KingCharizard]

This is a very bad thread, the game names makes literally no sense, but it can be accepted. The screenshots are very blank and dull, they dont show anything that might make me think the demo is worth downloading. The storyline is very basic. Too many pokemon in the game and there is no need to allow ppl to choose from 15 different pokemon at the beginning, if you want them available make it a special condition like how they did in pokemon yellow, put more work into this and it may have potential.

[EnglishMilkshake]

I find your lack of faith disturbing. Doctor Pine is offended by your comment. But look on the bright side, it will undergo some improvements, and the worse the game is, the less offensive it is to the government, even though it is still copyright infringement. What I'm trying to do is balance the two so that I get a playable game without being sent to jail.

[elarmasecreta]

Originally Posted by EnglishMilkshake

I find your lack of faith disturbing. Doctor Pine is offended by your comment. But look on the bright side, it will undergo some improvements, and the worse the game is, the less offensive it is to the government, even though it is still copyright infringement. What I'm trying to do is balance the two so that I get a playable game without being sent to jail.

Uhmm I honestly don't know what you're trying achieve with that... You aren't making any sense... You won't be sent to jail, unless you're going to sell it...

Honestly, I can't take you seriously as a developer anymore...

Your screens are really bad, your maps are really empty, the battle screens don't show anything special, there isn't even one with some dialogue.

Furthermore, why would you post a list of all 649 pokemon, when there's only 15 in the game? Just post the ones available...

I know you're eager to show off your work... but honestly, four releases before you even get to the first route? Sort out your thread, if you make things look at least a little neater, more people would be willing to play your game.

[EnglishMilkshake]

OH MY DENNIS! Pokemon Chocolate Green is being considered the worst Pokémon game ever. I do not see anyone disagreeing with me, unless I am to be disproven.

Anyway, the first release of Episode 2 has been uploaded. Sadly, you cannot enter the gym and therefore go further into the chapter, as I do not have the sufficient tiles for the inside of the Kitchery Gym. You have access to Route 1 and Kitchery City though. Also, you will be introduced to a second rival. There will be an unreal total of six rivals in game. That may be pushing it, but do I care?

It appears that I am gonna need advice and assistance from a REAL developer.

[elarmasecreta]

As a student of game oriented computer science, I am sure that you won't find help from any real developer. Heck, I doubt even hobbyists would be willing to help.

I gave you quite a few pointers, what makes you believe anybody else would be willing to help if you just ignore the advice you were given in the first place?

[Rayd12smitty]

^

we are trying to help. I gave advice and you ignored most of it. Elarmasecreta knows what he's talking about. Take his advice.

Also, completely unrelated, its really creepy how you talk about Prof. Pine like he's a real person.

[EnglishMilkshake]

Well, I did fix some of the problems, that's come credit to be made. I'm not sure how I would be talking about Doctor Pine like he's a real person. Well, thanks for some of the help. You're welcome to give more help.

Good luck to the rest of the players out there!

[Rayd12smitty]

Originally Posted by EnglishMilkshake

I find your lack of faith disturbing. Doctor Pine is offended by your comment.

Originally Posted by EnglishMilkshake

Doctor Pine, the Pokemon Expert in the region, is looking forward to people trying out the first brief demo.

This is what I meant. ^

The main two things right now I have for you is to fix your towns and cities since they are sooooo big and empty and maybe get some graphics for a titlescreen or at least change the intro event so it isn't the exact same thing as the normal essentials one

[DarkRisingGirl]

You should take this thread down and re-do everything and then post it again. I mean, you seem to have some decent ideas in mind for the game, but you're not really showing the potential in-game. It also seems you're just making this game for the heck of it and not really putting much effort into it. It's not the worse game on the community, you're just putting in the least effort out of any game creator on the community. Go back to the drawing board and start over.

EDIT: Oh and please stop with the Dr.Pine stuff. I know it may seem funny to you and you're playing around, that's cool.. But some people...A lot of people who are viewing this thread may feel it's pretty weird and kinda lame. Personally, I get it, you're being silly, but to most ppl you're just coming off as a bit creepy.

[Java's Missingno.]

Your maps appear to be way too empty, and you use tiles mismatched with the overworld sprites, and a mix of different clashing sprites in battle scenes(Though you say they're placeholders, I would STRONGLY recommend dealing with this graphical issue as soon as you can).

Additionally, your synopsis seems rushed and hard to understand:

It all happened a long time ago, when Dr. Pine was a little boy. A mysterious disaster is happening to the region, even worse than turmoil. Perhaps this has something to do with the attack on legendary Pokémon. For years, the mountains break up and the plants overgrow, causing pollution and suffering. Who would cause such an attack that would do such a things?

You're mixing verb tenses. Has this been going on since Dr. Pine was a little boy, or was that what happened when he was a little boy?"Even worse than turmoil" does little to describe the situation, as turmoil isn't a single event. This attack on legendary Pokemon sounds intriguing, and considering there's very little to go on otherwise, maybe you should focus in on describing that? How does some erosion and plant life growing cause pollution or suffering?

Years later, a new Pokémon League was being created, and it is up to you, a Trainer from Grazure, to investigate the region, battle trainers, and become a Pokémon Master.

So how does this happen, then? Does investigating the region, battling trainers, and the generic League stuff happen in the present, or is still the past? It says a Pokemon League WAS being created. Is this underway, or is it complete when the player begins to act upon the storyline?

You meet Pine's assistant, Mona, and recieve your starter Pokémon, you then meet up with a Mysterious Boy who challenges you to a battle. Mona, impressed, gives you a Pokedex and PokeBalls. After catching 10 different species of Pokémon, you set out on your journey and meet Dr. Pine, who gives you the PokéGear.

Firstly, why does Mona give the player a starter Pokemon? Is this a prearranged setup? Why do you need 10 different species of Pokemon to set out? Why doesn't Dr. Pine meet you himself, and why does he give you a PokeGear? What does it do in your story?

A lot of these questions can be summed up with: "Why?" What motivation does the player have to play your game?

Additionally, is English not your first language? It can be a difficult one to learn, but presentation is everything. Either way, I'd go back and refine your story idea and proofread your dialogue. You've got potential, and hopefully by going back and taking your time, you can make a better game.

[EnglishMilkshake]

I apologize for not putting much effort. This might not be a good game, but at least it isn't the worst Pokemon Game. Thanks for the cheering up. However, I might need help starting a third project, but I will continue to improve Chocolate Green as much as I can, even though I'll need a brief tutorial on how to create a game that people will actually enjoy. I understand, but I'll need a lot of pointers before starting a successor to Chocolate Green. If anyone has any ideas for a new project, PM me.

EDIT: In search of a team and a master for a new project coming up, Pokemon Moon White, progress on Chocolate Green will slow down, much to the dismay of the community. All 649 Pokemon are to be catchable in Pokemon Moon White in some way shape or form, like in Chocolate Green. This may be pushing it, but that's where a whole team comes in. As the team leader, I have developed a developer's kit for a start. Carry on, though I will not post anything else about Moon White on this thread.

[NikNaks]

I don't quite understand what you're looking for in a tutorial, especially considering most replies in this thread are full of criticism and suggestions on how to improve it. If you're having trouble discerning them, here are the ones that I've picked up:

- Don't mix tiles from different generations if at all possible
- Reduce the amount of empty space in your maps
- Take more care with the development process
- Don't post a new beta for minor changes unless you're fixing something that makes the current one unplayable
- Listen to feedback about the plot and try to answer the questions that have been raised

You seem intelligent and committed enough, so if you actually take on board what people say you should be able to make something decent, if you take the time to do so. Starting another project is not a solution.

[Nintendork15]

Originally Posted by NikNaks

I don't quite understand what you're looking for in a tutorial, especially considering most replies in this thread are full of criticism and suggestions on how to improve it. If you're having trouble discerning them, here are the ones that I've picked up:

- Don't mix tiles from different generations if at all possible
- Reduce the amount of empty space in your maps
- Take more care with the development process
- Don't post a new beta for minor changes unless you're fixing something that makes the current one unplayable
- Listen to feedback about the plot and try to answer the questions that have been raised

You seem intelligent and committed enough, so if you actually take on board what people say you should be able to make something decent, if you take the time to do so. Starting another project is not a solution.

I agree with your points.

One I'd like to ask is to not give up so easily with the project just because the thread is empty or not very active.
Just look at my Pokémon Eon Thread. Hardly anyone comments. But hey, this is a small community of the Site. So it will be empty alot.

[EnglishMilkshake]

Thank you for being understanding. Pokemon Chocolate Green will be continued on.

Anyway, when you start the game, Dr. Pine is absent from his lab, therefore, when you meet his assistant, she will help you choose your first Pokémon. The PokéGear will have a use in later versions of the game, and I decided to still use the PokeGear. If you have any other questions, do not ask them in a rude way, be supportive.

Wait a minute, I saw your Pokémon Eon thread and it got a lot of comments, not to mention a lot of good comments. Pokemon Chocolate Green is receiving bad comments. I'll need to pay more attention to your game for a reference for Episode 3.

Anyway, the last bit of Episode 2 has been finished. Sorry if it was short, but it will take a while for me to finish Episode 3, as I'll pay more attention.

Sorry about not editing the intro, I do not have a sprite for Doctor Pine to replace the Professor Oak at the beginning. Once I get a viable picture, Chocolate Green will have a better intro.

[EnglishMilkshake]

Sorry about that, I'm just posting to tell everyone that I am still working on Chocolate Green. I'm doing some fine tuning and improving the game a little, putting a little more effort than previously. The next update will take a while longer than originally.

[Nintendork15]

Originally Posted by EnglishMilkshake

Thank you for being understanding. Pokemon Chocolate Green will be continued on.

Anyway, when you start the game, Dr. Pine is absent from his lab, therefore, when you meet his assistant, she will help you choose your first Pokémon. The PokéGear will have a use in later versions of the game, and I decided to still use the PokeGear. If you have any other questions, do not ask them in a rude way, be supportive.

Wait a minute, I saw your Pokémon Eon thread and it got a lot of comments, not to mention a lot of good comments. Pokemon Chocolate Green is receiving bad comments. I'll need to pay more attention to your game for a reference for Episode 3.

Anyway, the last bit of Episode 2 has been finished. Sorry if it was short, but it will take a while for me to finish Episode 3, as I'll pay more attention.

Sorry about not editing the intro, I do not have a sprite for Doctor Pine to replace the Professor Oak at the beginning. Once I get a viable picture, Chocolate Green will have a better intro.

I don't get that many good posts, or posts for that matter. About 65% of those 52 posts are me, bumping the thread.
Even if it remains quiet I'll keep going.

[Yusshin]

I'm someone who's really interested in both mapping and story. From your screenies, the mapping looks poor and unrefined (maybe try asking for advice in the screenshot thread, or look for references as a "starting point" for your own maps). The story also appears undeveloped and reflects more of an alpha version than a beta, for the same reasons already given by other individuals who have already posted.

I'm also seeing a few grammar errors in the screenies; being an English major, it's perhaps more bothersome to me than it might be for others.

Suggestions: have someone edit your text and reorganize your thread so the story is clearer and more detailed. Sort these details out yourself and edit your post accordingly.

Also, like I've already said, you should post maps in the screenie thread as to receive valuable feedback. If a game's mapping is poor, it'll turn a lot of people off :(

Good luck; I'll come back later and see if there's any progress.

[EnglishMilkshake]

Sorry for poor grammar in-game, but I am working on fixing a few aspects of the game.

Happy Wednesday, the newest version of Pokemon Chocolate Green is on its way. Just posting to ensure Pokemon Chocolate Green remains worked on. I haven't given the project up yet.

In Episode 3, you will meet two more of your six rivals. One on them is named Miriam, who will team up with you on your way to the next city. You'll battle the other new rival in front of the second gym.

Remember the Weekly Siblings from Pokemon Gold, Silver, and Crystal. Well, they're back, and they give off ribbons when they meet you. Wesley of Wednesday will be the first one you encounter on your journey, being located on Route 3. The other six siblings won't be meetable until you defeat the second gym leader, Caiden, who uses Dark-type Pokémon.

Spoiler:

For comic relief, Sunny won't give you a ribbon on Sundays until after you defeat the Champion. You'll find out why when the time has come.

What else, there are also Five Professional Trainers that battle you on the weekdays. For instance, on Thursdays, you can battle Natalie, a master of Steel-type Pokémon.

Good luck, and hope you are looking forward to Chapter 3.

Spoiler:

The third gym leader is a female with blond hair and wears blue attire.
The fourth gym leader is a cross-dressed male gym leader, he even has eye-shadow.

[Nickalooose]

It's Thursday for me :D

Can I see some screenshots please, I don't want to download a game if these points haven't been cleared up! You have enough posts to show them here and not send me to another page.

Personally, I hate the name "Chocolate Green", what's next, "Supermarkets Money Saving Summer Fruits With Abstracts Of Sun Flower Oil"...

Wesley being my first encounter, do you mean, meet, or battle? Because, what if I played this on a Friday... He shouldn't be there, right?

Criticism is a way of life, take it and use it how you will... Rudeness is childsplay, let them be rude, just ignore them, nobody here who really enjoys making games etc. will be rude, knowing how hard it actually is to make one with 60% correct grammar and tiles and who knows what else, making one 100% perfect, is almost impossible, Missingno. anyone!

Before you use 432,243 Pokémon, or whatever they're up to now, try and picture and then write down, ones you won't be using... Will weed out clutter and unbalanced battles.

Your maps need to --->look<--- as busy as they can with enough space to move.

To many characters with "special" events will get tricky, can you do this equally? Nothing worse than playing a game and a character you met many times at the start, has decided to leave the game for no reason.

Are you working alone? If so, maybe get a team together, these people don't need to be college professors or English majors or even smart, creative is what you want/need.

My rant is over, show me screenshots please