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Old February 19th, 2013 (01:20 AM).
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Fossil Fusion's Pokemon Rainbow Canyon is accepted!

Inferna's The Illusion of Stallant is accepted!

Eeveelution Co-ordinator's Performing for Sinnoh! is declined.
You could really develop your storyline a little more, perhaps go into more detail why the players are going into co-ordinators and perhaps go into more detail about about the evil organisation. Also, you have no rating.

Miss Doronjo's PokeKhermia: The Flow of Mana is accepted!

Wild_Squirtle's Defenders Of The Night is declined.
This really has potential! You really need to develop the storyline more, perhaps add a backstory about the different gangs and their relationships.
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Old February 23rd, 2013 (11:28 PM).
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Jake♫'s IC thread is accepted!

雷影 イチロ's Atlantis Awakening is accepted!

Wild_Squirtle's Defenders of the Night is declined.
This is better, but you'll need just a little more. You've got the background all sweet, but I think you'll need a paragraph outlining what is happening between the groups right now.

StinkomanFan's Lime Light is declined.
Um... I really don't understand what this roleplay is... the storyline is really... a one person thing. It doesn't feel like something that needs more than one person.

StinkomanFan's Five Trainers on a Search for an Exit is declined.
The storyline sounds okay, but you really need a backstory to explain why scientists would build something like this. You also need a sign up sheet and a rules section!
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Old March 1st, 2013 (11:55 PM).
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gimmiepie's IC thread is accepted!

StinkomanFan's Five Trainers on a Search for an Exit .02 is accepted!
Please though, do keep a cap on the gore to a reasonable level.

Fenne-kun's A Rocket's Diary is accepted!

~Genevieve~'s 12/21/12 is accepted!

雷影 イチロ's IC thread is accepted!
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Old March 6th, 2013 (04:53 AM).
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-DeepImpact-'s War Between Pokémon and Humans: Foreshadows of Hoenn is accepted!

Ewery1's Pokemon Plasma is accepted!

StinkomanFan's OOC is accepted!

Fenne-kun's IC is accepted!
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Old March 11th, 2013 (03:01 PM).
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-DeepImpact-'s IC is accepted!

Miss Doronjo's [/TAMERS] and its OOC is accepted!

Ewery1's IC is accepted!

gimmiepie's Pokemon Survival Challenge v2 is accepted!

~Genevieve~'s IC is accepted!
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Old March 16th, 2013 (07:38 AM).
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Yo, filling in for Skymin while she's away!

WolfOfEve's IC is accepted!

Limanya's Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Roads of Light and its OOC are accepted!

miley810's Shattered Reality is accepted!

chaoticlapras' Hunger Games is declined.
It sounds alright but a good amount of background information on what the original Hunger Games actually is would be needed since not everyone knows that.
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Old March 22nd, 2013 (08:13 AM).
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gimmiepie's Pokémon Survival Challenge v2 is accepted!

darkhaven3's Machinations of Dementia: Descent into Madness and its OOC are declined.
You're mostly sorted story-wise and rating-wise, but your rules and sign-up form leave much to be desired. They're pretty vague and not formatted very well and just aren't very clear or helpful for RPers. Look at some other threads, spruce them up a wee bit, and you're grand.

Deathbot's Chicken Apocalypse is declined.
You've no real filling in your storyline telling us how we arrived at this, uh, apocalypse. You need to be building on that quite a bit. You've also no sign-up form and no rating. Go have a look around the section for examples of what's acceptable for a storyline and add a rating and an SU form.
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Old March 25th, 2013 (02:27 PM).
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Dements' Pokémon Crisis is accepted!

Crimson0191's Pokemon City Life is declined.
You presently lack a rating and a rules section - these are the main problems. A bit more of a story would be nice too; right now it seems to be mostly people battling Pokémon in a school which is fine to start with but a wee bit of direction'd be grand, or just some ideas to work with really.
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Old April 1st, 2013 (06:22 AM).
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Bleacher's Pokémon Johto Journeys- Dreams & Nightmares is accepted!

Oshy's The Seventh Door is declined.
As it stands, you lack a rating and a rules section. Add these and I'm fairly sure you're grand.
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Old April 6th, 2013 (12:44 PM).
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Darkhaven3's The Machinations of Dementia I: Descent into Madness is accepted!

Oshy's The Seventh Door is accepted!
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Old April 10th, 2013 (04:49 PM).
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Dements' Pokémon Crisis is accepted!

TheSiranna's Kingdom Wars: Fight of Shadows is declined.
The first thing I noticed is that you lack a rating. However, reading through your plot, there are a lot of loose ends. What were the evil wizards you mentioned looking for? Why did the kingdoms go to war? A lot more explanation's needed; right now it's a fair case of "this happened and then this happened and then..." which makes for a hard-to-follow storyline.
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Old April 16th, 2013 (08:47 PM). Edited April 17th, 2013 by Skymin.
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Luxia's Any rooms in the chat for rp? was declined. Not an RP thread, just a simple question. No, we don't have roleplaying chatrooms.

Red's Hawt Chibi Pelippers's ✜ CHECKMATE : redux (IC) and OOC was accepted!

AppleMan's Mysterious Thread was declined. Lacks any real plot, lacks a rating, no rules, doesn't even contain more than 50 words. Flesh it out with these things and try again!
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Old April 17th, 2013 (04:14 AM).
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TheSiranna's Justified is declined.
You've got a potential plot right there, but you really need to explain just what Xe is. Not in specificity, but the history behind it. You make it seem like an old wives tale, so is that what it is? How known of a story would it be among characters? And why is it destroying the land? And who is this person that corrupted it? Is it common knowledge among the players? And just what exactly is it? An item? An imaginary power? You really have to let the players know what they are getting into in this roleplay.

TurtleKing's The Elite Army is accepted!

TurtleKing's Digimon Genesis is accepted!

ORegan's PokeSentai is accepted!
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Old April 24th, 2013 (05:36 AM).
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Bleacher's Pokemon: Johto Journeys- Dreams & Nightmares is accepted!

rliberto2's Let's Play is declined.
We have a section for Let's Play threads right here.
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Old April 29th, 2013 (04:03 PM).
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EliteBeats's HOMESTUCK // SHENANIGANS is accepted!

WolfOfEve's Wolf's Rain - Extinction is accepted!

Midnight-Umbreon's Let the Games Begin is accepted!
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Old May 6th, 2013 (03:37 PM).
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Synthet's X-Men: United is accepted!

Ray Maverick's The Age of Heroes is accepted!

~Genevieve~'s Final Fantasy XIII- Dawn's Reckoning is accepted!

DeLaMuerte's DEADMAN.exe is accepted!
Just keep in mind to not get too gory.

lacoste's Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Pirates in Punta Cabeza! is accepted!
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Old May 11th, 2013 (02:31 PM).
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PinkSapphire's Sword Art Online: Sanctuary is accepted!
I will need you to put either a black CSS background or change the colour of the text to automatic because it is unreadable for those with white background themes.

Ray Maverick's IC is accepted!

Crimson0191's Pokémon - The league stands strong is declined.
You have no rules section and no rating. Other than that, it's great!!

Greiger's Adlania : The Land of Change is accepted!
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Old May 17th, 2013 (01:09 AM).
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Crimson0191' Pokémon - The league stands strong is accepted!

gimmepie's Connections is accepted!

WolfofEve's IC is accepted!

~Genevieve~'s IC is accepted!

PinkSapphire's IC is accepted!
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Old May 22nd, 2013 (03:49 PM).
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Crimson0191's OOC is accepted!
Also, if you need to ask a question, as opposed to posting a new thread, why don't you just PM or VM me? :)

Greiger's IC is accepted!

Synthet's IC is accepted!
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Old May 29th, 2013 (01:50 AM).
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gimmiepie's IC is accepted!

EliteBeat's IC is accepted!

jov0006's Dystopia is accepted!

SwiftSign's Game of Pokémon is accepted!
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Old June 3rd, 2013 (03:33 AM).
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YellowGardevoir's Fire Emblem: Reawakening is accepted!

Xilfer123's Pokémon Oblivion: Reality Collapsing is accepted!

SwiftSign's IC is accepted!

darkpokeball's PMD: Forbidden Ruins is declined.
You really need to describe what happened to these four, washed up Pokémon. Typically, PMD games are about humans who have turned into Pokémon. Is that the same instance here? Also, do try to describe your 'apocalypse' more.
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Old June 12th, 2013 (07:59 PM).
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Fuyu's TAMER: STREAM is accepted!

YellowGardevoir IC is accepted!

Icefyr1928's Another Day in Equestria is declined.
You have nothing detailing on what the characters are doing now, only a back story. Also, please change your font colour so it is readable on all styles (change your background on the CSS to a dark colour perhaps?)

jov0006's Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Descent into Darkness is accepted.

mistermewtwo's The last pokemon league is declined.
All roleplays need to include a rating and a sign up sheet. Also, your plot has no motive or real indicator on why a character would join this tournament. Give the bad guy a motive on why he would do this and say why the characters would join (not just any joe blow would join this kind of thing; it would need to be elitists). Really go into depth with the storyline!
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Old June 21st, 2013 (04:02 AM).
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IceFyr1928's Another Day in Equestria is declined.
It's now a whole lot more readable! Thanks! You 'current storyline' though like I spoke of last time still is lacking. It really doesn't give players direction or purpose. Go into a little more depth! Make it a little more exciting!

IceFyr1928's Pokemon: The Walking Dead is declined.
I noticed you wrote it was a revival, but your thread history doesn't say you ever posted one before. Are you reviving from someone else's idea? Because there is a rule stating that if reviving someone else's plot, you first must get permission, and if the person has been inactive for other a month and you cannot get permission, you can use the original concept but the plot must be different.

mistermewtwo's The last pokemon league is declined.
Your plot is fine, you just need to fix up your spelling, grammar and punctuation. All of those ellipses could easily be replaced by commas and full stops, you don't capitalise you starting of sentences, names of people or places, open with quotation marks... there is a lot you could fix.

TurkishDelight's Pokémon: Johto Reboot and its OOC is accepted!

jov0006's IC is accepted!

Jegretis' Heart of Soul is accepted!

Fuyu's IC is accepted!

TehFisharmahn's The Forgotten Smell of Freedom is declined.
Your plot is okay, you're just lacking a sign-up template, a rules section and a rating. Though, I would suggest some spacing between paragraphs, so it's easier to read. :)

Vexilum's Sinnoh's Mew is declined.
It's all swell! You just need a rating! You can PM or VM it to me if you like, or just submit again.
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Old June 21st, 2013 (05:43 AM). Edited June 24th, 2013 by Skymin.
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Retro Bug's Downworlders is accepted!
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Old June 29th, 2013 (05:24 AM).
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EliteBeat's [DE] CODING and its OOC is accepted!

TwilightSparkleThePokemonTrainer's Canterlot Falling is declined.
Here, we do roleplays a little differently. If you read the rules, roleplays to be accepted needs a acceptable plot with proper direction and motivation, a rules, a rating and a sign up sheet to be accepted. If you still wish to post an RP, make sure you keep this in mind when you resubmit.

gimmiepie's Midnight: A Darker than Black RP is accepted!

TehFisharmahn's The Forgotten Taste of Freedom is accepted!

IceFyr1928's Pokemon: The Walking Dead is accepted!

Tokio's Pokémon Reborn: Synchronize is accepted!
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