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Old June 24th, 2013, 05:45 PM
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Join Date: Jun 2013
Location: Western SD
Gender: Male
Nature: Quiet

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A poem I just wrote for my Girlfriend, first one I've ever attempted. Just wanted to see what everyone thinks of it. If it sucks please be gentle.

Rant of True Feelings!
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Again we are together,
so then let us start anew,
You have known my true feelings,
all I wish is for yours too.
Broke your heart once in the past,
that again I'll never do,
Of this I make a promise,
together we'll see it through.

Life may have been very rough,
and that I can understand,
But no matter just how harsh,
i'll lend you my loving hand.
I long for you as my girl,
and for I to be your man.
To comfort you forever,
is thus my eternal plan,

P-erfection is what you are,
A-nd with nothing to better.
R-espect is what you deserve,
K-now that I will deliver.
E-veryday I think of you,
R-eflecting on what you want.

L-ove may not be on the list,
A-ssuming what I should not.
U-ltimatly I hope for,
R-eality to match thought.
E-roticism not quite,
N-o need to stop what we've got.

S-imple words of affection,
M-y ears are eger to hear.
I-t's just that little something,
T-o know that you as well care.
H-aving somebody like you,

the only one in my heart.
I hope my words mean something,
and that we shall never part.
Cause in this world without you,
i do not know where to start.
I may not be that stupid,
but I'm also not that smart.

Each line seven syllables,
feelings I convey to you.
I hope you enjoy this rant,
and my message made it through.
You've known it was obvious,
so with one thing left to do.
With no procrastination,
know that I truly LOVE you!
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