Gold hack: Pokemon Spice Orange (Help Needed)

Hello my Username is Gen III and I decided to make this Hack because I LOVED the old games and I thought it would be fun to make one of my own :D

The Story:
One day while sitting in your room a news bulletin on TV tells of a Villain Team (Called team Spice) are stealing the Eight Power Crystals from the Eight Masters of the Cities and Towns you the protagonist decide you must go save the Power Crystals from the Villain team so you set of next door to get a Pokemon from your neighbor the Professor...

Starters:
You will have a choice of Mareep, Sudowoodo or Oddish

Screenshots:



As it says at the top I'm looking for Help any Help would be greatly appreciated :)

Thanks for looking at my Hack! :D

Well it is a start and you do seem to know where you are trying to go. It looks like it has potential. I cant join a team right now as I do not have enough time. The pictures do look good, but I would add a few more plus I would add a few more lines of story. Anyways good luck I am sure it will turn out well.

Haha I haven't been Updating this Hack for 2 Months now but here's a Update :P

This is the first City, It's called EverGreen City :)



Any Suggestions will be Appreciated

Hi, I can do mapping for you. And im sorry that i can only do mapping.

Sorry, I'm not really looking for Mappers, I can do the Mapping myself (The only thing I can do for Gen II Games)