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Old 2 Weeks Ago (02:29 AM).
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Quote originally posted by Dezy_S:
I just started learning in Pokemon Essentials and I created starting town for my game. I don't like it too but I don't know how to improve it.
It is not bad for a first try. Maybe adding more variety would give a better look to the map. For example, don't make the dirt path too straight and outdistance more the houses with the red roof. Also, that fence doesn't make any sense placed there. Fill that empty space with some decorative tilesets instead.
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Old 2 Days Ago (04:23 AM). Edited 1 Day Ago by Aljen.
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~~ This is one of the maps in my Project ~~ the Alpha Avenue. What do you guys think?
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~~ This is one of the maps in my Project ~~ the Alpha Avenue. What do you guys think?
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I would suggest working on the lower left corner of the map, it's basically a lot of water with nothing else. It looks bland in my opinion, but otherwise it looks fine.
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~~ This is one of the maps in my Project ~~ the Alpha Avenue. What do you guys think?
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You've nailed the ground in terms of detail, but the tiles you're using are meant to convey that same amount of detail underwater. I'd recommend either switching to opaque water or adding rocks and such under the water's surface
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Thank you, i will adjust the water surface ~~
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