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[Pokémon] Challenger - Omega Ruby Nuzlocke Novel *FINISHED*

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"You're so aptly named, Wally (missing comma) " the eldest brother spoke, before being batted down by a tall woman with long, dark hair.

"I haven't met you before, I'm Victoria Winstrate (missing comma)" she spoke to the green-haired boy, "I heard my brother's have been giving you a hard time?"

"They did at school, they always made my cry, bullying me about my asthma," tears filled Wally's eyes as he spoke.

*Cough*, the sister imitated, "sorry," *cough*, "I keep coughing, I might have to go inside and cry about it," she finished, followed by raucous laughter from the four brothers.

A couple missing commas in the dialogue. Also, the last part with *cough* I think describing like the sister coughing would flow better, something like this.

The sister imitated a cough. "Sorry," she said and let out another cough, "I keep coughing…" (etc.)

"Again, more words. Are you a coward? Or will you fight[S-HIGHLIGHT].[/S-HIGHLIGHT]" Erik demanded.

Replace period with comma.

During the Winstrate battle, I notice instances where you have "it's" (contraction of "it is") instead of "its". Besides that, woah over the house burning. Pretty crazy, although I'm disappointed Erik didn't so any reaction to it.

"May I go first?" Erik asked Wally as the two sat for breakfast in the foot court, getting a nod from his friend in response, it was the first time they had seen each other since the Winstrate house had burned down.

I think you mean "food court". Foot court I would think a shoes store, haha.

The two went silent as they finished off their meals, Blaze and Ralts were sat with their trainers both eating some tofu for their pre-gym meal.

Take out "were".

"You're annoying me now, Wally[S-HIGHLIGHT].[/S-HIGHLIGHT]" Erik snapped, he was angry with himself as much as he was with Wally, "First May, now you, I don't choose these things to happen to me but you both treat me as if I'm some villain."

"Please don't be angry with me," Wally cowered, Ralts sat up in anticipation, moving into a defensive stance, "who's May?" the trainer continued.

"Sorry for snapping, I'll see you later[S-HIGHLIGHT].[/S-HIGHLIGHT]" Erik informed Wally as he got up, him and Blaze leaving the food court to go and challenge for his third badge. He was ashamed he had gotten so angry at his friend Wally, deciding he would go and apologise to him after he had finished with the gym.

Both of the periods I highlighted should be replaced by a comma.

"Ahh, a challenger (missing comma)" an elderly gentleman spoke, spotting Erik coming through the doorway, he was flanked by two trainers to either side, "I am Wattson, the leader of this establishment and I welcome you[S-HIGHLIGHT],[/S-HIGHLIGHT]" [S-HIGHLIGHT]t[/S-HIGHLIGHT]he leader was dressed in a bright yellow suit, with matching trousers both as bright as the sun. A white undershirt split the all-yellow look, as did his bushy white beard and thin hair.

Missing comma. Also the highlighted parts you can replace the comma with period and capitalize "The" as "The leader was dressed..." isn't a dialogue tag.

"I know in the wild you were a frightened Pokemon, who elected to run and not fight back, but here you have to, it's fight or die[S-HIGHLIGHT].[/S-HIGHLIGHT]" Erik spoke to his new grass-type Pokemon. (replace period with comma)

His word's (don't need an apostrophe) seemed to frighten Leaf, who slouched, looking afraid before being slammed into by a quick attack from the opposing Electrike.

"This is what I mean, you cannot cower, hide or run here. I know my words are harsh but they are also true. Come on Leaf, I wouldn't send you into battle if I didn't think you were capable of winning here (missing comma)" Erik roared passionately.

Some suggestions I have in red bold. I'll say though good thing Leaf used attract and immediately took advantage of the situation!

Wattson pulled a small object from his pocket, a small circular badge, "this is the Dynamo badge, awarded to any trainers who defeat me in battle," he smiled as he spoke, "are you ready?"

Capitalize "this".

"With Ice" (missing comma) came the blunt reply.

"It's my gym, isn't it?," the elderly man smiled as he replied, "I am allowed to set it up as I please."

If you have a question mark you don't need a comma after it.

"You fought extremely well, even with the odds stacked hugely against you and your team," (maybe add something like "Wattson said" and then a comma) the old man's smile remaining firmly on his face, "you didn't even lose a single Pokemon to my tricks and attacks, this Dynamo badge if yours, you have earned it."

More suggestions in bold red.

Pretty interesting Wattson had the electrical chamber, letting the set up be in his favor. Luckily though Ice still survived and Erik won. Looking forward to the next part, otherwise!

Before I go, I noticed you have more mistakes in dialogue punctuation than last chapter. Was my explanation not clear enough? I'm not upset, was wondering if how I explain dialogue punctuation was confusing to you. Otherwise, if you still have a fair bit of trouble I'm willing to beta the next few chapters for you, which is basically I look over your work before you post it and give you suggestions/corrections. If you decide to take my offer, let me know!
 
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Hey!

Sorry that chapter and the proofreading afterwards was slightly rushed due to having a lot on my hands at the moment with deadlines, hopefully the next chapter I post will be up to scratch! If it's not then I'd be happy to let you beta the next few chapters afterwards?
 

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Yeah I understand having to deal with many things at once. It's okay to set aside editing a chapter until things settled down. Otherwise, to answer your question whatever works! If there's a chapter you want me to look over before you want to post let me know by PM and we can discuss some arrangements!
 
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Chapter Ten - Allies and Adversaries​


Erik peered over the boulder he was crouched behind, the baking sun beating down on him with the day feeling as hot as his Combusken's flames.  

 "Where are we even supposed to be right now? Fallabor or the mountain?" asked the first grunt in the red cloak, addressing his teammate.

 "Mt. Chimney," replied the second, with a voice a lot more hoarse than his softly spoken friend. "We are part of strike team two, idiot."
 "Sorry, I'm just not sure about this, I hate heights and that cable car creaks every time we go up on it!"

 "Just shut up and follow, Maxie wouldn't send us up there if there wasn't a good reason for it."

 The two Magma grunts began walking off, they had stopped for a bicker halfway through Route 111 when Erik had spotted them. He sneaked over to a large boulder in an attempt to overhear their conversation, discovering that something was planned for Fallabor town.

 Route 111 was comprised of a long, sandy track through mountainous hillsides, with huge rocks and boulders littering the pathway, which lead to a fork in the road. A small desert inhabited the centre of the route, to the right of the fork, whereas Mt. Chimney occupied the road to the left. A flash of movement from the other side of the road caught Erik's eye, someone was watching him from behind a boulder.

 "Come out!" Erik demanded, before leaping over his own boulder and storming over to where he had seen the movement.

 "Okay, okay!" a male voice moaned, shortly joined by another.

 "We're coming out," followed a female's voice, two figures emerging from behind the boulder. The male was holding a huge black recording device, lifting it over his shoulder and peering through the camera straight at Erik. He wore all navy blue, from his backwards fitted cap to his t-shirt and jeans combination. The female next to him bore an aqua-blue dress with white heels, her short cropped hair as brown as the boulder she was hiding behind.

 "I'm Ty," the cameraman introduced himself, "and this is Gabby, we are amateur reporters."

 "Why are you following me?!" Erik growled as viciously as a cornered animal.

 "We've been told by our editor to conduct an investigative report on you," Gabby answered, her stern voice causing Erik to immediately stand up straight. "We have been told you are looking to join Magma, so we are uncovering the plot by following you. We believe that if we decipher the reason as to why so many young trainers are tempted to join Team Magma, we can help put a stop to it."

 "That's ridiculous," Erik roared, "I have no intention of joining them, in fact, I'm on my way to fight them. Your editor having an issue with me is the problem."

 "Well it's too late," Ty took over, his voice a lot calmer and friendlier than his counterparts. "We have already got enough footage for the first showing," he finished with delight.

 "Blaze," Erik called, his Pokemon inhaled breath ready to destroy the camera with flame.

 "Wait!" Ty cried. "Don't!"

 Erik held up a hand and Blaze relaxed. "Okay," he started calmly, "I challenge you both to battle, if I win, you explain to me what's really going on as well as deleting the footage."

 "Fine," Gabby responded, "but if we win, we air our report along with a full video confession from you, whether it's the truth or not," a smug look taking to her face.

 "Let's battle," Ty and Erik said in unison.

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Ty and Gabby sent out a Magnemite and Whismur into battle respectively, insisting on a double battle with Erik, Lady and Roller taking to the stage for their trainer.

 Lady was bouncing around the battlefield on her tentacles, leaping from side to side with Roller making circle shapes around her. Erik knew they were trying to intimidate their opponents by showing how well they worked as a team, the Magnemite and Whismur static alongside one another clearly not as well trained.

The Magnemite made the first move of their fight, starting to charge an electrical blast at Lady. Erik's Tentacool reacted quickly, letting out a supersonic sound wave before her opponent was finished which caused the electricity to overcharge, sending Ty's Pokemon crashing into one of the rocks on the path. Ice barked in approval at Lady copying his tactic from the gym battle with Wattson's Magneton.

 Roller instantly chased after the crashed Magnemite, grabbing the rock it had smashed into and slamming it down on the Pokemon. Gabby's Whismur moved to save his ally, before Lady copied Leaf's trick next, sending pheromones into the air and causing her foe to temporarily fall in love with the Tentacool.

 Magnemite took advantage of Roller momentarily stopping his attacks, the stone Erik's Pokemon was using to beat his opponent which had split in half, leaving the poison-type having to look around for another weapon, the Gulpin knowing that his poisonous attacks would have no effect. The Magnemite began charging for an electrical attack whilst Roller was distracted.

Lady immediately saw the event unfolding, sending out another soundwave, but this time the supersonic attack didn't have the intended effect; the Magnemite overcharged, but instead of damaging itself, the Pokemon emitted a wave of electrical power, the supercharged attack hitting Lady and paralysed her. Roller only just managed to spin out of the way.
Whismur growled in anger, turning on the Magnemite and pummelling the steel Pokemon relentlessly.

 "What are you doing?!" screamed Gabby.

 "Avenging his loved one," Erik replied with a smirk, as the Magnemite was knocked unconscious.

Gabby's Whismur span around to check on Lady, but was hit by a pulse of water from his new love, along with a blast of poison from Roller. Both attacks slammed her back into the boulder his trainer was originally hiding behind, knocking her unconscious next to her comrade. Roller moved over the the Magnemite to finish it off, with Lady doing the same to the Whismur.

 "Stop!" commanded Erik, before he turned to the two news reporters. "You guys going to hold up your end of the deal?!"

 "Ty, you know what to do.." Gabby turned to her friend despondently, the cameraman fiddling around with some of the buttons on his device.

 "There we go, all clips of you have been deleted," he said to Erik.

 "Good, now tell me why you are really following me."

 "Our editor wanted to set you up as the bad guy," Ty answered, looking shaken. He glanced at his Magnemite each time he spoke. "We wanted to get trainers who wanted to do good to home in on you as payback for messing our editor about, we were only doing what we were told, I promise!"

 "Why is he trying to take me out?"

 "You angered him," Gabby took over, her self-confidence now as fragile as her Whismur. "You've made an enemy out of him."

 "All I did was ask a few questions," Erik complained.

 "The wrong questions," Gabby responded instantly, causing Erik to think the editor must have been part of Magma, or maybe one of the corrupt officials? Or both? Or maybe neither, he couldn't be sure, but he was definitely bad news.

 "Leave," Erik instructed the two reporters, as he recalled his Pokemon into their Pokeballs, his head aching from the thoughts circling his brain. It seemed to him that everyone was against him, all part of some huge conspiracy.

 "You've got to stop making so many enemies," he thought to himself, before being hit by a revelation. "My anger just pushes people away, this conspiracy doesn't exist, it's me being paranoid, this is all due to my actions. Even May and Wally have fallen away."

A raging sandstorm buffeted Erik's advances, the sand being whipped into his eyes by howling wins, temporarily blinding him as he attempted to cross the desert. He knew on the other side there was a mountain path or cave in which he could easily ascend Mt Chimney, whereas if he tried going up the volcano from the south side he would be forced to climb up a treacherous mountain pass, filled with jagged rocks and unstable surfaces.

 His journey through Route 111 after battling with Gabby and Ty was eventful, filled with trainers wishing to battle him to toughen their Pokemon for either traversing the mountain or the desert.

A lady named Irene sent out both a Plusle and Minun, requesting a double battle with Erik who had sent out Ice and was reaching for Leaf's Pokeball before the Mightyena shunned the support and took the two electric-typed Pokemon down on his own.

Emory was next, the gentleman's Tailow ripped from the air by Ice's cold fangs, the icy move strong against the flying-type. Finally, Travis's Sandshrew was destroyed by Leaf, who used the same tactics as she did in the gym, attracting the foe before sending it to sleep then poisoning it.

The sand continued pounding against Erik, he had lost his vision but continued trudging on regardless, slowly moving one foot in front of the other to attempt to carrying on pushing his way through the storm. One such step was interrupted by a rock, he tripped and fell onto the floor. Erik picked himself up, before walking straight into a cliff face.

 He walked for what seemed like a further fifteen minutes, one arm across his face to shield his eyes, the other stretched in front of him to feel for any obstacles in his path. The storm was getting weaker and weaker with every step, he knew he had nearly reached the exit of the desert.

 A couple of minutes later and the storm had stopped completely. Erik rubbed his eyes to get any sand out before opening them, the desert was behind him. He peered from side to side to realise that he was where he had started, he must have circled back accidentally trying to avoid any cliffs or boulders in his path. The desert route was inaccessible, he knew that he and his team must now try crossing through the hazardous mountain pass.

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Roller smashed into another rock, clearing it out of Erik's path as they made their way up the mountain. Like when they were in the desert, the rest of his team were in their Pokeballs, Erik deciding that they were safer in there, as well as the fact that if too much weight was placed on the unstable ground it could fall from underneath them. 

Roller crashed into another rock, the object exploding into a million pieces upon contact, allowing Erik to walk through unhindered. After a few more steps another rock lay in their path, this one slightly more orange in colour and smaller than usual. The Gulpin carefully rolled up to it before attempting to smash into it, the rock moving out the way just in time.

The rock blasted fire at its aggressor, Erik's Pokemon leaping out of the way. Erik noticed that the rock was, infact, a Numel; the fire Pokemon angry at being disturbed and ramming Roller until the Pokemon nearly fell off the cliff edge. The Numel had Roller exactly where it wanted him, and began charging once more before slowing down suddenly, Leaf had released sleep gas into the air. Erik threw a great ball at the now sleeping Numel, capturing the wild Pokemon. The ball disappeared into storage the instant the new member of his team was secured in its new home, before Erik decided to call his new capture, "Rocky".

Night was closing in, and the mountain would be impossible to scale in darkness. Roller found a small cave for him and his trainer to spend the night in, Erik releasing his team from their homes allowing them all to spend the night together.

"Come on Dancer, huddle around the warmth," Erik spoke to his Pikachu, who was lying away from the rest of the group.

Leaf had released small puffs of powder into the air for Blaze to set aflame, the minute flames giving the team a slight warmth through the chilly night.

Erik realised his pleas to Dancer were in vain. She may be willing to be part of their adventure, but not yet ready to be part of the team. Lady was back inside her Pokeball, unhappy at sleeping in a dark, dank cave, but Ice and Blaze lay side by side, with Leaf and Roller cuddled up to Erik as they slept.

 "Tomorrow, we ascend and take down Magma," Erik promised his team.

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The morning sun pierced through the darkness of the night, the sky removing its black cloak and becoming pale blue with a reddish tint, the mountain pass now dimly lit.

Erik recalled his team into their Pokeballs, all except Roller who began smashing rocks once more, the ascent a lot easier this time with him nearing a flat area in which the cable car station made its home.

After another twenty minutes of climbing, Blaze hauled Erik up a cliff, the trainer grabbing onto the top and using his arms to lift himself up onto the flat surface, before recalling his Combusken into the Pokeball. He turned to see the cable car station to his right, with a cave entrance to his left.

"That must be fiery path to my left, a clear walkway downwards to the northern edge of the desert," he thought to himself.

The cable car station was an unremarkable building consisting of two floors, the second of which was lined with large open windows, the lower floor had no windows however, but did contain a single metal door; which was slammed shut and unresponsive to Erik attempting to push it aside. He realised that the door must have been bolted shut from the other side, and with no first floor windows he made his way to have a look to either side of the station for another entrance.

The western side was completely made up of a huge rock face, with the cable car lines ascending up it all the way to the peak, whereas the eastern side was the opposite, a sharp edge with a long drop to the surface if someone managed to fall off. He released his team from their Pokeballs.

"We need to blast through this door," he informed them, "I'll try knocking to see if anyone friendly is inside first, if not, everyone attack it with ranged attacks at the same time."

Erik proceeded with the plan, thumping the door three times. His fist banging against the steel made a powerful noise, sure to alert anyone residing within the station.

"Who is-" a voice floated down from one of the open windows, Erik looking up to see a familiar figure staring him in the face - it was Grant.

"Everyone! He's at the door, the guy I told you about!" Grant shouted, to which four more faces appear at the windows looking down on the trainer that had embarrassed their comrade twice before.

In unison, the five Team Magma members sent out Numels, instructing their creatures to blast at Erik and his team with fire. A total of eight of the rock-like Pokemon began shooting bursts of flame towards the group.

"Retreat to the cave!" Erik commanded his group, the seven of them running off towards the cave together, being split up into smaller teams as they dodged the flame blasts, Leaf was separated from the rest of them, along with her trainer.

A blast landed directly in front of Erik, causing him to stop in his tracks, and see another flame burst heading straight for him, he closed his eyes and heard a small scream.

Leaf had dived in front and saved her trainer, rocketing towards the edge of the cliff. Erik reacted rapidly and flew forwards, catching the Oddish with outstretched arms, holding her over the drop below, she was weak but alive.

The two looked back to see another trail of roaring fire heading towards them, seemingly in slow motion. Leaf glanced at Erik for a short moment that seemed to last a lifetime; the trainer catching her eyes full of sorrow, the Pokemon thankful for Erik giving her a chance. Leaf leapt out of Erik's hands towards the flame, moving to sacrifice herself so that her trainer could get away.

Erik's vision blurred, a bright white light half-blinding him, absorbing waves of fire blasts from the eight Numels in the building. Seconds slowly passed as Erik's vision returned in full, a Gloom now standing in front of him; Oddish had evolved. More fire rained down upon them, but they were cut out by a jet of water, the Marshtomp that shot it strolling up and launching water at each window, causing the Numels to be thrown backwards.

"Over here!" May screamed over from the cave entrance.  

Erik complied, grabbing Leaf and sprinting into the cover of the cave.

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Heat filled the cave like an oven, a passage through a volcano leading downwards to the surface. Erik and May stood side by side at the summit of the pathway.

"What are you doing here?" Erik enquired, still shocked at May's sudden appearance.

"Not even a thank you?" May whined. "I was in the desert doing some research on what types of Pokemon live there. I left yesterday evening and heard a news report about you going to join Team Magma and thought I'd go see for myself if it's true the next morning. I can see that it's not, however."

"Gabby and Ty must have aired the show about me!" Erik exclaimed aloud.

"Yep," May responded, "you're all over the news."

"What are they saying?" Erik's heart rate increased as rapidly as his mood dropped.

"That you've been a thorn in the side of the authorities for a while with your vile deeds to get back at your father, and you're looking to join Team Magma to get at him even more, they are saying they are looking into reasons for so many trainers joining the gang and you are a specific case study," May replied matter-of-factly.

"It's because I demanded information from their editor," Erik sighed, "now they're out for blood."

"Stupid boy," May snapped, "do you have to start fights everywhere you go?!" She turned to view Dancer, the Pikachu still accompanied Erik. "So you still haven't returned her, you disgust me sometimes."

"Dancer is happy now," Erik insisted, Dancer half-smiling in response. It wasn't the full truth, but his Pikachu was certainly a lot happier than she once was. "How did you manage to study in the desert anyway? I tried passing through yesterday and there was a huge sandstorm," he added.

"I was wearing my goggles to protect my eyes from the storm. Well there's a second reason I came up to see you," May continued, tone suddenly changing into a more sweet voice. "I haven't forgiven you, but I'd like your help. Magma are planning something in Fallabor, I'm off to see Professor Cozmo there for more information, their base in the mountain can wait for now, Erik."

"Of course I'll come with you," Erik responded instantly without thinking, delighted at the proposal.

May handed Erik six potions, one for each member of his team to heal their wounds.

"Here," she said as she did so, "you'll want to go to Lavaridge after all this, it's on top of the mountain and houses the fourth gym. I asked you because I know deep down you're a good guy, and also the strongest trainer I've ever met." A nervous smile spread across her face. Erik was unsure what the smile indicated, if anything, but thanked her for the items and the information.

"Wait, how do you know about their plot in Fallabor?" he blurted.

"None of your business," she snapped again, before turning on her heel and beginning her descent down the pathway. "And I don't want you to come with me, I'll meet you there. Don't try and follow me, my bike is outside so you won't be able to catch up."

He watched her as she made her way down, annoyed at himself as he always was after an encounter with May. There was always something he could've said, or not have said. 

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Erik sat with his Pokemon at the end of the slope, just before where the cave exited onto the northern section of Route 111. He applied a potion to each of their wounds, also leaving a pile of berries he had picked off bushes on the southern section of the route he was about to enter onto.

Dancer delicately grabbed a berry, nibbling on the skin before handing the remainder to Roller who gulped it down without a seconds hesitation. The Pikachu went to grab another before having it stolen out of her grip, the smell the thief emitted causing her to back off massively, almost running halfway back up the slope.

The wild Koffing ate another berry, and another, none of Erik's team wanting to go near it due to the stench that came out of the creature. Erik grabbed a great ball out of his bag and threw it at the Koffing, the device ricocheting off the poison-type and opened up to suck the wild Pokemon inside.

"Welcome to the team, Glutton," Erik laughed, before the great ball disappeared into storage alongside Rocky, the rest of his team gathering back around the berries after the stench vanished along with the Koffing.

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Route 111 stretched out before them, and after that lay Route 113, a path covered in long grass and volcanic ash which acted to link the former route to Fallabor Town.

"Right, May has healed us all up," Erik looked at each of his team as he spoke. "There is still a long way to go to Fallabor, and there are most definitely going to be people training their Pokemon, and even people coming after us specifically. Are you ready for the challenge?"

All six of his Pokemon roared in unison, Erik span on his heel and began the trek to Fallabor Town, to Team Magma, to May.
 

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The grammar/mechanical stuff I already mentioned in my beta (was about to let you know I got it done through PM, but I had to take care of something important today), so I'll comment real quick on the chapter's material.

I thought the battle with Gabby and Ty was an enjoyable read, especially when attraction was used later haha. I also like that after the battle Erik realized his behavior unintentionally pushed others away from him.

My favorite part is when Leaf sacrificed herself to save Erik, only to evolve into Gloom. Usually evolution during moments like that is used many times, but in this case I like that scene a lot as I thought Leaf was a goner there. Luckily May came to save them on time.

And speaking of May, I think the interactions between her and Erik this time around is better than previous chapters. The two got to sort out some things, which is nice.

Looking forward to next chapter and I'm totally fine if you want me to check out more chapters before you want to post them!
 
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That's fine, I checked on the doc earlier to see if you'd made any progress and saw that you'd already made your corrections!
You going through it before posting really helped so of course I'd like to send you more chapters before I post them in future, thank you for the offer :)
 
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Chapter Eleven - The Media's Enemy​


A line of trees stretched into the sky from both sides of the sandy road that twisted and turned chaotically, all the way until Route 111 became Route 113.

A swift glance behind him, and Erik saw the cave entrance in the distance to the left, with the desert looming behind his right shoulder. He turned his head back around to be met by a fist which flashed before him. His vision turning to temporary darkness as he crashed to the surprisingly solid ground.

Erik turned his head to see Roller leap in in an attempt to save him, before a Mightyena slammed into his Gulpin - who in turn went flying backwards into Leaf which left the two of them in a slump on the ground. Erik fumbled around for Lady's Pokeball before the attacker kicked it out of his hands.

"Nothin' personal kid," came a gruff voice from the large man standing over Erik. He was wearing a black leather jacket with dark jeans, using a chain as a belt. "Defeating you will get me all over the news, imagine the fame and money that would come with that," the man laughed as he spoke, his chuckles sounding almost like he was choking on something.

"Your Mightyena is too well trained for this part of Hoenn," Erik replied, "besides the news is lying to people about me."

"I know he's powerful, I have five badges after just defeating your father in battle. I was about to cross the river to get to Fortree town and my sixth badge when I heard the news. I don't care if they're lying, I'll still get famous either way."

Erik climbed to his feet to see Ice and Blaze struggling with their combined efforts against the thug's Mightyena. Blaze swiped a kick at his foe, who feinted around it then slammed into the Combusken, sending it rocketing to the floor. Ice moved in to retaliate, barring his fangs which were glistening with ice as always, the thug's Pokemon ducking under the attempted bite and slamming its skull into Ice's stomach.

"Finish the Combusken off!" ordered the thug, as Erik stood motionless, too frightened to move.

The Mightyena obliged his trainer's orders, and opened his jaws to wrap his teeth around Blaze's throat, before being fried by a blast of electricity from Dancer. Ice got back up to his feet and wrapped his own fangs around the Mightyena, Blaze blasting it with fire to finally finish off their opponent.

As Erik's team rounded on the thug; the large man ran.

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Erik couldn't tell if Wilson and Brooke were brother and sister, or just very close friends. The two looked almost identical with lime-green hair and piercing amber eyes, and both were well built, wearing rose-coloured outfits. Whatever their relation, the two trainers' hatred of Erik was clear.

"We were training up to challenge your dad for his badge," Brooke's voice was extremely high pitched, the sound of it causing Erik to wince as she spoke. "But we see his evil son needs taking care of first."

The two had ambushed Erik as he walked further down Route 111, and after a brief introduction, had challenged him to a fight, Wilson was to go first.

"My sister won't even be needed," Wilson's voice was also high, almost boyish despite looking to be in his late-twenties. "I will take you down."

"Well that answers that question; brother and sister," Erik chuckled to Blaze, his Combusken chirping in response.

"Shut up!" Brooke squealed, "you Magma people need to be shown there are still people who will fight you. Get him big bro."

"You got it," Wilson replied as he launched a Pokeball into the air, the device opened up with an Electrike hopping out.

Erik had given up trying to convince people he wasn't part of Team Magma, so didn't even bother, nodding calmly to Leaf; the Gloom taking to the battlefield.

Leaf seemed to be a lot more stubborn and miserable since her evolution, almost as if the previously quiet and innocent Oddish was now going through a teenage phase. Erik was snapped out of his thought process by a quick attack by Wilson's Pokemon, the Electrike moving as quickly as it had entered the battlefield and swiping at the Gloom.

Gloom inhaled and began the process to release pheromones into the air, but was interrupt by a bolt of electricity from the Electrike who moved quicker than any Pokemon Erik had ever seen. Wilson's creature moved in for another attack but Leaf reacted in time, sending spores into the air to attract the foe, who fell in love with her.

"Yes!" Erik shouted, he knew from experience whenever Leaf had attracted an opponent, she quickly won the fight.

"Come on Electrike, we've been through worse than this!" Wilson encouraged, the electric Pokemon repeatedly shaking his head with eyes slammed shut, like it was trying to shake out a vile thought.

Wilson's Pokemon blasted a jolt of electrical power at Leaf, fighting through the love and causing damage to the Gloom.

"Oh no," Erik thought to himself, "this Electrike is too well trained. It can fight through love. It moves at great speeds…" Leaf inhaled, even though her spores weren't working, she had no other moves, or so Erik thought.

The Gloom blasted a stream of poisonous liquid out of her mouth, managing what Oddish couldn't and attacking through other means. The Electrike was thrown back but regained itself, a paralysing wave of lightning erupting from its skin, striking and paralysing Leaf; leaving her weak and unable to move.

Erik moved swiftly, withdrawing Leaf into her Pokeball and giving Ice a nod to charge into battle. The Electrike was majorly weakened but still moved quickly, darting around Ice who stood motionless, and waited. As soon as Wilson's Pokemon made its move, Ice grabbed and crushed it with his fangs.

"No!" Wilson roared, grabbing his next Pokeball in a rage and throwing it, a Makuhita emerging from within. Erik nodded to Roller.

The Gulpin moved quickest, launching a ball of toxic sludge which poisoned the Makuhita upon contact. The fighting Pokemon countering by whipping up a whirlwind, the force of which launched Roller into the air, high up into the sky.

Erik saved his Pokemon by recalling it into his Pokeball, and by the time he turned his head to nod at Blaze, his Combusken had already slammed into the Makuhita in a fiery charge. Blaze was relentless, despite receiving multiple punches to the face, he carried on kicking back, the combined fire and poison proving too much for Wilson's second creature.

"KILL HIM!" screamed Wilson, infuriated. Erik didn't recognise the next Pokemon that was sent into battle. A blue and yellow creature stood tall on it's hind legs, with short arms and sharp fangs with accompanying dragon mane. A quick check of his Pokedex informing him his opponent was Bagon, a dragon type.

Ice strutted out onto the field of battle, Erik knowing that dragon-types were weak to ice attacks. His Mightyena shivered, then stopped, suddenly wincing, Erik realising that Ice was paralysed, contact with the Electrikes skin must have caused it.

The Bagon took advantage, charging in head first, but Ice composed himself then leapt onto the dragon, icy fangs causing great damage. Bagon retaliated with fire breath, but Ice's teeth were unmelting, the cold glistening still as he ended the match-up.

Erik noticed that Wilson still had two Pokeballs left, and Brooke had all three of hers untouched. Whereas Leaf was too weak to fight with Roller, Ice and Blaze having had taken significant damage already.

"Let's speed this up," Wilson declared, throwing out both of his remaining Pokeballs out at once, a Spoink emerging alongside a Mawille. Blaze and Roller marched out to face them.

The Spoink bounced from side to side, never staying still for a moment, and launched a vicious ray of light towards Roller. The Gulpin span around rapidly, dizzy and confused by the bright light which continuously changed colour, but fought through the confusion to launch a ball of poisonous sludge back, successfully poisoning the psychic-type.

Blaze was up against the steel-typed Mawille, who didn't put up much of a challenge at all due to his flames melting the steel skin, the Combusken turning to see Roller letting out rapid and continual poisonous attacks against the Spoink, one such ball of sludge Blaze set alight, the fire ball of poison incinerating Wilson's final Pokemon.

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Wilson was still shocked and in tears as Brooke faced up to Erik. He had wanted to heal his team before he faced her, but his wrist device had responded to her challenge leaving him unable to.

"I will take you down, you evil boy!" promised Brooke.

"You will be in tears after this like your brother," Erik said dryly, he was beyond caring now, the two had brought this upon themselves.

An evolved version of Zigzagoon was her first fighter, the slender Linoone staring Roller in the eye as the two prepared to fight. The Linoone moved fastest, headbutting Roller into a nearby tree, the Gulpin retaliating with sludge, which had little effect. Roller was waning.

Linoone moved quickly again, furiously swiping at Roller again and again, Erik knew it was lost, as soon as Brooke's Pokemon stopped to breathe, he withdrew Roller into his Pokeball, the Gulpin tremendously weak. Blaze leapt in, kicking the Linoone into the tree, again the attack by one of Erik's team had little effect.

A loud creak could be heard from the tree, with the Linoone standing at full height on her hind legs and screeching at Blaze, challenging him to come forward and attack. Blaze responded, despite Erik's cries, charging in as the Linoone prepared to lunge.

A further loud creak, and half the tree seemed to fall on top of Brooke's creature, a dozen or so branches crashing down, which Blaze set alight to make absolutely sure the Linoone had fallen.

Brooke sent out a Wingull. With only Blaze and Lady in fighting condition, and Blaze having a double weakness to Wingull's dual water and flying types, Erik was feeling lost; and Brooke still had another Pokemon after that.

Lady and Wingulls water blasts intercepted another, cancelling their attacks out. With the Wingull deftly dodging the Tentacool's following poisonous attacks, the flying creature grabbed Lady in it's talons and flew her into a tree, then launched Lady back to the ground to a soft thud. Lady was barely moving, but alive.

"I'm sorry Blaze," Erik whispered to his oldest friend, tears filling his eyes, "it's down to you now."

A yellow paw halted Blaze's advances, as Dancer walked onto the battlefield herself. A watery blast hitting her square in the face and knocking her backwards only seeming to anger the Pikachu, who skipped out of the way of a second water blast before blasting electricity at it. The electrical power surging up the water, all the way to the Wingull's beak, frying it and leaving Brooke down to her final Pokemon; Roselia.

Blaze had no struggle against Roselia, his fire attacks burning through the grass-type with ease. Erik had beaten both the siblings now, even though they had one badge more than he did. Despite his victories, every single member of his team was extremely weak, they would not survive another battle if they weren't healed and the next Pokemon centre wasn't until Fallabor town, a long way away still.

Erik expected a response from the twins, but both were too busy consoling each other. He walked on without looking back.

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"Erik!" a sweet sounding voice crawled its way down from one of the identical trees which lined the route to the trainer on the pathway below.

Erik froze. His team were weak, unlikely to survive another fight and yet another trainer was calling his name, he had almost reached the end of Route 111, he was so close.

"Look," he responded, looking up to see a woman with caramel skin and fluffy dark hair perched on a wooden platform, concealed in the raking leaves and branches of the tree. "The reporters are lying, I'm not joining Magma. My team are too weak to survive another battle, please," he pleaded, for the first time in his life he was begging. All his Pokemon were back inside their Pokeballs, he had wanted to give them as much rest of possible.

"Dont worry, my dad once angered the media too, I know their tricks." She flashed him a smile as she spoke, clear white teeth seemingly sparkling in the sunlight. "Come up here, I'll throw a ladder down, it's safe, I promise."

Erik looked around, he saw a couple of trainers emerging from the desert, and was sure he could made out human-shaped figures at the other end of the route as well. Besides, he knew how treacherous Route 113 supposedly was, covered in ash storms from the active volcano which loomed over it. He climbed the ladder.

Each rung he climbed caused the ladder to wobble alarmingly, a creaking noise could be heard from the wooden platform above and Erik always did have a slight fear of heights. He kept his gaze locked above him, terrified that if he looked down he would fall, until he made it to the top.

Cecilia had gone. Pushing aside a huge branch swamped with leaves revealed a treehouse, made of soft pine wood with no windows and a single, small door. The whole thing could have possibly been crafted by Cecilia herself.

He entered cautiously, having to duck to fit through the doorway. He wasn't the tallest, but the lady now stand in front of him was shorter, of average height for a female.

"This is my secret base," she informed him, her large brown eyes taking in his own. "Lots of tainers have them, either in trees or in small caves. You can get your Pokemon to make one for you if you see a weak looking area in a cliff-face or a large tree. I come here to hide or relax from the outside world."

Erik scanned the room, a huge sky blue mat welcomed them and directly in front of him was a huge poster on the wall with a Pokeball on it. Two Treecko dolls lay on the floor underneath it, a table and chairs to the right of the house with a bed and laptop to the left. Erik heard noise coming from the laptop and wondered over, seeing that it was showing the news report of himself right now, he listened to what it was saying about him:

"As you can clearly see," a voiceover from Gabby announced, to an onscreen image of Erik spying on the two Magma members from behind a boulder. "Norman's son is looking to follow the two back to their base so he can request to join them."

Two minutes of highly edited footage and lies followed, Gabby and Ty seemingly having followed Erik since he had left Mauville, the footage even lasting until he climbed Mt. Chimney. They must have continued following him even after he had beaten them.

"There he goes, climbing up the mountain to his destiny." Gabby stared directly at the camera the entire time, showing no sign of remorse. It was almost as if she believed every single word she was saying. "And now," she continued, "we confronted Erik and have exclusive footage of the boy himself."

An edited clip showed, first of him having to stop what Gabby described as his "rabid and out of control Combusken" from destroying their camera, then to Roller repeatedly smashing Magnemite with a rock, despite "a battle never taking place", then finally, Lady and Roller standing over Magnemite and Whismur as Erik threatened to kill them if the footage of him wasn't deleted.

"Pictures say a thousand words, and videos speak a thousand pictures," Gabby summed up, "this boy Erik needs taking down. I repeat, no battle took place, his actions and threats were because he caught us trying to film him and wanted it all covered up. But you do not bring ace reporters Gabby and Ty down easily, we bring you, the people, all the top stories no matter what! G and T signing out."

"They've been showing that report twice an hour, all day," Cecilia spoke as soon as the report finished. Erik was stunned.

"It's all lies.." Erik could barely manage a whisper.

"I know," came the reply from Cecilia, "anyone who messes with the media or the authorities gets burned."

"Do you know who these authorities are?" Erik asked the question that had been on his mind for a while.

"No one does."

"How did you know the media were lying about me? Why did you save me?"

"I can tell who the bad ones are, the type of people that join Magma, and you're not one of them."

"I'm not a good person, Cecilia."

"Maybe that's what we need, in a world where the good people get nowhere, we need someone to break the ice. Someone who's not the best of people to make their mark in order to let the good people in, if you get me?"

"Not really," Erik laughed, before jumping backwards suddenly as one of the Treecko dolls turned out to be alive. Cecilia giggled.

"Your Combusken seems strong from what I've seen."

"Me and Blaze go back a long way."

"Blaze?" she said quizzically. "Oh! You nickname your Pokemon, that's so cool! Anyway Erik I've been meaning to say, feel free to camp out up here until tomorrow. By then, the media will have probably found a new story to spin and you can carry on your journey without the hassle."

"Thank you, but why?" Erik was confused at the stranger's kindness.

"Why not? It will be fun," she replied, a sparkling white smile engulfing her face once more.

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Dancer used her electricity to power up a lamp, dimly lighting up the treehouse interior as night closed in. Cecilia had just returned from scavenging for supplies, herself and her Treecko picking up many berries for the Pokemon, with nuts and roots for Cecilia and Erik to feast on.

"Thank you," Erik started, "I think we will leave in an hour or two, the cover of night will aid us and allow us to sneak through to Fallabor town."

"It's too dangerous to travel through Route 113 at night, besides, it would be best to wait until tomorrow for things to blow over before leaving."

Erik thought of a retort but held his tongue as a menacing thought flowed through his mind. "Why doesn't she want me to leave," he pondered, "is she deliberately keeping me here, she could well work for the media or Magma and I'd have no way of knowing."

"What are you thinking?" Cecilia asked, noticing the sudden silence.

"Where abouts did you go?" He thought if she hesitated or gave a suspicious answer, she could well have popped out to one of his enemies. It was making sense now, why else would a random trainer try to save him because 'she knows the media like to twist things' and 'she could tell he's not the type to join Magma'.

"I told you? I went to rummage up some food for us.." Cecilia looked almost offended at the question, as if she could read Erik's suspicions.

"Never mind," he replied, seeing his team helping themselves to dinner. He decided he would leave tonight, recalling his Pokemon into their Pokeballs whilst Cecilia was sleeping and leaving the treehouse.

Another silence took over the treehouse, one that didn't depart for the next couple of hours until they all headed to sleep. Erik on the floor recalling his team into their Pokeballs, informing his host that he didn't want them to sleep on the hard wooden surface.

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Erik threw the ladder and climbed downwards to the surface. He had waited for Cecilia to fall sound asleep then bailed, tip-toeing quietly out of the treehouse so he didn't awaken her.

He reached the bottom and ran towards Route 113, his team were now rested and although still weak, he was confident they were ready for another battle if need be, after replenishing themselves with food and a brief sleep inside their Pokeballs, he let them all out to accompany him.

He turned back to look at the treehouse once he had reached the end of Route 111, it was barely visible but he could swear he saw a shadowed figure pulling the ladder back up. He was sad to leave Cecilia as he did, after all the help she had given him, but knew he could not risk her working in secret for one of his enemies.

Turning back around to face Route 113 he immediately saw why he had been warned about it.

An enormous fog hung over the area in front of him, clouding out any vision he would've been granted by the starlight. A quick nod to Blaze and his Pokemon shot out a ball of fire to attempt to light up the pathway ahead of him.

A thicket of large grass burst into flames, allowing Erik to see Route 113 was covered in such thickets and was, luckily, very linear by the brief glimpse of the route he could now see.

"Right," he spoke to his team, "I need all of you apart from Blaze to return inside your Pokeballs, it's too dangerous out here for you all."

His request was greeted by a stubborn refusal, his team wanted to take the journey with him, however perilous the trek seemed.

"Okay, we'll do this together," he chuckled, to a huge roar from each individual member of the group.

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Erik struggled to breathe, a glance behind him saw his lagging team having the same problem. The volcanic ash was too much from them to bare, but it was too late to turn back now.

Blaze continuously lit thickets of long grass on fire, lighting them a path through the foggy darkness. He inhaled and spat another flame, this one causing a loud screech from within, a metallic bird flying upwards into the sky. The fire glistened off of the bird's steel skin to illuminate the route in front of them. From here Erik could now see Fallabor town and a hut closer to him, both were still a long way away, but now he knew where he was going. He knew he was heading in the right direction.

Lady shot out a plume of water at the Skarmory, the flames that had engulfed the steel Pokemon being extinguished. Erik followed up Lady's intuitive move by throwing a great ball at Skarmory; capturing it and naming her "Steel".

"Keep it up everyone, we will stop for a rest at that hut we saw," Erik declared to his Pokemon, they all looked shattered and weak but wanted to continue alongside their trainer.

Minutes passed as they struggled on, Lady had collapsed already and the rest of the team weren't far behind. Erik refused to let them continue; withdrawing them all into their Pokeballs. All except Lady and Blaze, the former he now carried in his arms as they made their way through the ash strewn route.

His Tentacool's breath was shallow and pulse weak in the extreme. Blaze stuttered in his walking, coughing constantly through the ash and smoke. A small light in the distance guiding them towards the hut, and respite from the torture.

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The struggle continued, each footstep more difficult than the last. Each step kicking up ash off the floor and into the air for Erik or Blaze to inhale, the path they had taken behind them now lit up in flames. At this rate, Erik and Blaze would burn the entirety of Route 113 down.

Minutes later they finally reached the hut, slamming the door to one side and entering. Lady's pulse had gone completely now as Erik set her down upon a large, wooden table in the centre of the room.

Glass artifacts littered the hut, from pipes to vases to replica Pokemon. An elderly man burst out of a back room, quickly followed by one much younger - to see Erik hopelessly trying to revive Lady with CPR.
"What is the meaning of this?!" demanded the aging gentleman, who hadn't a single hair on his head that wasn't grey.

"You answer my dad this instant," the boy followed, a Pokeball in his grasp.

"Sorry," blurted Erik in a rush, "my Pokemon is dying. Help, please."

The two residents ran over to where Erik's Tentacool now lay, checking for a pulse and attempting to clear her airways, to no avail.

"I'm sorry young man," the elderly man spoke with genuine sadness, "she's gone."

"There must be something you can do?!" Erik roared, he was furious with himself for not listening to Cecilia and staying the night. Even if she had turned out to be working for Team Magma, at least Lady would still be here with him now.

"Sorry, we lack any specialist equipment, we just fashion glass items out of ash here; to sell."

Erik's head span, he felt incredibly dizzy.

"Are you okay?" the son enquired.

"I..I.." Erik attempted to reply, collapsing to the ground coughing and spluttering. He turned to Blaze for assistance, but his Combusken was already on the floor unconscious. Route 113 had defeated them both.

As Erik's vision faded he stared at Lady, she was lost to him.

"If only I'd listened.." he spoke aloud, to no one and everyone. "If only I'd.. list..ened.."

The world went black.
 

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You mentioned you wanted to post this chapter quickly, so I got some grammar corrections/suggestions along with quick thoughts on some scenes. For the most part your dialogue punctuation greatly improved, though I still saw a couple mistakes (the tricky ones I mentioned to you in my last beta). Otherwise, noticed a couple other typos and minor mistakes.

"Your Mightyena is too well trained for this part of Hoenn," Erik replied, "besides the news is lying to people about me."

For this particular sentence: ""Your Mightyena is too well trained for this part of Hoenn," Erik replied. "Besides the news is lying to people about me."

Period instead of comma before replied because there's two sentences instead of one between the dialogue tag: ""Your Mightyena is too well trained for this part of Hoenn. Besides the news is lying to people about me."

"Shut up!" Brooke squealed, "you Magma people need to be shown there are still people who will fight you. Get him big bro."

Period instead of comma before squealed and the y in "You Magma…" should be capitalized.

"Shut up!" Brooke squealed. "You Magma people need to be shown there are still people who will fight you. Get him big bro."

Leaf seemed to be a lot more stubborn and miserable since her evolution, almost as if the previously quiet and innocent Oddish was now going through a teenage phase. Erik was snapped out of his thought process by a quick attack by Wilson's Pokemon, the Electrike moving as quickly as it had entered the battlefield and swiping at the Gloom.

I feel you could elaborate more on how Leaf is being more stubborn. Is she turning her back from her opponents, for instance? Erik noticed a strange expression? A bit later you mentioned how after Electrike got hit with Leaf's attract he shook it off, so concerning Leaf's stubbornness details like that.

Wilson's Pokemon blasted a jolt of electrical power at Leaf, fighting through the love and causing damage to the Gloom.

"Oh no," Erik thought to himself, "this Electrike is too well trained. It can fight through love. It moves at great speeds…" Leaf inhaled, even though her spores weren't working, she had no other moves, or so Erik thought.

"FIghting through love" sounds repetitive as you mentioned that phrase within two paragraphs.

The Gulpin moved quickest, launching a ball of toxic sludge which poisoned the Makuhita upon contact. The fighting Pokemon countering by whipping up a whirlwind, the force of which launched Roller into the air, high up into the sky.

"Countered".

Ice strutted out onto the field of battle, Erik knowing that dragon-types were weak to ice attacks. His Mightyena shivered, then stopped, suddenly wincing, Erik realising that Ice was paralysed, contact with the Electrikes skin must have caused it.

"Electrike's". Add an apostrophe.

Blaze was up against the steel-typed Mawille, who didn't put up much of a challenge at all due to his flames melting the steel skin, the Combusken turning to see Roller letting out rapid and continual poisonous attacks against the Spoink, one such ball of sludge Blaze set alight, the fire ball of poison incinerating Wilson's final Pokemon.

Run-on sentence and some awkward wording there. I would edit the sentence real quick like this (I mainly broke it into two sentences and changed the tense from "turning" to "turned"):

Blaze was up against the steel-typed Mawille, who didn't put up much of a challenge at all due to his flames melting the steel skin. The Combusken turned to see Roller letting out rapid and continual poisonous attacks against the Spoink, one such ball of sludge Blaze set alight, the fire ball of poison incinerating Wilson's final Pokemon.


Lady and Wingulls water blasts intercepted another, cancelling their attacks out.

"Wingull's".

I like the use of the tree during Erik's battle against Brooke and pretty interesting Dancer was the one that took down Wingull. Real quick, I think Erik told Dancer she didn't to do battles if she doesn't want to? If so, I would thought Erik would have some sort of reaction when she entered the battlefield, though I'm probably missing something.

Not surprising Gabby and Ty would spread the lies concerning Erik, though they seemed a bit of a darker take of them than in the games. That also explains why Erik's been getting a few battles thrown at him lately. It's pretty sweet of Cecila to let him camp out for the night, though I can understand Erik's suspicion she might be up to something.

Erik thought of a retort but held his tongue as a menacing thought flowed through his mind. "Why doesn't she want me to leave," he pondered, "is she deliberately keeping me here, she could well work for the media or Magma and I'd have no way of knowing."

Erik thought of a retort but held his tongue as a menacing thought flowed through his mind. "Why doesn't she want me to leave," he pondered. "Is she deliberately keeping me here, she could well work for the media or Magma and I'd have no way of knowing."


Replace comma with period before pondered as the dialogue tag is between two sentences: "Why doesn't she want me to leave. Is she deliberately keeping me here, she could well work for the media or Magma and I'd have no way of knowing."

I feel sorry for Lady not able to make it at the end of the chapter. The last few deaths of Erik's Pokemon were from battles, interesting Lady's is a bit different. Yeah, going from Mauville to Fallabor is a long trek, bleh. Looking forward what happens next chapter!
 
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Chapter Twelve - Team Up​



Erik looked around the cabin, sunlight crept in through the cracks in the wooden planks that made up the hut, informing him that dawn had arrived.

The room he was lay in was mostly unchanged from the night before, apart from Blaze now lay upon the table where Lady was when he collapsed. The two men that lived here now were nowhere to be seen.

"Blaze," he croaked, his hoarse voice swiftly followed by whooping coughs. His Combusken lay still, unanswering.

"Blaze!" he croaked louder, his voice feeling as if it were ripping his throat apart. Still, his Pokemon remained motionless.

Erik weakly clambered to his feet, feeling as if it took all of his remaining strength to do so, before he began stumbling over to the table. The room dimmed noticeably with each feeble step he took, as he barely managed to put one foot in front of the other. The sunlight poking its way into the hut evaporated, replaced by only darkness, the only illumination in the room coming from the table itself; Erik couldn't see the source of the light but it managed to light the cabin singlehandedly.

"Blaze," he whispered once more, before running his hand over his friend's lifeless body. His Combusken had always been warm to the touch but all Erik felt now was cold, like his Pokemon's body was made of ice.

"Please," he pleaded, "please Blaze, no.."

Blaze's eyes shot open, bloodstained, tired, but most of all, furious. The Pokemon opened his beak, and to Erik's shock, words squeaked out.

"You killed me.." came a voice half squawk, half human. "You killed us.."

"You killed us.." another voice echoed, the door to the rear of the house bursting open to reveal Lady standing tall on her tentacles.

"No!" Erik shouted in disbelief. "NO!"

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Erik awoke coughing and spluttering.

"Are you okay?!" an aging gentleman cried, shaking Erik. It took a couple of moments for Erik's vision to return from to normal from the blur it was at first, for him to recognise the old man as the owner of the cabin.

"Blaze," Erik whispered, his voice almost as hoarse as it was in his nightmare.

"Your Combusken is okay. We heard you shouting in your sleep, what happened?"

"Night..mare.." he croaked in response. Erik realised that he was lying on the wooden floor, with a blanket of straw covering him. Sunlight peeking through the cracks in the walls with Blaze resting on the table in the middle of the room, the whole scene seemed eerily familiar.

"We took the liberty of burying your Tentacool when the ash storm stopped," the boy continued, before being interrupted by his father.

"You and your Combusken are lucky to be alive, bot-" the man's words were cut out by a cry from Erik.

"Blaze is alive?!" he coughed, his intended shout sounding more like he was being strangled.

"Yes," the man continued, noticeably irritated at being interrupted, "both of your airways were filled with soot, if either of you were out there any longer your lungs wouldn't have been able to handle it. Your Tentacool's lungs were only small, which is why hers couldn't."

"Has the.. ash.. gone..?" Erik croaked.

"Yep, a few hours after you collapsed it stopped; suffocated a raging fire too. No idea what kicked that up." It was the boy's turn to reply, his huge brown pupils staring directly at Erik.

"I'll.. leave.. now.."

"No chance," the old man replied sternly, "you need to get some food and water in you first, as do your Pokemon. Leave after breakfast once you've recovered some more of your strength."

Erik was in no mood to argue. His dream had really shocked him, so he sat up in his makeshift bed without a word, ready to be served whatever the two men had prepared for breakfast.

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With the taste of warm bread and butter still fresh in his mouth, Erik carefully made his way through the farmlands which resided besides Fallabor Town. He thought that the ash may choke the crops, rendering them unable to grow; but it seemed to have the opposite effect. Fields laced with grain and other vegetables looked to be thriving in the mixed weather conditions underneath the volcano.

Erik brushed aside a long stalk of grain, finding himself on the other side of the fields. His team all resting safely inside their Pokeballs after a berry breakfast appeased their spirits from the torment of the previous night.

"Erik!" came the squeal from across the town, May had spotted him instantly. "It's a disaster, come quickly!"

She half-ran into the nearby house, which was slightly larger than the rest of the stone buildings littering the edge of the farmland. Erik sighted both a Pokemon centre and contest hall on his way, also spotting the odd flowerbed here and there through the dirt floor that covered the town, which was actually more of a small farming village.

Once he reached the house in the centre of town, Erik bumped his head off of the low door frame, underestimating just how low it was before stumbling into the home. Lab equipment and strange rocks could be seen all over the place, resting up against walls or lying on many small glass tables or the leather sofa.

"My husband!" shouted a small, plump lady who looked to be in her early fifties. "He's been kidnapped by that team something or other, they were interested in the meteorite he was researching."

"When was this, Mrs. Cozmo?" asked May in a sweet tone.

"In the early hours of this morning, they've been gone a good few hours now. You should've acted sooner May, he is your father's best friend after all." Erik noticed a sharpness in her tone that he did not like, but remained silent.

"I had to wait for Erik, I'm not strong enough to save him by myself," she responded in the same sweet tone. "We will get your husband back here in one piece for you."

"Good. They ran off towards meteor falls to the west."

"Hold on," Erik interrupted. His voice was a lot clearer now with it no longer hurting his throat with every word, thanks to the three glasses of water he gulped down at the cabin. "It will be safer for you to remain here with the professor's wife," he said to May.

"No way," May snapped, "I'm coming with you, you always get the glory. Besides, Cozmo actually knows me, he might think you're another member of Team Magma if he watched the television report on you."

"Good point," Erik conceded, as they both turned to leave the house.

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Lisia and her Altaria locked eyes with Erik and Dancer, the Pikachu with her paw holding her trainer's hand.

"Give that Pikachu back to us, Erik," Lisia demanded. Erik and May had bumped into Lisia as she exited the contest hall, and with some 'encouragement' from May, Erik had released Dancer from her Pokeball in order to let her decide who she now went with.

"Dancer stays with me," Erik replied, feeling the Pikachu's grip on his hand tightening. "She wants to, we have come a long way together since you last saw her, Lisia.

"She belongs to Emma, not you," came the retort.

"Dancer wishes to stay with me." Erik was still shocked that his Pikachu chose to stay with him rather than march out to rejoin the contest hall. A huge surprise, but a pleasant one.

"I was against Erik keeping that Pikachu at first," May chirped in, pushing her way forward. "I even demanded he take it back to you. But now, look at the two of them, the Pikachu wants to stay and fight for him. You both must have been through a lot Erik?"

"We have," Erik replied, trying to figure out what would make Dancer stay. "She even joined in a couple of battles for me when I needed her."

"Exactly!" May responded. "My father always said that when a Pokemon wins in battle for its trainer, the bond strengthens."

"That must be it!" Erik exclaimed, to himself more than anyone else. "So you see Lisia, Dancer and I have bonded."

With a grunt Lisia stormed off back into the contest hall. Erik had already healed his team at the Pokemon centre and now they were all back to fighting strength. He had withdrawn Steel from storage as he already had a poison-typed Pokemon in his party so Glutton wasn't needed, and a fire one instead of his new Numel; whereas he had never used a steel-typed creature in battle before.

"So you don't mind walking with me this time?" Erik asked May cheekily as they left the village, entering the rock strewn path known as Route 114. The terrain at the start of the route was manageable, mainly more farmland until the path split into the large lake with wooden bridge hovering over it. Further on arose a mini-mountain, complete with steep hillsides and many boulders.

"What do you mean by that?!" May snapped, clearly angered by his joke.

"Err..nothing," Erik replied cautiously. "Which way to Meteor Falls?" he said, attempting to change the subject.

"Over the bridge and up the mountain, obviously."

The two walked in silence as they normally did, Erik always seemed to annoy her. Or maybe she was just easily annoyed? He didn't know which anymore.

A little further on a line of trees covered in berries line the pathway before the river.

"Oh look," May exclaimed, and the silence was broken. "A Zangoose over there, eating berries!"

"That's cute," Erik thought to himself before saying aloud, "we should gather some of those berries for our own Pokemon."

"Agreed," came May's reply with an accompanying smile, as the two sneaked up to the trees. They didn't want to disturb the Zangoose, the Pokemon known to be quick to anger if provoked. A fact shown to them in evidence as May stepped on a twig, the snap of which sounded like the volcano overlooking them had just erupted.

The Zangoose leapt at them with razor-sharp claws glistening in the sunlight, Erik dived in front of May to protect her from the lunge. He raised his hand to guard himself from the aggressor, but each claw was a knife blade and sliced into his palm. Erik screamed out in pain.

May had released her Marshtomp, the water Pokemon blasting the Zangoose away leaving Erik to grasp his hand in pain. Blood oozed out of the fresh wounds; two crimson scythes embedded in his palm.

"Erik!" May screamed when she noticed the wounds. "Are you okay?!"

"I'm fine, luckily Zangoose isn't a poison type," he mused in reply, as blood began running down his palm and dripping onto the ground.

"We've got to get that looked at, they might have something for you at the Pokemon centre?"

"No time, we have to save Cozmo," Erik replied sternly. May opened her mouth to reply but knew there was no changing Erik's mind once it was made up.

"At least let me bandage it." It was her turn to be stern, unravelling the bow in her hair which turned out to be rather large - big enough to wrap around Erik's hand at any rate.

"Thank you," Erik commented as May tied off the makeshift bandage, it fit nicely around his palm and soaked the blood up effectively. "Shall we continue?" he added, with a smile.

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"We'll have to climb up," Erik realised, receiving a worried grimace from May. The two had been searching for a way to get up the mountain for half an hour now, to no avail. "I'll give you a hand."

Erik released both Blaze and Ice from their Pokeballs to help them up, with only one hand it was a tough ask for him to climb the mountain, but he had no other choice. With his uninjured right hand and help from Blaze, the two combined to lift May up. She grabbed onto a ledge and together the three of them combined their strength to lift her all the way.

Erik's turn. He clambered onto the back of Ice along with Blaze, the Combusken then using his strength to elevate his trainer. Erik was shocked by how much weight his Mightyena could hold on his back. May extended a hand down to Erik, who grabbed it eagerly and together they managed to lift him up onto the mountainside.

Erik turned to recall the two Pokemon into their Pokeballs, first up was Blaze; a white stream erupting from the capsule and summoning the Pokemon back inside. Ice was next, Erik pointed his Mightyena's Pokeball at the Pokemon, but before he could withdraw it the Zangoose was back.

Ice and Zangoose matched each other blow for blow, claws blocked by fangs and fangs blocked by claws. Erik tried saving his Pokemon by launching a great ball at the wild Zangoose, but it just swatted the capsule aside; it would have to be weakened in order to be captured.

The great ball had provided a distraction that led Ice to gain the upper hand, the Mightyena lashing out at his foe with his own claws, ripping into the Zangoose's face, leaving it with a huge cut across its left eye which looked as if it could leave a scar. Erik lobbed another great ball, the Zangoose not seeing it coming this time and was captured, unable to escape from within the capsule.

"What will you name it?" May enquired. "Scar?"

"I was going to pick Scar," Erik thought to himself, "but I can't let someone else name my Pokemon, it's not the same." After a brief silence he finally replied to May, "Fury." The Zangoose's Pokeball disappeared off into storage as they spoke.

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As the two ascended up the steep hillsides and jagged rock faces together, huge holes through the hills and on the flats could be seen.

"What do you think caused them?" asked Erik. He and May had been speaking about all sorts throughout the climb, from talking about his journey, his team to May's own life. Erik had enjoyed the chat immensely.

"Meteors," May said with a deep smile, "that's why they call this place, 'Meteor Falls', silly."

"Look at that one," Erik gasped, noticing the biggest meteor crater of them all as they scaled another small cliff. "You could fit all of Littleroot in it!"

"Not quite," May chuckled in reply, "it's huge, though, I'll give you that."

"Look there's something in the middle, is that a hole?"

"It's the entrance, there should be a ladder nearby."

"How do you know so much about this place, May?"

"My father and I used to always come here for research when I was little, the meteors fell around fifteen years ago so we've been exploring the mystery ever since."

As they reached the hole in the crater, Erik noticed that the ladder descended into total darkness, but he climbed down it regardless, not wanting to look afraid in front of May.

"Oh, Erik, you can catch a new Pokemon in this cave, it counts as a separate area to the route," May mentioned as she climbed down the ladder.

Once at the bottom, they were surrounded by the darkness, unable to see anything at all apart from a dim light directly ahead of them. Erik released Blaze and asked him to light the way, his Pokemon's flames illuminating the passageway. They were surrounded by yellowish walls with stones that looked almost smooth to touch as they made their way towards the light at the end of the narrow tunnel.

"This place is so beautiful, it's full of Pokemon that fell from space with the meteors."

As they reached the light they rounded a corner, and Erik could see that May's words held true.

A huge waterfall filled the cave, with yellow rocks and bridges forming a pathway over the top. The cave descended sharply from where Erik was stood, luckily another ladder was close by. From a ledge overlooking the rest of the cavern, he could see it all. Another exit lay on the other side of the cave and rock-shaped Pokemon floated all around nonchalantly, some shaped like the sun, others like the moon. Erik threw a great ball at one of the sun-shaped ones, May mentioning that it was named a 'Solrock', the others named 'Lunatone'. Erik called his new capture, "Sunny".

"Hey!" May roared, Erik thought the shout was directed at him at first, but turned to look at what she was seeing. Underneath the bridge which was perched above the lake created by the waterfall, Erik could see flashes of red.

"Those must be the Magma members, there must be some more of that flat yellow rock underneath the bridge," he thought to himself, before noticing May was already halfway down the ladder. He bolted after her.

Underneath the bridge the tallest of the two Magma grunts slapped the professor again. The smaller grunt then grabbed by professor by his olive-coloured long hair, slapping him so viciously his glasses flew off, almost into the lake.

"Give it up, you bozos!" May screamed as she approached them. "Let the professor go!"

"Or what?" the tallest Magma member snorted. "You two kids think you can take down a Magma Admin? Well good luck with that one!" he laughed raucously to himself.

"Mylos," the smaller one whispered loud enough for both Erik and May to hear. "We should pair up, take them down in a double battle."

"I don't need your help," Mylos replied to him, the admin's bulging biceps fully on show as he placed one hand on his hip, the other he used to stroke his chin-strap beard. He probably would've used it to comb his hair, but having a buzzcut made that hard to do. "But fine, it will be over quicker with two of us and we can go back to getting this information from the prof."

Mylos sent out a Mightyena, the grunt following up with a Koffing. May replied with her Shroomish and Erik with Steel, giving his new Skarmory her first taste of war.

Mylos's Mightyena let out a huge howl, like it was screaming for its life. The violence of the shout caused rocks to topple from the roof of the cave. The yellow stone may look smooth, but they were as heavy as large boulders, crashing into the bridge and ripping through the wooden surface onto the battlefield underneath.

The rocks slammed onto the battlefield, Steel was agile enough to glide out of the way of most of them but Shroomish was less fortunate, a stone spike hitting her. The grunt's Koffing took the initiative and choked the Shroomish with poison gas, the Magma's Pokemon as well as May and Erik protected underneath yellow rocks, only their Pokemon were underneath the bridge. The Magma members had picked the battlefield with care.

As Shroomish choked, Steel swooped in. She deftly dodged a couple of falling rocks before gliding up high with May's Pokemon in her claws and away from the battlefield. The Koffing followed, floating up high as the Mightyena roared again. Erik saw a spike crash into the Koffing but lost sight of it through a wall of falling rock. Steel continued dodging the rocks and flew back towards Erik and May so that Shroomish could be recalled by her trainer.

As Steel neared the bridge the Koffing appeared through the rocks, spiked stones lodged into the Pokemon's lilac shell.

The weakened Koffing self-destructed.

The enormous explosion destroyed the bridge and sending shards of wood and rock flying out in all directions. Steel was thrown into a wall with two wooden spikes sticking out of her, the Shroomish buried under a pile of rubble and even the Mightyena had a large spiked rock thrown into him.

"What the hell did you do?!" Mylos roared at his comrade, turning when he got no reply to see that his friend had also been crushed by the rocks. Erik had leapt onto May to cover her, and after checking if she was alright, recalled Steel and sent in Roller. May knew her Shroomish was gone underneath all those rocks so she sent out Marshtomp straight away as tears clogged her eyes.

Marshtomp was enraged and blasted water jets at the spike in Mightyena's side, aiming straight at the pressure point to cause maximum damage. Roller rolled rapidly towards the Mightyena and smashed the rock as Marshtomp fired another wave of aqua at the foe, the combined efforts defeating the injured Pokemon.

"You got lucky that my comrade was such a dimwit," Mylos said, sending out a Numel. "But my Pokemon are too well trained for yours."

"Why do Magma love their Numels so much," Erik joked to May, but his friend was in not in the right frame of mind. Seeing death and having one of her Pokemon defeated must be taking a huge toll on her.

Erik instantly saw what Mylos had meant about his Numel being well trained, it should have proved no match in a two-on-one fight, especially with one of his opponents being a water-type, but was deftly rolling out of the way of both water and poisonous attacks from Erik and May's fighters.

The Numel stood up, as Marshtomp and Roller both took a moment to recover their energy. Mylos's Pokemon aimed for the weakened roof, blasting a large burst of flame at the rock surface, which caused a huge shudder that shook the very foundations of Meteor Falls.

Waves of rocks crashed down onto the surface, Erik grabbing May and throwing them both down underneath the yellow rocks, using his body to shield hers from the cave-in. The rocks seemed to roar as they crashed into the surface, dust and darkness kicking up from the avalanche of stone. Luckily, the small rock barrier above them held, but Meteor Falls was split by walls of fallen rock, with the exit now also blocked to them. Roller, Numel and Marshtomp were stuck directly in the middle of the stone pile with Cozmo and Mylos on the other side. All five could easily be dead. May and Erik would have to dig their way through, and hope.
 

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Erik's dream at the beginning sure sounds scary. I don't blame him considering how much guilt he has over several of his Pokemon's death.

"Dancer wishes to stay with me." Erik was still shocked that his Pikachu chose to stay with him rather than march out to rejoin the contest hall. A huge surprise, but a pleasant one.

"I was against Erik keeping that Pikachu at first," May chirped in, pushing her way forward. "I even demanded he take it back to you. But now, look at the two of them, the Pikachu wants to stay and fight for him. You both must have been through a lot Erik?"

"We have," Erik replied, trying to figure out what would make Dancer stay. "She even joined in a couple of battles for me when I needed her."

"Exactly!" May responded. "My father always said that when a Pokemon wins in battle for its trainer, the bond strengthens."

"That must be it!" Erik exclaimed, to himself more than anyone else. "So you see Lisia, Dancer and I have bonded."
Looks like Dancer is permanently in Erik's team now. Part of me feels Dancer joining Erik is a bit rushed, but then again the two did went through a couple battles together and the anime often have Pokemon joining Ash fairly quickly, so it didn't bother me too much.

During the Magma battle, I feel bad that May lost her Shroomish (and probably Marshtomp) but at same time I like you have not only Erik dealing a Pokemon's death. The cave in at the end doesn't sound too good (three Pokemon dying? If so, yeah pretty bad), hopefully they'll be able to dig their out soon. Looking forward to next chapter!
 
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Chapter Thirteen - Fire and Water


A haze of dust and darkness rescinded before Erik's eyes. The mountain of rubble before him motionless as he wondered whether the Pokemon buried underneath still lived.

"May," he called, turning to his friend who lay slouched up against the yellow rock wall. "Fancy giving me a hand moving these rocks? We've got to try and rescue Roller and Marshtomp."

May didn't seem to hear him, her eyes fixed on the pile of yellow rock. Erik had never seen anyone take the death of one, maybe two of their Pokemon so badly, but then most trainers were prepared for that eventuality when they received their trainer licence. May was just a researcher, it's doubtful she had even considered this could happen.

Erik scooped up a rock and threw it to the side, repeating the process over and over alongside his Pokemon, who wanted to help save Roller. May didn't move a muscle the entire time, her mind remaining elsewhere. Half an hour had passed before Erik and his team made any real progress, a large gap in the gigantic pile of rubble emerging, almost tunnelling through the rubble, like an entrance to the inside of it.

Erik crawled through the tunnel having recalled his Pokemon as it was only large enough to fit one, maybe two people through. He could only manage to see a couple of inches ahead of him at a time with the threat of the tunnel collapsing on him ever present. He pushed forward, hoping Roller was alive, as well as May's Marshtomp. His friend would never be the same again if her Pokemon had been killed, as she thought it had been.

He stopped suddenly, the tunnel had reached a dead end.

Erik pushed the rock in front of him in desperation, expecting it to move only slightly, if at all. To his delight the stone pushed away and fell a short way, rolling across the ground until it hit another rock on the ground. This rock was different to the others, it was orange in colour - a Numel.

Erik climbed out of the tunnel into the clearing. there was enough room in the enclosed space for him to crawl as he checked Mylos's Numel for signs of life, discovering there were none. He looked up to see two more tunnels, one to his right and the other straight ahead, leading to the other side of the pile of stones. He took the latter route.

A flash of green caught his eye as Erik continued making his way through the second tunnel, this one slightly more spacious than the last. He used his arms to drag himself forward, shaking Roller to attempt to awaken the Gulpin, but it was no use. Roller had died when the rocks fell. A sharp pain gripped Erik's heart, but he had to continue, there was still a chance Marshtomp was alive, however small that chance was.

"ERIK!" echoed a scream through the tunnel, a female voice reverberating from behind him.

He climbed back out the tunnel entrance, having never crawled so fast in his life. May was exactly where he had left her, but now had company.

Her marshtomp had collapsed before her, its shallow breaths indicting life still remained within the Pokemon.

"She came out the tunnel a little bit after you went in, I don't know if she's still alive. Help me Erik," May said in a voice as weak as her Pokemon, eyes welling up. She looked as if she had aged twenty years in the last couple of hours with bags underneath her eyes and makeup running down her tear-stained face.

Erik reached into May's bag, the leather bumbag which she always carried around with her, and pulled out a potion. Spraying Marshtomp's wounds caused a slight groan from the creature, but it remained extremely weak even after the potion had been applied.

"We need to get her to a Pokemon centre as soon as possible," he informed May. "Withdraw Marshtomp into her Pokeball and come through the tunnel with me, I bet we can easily get to the other side and then get out of here."

A soft nod was all he got in reply from May, as she withdrew Marshtomp as Erik asked and followed him through the tunnel. She seemed a lot better now that her favourite Pokemon was confirmed alive, but seeing her Shroomish killed as well as the Magma grunt still looked to be too much for her to handle, as she limply followed her friend through the rocks.

Erik reached the end of the second tunnel, realising that in Marshtomp's desperation to escape the enormous pile of stones she had attempted digging in all directions, one after another, in order to get out. She must've taken Roller with her the first time too, before becoming too weak to carrying the Gulpin along with her. Erik carried on digging his way out where May's Pokemon had left off, Marshtomp had almost reached the end of the second tunnel anyway, so it took him only a couple of minutes to see a light beaming through from the other side.

He pushed the last rock aside, he could see clearly out of the tunnel. Mylos was standing over Cozmo, it looked like he had beaten the professor relentlessly with the meteorite now bulging in the Magma Admin's back pocket. But the two of them were no longer alone.

"Look, if I tell you, will you allow me to leave this place?" Mylos asked of the three newcomers. They clearly hadn't noticed the Magma member now had the meteorite as it was hidden from their view.

"Fine," replied the leader of the group. He bore a scar above his left eye, encrusted upon his dark skin.

"Okay, well you have to remember that only Maxie knows all the details, so I will can only tell you what I know. Which isn't much." Mylos was blabbering helplessly, he was terrified of the three men in navy blue cloaks standing in front of him.

Erik was well hidden within the tunnel, but had a full view of the scene unfolding before him. May was also listening in behind him, but she had remained silent since asking Erik to help heal her Marshtomp.

"Out with it," the leader of the trio snapped. His two accomplices were hiding their faces behind hoods, they dressed exactly the same as Team Magma, just in navy blue rather than crimson red. The leader, however, had his hood down and instead wore an aqua blue bandana with a patch covering his right eye.

"S-sorry," Mylos continued. "Cozmo here had the information we needed for plan B of our scheme, to be used if plan A fails."

"What are these two plans?" the leader growled, his voice as rough as a raging sea. Erik knew who he was; Archie, the leader of Team Aqua.

"Plan A is to use Mt Chimney, activate it with some ancient power and harness its energy to do something, I don't know what. We set up camp at the summit a few weeks ago but have only gained access to the ancient item recently."

"What item?" Archie demanded, his voice growing fiercer each time he spoke.

"A meteorite. Boss says the fragment will have enough power to cause the volcano to become active. He has it now." Erik knew that Mylos was lying, but didn't dare shout out. He trusted Archie and Aqua almost as little as he trusted Magma.

"And the backup plan?" Archie followed, as his two goons moved forwards slightly.

"All I know is what I overheard from Maxie one time, 'We will release and control the ultimate power.' Cozmo here knew nothing about any sort of ultimate power, my mission failed." Another lie, Erik thought, as his focus once again shifted to the meteorite in Mylos's back pocket.

"Right, take him," Archie ordered his two grunts, who promptly grabbed Mylos by the arms and dragged him out of the cave.

"You said you'd let me go," the Magma member complained repeatedly.

"We will," Archie eventually replied as they left the cave.

Erik ran out to check on the professor, but Cozmo was too shaken to reply. May weakly followed behind, a slight smile appearing on her face when Erik asked if she was feeling alright, the smile fading as quickly as it had appeared when he looked away.

"Lets get out of here," he spoke to both of them. Erik half carried Cozmo out of the cave, the professor too weak to walk by himself. May lagged behind silently as they followed Archie and Mylos out of the southern exit.

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They reemerged from the southern exit to the top of a hill, which overlooked the entire town of Rustboro, but before Erik had time to admire the view Cozmo threw out a Pokeball. A Skarmory emerged from the device, the professor rapidly jumping on the back of it with the Pokemon flying away; back to his home, Erik presumed.

Erik would've tried flying away on Steel, but remembered what had happened last time he tried riding one of his Pokemon, he had nearly drowned after trying to cross a lake with Lady. Besides, Steel was still weak from the earlier battle.

"I want to go home, Erik," May informed him, her voice extremely shaky and weak. "I want to go back to my Dad."

"Would you like me to escort you?" he enquired, making sure to smile as he said so.

"I need some time alone," she said emotionlessly, seeming as if all of the spirit had been drained from her. Her skin appearing as pale as snow with her eyes painfully bloodshot. She seemed unable to keep eye contact with Erik for more than a moment.

"Okay, I will go to Mt. Chimney, although it's a long way."

"You can cut through Verdanturf Tunnel, they finished clearing it out last week," May said as she began walking into the distance.

"I thought they stopped the project?" Erik asked, but May ignored him as she strolled away. "Will she ever recover from this?" he pondered quietly to himself.

Erik made the walk down to Rustboro, he would need to heal his weakened team at the Pokemon Centre as well as withdrawing a new sixth member of his team. He would take Glutton out of storage, directly replacing one poison-type Pokemon for another and although his team didn't seem to like the Koffing when they first met him, they'd bond with her over time.

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The journey back to Mt. Chimney was uneventful, as was the climb back up the mountain. Erik remembered where all of the footholds were and wasn't half as phased by the ascent as he had been the first time. His father's words when he was younger had proved true, "Most of the challenge of trying something new is in your own mind."

Erik lifted himself over the final ledge of the climb, finding himself facing the cable car station once more. This time, however, there were no Numels to greet him as the station looked to be devoid of life. All was quiet, except from the faint noises creeping down from the summit, noises which sounded like raging battles as voracious as the lava within the volcano's depths.

He entered the station, the large metal door unlocked this time, allowing him to easily push his way inside. The interior of the large building consisted of two huge boxes held by a strong looking rope. The two boxes, or cars as they were known, were made entirely of glass, allowing someone to see for miles out of it as they rode it to the summit. Erik assumed that there were two further cars at the top station too, so he would be able to make the reverse trip if need be.

As he stepped into the glass cage, he pulled a lever on the platform just outside the door. Someone else was usually meant to pull these, someone that worked here maybe, but from the stiffness of the lever it had barely been used for a while now. He dived back into the car as it began its ascension to the top. The metal rope that held all the cars was now revolving, groaning and squeaking.

The view from the car was astounding, Erik could see everything. The car shuddered violently from time to time but he felt strangely safe inside of it, especially as he had released Steel from her Pokeball just in case, to catch him if he were to fall. Hoenn spread out before them as if it were on a map. He could retrace his journey through all the towns he had been to, seeing the next Gym town, Lavaridge, nearby with his father waiting in Petalburg to await him if he was victorious.

He could also see where he would journey afterwards if he managed to defeat his dad, he would next need to cross rivers and oceans to get to some of the destinations on his Gym challenge. Erik realised that he had probably expired all of his favours from Mr. Briney, not wanting to take advantage of his old sailor friend, so he would need to discover a new way to traverse water.

The cable car stopped suddenly at the summit station, Erik making a careful step out of the glass cage and back onto solid ground. This station came across exactly the same in appearance as the lower building, and was again unmanned. Erik left through another giant metal door, this time letting out a huge squeal as he opened it

The air scorched Erik's skin as he walked onto the rocky surface of the volcano's peak. Straight ahead of him was a descent through a jagged-looking pass which he knew from his earlier view from the cablecar led to Lavaridge Town. But what interested him came from behind where he was now standing, the shouts and roars from both Magma and Aqua members duking it out in titanic battles.

Erik remarked that the summit's surface was surprisingly flat, solid and stable ground leading his vision through a heat haze, all the way up to a large pool of lava which seemed to go on forever. He spotted Grant battling with an Aqua member before him. Archie must've held his word and released Mylos from his custody, as he stood with the admin and Maxie all looming on a ledge which bore over the lava pool further ahead. Maxie clutched the meteorite in his left hand.

His vision flicked back to Grant, who had just defeated his adversary with his Poochyena now approaching the Aqua member with intent. A quick nod to Steel sent the Skarmory zooming towards the Poochyena, picking it up in her claws, flying ahead and dropping it into the pool of lava.

"Erik!" Grant snapped, sweat trickling down his face, even the Magma members were struggling with the intense heat. "So you're working for Aqua now?!"

"No," Erik replied as he made his own approach to the Magma grunt. "I'm here to stop you."

"I'm a lot stronger now you fool!" Grant roared, a cackle escaping his throat afterwards. Erik was unsure whether the grunt had laughed intentionally or was choking on the ash-filled air.

"We'll see about that," he replied, thrusting Glutton's Pokeball into the air, the Koffing escaping from within the capsule.

Glutton floated from side to side cautiously, with Grant's Poochyena growling noisily at the thought of fresh battle. The Koffing emitted thick smoke, suffocating the battlefield, the smokescreen blinding Erik's vision. He could no longer see Grant, or his Poochyena until the hound bolted out of the fumes to crunch his fangs down on Glutton's purple shell.

The Poochyena's eyes shot open, it looked repulsed by something, leaping off of Glutton and back down on the mountain surface. The scene causing Erik to remember Fiery path, where his team retreated from the Koffing due to it's foul stench, the incident repeating itself with the Poochyena.

Glutton blasted a wave of poisonous liquid at his opponent, sending the Poochyena rocketing back into the cloud of smoke and disappearing from sight.

A minute passed, which seemed like an hour, before the smoke cloud slowly evaporated. Grant's Pokemon strolled out of the fog and roared, the ground beneath them shaking so violently from the effect it felt as if the volcano was erupting.

Glutton looked terrified, he was only a new Pokemon and not used to battle so he was easily frightened by the prospect. The Koffing backed off towards Erik and hid behind his trainer, unwilling to continue the battle.

"Come on Glutton, you were doing so well," Erik whispered to the Koffing, but it was no use. Glutton was too scared to reenter the field of battle.

"Who next," Erik pondered, fingering each of the Pokeballs on his belt. "I guess it's time for Dancer to show if she's really ready to fight for me."

Erik's Pikachu looked back at her trainer as she stepped up to face the weakened Poochyena, Erik could tell that she was eager to prove herself to him now she had committed, a bond had been established between the two and he could feel it. Grant's Pokemon leapt in with its fangs, Dancer gracefully moved out of the way, causing the Poochyena to slam face-first into the ground. A follow up electrical jolt from the Pikachu electrifying her foe and winning her the fight.

"Not again!" Grant cried out, face flushed red with anger and wounded pride. The Magma grunt grabbed his other Pokeball, a Koffing emerging from within after being launched through the air. Erik responded by shouting out his Skarmory's name, Steel flying back to him in order to fight.

Koffing hurled poisonous gas into the air, releasing the fumes from its body for Steel to inhale. The Skarmory remained unperturbed, to Grant's horror.

"Steel types are immune to poisoning," Erik laughed as Steel used her aerial superiority, swiping at the Koffing with vicious claws before flying off again, over and over. The Koffing couldn't keep up. After a few more attacks the Koffing had seemingly given up, giving way for Erik's Pokemon to land a finishing blow with an attack by a wing made from solid steel.

Grant remained silent, staring blankly. As Glutton, Steel and Dancer all leapt for joy at the victory, Erik pulled three berries out of his backpack, one for each of his three victors, as way of a reward. Glutton moved at an incredible speed, gulping down the three berries then looking up at Erik with a smile as if he hadn't done anything wrong, as if he thought all three were meant for him. Dancer scorned Glutton with a slap and a growl, with Steel flying back into the sky.

Erik wordlessly moved past Grant, towards the three men hovering over the pool of lava below. He hadn't realised just how deep the drop off the ledge into the lava pool was until he got closer, the ledge was around twenty metres in length but the drop was enough to kill anyone even without the scorching liquid at the bottom.

"You shouldn't be here kid," was all Erik got from Archie as he strolled up to the leaders of both Magma and Aqua bickering whilst overlooking the ocean of lava below. Mylos stood behind them, almost like a lapdog.

"You should leave here Erik, it's not your time yet," Maxie followed, sparing Erik no more than a glance.

"I'll get rid of the little pest, boss," Mylos added, gesturing to Erik with a finger pointing further down the ledge, a Pokeball clutched in his other hand.

"I'll take you down for what you did to May and Roller," growled Erik. "Then I'll do the same to your boss."

"Good luck with that," replied Mylos with laughter erupting from his throat. "There's a job opening up as second in command of Magma, this is my chance to impress Maxie."

"Enough talking," Erik snapped, he wanted this over and done with so he could move onto the bigger fish.

"As you wish," came the reply, as the Magma admin threw his Pokeball into the air, a Koffing emerging out of the bright light. Erik replied with a Koffing of his own, Glutton floating out with a smile painted across his face.

Glutton approached cautiously, still slightly frightened by the thought of battle. Mylo's Pokemon remained suspiciously unmoving, just floating there.

"You want to know pain?" Mylos screeched as Glutton got close to his Pokemon. "You complain about Roller and your girlfriend, but you have no idea what true pain is. I will give you another taste of it." Mylos turned his gaze from Erik back to his Koffing, "Now!".

The Koffing inhaled, and closed his eyes, expanding slightly. It was as if the Pokemon was trying to force something out of him, then the ground beneath them shook violently, with the air turning to smoke as Erik's ears rang noisily. The Koffing had self-destructed, taking Glutton with it.

As the smoke cleared Erik looked around, Glutton was nowhere to be seen, almost as if he had evaporated. Mylos had already thrown his second Pokemon into battle, a Numel.

"You just throw your Pokemon away like that?!" Erik roared, fire rising within him from the pain of losing another Pokemon.

"We at Magma have plenty," Mylos smirked, completely unphased by losing his own Koffing. "We don't need to follow the rules of one Pokemon per route, we've caught over a hundred Numels living within this volcano alone!"

"Because no one dares to stop them," Erik thought to himself. "They can do whatever they like with no consequences."

Erik sent Ice out for round two, the Mightyena howling as he entered the field of battle. The Numel began harnessing the energy of the lava all around it, soaking up the heat and fire from all around it and erupting like the volcano it stood on with scorching hot liquid, directed at Ice. The Mightyena screamed out in pain as the heat scolded him to the bone, and leapt through the air despite the pain. Ice wrapped his fangs around the Numel's orange shell, freezing it as the cold flowed through his teeth into his opponent's skin. The ice froze the Numel's veins solid.

Ice ran back, then charged into the frozen Pokemon, launching the Numel into the lava. Mylos's warrior's blood changing temperature from sub-zero to unbearably hot in a split second, causing it to explode much like his trainer's Koffing before it.

"No!" Mylos blasted. The explosion attracted the attention of both Maxie and Archie.

"Impressive.." Maxie commented. "Mylos is one of my three admins, yet you defeated him without breaking a sweat. What I've been told about you seems to be correct."

"Not bad, kid," Archie followed. "Let's take this scum down together."

"Why would I help you," Erik snapped.

"Because Maxie here plans to throw the meteorite into the lava, the reaction would cause this here volcano to become active. Maybe even erupt."

"Not true," Maxie said cooly, "all it would achieve is to allow us to fully harness the power of the meteorite."

"Neither of those sounds good, Maxie." Erik looked directly at the Magma boss as he spoke, he felt no fear, even if Maxie was supposed to be a much better trainer than himself.

"Oh, but with this meteorite's harnessed energy, we will be able to help people all over the region," Maxie smiled, keeping his eyes locked in contact with Erik's. "Hoenn is becoming overcrowded, and is surrounded by ocean. But with the power we harness we will be able to expand the landmass, allowing space for new homes to be built; for both people and Pokemon."

"You don't want to help others, only yourself and that boss of yours," Archie retorted, veins throbbing in his neck as the Aqua leader spoke.

"Boss? I thought you were in charge of Magma, Maxie?" Erik asked quizzically.

"I am Erik," Maxie replied, as calm and collected as ever. "And if you help me out today, I will allow you to be my second in command. You have truly proved yourself as both worthy and capable of the honour. I will even allow you to keep the fully charged meteorite, as a welcome gift."

"What would I do with a meteorite?" Erik questioned, intrigued.

"Up to you, but it would have immense power. It could even allow your Pokemon to evolve by your will, or boost their strength dramatically."

Erik thought to himself for a moment, he didn't know who to believe. Maxie sounded convincing, and the power of the meteorite would make him almost unstoppable in his quest to become Pokemon champion.

"You honestly trust this guy?!" Archie said furiously.

"I don't trust either of you," Erik replied, he had made his decision. He had remembered how he had left May, the thought of how hurt and despondent she was because of Magma. "I don't know which of you to believe, but I do know one thing. You must be stopped here and now Maxie."

"You're seriously outnumbered here Erik," a smirk appearing on Maxie's face as he spoke, "even if you manage to defeat me, my grunts will be finished with Aqua soon."

"You're the one who's outnumbered, Max," Archie interrupted, with a matching smirk. "Two against one here, right Erik?"

"I don't want your help," Erik snapped at the Team Aqua leader, "I fight my battles alone."

"Then if you don't win I'll just take down a weakened Maxie, either way, I get what I want."

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Blaze squared up to Maxie's Mightyena. Erik could sense the dark-typed Pokemon was well trained, and maybe even stronger than Blaze. He felt nervous, fearing for his oldest friend as molten lava spit up from the pit and almost reached the two battling Pokemon.

Blaze leapt through the air, aiming to kick his foe over the edge and into the molten magma below. The Mightyena was knocked back, his hind legs slipping off the edge but he managed to hold on, then roared. Blaze nervously stepped back, before launching another kick at his opponent. As the Combusken was in midair, another roar caused him to crash land, Blaze looked terrified and struggled to get back up at the Mightyena climbed fully back over the ledge. Blaze ran back to his trainer, Erik comforting him and throwing out Leaf's Pokeball. He had never seen his Combusken so frightened before.

"What's wrong, why are you so afraid," he whispered into Blaze's ear, but the Combusken just hid behind him, like a child hiding behind their parent.

Out on the battlefield, Leaf was using her usual tactic of attracting her foe with pheromones, but it didn't have the intended effect. The Mightyena was unaffected and open its mouth to roar once more, but Leaf seized the opportunity to launch a powerful stream of poisonous liquid into the opening, sending the Mightyena crashing backwards, over the edge and into the lava.

Maxie made a groaning noise that sounded rather uncaring, before throwing his second of three Pokemon out into the field, a Numel. But before Erik had time to send his own Pokemon out, Maxie withdrew the meteorite from his back pocket.

"Just being around the natural power of Mt. Chimney has slightly charged it, watch and learn, Erik." Maxie threw the small rock with force at his own Pokemon, the Numel being knocked onto its side. The meteorite then started glowing, first orange, then green, then a bright white. The Numel followed suit, glowing the same bright white as the rock that had been thrown at it.

Erik shielded his eyes from the light. Waiting for it to dissipate before removing his arm from his face, seeing that the Numel had been forced to evolve into a Camerupt.

"Not only has he evolved, but he is also much stronger. I used up half of the meteorite's stored energy at once to create this super-Pokemon." A smirk reappeared on Maxie's face, stretching all the way across his defined cheekbones from one side to another.

"Is this why Blaze was so afraid? He sensed you'd used a supernatural power on your Mightyena?"

"I didn't use anything on my Mightyena, even though you only defeated him by using the lava pool he was completely normal," replied Maxie, smirk remaining firmly in place. "Your Combusken was only so afraid because of you, he felt your fear, channeled it. Join us and I will teach you to control it, control everything about your Pokemon."

"I have no fear," Erik roared in response, but deep down he knew he was lying. He wasn't as naive as he used to be, believing that Blaze was so reliable that he was almost invincible. After losing so many Pokemon and seeing what had happened to May after she thought she had lost her first Pokemon, he knew he would be exactly the same if he ever lost Blaze. He refused to send his Combusken back into battle.

He fingered each of the Pokeballs on his belt once more, Ice was weakened and the rest of them had weaknesses to the Camerupt's fire and ground dual-type. Ice would have to do.

Ice howled, trying to intimidate the Camerupt, but his foe remained unperturbed. Maxie's Pokemon seemed to focus its energy, bright white lines appearing throughout his skin. The power of the meteorite. The Camerupt roared.

The ground shook as if the roar had caused an earthquake, then suddenly the rocky surface beneath Ice's feet collapsed, the Mightyena disappearing down into the newly formed hole. As quickly as the hole had appeared it was replaced by a stream of lava, shooting up into the sky with Ice at the summit.

Steel was already in the sky, so she flew over with haste, grabbing Ice in her talons and attempting to swoop back to the ground to return the Pokemon to Erik. Camerupt roared again, sending another plume of lava shooting up into the sky, and another, after another. Steel deftly dodged a few, one scorched a wing, another crashed into her beak, she released Ice from her talons, close enough to Erik for him to retrieve the Mightyena into its Pokeball, before his Skarmory's steel skin was melted entirely by a final lava sprout, evaporating the Pokemon.

Ice was too weak to stand, nevermind fight. Glutton and Steel were gone and Blaze too frightened to move. Leaf and Dancer were all he had left and both weak to fire and ground respectively. Leaf's spore effects were his only hope.

"You need to attract it and send it to sleep, then poison it, I believe in you, Leaf," he stroked his Gloom as he whispered to her, tears clouded his eyes turning his vision hazy as he sent his last hope off to fight.

The initial plan worked, Leaf attracted her opponent before quickly sending it to sleep, but the poison afterwards didn't. Each time Leaf attempted to poison her foe, bright white lines appeared on its surface, seemingly absorbing and destroying the toxins. The Camerupt's eyes shot open as he inhaled for a fiery blast that would annihilate Leaf.

Erik took out her Pokeball at lightening speed and withdrew her as searing flame blasted past where her body once was, he had lost all hope and turned to Blaze. His Combusken's beady eyes met his, sadness making a home within. Blaze hugged him, wrapping his arms around his trainer and holding so tightly Erik felt the air escaping from his lungs. Then Blaze marched out to face his opponent.

Blaze danced around blasts of fire from the Camerupt, kicking him with force and pushing the creature closer and closer to the lava. The Camerupt planted all four feet on the ground, spreading itself wide and roared once more. Blaze backed off slightly, before continuing launching kicks, but this time his opponent held its ground. Blaze could push him back no further.

"Damn! Go go go!" Archie roared at his three Pokemon, a Sharpedo, a Golbat and a Mightyena. Lava once more began shooting out of the ground from the roar of the Camerupt, Blaze was too close to Maxie's Pokemon for the lava to come near him, Archie's three charging Pokemon were the targets.

All three danced through the lava streams, dodging from side to side. The Mightyena was an unfortunate victim of one such stream however, the wave of magma launching him into the air before sending him helplessly into the pool of lava below.

The Golbat and Sharpedo both made it to the Camerupt, who jumped into the air, picking out the Golbat and killing it as easily as Erik could catch and crush a fly. Whilst the Camerupt was in the air, it was vulnerable. Blaze leapt in, slamming his foot so hard into the Pokemon it rocketed backwards. The Camerupt's body fell over the ledge, but it managed to grab on with his front paws, before Sharpedo launched a blast of water at it, sending it crashing downwards into the lava below.

Erik ran up to the edge besides Blaze. The Camerupt was unable to be seen, buried within the ocean of lava below, Erik had won, or so he thought. A bright light appeared from underneath the lava's surface, in the shape of the Camerupt, Blaze pushed Erik back sending his trainer crashing into the ground a distance away from the action.

A stream of lava shot up from the pool, and riding on the top was the Camerupt. Archie's Sharpedo blasted aqua at the Camerupt, the beast replying with a wave of flame. When the two attacks collided, along with the Camerupt and lava entering the impact zone, it caused another explosion.

Blaze was sent crashing backwards into Erik as both the Camerupt and Sharpedo were evaporated in the blast.

"Blaze!" Erik screamed, seeing Mylos tackle and restrain Archie on the ground in the corner of his eye. His Combusken lay unmoving as four Magma grunts approached the scene, Pokeballs in their hands. Maxie sent out his final Pokemon, a Zubat, then followed the same technique and used the other half of the meteorite's stored energy to force it to evolved into a Golbat. As they all closed in on Erik, he was too focused on checking for signs of life in Blaze, struggling to find any.
 

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Something I forgot to mention when I was betaing, but I'm assuming you won't be using Courtney and Tabitha for your story? If so, I'm curious as to why that's the case as in my opinion the two in the remakes have more interesting personalities than in the original games.

Erik's Pikachu looked back at her trainer as she stepped up to face the weakened Poochyena, Erik could tell that she was eager to prove herself to him now she had committed, a bond had been established between the two and he could feel it. Grant's Pokemon leapt in with its fangs, Dancer gracefully moved out of the way, causing the Poochyena to slam face-first into the ground. A follow up electrical jolt from the Pikachu electrifying her foe and winning her the fight.

Another thing I forgot to mention. I feel you should describe a bit more as to how Dancer is eager to battle. Is she jumping around in excitement, for instance? Dancing pose? Those kind of small details.

Grant remained silent, staring blankly. As Glutton, Steel and Dancer all leapt for joy at the victory, Erik pulled three berries out of his backpack, one for each of his three victors, as way of a reward. Glutton moved at an incredible speed, gulping down the three berries then looking up at Erik with a smile as if he hadn't done anything wrong, as if he thought all three were meant for him. Dancer scorned Glutton with a slap and a growl, with Steel flying back into the sky.

A cute moment there.

The Koffing inhaled, and closed his eyes, expanding slightly. It was as if the Pokemon was trying to force something out of him, then the ground beneath them shook violently, with the air turning to smoke as Erik's ears rang noisily. The Koffing had self-destructed, taking Glutton with it.

Pretty tough way to lose a Pokemon. Ouch.

"Just being around the natural power of Mt. Chimney has slightly charged it, watch and learn, Erik." Maxie threw the small rock with force at his own Pokemon, the Numel being knocked onto its side. The meteorite then started glowing, first orange, then green, then a bright white. The Numel followed suit, glowing the same bright white as the rock that had been thrown at it.

Erik shielded his eyes from the light. Waiting for it to dissipate before removing his arm from his face, seeing that the Numel had been forced to evolve into a Camerupt.

I already forgot, but was there a mention of the meteorite able to make Pokemon evolve (or mega evolve) except Rayquaza? I think Camerupt mega evolving instead would make a bit more sense in my opinion. I'm assuming though you probably have some other interesting ideas concerning the meteorite.

Steel was already in the sky, so she flew over with haste, grabbing Ice in her talons and attempting to swoop back to the ground to return the Pokemon to Erik. Camerupt roared again, sending another plume of lava shooting up into the sky, and another, after another. Steel deftly dodged a few, one scorched a wing, another crashed into her beak, she released Ice from her talons, close enough to Erik for him to retrieve the Mightyena into its Pokeball, before his Skarmory's steel skin was melted entirely by a final lava sprout, evaporating the Pokemon.

Pretty neat way on having Steel saving Ice. Too bad she was gone shortly after. :<

Erik took out her Pokeball at lightening speed and withdrew her as searing flame blasted past where her body once was, he had lost all hope and turned to Blaze. His Combusken's beady eyes met his, sadness making a home within. Blaze hugged him, wrapping his arms around his trainer and holding so tightly Erik felt the air escaping from his lungs. Then Blaze marched out to face his opponent.

I also like this moment a lot there.

I do like some of the extra details you have for the battles like Steel saving Ice and Archie helping Erik out last minute. You're getting more creative with your battles there! I feel very bad for Erik losing a few of his Pokemon, however, especially Blaze. :< Since this story's plotline is branching out on its own quite a bit now, am pretty excited what will happen next!
 
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Concerning both Tabitha and Courtney - The latter isn't included as Team Aqua scarcely appear within Omega Ruby, any appearances by them will feature Archie and maybe a couple of grunts in tow.

Tabitha on the other hand isn't included for two reasons. Firstly, I wanted to add some more characters into the story that were my own, as I feel I can do more with them both when I introduce them, and further into the story (eg. Cecilia and Grant). Secondly, as my tale is more of a darker take on the games, Tabitha's character would have to be changed quite considerably to fit in with the themes of the story, so with the amount of change I'd have to make to Tabitha it would make him almost a new character anyway. So thought might as well create one of my own instead, linking back to the first point.

Thanks for the feedback on which parts you like and wanting me to add more detail into the part about Dancer, I'll bear those in mind.

Finally, I changed mega-evolution and the meteorite around slightly here as I have plans for both of those later on in the story. :)
 
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Chapter Fourteen - Mountain Resort​


Maxie's Golbat screeched, a piercing sound so violent that even the Magma Grunts started backing off slightly from the scene. Erik turned his head at the ruckus, the screech had snapped his mind back to reality.

He moved his left hand slowly over Blaze's fur, towards his throat to feel for a pulse. His right hand shot towards his belt, picking up each of his remaining three Pokeballs and throwing them towards the Golbat in turn.

The flying creature's wings were laced with white lines, where its veins absorbed the power of the meteorite. Ice was too weak to stand after being scorched by lava, slouching on the floor in front of Erik and ready to give his life to protect his trainer if need be. Leaf stood besides Ice, in her own protective stance.

As Erik saw Dancer stroll out to meet the Golbat, his left hand felt a pulse. Blaze's heartbeat was slow, but present, he was alive! Erik felt a fresh wave of energy coursing through his body, enough to make him climb back to his feet and face down Maxie to conclude their battle. If he was going to go down, he'd go down fighting with his team.

"Still you resist us," Maxie said, sounding half surprised and half amused as Dancer channelled her trainer's anger, inhaling deep breaths and charging her electrical energy. "This is futile Erik, you're trying to bring down the organisation you'll eventually join."

"Stop...Talking…" Erik struggled to push words through his anger, he couldn't force the image of May's distress or Blaze's pain out of his thoughts. "Dancer...End…This."

His Pikachu responded, sending out an almighty electrical blast which seemed to shake the very foundations of the volcano. The wave of energy hit the Golbat directly, but the meteor-charged Pokemon withstood the attack, flying rapidly towards Dancer and attempting to slam an alien strengthened wing into her.

Dancer skipped out of the way of the first attack, but before she knew it the Golbat had swooped back around, hitting her with another wing attack. She was launched into the air, towards the pit of lava, and went over the edge.

A desperate grab onto the ledge was all that saved her from dropping into the scorching liquid below, pulling herself back over with encouragement from Erik. Dancer looked resilient, at first she refused to even step foot into a battlefield, but now she acted as if she were born to fight. The Golbat however, remained relentless, opening his jaws so wide that all Dancer could see was the black pit of its mouth, poison dripping off its sharp fangs.

Dancer charged all her remaining energy, sending out one huge electrical blast directly down the Golbat's throat, frying it from the inside. The bat-like creature didn't stop its charge, the Pikachu moving out of the way with a deft pirouette as Maxie's final Pokemon flew into the lava below. Erik was unsure whether it had already been killed before it landed into the pool of fire, or if the lava had landed the final blow.

Erik turned his head at the sound of faint coughing and spluttering from behind him. Blaze was awake.

He held the Combusken in both arms and hugged him tightly, tears streaming down his face before getting caught in Blaze's feathers.

"I thought I'd lost you, my friend," he sobbed, clutching his Pokemon as if he never wanted to let go.

"You defeated me..." Maxie spoke in disbelief, as Erik caught the Magma grunts closing in from behind out of the corner of his eye. Dancer rejoined Leaf and Ice as they formed a mini-barrier around Erik and Blaze.

"Stop!" Maxie commanded. "Let him go, he's too weak to confront us now. We'll keep Archie and proceed with our plan."

Maxie grabbed the meteorite off the floor, and walked up to the ledge before swinging his arm back as if to throw the rock into the lava. Before he could launch his arm forwards his PokeNav buzzed violently.

"Maxie," a distorted voice called out from the device. "Make your way to Mt. Pyre with all haste. We've found what we were looking for, the meteorite is powerless compared to what we've discovered."

"On my way," he responded, as if he were talking to a higher authority, before turning to his goons. "To Mt. Pyre, release Archie, carrying him will only slow us down." He put the meteorite back in his back pocket as he went to leave, Mylos releasing Archie and leading the grunts back towards the cable car station. Maxie followed shortly after.

"Dancer, what're you doing?" Erik whispered to his Pikachu, who began following Maxie as if to attack him. Then she stopped, as she turned back around he noticed that Dancer had stolen the meteorite from Maxie's back pocket, so skillfully the Magma boss hadn't noticed.

"Nice one," Archie's gruff voice wandered over. "Although now they've found the orbs we have an even bigger problem. Catch you later."

"Orbs? What do you mean?" Erik called after him, but the Aqua boss paid no heed to him, jogging off towards the cable cars in pursuit of Magma.

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Despite being surprisingly light, the meteorite felt like it weighed a ton in Erik's palm as he studied it whilst beginning his trek towards Jagged Pass. He had already considered using it to forcefully evolve his team, or to boost their strength, but he wasn't sure of the risks of doing so.

The rock had fallen from space, as May had told him as they made their way towards Meteor Falls. "Many fragments of the meteors still containing power were found within the few months after the asteroid shower, some forcing evolution of certain Pokemon, or certain types. Others were even more powerful than that. They are all held by resourceful individuals or scientists now though, I hear Mr. Stone has a fair few."

Erik didn't know what to do with the space rock, so he decided to place it into one of the pockets of his backpack until later. He had other problems to worry about, like the problem that lay now in front of him.

Jagged Pass was a sharp descend, full of mud and dirt. The slopes downwards were steep and many a trainer could be seen practising along the route. Erik couldn't afford a battle with his weakened team, so he looked for an alternative route down the slopes. There were many pathways through the pass that looked viable for him to travel along, but only two weren't infested by trainers. Both, however, were thick with long grass and wild Pokemon. With his view overlooking the entire pass, he took the route that looked least treacherous.

Trudging through the long grass was exhausting, tentatively putting one foot in front of the other whilst making sure to avoid any wild Pokemon jumping out and attacking him was wearing Erik out. Leaf and Dancer walked alongside him, the only two Pokemon in his party still able to keep pace with him, although the latter was panting for breath with each step.

Suddenly, Erik felt himself falling to the floor, a sharp pain imprinting itself on his chest from the wild Spoink bouncing up and colliding with him. Leaf leapt to his defence, releasing sleep powder up into the air whilst Dancer tackled the Spoink to the ground, inhaling the fumes whilst doing so.

Erik lobbed a spare Pokeball at the aggressor, capturing the sleeping Pokemon whilst withdrawing Dancer into her Pokeball as she slept.

"Hello Bounce," he said to the device, cracking a slight smile as he spoke. He added the Pokeball to his belt, meaning he now had five Pokemon in his party, with another to be withdrawn from storage once he had arrived in Lavaridge Town.

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The descent had been difficult, Erik had been forced to slide down numerous muddy slopes and almost tripped on sharp rocks covered by the ash many times. The closer he got to the bottom, the further it seemed away, until the ash cleared and Lavaridge Town lay only a few steps away.

Erik broke into a run, almost a sprint, aiming directly at the Pokemon Centre at the town's entrance. Throwing his Pokeballs down on the front counter he demanded his team be treated at once, informing the nurse at the desk that it was an emergency as his team were dead or dying. Whilst he sat in the waiting room he withdrew Fury from storage, using the facility at the Pokemon Centre to scan his wrist device against the machine, and input the option to withdraw a Pokeball from the storage. After a few minutes Fury's ball popped out of the dispenser.

It had been a hectic day, and the mid-afternoon sun was hidden behind thick clouds as Erik left the Pokemon Centre with the freshly healed Ice, Blaze, Dancer and Leaf all by his side. A cool breeze hit him square in the face as the doors to the building slid shut behind him, allowing him to finally get a full look at Lavaridge Town.

Lavaridge was a relatively small and peacefull village, settled neatly into the side of Mt. Chimney. Few houses could be seen, the little that could appeared to be more like hotels than homes, with visitors to the town relaxing in two giant hot springs fuelled by the heat of the volcano, one for males and one for females. The hot springs were tucked into the mountainside, with lovely warm sand covering the village's surface.

Erik could see why many would make the treacherous journey here, the town was more of a resort, seeming so quaint, relaxed and distant from the rest of the world. Visitors were able to come to the town in order for them escape their everyday problems along with the troubles of Hoenn.

"Everyone, say hello to our newest capture, Bounce," Erik called to his team as he released the Spoink from its Pokeball. The newest team member bounced up and down delighted in front of her new friends, who all seemed to take her to heart straight away.

"And the sixth member of our new party," Erik began, clutching Fury's Pokeball in his hand before lobbing it into the air, the Zangoose appearing arms folded. Blaze and Ice sneered at the normal-typed Pokemon, who seemed uncaring. Leaf and Dancer also looked uneasy at Fury being a part of the team, but Erik knew they would accept him eventually.

He considered relaxing, taking a couple of days out from his adventure and instead spending them resting in the mountain resort. But with Maxie headed to Mt. Pyre, and the threat of trainers being banned from Hoenn completely looming ever larger, he knew a couple of days could be too much. The fourth gym beckoned.

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Scorching heat choked Erik as he looked around Lavaridge Gym, the hot air reminding him of Mt. Chimney's summit. The gym consisted of a single large room, the surface of which was made up of cobblestone, steam arising from the cracks in the cobbles. To the rear of the room lay a hill of solid rock, with ledges all over that needed climbing. The hill was flanked to either side by pools of lava, with a small moat wrapping its way around the front, a thin bridge of cobble the only way across. A final check of the room led to Erik spotting two further hot springs, one on the left side of the room and the other on the right hand side.

"Welcome," bellowed a lady who looked to be in her early twenties from atop the hill. "Flannery's the name, the Heat Badge is the game. Here to play?" Her dark red hair tied up in a bun, Erik noticing that she was the only person in the room not covered in sweat. Her only wearing red shorts with a black short top probably aided that.

Her three minions all lined up underneath the hill, to which Flannery introduced them in order from left to right. First up was Cole, who had slightly darker skin than the other two, as well as being well built compared to the other two trainers' more slim figures. Second in the line was Sadie, with blonde hair tied up in a bun, wearing the same red shorts as Flannery but this time with accompanying red t-shirt. Finally, Zane. The man with a baby face, shoulder length silver hair and slim but athletic figure stared directly at Erik with bulging green eyes. Each of the three were drenched in sweat.

"Who first," Erik said, half-ignoring Flannery's question.

"That would be me," Cole replied in a deep monotonous voice. "Good luck against my Numel, moulded in the fires of Mt. Chimney itself."

"I'll take my chances," Erik smirked, nodding to Fury who strolled out onto the battlefield, arms folded. Erik couldn't tell whether his Zangoose was being moody or was just nonplussed by it all, he would soon find out it was the latter.

The Numel growled, focusing its energy and releasing a stream of lava which shot up from the cracks in the cobblestones. Fury stepped casually to one side before another stream hit him straight on, but the Zangoose didn't so much as wince.

Fury leapt forward and began swiping relentlessly at the Numel, and before his foe had time to react, Erik's Pokemon picked it up and hurled it across the room with impressive strength into the hot spring. The fire and ground type Pokemon was unable to survive in the water. Fury strolled past Erik and his team without so much as a backwards glance, before getting in the other hot spring and relaxing.

Cole sent out a Slugma next, Erik countering with Ice. The Mightyena immediately dug its fangs into its opponent, usually he would cling on and freeze his foe's veins, but the glistening cold on his teeth instead seemed to melt on touch to a hissing noise. The Slugma took advantage and blasted fire at Ice as he was vulnerable, the Mightyena keeling back in pain before ramming into Cole's creature. Slugma recovered, sending a wave of searing flame towards Ice who scampered to one side rapidly, dodging the flame before grabbing the Pokemon in his fangs and throwing it into the hot spring, copying Fury's ploy.

"So that's your tactic then, err.. whatever your name was!" Flannery shouted from the top of the hill, before ordering Zane. "He's using those hot springs, go and cover them up!" her voice like a high pitched squeal as it made its way around the four rock walls.

The baby faced athlete left the building, whilst Erik and Cole continued their fight. The former sent Bounce into the fray for her first taste of battle, the latter a Koffing.

Erik's Spoink made slight squeaking noises each time it touched the floor before bouncing back up into the air, looking innocent and harmless. Suddenly, she stopped moving, and focused her mind. The Koffing send out a blast of sludge, but Bounce had seemingly foreseen this, leaping out of the way before focusing her mind once more and scrambling her foe's brain with a wave of psychic energy. The Koffing looked confused, floating aimlessly from side to side, before an electrical blast generated by the kinetic energy made from the Spoink's constant bouncing fried what was left of the dimwitted creature.

"Not as innocent as you appear, are you Bounce?" Erik smiled at his Pokemon, the Spoink making a slightly louder squeak back at her trainer.

As Cole retreated back behind the moat, Zane returned with a couple of residents, carrying between them two large metal sheets which they used to cover up the hot springs. Erik's attention was diverted onto Sadie, who walked nonchalantly despite soaked in sweat over the bridge and into the battle arena of rock and steam.

Sadie sent a Slugma into battle, with Erik wanting to turn back to Bounce before hearing a splash from the hot spring to his right. Fury was pushing back the metal cover, not allowing Zane or the villager to place the sheet and ruin his relaxation. Embroiled in the match of strength, Fury was equal in power to the two humans before Erik called over to his Pokemon.

"Fury, I have a Slugma for you to take this out on!" The Zangoose glared back at Erik, the momentary distraction causing the two humans to overpower him as Fury was sent back in the pool with a splash. The Zangoose leapt back out in a rage, storming up to the Slugma who sent up a burst of lava from underneath the cobblestone.

The lava crashed into Fury's stomach who walked through the pain with gritted teeth, as if it were nothing. Erik could tell his Pokemon was weak, but the Zangoose showed no sign of it, rapidly swiping at the Slugma before picking it up by its neck and slamming it into the ground, then burying claws as sharp as knives into Sadie's creature, defeating it.

Fury turned his gaze towards Zane, before strolling back towards the rest of Erik's team, Dancer giving him a wide berth as she trotted up to face off against Sadie's Meditite. Dancer performed a pirouette in front of Erik with a smile, her trainer smiling back before seeing his Pikachu enter into a state of fury.

The Meditite copied her precisely, performing a pirouette and smiling at Sadie. Dancer sent out a wave of electricity, paralysing her foe, then performed another pirouette to Erik's shock.

"Wow.. I didn't realise Dancer had that in her..." he whispered to himself as his Pikachu angrily moved over to the Meditite. Sadie's Pokemon reacted through the paralysis to launch a fist covered in fire directly at Dancer's cheek, connecting with aplomb and sending Erik's fighter crashing into the solid stone ground.

"Bounce, take over," he commanded his Spoink whilst recalling Dancer into her Pokeball.

Bounce emitted bright lights aimed directly at the Meditite which changed colour at a rapid pace, the ray of lights working effectively to confuse her opponent. The paralysed creature moved slowly in an attempt to launch another fiery punch, but the Spoink bounced up highly, landing directly behind her foe and shocked it with electricity, defeating it.

Sadie's final Pokemon was a Koffing, Erik leaving Bounce out as she knew how to beat the poison-typed creature with ease, and she didn't let him down as Zane crossed the bridge for the final fight before Erik would take on Flannery.

Another trainer, another Slugma. Fury looked emotionless as he faced his third opponent. Despite his Zangoose being injured, Erik found himself unable to stop him from entering the arena; Fury seemed to harbour a newfound hatred for Slugmas.

Fury moved with speed, cooly dodging two flame bursts before grabbing the slugma by its throat and lifting it into the air, the foe gasping for breath. Instead of throwing it back to the floor instantly, Fury held it in midair for a while before doing so this time and burying claws in it like he did before. The Zangoose was merciless and relentless.

Zane sent out a Kecleon next, Erik allowing Ice out to play. The Mightyena leapt onto the foe with icy fangs, before the Kecleon's skin turned from green to white and covered in frost. Erik was stunned, he had never seen anything of the like before.

"You look confused, never fought a Kecleon before?" Zane goaded. "A Kecleon changes its type to match whatever just attacked it, in this case, an ice fang."

"Fool," Erik thought to himself, "he's just revealed its secret."

Erik withdrew Ice, and sent in Blaze. The Kecleon seemed to be struggling with the heat of the Combusken's fire attacks, its skin almost melting. Blaze finished the process, melting the Kecleon down with bursts of flame. Zane was defeated.

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"You're surprisingly strong for a kid, you hardly broke sweat taking down my disciples," Flannery commented as Erik reentered the gym after healing his team at the Pokemon Centre.

"Wait a second," Erik paused as he strode up to the edge of the arena. "You don't know who I am?"

"No clue," Flannery replied from the top of the hill, before jumping down off the top with surprising ease, landing in a crouched position on the floor then getting up and sauntering over the bridge in the intense heat seemingly unaffected by it. "We are pretty secluded here in Lavaridge."

"I can see that," Erik thought to himself, before speaking aloud. "I just want my fourth badge, then I can go and fight Norman." His heart fluttered at the thought, one more battle and he would be on his way to fight his dad.

"You have to beat me first!" Flannery shouted, sending out her Slugma to battle. Erik didn't even have to look back at his team to know that Fury was already on his way forward, marching into the arena.

Fury moved deceptively fast, swiping voraciously with claws at Flannery's first of three Pokemon. Erik could tell this Slugma was stronger than the others Fury had faced, unsure if his Pokemon had realised as it grabbed the fire type by the neck and slammed it into the cobblestone floor.

Flannery sprinted onto the battlefield, armed with a Hyper Potion. The medicine even more powerful than a Super Potion restored the Slugma back to full fighting health as the spray sunk into its oozing skin. Fury charged, pushing Flannery aside before she had time to finish applying the potion, sending the gym leader crashing to the ground as the Zangoose buried his claws into the Slugma.

Instead of slumping to the floor defeated like the rest of the Slugmas that Fury had faced, Flannery's Pokemon reacted differently. Enraged that the Zangoose had attacked its trainer, the Slugma overheated its body, reaching its boiling point as its lava-like skin began melting, with Fury's claws still lodged inside it. Raging heat stemmed up Erik's Pokemon's claws, through its arms before coursing through his body, frying Fury from the inside. The Slugma slumped to the floor in synchronisation, having sacrificed itself to destroy the Zangoose. Erik and Flannery had both lost one Pokemon.

"Fury..." Erik whispered, he hadn't been too fond of his Zangoose, but had respected its strength. He stiffened himself, forcing his mind from the thought and back to the battle. Erik felt stronger than before, the losses of many of his team having toughened his resilience. He nodded to Ice, who strutted out proudly into the arena, looking quite chuffed with the demise of Fury.

"You idiot!" Flannery screamed. "You're such an idiot you made my Slugma do that to himself. Now you have to face my strongest and best Pokemon." The scarlet haired gym leader whipped the second Pokeball of three from her belt, launching it into the air. A Torkoal emerging from within.

Ice leapt viciously at his foe, burying his ice cold fangs into the shell littered with holes, intense heat pouring out from within each. The Mightyena felt the ice on his teeth melting under the high temperatures they were being exposed to, but held on with all his might. The Torkoal charged into the rock formed hill, trying to knock Ice off but the Mightyena held on strongly as the tortoise-like creature began climbing the ledges, all the way to the top of the mini-mountain.

Once the Torkoal reached the summit, he threw himself and Ice off the top, heading straight down into the pool of lava below. Ice leapt off the Torkoal's back, throwing out a paw and clinging onto the edge of the hill perilously, toes almost dipping into the fiery liquid. A splash came from behind him as the Torkoal plummeted into the depths, Ice managing to pull himself up slightly with one paw, just enough to cling onto another ledge with a second. Before the Torkoal grabbed him.

Emerging from the lava, the Torkoal wrapped his mouth again one of Ice's hind legs and hurled himself back into the pool, the force of the dive too much for Ice to withstand, as Erik's Mightyena disappeared into the lava below, a weak howl all that could be heard as Ice faded from existence.

Erik's vision flashed back to Route 101, sneaking up on a wild Poochyena with encouragement from May. He had been so happy with his first capture, Blaze was his first Pokemon granted, but that was a gift. Ice he had caught all by himself.

"Yay!" Flannery screamed, "Two - One to me!"

Route 104, where Ziggy had been terrified of the Poochyena chasing her. Ice had annihilated any trainer that had stood before Erik on Route 102, with a smugness and proud strut that would boil the blood of most people. But Erik was different, he saw Ice's proud demeanor for what it really was; a way to cover the Poochyena's insecurity.

Dancer saw her trainer looking inconsolable, deciding to take the initiative herself and skip over into the arena to face the freshly emerged Torkoal. Whilst Ice was obliterated by the lava, the fiery liquid pouring into the gaps in Torkoal's shell had only seemed to strengthen it. Blaze would've stepped in but knew Erik didn't want him out there fighting, especially after just losing Ice.

"And you blamed yourself," Erik whispered, as he remembered how distraught Ice appeared at the deaths of String, Speedy and Bunny. The swagger gone with the Poochyena's confidence, then during the war on Slateport's beach, Ziggy had fallen, another death Ice had taken personally.

Dancer launched an orb of electrical energy at the Torkoal, the beast recoiling slightly before roaring, the whole room shaking as violently as Dancer's legs. Flannery's Pokemon seemed to have doubled in size since absorbing the lava, and massively overshadowed the Pikachu. Torkoal threw itself into the air with surprising agility, Dancer attempting to scurry away only to fall flat on her face as her legs gave way from underneath her, the Torkoal slamming its body directly on her, crushing the Pikachu. When Flannery's monster stood back up, Dancer weakly crawled away, the Torkoal seeming to laugh at the sight.

"You loved Wally," Erik thought. The frail boy was such a big help in restoring Ice's confidence. So much so that when his new friend was in trouble he evolved into a Mightyena just to save him. Once Ice had evolved he didn't look back, seeming to find new strength from within. Like Blaze, Erik could always rely on Ice, whenever he was in danger, or losing a battle, sending his Mightyena into the fray always seemed to turn the tables. And now he was gone.

Agonising thoughts flowed furiously through Erik's mind, until he was snapped from them by a soft hand placing itself on his shoulder. Blaze grabbed Dancer's Pokeball and withdrew her. Leaf was weak to fire and Bounce relatively untested in battle, as Erik and Blaze locked eyes the trainer knew he had no choice, reaching up to his shoulder and putting his hand on his Combuskens, he nodded. Blaze returned with a smile as if to say, "everything will be okay".

The Torkoal roared once more as Blaze walked briskly onto the battlefield, he was only slightly shorter than the overgrown lava-filled Pokemon, but made up for the lack of height in speed. Blaze launched two kicks on the Torkoal, who stood strong, before his opponent rammed violently into him, not feeling the intense heat from the shell as Dancer did. Withstanding each others' initial blows, the two fire types blasted flames at their foe, two bursts of orange intercepting and dancing around the other.

Blaze held onto his blast, before seeing the Torkoal flying through the flame and crashing into him with another body slam, the Combusken landing so awkwardly on his legs he ended up being paralysed by the blow. Erik winced at the scene, feeling his body shaking in fear as the Torkoal went in for a third and possibly final slam.

Blaze recovered, rolling out of the way for the Torkoal to crash down into the cobblestone floor. Blaze used the momentary distraction to limp over to the hot spring on the left hand side and remove the sheet.

"NO!" Erik boomed, Blaze turning around at his trainer's voice at the last second, but it was too late. The Combusken grabbed the Torkoal in midair, sending them both crashing into the hot spring.

"Three - two to me, Erik, but it looks like your Pikachu is too weak to fight, and Gloom too weak against fire attacks!" Flannery giggled as she spoke. "Spoink vs Numel for the badge then?" she said whilst throwing her final Pokemon into battle, the aforementioned Numel appearing from within his Pokeball.

Erik suddenly heard a splash to his left, as Blaze clambered out of the hot spring. Unlike a Numel or Slugma, Blaze had arms to swim and his skin wasn't affected by water. The spring liquid must have poured into the holes in Torkoal's shell, the fire type unable to withstand it as Blaze collapsed exhaustly outside the spring, Erik immediately returning him into his Pokeball.

Bounce used the rays of light to confused the Numel, before bouncing up onto the top of the hill. Attempting to follow, the Numel crashed into the mountain side in its confusion, damaging itself before being hit by mind frying psychic blasts as it climbing to the top. The Numel remained resilient once it had reached the top, summoning its power to blast the Spoink with fire, almost pushing it off the edge and into the lava pool to the right hand side.

As Bounce teetered over the edge, the Numel rammed it, sending the Spoink over. Bounce recovered, using its spring to catch on to the ledge, before bouncing back down to the surface weakly and crashing into the solid stone below. Erik withdrew the Spoink, and sent out his only Pokemon who could still stand to finish off the fight and win him his fourth badge, Leaf.

The Numel stumbled down to the surface weak and still a little confused, but Erik knew any sort of fire attack against Leaf would devastate her. The Gloom knew she would have to act quickly, making sure to rapidly send out spores.

Erik noticed that the spores were different than usual, larger in size and far more plentiful as they zoomed towards Numel, latching onto its skin and draining its health before flying back to Leaf and seemingly transferring the Numel's energy onto her. Flannery's last Pokemon fell to the floor, drained of the last of its energy. Erik had won.

Erik breathed a sigh of relief through oceans of sweat, a wave of calm flowing through him since it was confirmed that he had won the battle. He had lost Fury and Ice, nearly lost Blaze, Bounce and Dancer, but he had gained the Heat Badge from their sacrifices. He knew what lay next, Petalburg City and badge number five. Norman's badge. The stage was set for his long awaited showdown with his father.
 

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As Erik saw Dancer stroll out to meet the Golbat, his left hand felt a pulse. Blaze's heartbeat was slow, but present, he was alive! Erik felt a fresh wave of energy coursing through his body, enough to make him climb back to his feet and face down Maxie to conclude their battle. If he was going to go down, he'd go down fighting with his team.
Yay, Blaze still lives!

Dancer charged all her remaining energy, sending out one huge electrical blast directly down the Golbat's throat, frying it from the inside. The bat-like creature didn't stop its charge, the Pikachu moving out of the way with a deft pirouette as Maxie's final Pokemon flew into the lava below. Erik was unsure whether it had already been killed before it landed into the pool of fire, or if the lava had landed the final blow.

Dancer for the final blow!

Erik's Spoink made slight squeaking noises each time it touched the floor before bouncing back up into the air, looking innocent and harmless. Suddenly, she stopped moving, and focused her mind. The Koffing send out a blast of sludge, but Bounce had seemingly foreseen this, leaping out of the way before focusing her mind once more and scrambling her foe's brain with a wave of psychic energy. The Koffing looked confused, floating aimlessly from side to side, before an electrical blast generated by the kinetic energy made from the Spoink's constant bouncing fried what was left of the dimwitted creature.

"Not as innocent as you appear, are you Bounce?" Erik smiled at his Pokemon, the Spoink making a slightly louder squeak back at her trainer.

Nice little moment to show off Spoink's personality there.

Fury moved with speed, cooly dodging two flame bursts before grabbing the slugma by its throat and lifting it into the air, the foe gasping for breath. Instead of throwing it back to the floor instantly, Fury held it in midair for a while before doing so this time and burying claws in it like he did before. The Zangoose was merciless and relentless.

For the short amount of time Fury appeared, I thought you did nicely showcasing ho relentless he is.

Once the Torkoal reached the summit, he threw himself and Ice off the top, heading straight down into the pool of lava below. Ice leapt off the Torkoal's back, throwing out a paw and clinging onto the edge of the hill perilously, toes almost dipping into the fiery liquid. A splash came from behind him as the Torkoal plummeted into the depths, Ice managing to pull himself up slightly with one paw, just enough to cling onto another ledge with a second. Before the Torkoal grabbed him.

Emerging from the lava, the Torkoal wrapped his mouth again one of Ice's hind legs and hurled himself back into the pool, the force of the dive too much for Ice to withstand, as Erik's Mightyena disappeared into the lava below, a weak howl all that could be heard as Ice faded from existence.

While I love the twist with Torkoal, poor Ice. :< I already mentioned this to you before, but I think you did Erik's thoughts concerning Ice while Dancer was going against Torkoal well. Good work overall, looking forward to more!
 
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Chapter Fifteen - Then and Now​


Erik stared solemnly out of the thick glass window, rain battering the pane whilst sending a mist high into the air, clouding his view of the city outside. Large industrial buildings neatly sat alongside huge skyscrapers as both loomed menacingly over his rather modest household. However, it was the paved road of the street immediately outside the window that held his attention, his father would be strolling down that road before entering his home any moment now.

A flash of lightning struck overhead, shortly followed by a raucous roar of thunder as Erik eyed the frightening grey sky inquisitively. His gaze snapped back to the street, a rapidly moving flash of black catching his eye to the right.

His father sprinted down the street, holding a leather briefcase over his head for protection from the torrential rain, which ended up soaking his suit anyway, despite Norman's best efforts.

The thick pine wood door burst open, Norman having to duck under the small frame, he only stood at just under six foot tall and was dripping off what seemed like an ocean of water. He almost collapsed as he finally made it back into his humble home. Erik didn't care about getting drenched himself, as he raced towards his dad and hugged him, receiving a warm embrace back from his hero.

"Daddy!" Erik squealed, "I've missed you so much!"

"I've missed you too Son," Norman replied, a loving smile taking to his young-looking features. Even now, Erik could tell that holding his child made all his father's problems disappear, if only temporarily. "Come through to the living room, I need to have a chat with you and your mother."

Father and son briskly made their way towards the house's main room. A small leather couch greeted them as they entered the medium-sized area, a fireplace in the centre of the room was accompanied by a small beanbag - where Erik usually sat. A small television in the corner of the room remaining switched off as Erik's mother made her way out of a second doorframe, emerging instantly from the kitchen.

"Hello, Caroline." Norman greeted his wife by planting a kiss on her left cheek, before continuing. "I have important news that you both need to hear, something big is about to happen which will change our lives tremendously."

"Is it about my birthday next month?" Erik asked innocently, standing at a height with his father's stomach.

"Your sixth birthday is a very special occasion, Son." Norman replied patronisingly, bending his knees so his eyes were level with Erik's own. "Unfortunately, my boss at work says I may have to move away very soon."

Erik felt a tear escape his eye at the news. "I can't cry!" he told himself. "Daddy can't see me cry!"

"I need you to be strong, Son." Norman continued, placing thick hands on Erik's bony shoulders, "What is your dream? Keep reminding yourself of that."

"I want to become the best Pokemon trainer the world has ever seen!" came Erik's enthusiastic reply.

"This is why you need to learn to be strong, when you grow up and get your own Pokemon it will follow you until the end. But if you were to lose a Pokemon close to you, it's like a pain you've never experienced."

"Where are your boss sending you to?"

"Hoenn. To become a Gym Leader."

"Is that far away?" Erik felt his eyes tearing up again, but told himself that Hoenn was probably in the next town, along one of those Routes he was always told about.

"I'll always be close." Norman turned back to his wife and asked her to join him in the kitchen. "Stay here Erik, your mother and I have a few things to discuss."

Erik remained where he was for only a moment. Hearing raised voices in the next room, he tip-toed over to the edge of the kitchen doorway and hid behind the wall, listening intently next to the doorframe in an attempt to overhear his parent's conversation.

"You're being blackmailed by him again!" Caroline cried. "How many times has your manager threatened us now? Ten? Twenty?! Why give in now?!"

"It's Erik," Norman replied, his voice was shaky as if it were about to break away completely. "He's threatened Erik."

"Is there no one you can go to with this?!"

"He's the foreign minister, who can I go to?!"

"Why Hoenn?!" Caroline's voice sounded full of resentment as she swiftly changed the subject.

"To become a Gym Leader, we will have unchallengeable influence over there if we play our cards right."

Erik couldn't bring himself to listen to anymore. He could bear remaining strong no longer and charged into the kitchen, leaping onto his father as tears streamed relentlessly down his young face.

"Please don't leave me Daddy," he begged, "I need you."

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Time had flown during Erik's trek from Lavaridge back to Mauville Town, he was so deep in thought throughout that he could hardly remember the journey back. Unchaining the bicycle he had kept locked up in the glass city, his thoughts wandered to contemplate over who had purchased him the two-wheeled gift and handed it to him completely free of charge. He mounted the green-coated vehicle and moved his left foot onto the pedal, before a violent buzzing in his pocket distracted him, almost causing him to embarrassingly fall off the bike.

It was his PokeNav, vibrating viciously against the unpowered meteorite. May was calling him.

"Hello Erik, how's things? Just ringing to let you know I'm feeling a bit better now after what happened in Meteor Falls," a more chirpy May said. She certainly sounded a lot better.

"Just got my fourth badge," Erik could feel the strain on his voice, each word weighing a ton in his throat as he tried to force each and every one out.

"What's wrong?! What happened?!" May almost screamed, clearly detecting the pain in Erik's tone.

"Ice.."

"Meet me on Route 111, the one north of Mauville," she demanded. "I'll be there."

Erik was only just coming to terms with how devastated he was by Ice's loss. "You need to be strong," he thought to himself. "Losing a Pokemon close to you is like pain you'll never have experienced," the familiar words echoed back and forth through his mind.

He hopped on his bicycle, attempting to remember how to ride one. Shaky at first, he soon got the hang of it, envisaging what his mother had taught him when he was six, riding the small bike he had received as a leaving present from Norman for his sixth birthday.

The wind sailed through his hair as he rode relentlessly out of Mauville City, pushing his legs with force and onto the route he had met Gabby and Ty for the first time. He remembered how Cecilia had saved him, and her advice had proved correct with the world forgetting him after the media outlets found a new story to pick up on the next day, something about strange events taking place outside Mossdeep City, on the eastern edge of Hoenn.

A shadow landed on Erik, seemingly following his movements. A quick glance to the sky showed him a Swellow, ridden cooly by May. Slamming the brakes on his bicycle before leaping off, he let his bike drop to the ground with a thud as the bulky blue bird hit the floor next to him, the lady on top jumping off and sprinting over to Erik, wrapping her arms around him before landing a soft kiss on his left cheek.

Erik burst into tears, a sadness that had been boiling inside of him erupted all at once. Flashes of all the Pokemon he had lost entered his vision, from String to Ziggy to Ice and all the others in between, ones he had barely known like Bunny and friends he had loved and bonded with like his old Mightyena.

"It's okay," May whispered softly into his ear. "It's okay."

Minutes passed by quickly, each second hastily blending into the next as Erik felt almost at peace in May's embrace. Emotions that were building up and held within were released uncaringly towards her, as if Erik saw May as the one person that could save him from himself.

"I have an idea," May blurted suddenly, ruining the serenity. Although Erik didn't care. "You need new Pokemon to complete your team, right?" she continued, sounding excited by her thoughts. "I could let you borrow my goggles so you can go to the desert!"

"That sounds good." Erik attempted to force a smile in response, a tough task but one he managed to achieve, just. "I stopped Magma on Mt. Chimney, by the way. Had some help from that Archie guy, but I did it," he continued, almost looking for reassurance and hoping it would impress May. He was now feeling a sense of insecurity he had never felt before.

"Well done you!" May replied delightedly, lightly planting a kiss on his forehead. Erik wanted to respond by kissing her on the lips, a deep desire branching from the depths of his heart. But his body refused to respond, like he was frozen in place by fear of rejection.

"I must be going, I'm always a phone call away if you ever need me, Erik." May smiled ever so sweetly at him, before hopping back on her Swellow and flying away. Erik was furious with himself, he felt like his only chance with her had just slipped away. Even though he told himself he would have other opportunities, he couldn't make himself believe it.

Resting his bicycle up against the hillside, half hidden by a large boulder, he began his journey towards the desert. He would traverse the sands in hope for a new member of his team.

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A large black suitcase rested neatly alongside two cardboard boxes at the front door. A further box was bought through by Norman as Erik stood stoutly in the doorway, refusing to let his dad leave the house.

Erik struggled to get his head around the fact his dad was leaving, he didn't believe he was truly going. Too young to fully contemplate what was happening. He only knew that he didn't like it, so he puffed out his small chest and folded his skinny arms, trying to fill up the entire doorframe so Norman couldn't get through.

"Son," Norman started, "you need to be strong here. You're acting like a child."

"But Daddy you can't leave me," Erik shouted as loud as he could, hoping the louder he sounded the more chance he had of forcing his father to listen. "Me and Mummy need you."

"Mummy and I," Norman corrected him. "Hoenn needs me too, Son. A whole region of people need me to help guide them towards a better future."

"I don't care about them!" Erik roared. "I want you here."

"My boss won't allow it, I need to go to be able to support our family."

"Why do you let him tell you what to do!"

"I listen to him, the same way you listen to your mother or I. Everyone has people they need to listen to Erik, even me."

"I'm still not moving!" Erik said stubbornly.

"Then I'll have to move you!" Norman chuckled, picking Erik who laughed in return, moving outside into the street and spinning his son around in the air. Erik felt as if he were flying, as if he was being elevated above all his problems and worries, all the negative emotions. His father always had that effect on him, and he loved him for it.

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Blustery winds filled with rough sand blasted Erik's face as he strode through the desert. The goggles that May had given him were working marvellously against the constant bombardment of the sharp dirt-brown grains smashing against him. Through impeded vision he could see large amounts of rocks sticking out of the sand, the desert surrounded by sharp inclines and rocky cliffs like the rest of this part of Hoenn.

Erik tripped, a rock he didn't see getting in his way as he landed face first into the sand, suddenly rolling around to find himself staring straight at an angry Trapinch, the ground typed Pokemon furiously snapping its large jaws at him. He must have kicked the Pokemon and tripped over it.

Erik rolled out the way as the Trapinch charged head first, obviously looking to hurt Erik rather than seriously injure him. The Pokemon missed, slowly turning around for another charge but the trainer was faster, grabbing a spare Pokeball on his belt and lobbing it at the creature, who swatted it away with its abnormally large head.

The distraction gave Erik a chance to send Leaf into the fray, the Gloom immediately sending sleep powder into the air as the Trapinch charged again, stuttering halfway through its attack and falling asleep. Erik glided over to the Pokeball he had thrown earlier and captured the Pokemon, naming it "Snappy".

"Erik?" a familiar female voice drifting through the winds and into his ear. A turn of his head saw a woman in her very early twenties approach carrying a small sack, the small grey bag clutched within her right hand. Her smooth skin matched the colour of the sand they stepped on.

"Cecilia," he replied as she wandered up to him, her identity becoming clearer the closer she got. "What's in the bag?"

"Just fossils," she said sweetly, opening the small burlap sack to reveal two fossils. The first was in the shape of a claw, sat neatly on top of the second which was hard to identify underneath the other, but looked rather more like a root of some sort. "I go fossil hunting sometimes in the desert."

"Why?" Erik enquired, she had piqued his interest.

"Just a hobby," she giggled. "I'm glad I saw you out here actually, I always wondered why you disappeared that night."

"Erm.." Erik hesitated, scratching the back of his head nervously. "At the time I felt everyone was against me, the media saw me as their enemy and people from all over Hoenn were hunting me. Magma were also attacking me. So I didn't really know who I could trust."

"Oh," Cecilia replied, looking genuinely disappointed. "I was only trying to help."

"Sorry," Erik frowned guiltily, "look, maybe you are a good person trying to help. But I don't know you, and in my lifetime I've been betrayed by people who I have known. People who I have known very well."

"I'll show you," she replied, pulling the claw-like fossil out of the bag. "Have one of my fossils, they're rare and of an ancient Pokemon."

"She's really trying to prove herself to me," Erik thought to himself, before saying aloud. "Thank you, what's your story anyway?" he asked the woman of mystery whilst taking the fossil.

"Oh not much," she giggled again, "I'm from the Johto region myself."

"How'd you end up in Hoenn?"

"I wanted to prove to my dad that I could be independent. He's a businessman over there and paid for my trip over here, he even bought me a house in Rustboro to live in."

"So why do you stay in the treehouse?"

"Oh I don't usually, only when I'm stressed. I find it really relaxing in there."

"What stresses you? Are you a trainer then?"

"I'm a trainer but I don't really battle. I love Pokemon so I like doing research into them and finding out about them. I want to someday own a Pokemon ranch where I can look after and breed other people's friends for them. They'd pay me of a course," she finished with yet another giggle, a cute sound which made Erik smile.

"Like a daycare centre?" Erik enquired, worrying he was sounding like a game of 'Guess the Pokemon', a fun activity he used to play as a child where one person would pick a Pokemon in their head and the rest of the players would have twenty questions between them to try and find out which Pokemon it was.

"Kind of, but better!" she declared. "How about you? What's next in Erik's journey?"

"Petalburg." The word sounded like fire on his tongue. "To challenge my dad for his badge."

"Wow, good luck! Don't let me keep you." She flashed him a final smile as she began bumbling away.

"Thank you," he called out after her, before reimagining the battle to come for what seemed like the one thousandth time in his mind.

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A day had passed since his dad had moved out, and Erik had been sat at the windowsill for the past hour waiting for Norman to arrive home from work for the day.

"He's always home by now," Erik thought to himself as he gazed out of the glass pane and out into the overcast day, grey clouds casting a dull shadow over Saffron City. "Why is he not here."

A further ten minutes passed, then another. And Another. Until Erik ran into the living room to his mother.

"Mummy!" he wailed. "I think Daddy's in trouble."

She got up from the couch and moved over to her son, bending her knees so her eyes stood at a height with Erik's own. "Erik, sweetie," she began, "Daddy's not coming home, remember?" She smiled sweetly at him.

"No!" Erik yelled, stubbornly refusing to believe it. "He's probably been kept behind for detention at work. I was one time at trainer school for talking too much in class."

He ran back out to the hallway window besides the front door before his mother had time to reply. But after another half an hour of waiting he had given up, his father wasn't coming home and Erik didn't understand why.

Over the next few days Erik spent less and less time by that window, going from spending two hours to an hour to ten minutes waiting for his father to come home, as he had done for as long as he could remember. But Norman never showed.

His sixth birthday had arrived, along with three loud knocks at the door. Upon hearing the very first knock Erik screamed, "Daddy!", and sprinted towards the sound. Opening the door, he was shocked when instead of seeing his father, he saw a delivery man holding a small bicycle, complete with stabilisers.

"Present for Erik, from Norman?" asked the man, clad in a full black suit with purple undershirt.

"Where's my Daddy?" Erik replied, to a stunned look from the man.

"I'm not sure, I'm just here to deliver this."

Erik ran back inside, tears streaming down his cheeks. It had finally sunk in. His father wasn't coming back, Norman had abandoned him.

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He had breezed through Mauville on his bike, the cool air flowing through his hair as he headed west to Verdanturf, and then through the tunnel to emerge in Rustboro City, withdrawing Sunny the Solrock from storage to complete his team of six. Through the dreary city littered with grey and brown stone, Erik cycled the breadth of it in no time. Exiting from the southern side, and almost running over an old friend.

His bicycle screeched to a halt as he slammed on the brakes in order to avoid hitting Wally, the trainer seemingly struggling to capture a Roselia for his team. Wally stood motionless, like a shy Pokemon in headlights he was too scared to move out of the way.

"Hey Wally," Erik said half joking, half relieved that he didn't run his friend down.

"Oh.. Hey.. Erik," Wally forced each word out, as if he were recovering from a near-death experience. "How are you?" he followed up, this time speaking with slightly more conviction.

"Do you need a hand?" Erik enquired, avoiding the question.

"I've never caught a Pokemon by myself before," came the reply from a clearly downbeat Wally, the green haired boy slouching despondently.

Erik sent Leaf out of her Pokeball, and ordered his Gloom to send the Roselia to sleep. Using the same tactic as he used to capture Snappy, Leaf sent out the powder for the wild Pokemon to inhale. Wally caught on to Erik's ploy and followed up by throwing a Pokeball at the grass-typed creature, successfully capturing it.

"Thank you.. Erik," Wally said shakily, he looked more like the boy Erik had first met rather than the more confident trainer he had encountered in Mauville.

"You're welcome, is everything okay with you?" Erik asked, hoping everything with his friend was alright.

"Fine thank you," Wally said, unable to keep eye contact as his vision remained fixed on the ground. "Happy I have a new Pokemon thanks to you."

"Good to hear," Erik replied. He was sure Wally was lying, hiding something he was afraid of telling him about, but remained silent. He couldn't waste any more time, he wanted to get to Petalburg City and challenge his dad for the Balance Badge. "I've gotta run Wally, I'll catch you later!" he shouted as he cycled off.

"Bye Erik," a faint voice called from an ever growing distance.

Petalburg Woods proved no challenge for Erik and his team, significantly stronger than when he first trekked the forest. Crossing the treeline at the southern exit, the city of Petalburg lay ahead of him, from the rise of the hill he could spot the gym. Nothing else mattered now, his father awaited him.

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It had been four years since Erik had last seen his father, so when an aging man who looked like he could either be in his mid-thirties or late-fifties stepped through the doorway, the boy hardly recognised him.

"Norman!" Caroline said in a tone half resentful and half shocked. "You look like you've aged twenty years in the four since we last saw you."

"Hello, I thought I'd pop by and pay Erik a surprise visit on his tenth birthday," the man said glancing at his son. "But I can see neither of you are too happy to see me." Norman's voice had changed, from a soft voice with obvious care to strained, almost toneless, as he spotted Erik standing behind his mother with arms folded.

"What did you expect?!" Caroline cried out. "You haven't seen your boy once in all this time."

"I haven't had a chance," Norman groaned.

"You've had four years worth of chances!" Erik's mother screamed.

"I did it all for Erik," Norman said despondently. "All this stress, fatigue and pain, and I didn't even get to see my son. But things are about to change again, I've been told now Erik has turned ten I am allowed to come and see him monthly."

"We don't want you here!" Caroline was apoplectic, Erik had never seen his mother this angry, in fact, he couldn't remember ever seeing her angry at all.

"Fine, but at least let me wish him a happy birthday."

"You have one minute," she snapped in reply, moving out of the doorway and allowing Norman to pass.

Norman strode up to his son, and the closer he got the more Erik could see how much his dad had aged. When he had last seen his father, he remembered him looking young and fresh faced, now he just saw lines and wrinkles, with deep and heavy bags holding up his eyes. Norman bent his knees so he stood at a height with Erik.

"You've grown so much, I'm so sorry I haven't been there to see it happen." Even at a young age, Erik could sense the sorrow in his father's voice.

"Go away!" Erik shouted, "I don't want you here."

"I know," Norman welled up as he spoke. "I'm so sorry. This is probably the last time I will see you before I break completely. I only wish you grow up to be stronger than I am, to be able to resist what I couldn't. I'm so sorry.

Erik had no comprehension of what his father was telling him, as a lone tear rolled solemnly down his dad's wrinkled cheek. "What do you mean?" he asked, but got no response. Norman walked out of the house without glancing back, the only words that followed were the oft repeated two, "I'm sorry".

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"Norman," Erik growled, staring directly at his father's young-looking face. "It's time.

"Indeed it is," Norman replied, signalling for his three trainee gym leaders to stand down. "I know he is worthy to challenge me," he told them, "he is my son after all."

Erik baulked slightly at the heavy emphasis on Norman calling him his son, almost like a hissing noise erupting from his father's mouth.

They stood in the main entrance room of the gym, where they had had their sitdown chat before, but this time Norman went through the back door, waving Erik to follow him through. The door led to a wooden set of stairs, a sharp upwards incline with another doorway at the summit. Through this doorway led Erik to the battle room.

The large pinewood room was rather plain. Lilac cushions in each corner with tables, chairs and even a sofa littered around the place. "This is more of a home to him than our house in Saffron ever was," Erik silently raged. The most prominent thing in the room, however, was a huge glass window to the rear, which granted him a view of a back garden abundant with trees and flowerbeds. A trap door occupied the far left hand corner of the area, Erik guessing it led to Norman's bedroom, he did live here after all.

"Welcome, my son," Norman said in his usual cool voice with a smirk. "I hope you are strong enough to face me?"

"My team are strong enough to beat anyone," Erik snapped instantly.

"Not your team, you."

"I'm stronger than you think."

"I hope so, I need to find out if you are strong enough, I don't care if you win and take my badge." The smirk grew ever wider on Norman's face.

"Enough talk."

"No, I want you to know what's going to happen, Erik."

"What." Erik was fed up of the conversation, he just wanted to get his revenge once and for all on his father.

"I want to find out if you are strong enough," he repeated. "That is why I don't care if I lose the fight, but why I gifted you that Torchic. So you would bond with it. So I know you are strong enough to handle losing someone so close to you. That's right, I'm going to kill Blaze. That was the plan all along."

Erik's heart fluttered, the very thought of losing Blaze was devastating for him, as the battle with Maxie flashed before his eyes. remembering the unbearable pain he felt as he saw his oldest friend close to death.

Before he could reply, his father sent out his first Pokemon, a Slaking. The beast roaring at his opponent. Erik fingered each and every one of his Pokeballs, before his grip rested on one of them, he knew exactly who he was going to send out.

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The ceremony was only a few moments away, the bride and groom were getting ready and Erik was left with a man he wasn't sure he had ever met before.

"Why can't I see Mummy or Daddy?" he asked the strange man, who looked back at him through narrow dark eyes, a warm smile breaking his otherwise menacing features.

"They are busy getting dressed, and we can't have little four year olds wandering around by themselves now can we?"

"But I want to see Daddy."

"You will very soon, my boy," the man brushed through his chestnut brown hair as he spoke, swiping off a couple that fell onto his black suit. "I'll tell you what."

"What?" Erik interrupted excitedly, jumping so suddenly at the thought he accidentally threw the fruit juice he was carrying, a portion of which landed on the man's undershirt.

"You're lucky I'm wearing purple and the drink won't show," the man chuckled. "I'm your dad's boss at work, so how about after the wedding we can both tell him what to do!"

"Yay!" Erik screamed delightedly. "So you're the forry minner?"

"The Foreign Minister," the man corrected, laughing wholeheartedly again. "I like you, son, I think you'll made a great addition to our organisation one day."

"I don't want to be a minser though."

"You never know, you may even take my place one day. Don't rule it out son," he laughed again, as he took his seat on the front row alongside Erik.

Erik looked around the room to see if he recognised anyone. The hall was packed full of people, many of which wore black suits and lilac undershirts, the same as his dad would be wearing, Erik remembered. He saw many women wearing black or purple dresses, his mother would be in white, he also knew.

"This is a very special day, Erik," the Foreign Minister spoke quietly to him. "Your parents will be together for the rest of their lives."

"For ever and ever?" Erik replied, happy at the thought that his Mummy and Daddy would never leave him.

"As long as we are all happy."

"Yay!" Erik shouted once more. "Are you happy?"

"Oh," the man replied. "Very. Now that I am sitting next to my future successor."

Music blasting out of the speakers around them signalled the start of the ceremony, a cheery tune echoing throughout the hall, as Erik's mother marched down the aisle in a flowing white dress, and crowned with black and lilac flowers. Erik smiled, this was the happiest day of his life, one that he would remember forever more. His parents were going to be together forever, and everyone was going to be happy.
 

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"You're being blackmailed by him again!" Caroline cried. "How many times has your manager threatened us now? Ten? Twenty?! Why give in now?!"

"It's Erik," Norman replied, his voice was shaky as if it were about to break away completely. "He's threatened Erik."

"Is there no one you can go to with this?!"

"He's the foreign minister, who can I go to?!"

One thing I'm slightly confused about is why Norman's boss would threaten Erik (though I think I can figure out from the "sitting next to my future successor" line at the very end). I'm assuming that'll be mentioned later. Otherwise, I think the other flashbacks here you did fine! While I'm not the biggest fan of family drama, there had been a couple instances in the game where similar things happened, like beginning of Delta Episode ("We can't go to the stargazing show?!" or something like that, lol).

Understandable Ice's death still affected Erik as his Pokemon had been with him for a while. Norman's words starting to really get to him.

I like you gave a small backstory to Celicia and it does seem she wants to help Erik out. Her inspiring to become a researcher or something similar is a nice addition. As for Wally, am curious what's going on in his mind now.

"I want to find out if you are strong enough," he repeated. "That is why I don't care if I lose the fight, but why I gifted you that Torchic. So you would bond with it. So I know you are strong enough to handle losing someone so close to you. That's right, I'm going to kill Blaze. That was the plan all along."

Oh, ouch. Especially coming from Erik's own dad.

Not much action this chapter, but there are some interesting scenes that brings light to Erik's past with his family. Looking forward to the battle!
 
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Sorry about the huge delay in this chapter, I graduated from University a couple of weeks ago so spent a few days up there. After that I went all out on the job hunting, including attending a couple of interviews this week just gone, so have only just found the time to write this one. Next few chapters should be back on track timewise! Hope you enjoy this one!

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Chapter Sixteen - Showdown​



Strong sunlight burst through the large glass window and onto the Slaking's back, the beast roaring and thumping a barrel-like chest with two fists which seemed more like boulders than paws covered with brown fur.

Erik felt his pulse racing, like his heart intended to leap out of his skin. This was it. The moment he had been working towards for what seemed like a lifetime.

As he launched Leaf's Pokeball into the air, the spherical device appearing to move in slow motion, an anticipation of the match-up with his father twisted the very fabrics of time in his mind.

He had chosen Leaf for her versatility, her ability to adapt to any challenge with a number of different spores. He knew that if his Gloom could either attract the Slaking, or send it to sleep, he would be able to take down Norman's first Pokemon with ease thereafter.

Another huge roar burst out from the beast's large mouth, the sound reminiscent of a clap of thunder, as Leaf crouched down and aimed her head at the Slaking, ready to shoot spores directly at her foe.

The Slaking moved with surprising speed, hurling its large frame across the room to the wooden table and chairs in the corner. It picked up the table like it was as light as a feather, despite it looking large enough to hold Erik's entire team atop of it, and launched it with force at Leaf. The Gloom was hit face-on with the object, which split in half and sent Leaf rocketing back into the wall as the spores were launched out from within her, the force of the blow releasing them into the air.

Norman shouted out to his Pokemon, calling on it to be relentless; and the beast obliged. Slaking picked up one of the wooden chairs, but instead of launching it at the Gloom who lay unmoving on the floor, strolled over to her in order to use the chair as a physical weapon. Each stomp of the Slaking's feet created a mini-earthquake inside the room as it moved drowsily over to Leaf, before collapsing in a slump on the floor. The sleeping powder had had its desired effect, with the beast crashing to the floor, the impact of which causing vibrations so powerful Erik fell backwards into the wall behind him. Norman remained unmoved.

Leaf climbed feebly to her feet, shaking verociously as she did so as the Gloom used the last of her energy to send abnormally large spores into the air. The green circular grains moved through the air smoothly, like they weighed nothing at all, before suddenly honing in and attaching themselves to the Slaking. The large spores began sapping energy from the beast before floating back to Leaf and transferring the minerals back to her. Despite all this, Erik could see she remained weak, as Leaf struggled to hold herself steady on her feet.

Erik grabbed Leaf's Pokeball and withdrew her, before sending Sunny into the fray for his first taste of battle. The Solrock loafed around aimlessly, seemingly unsure whether it was in a battle or in a dream, as the Pokemon from space looked from Erik, to the Slaking, and then back to Erik.

Norman's Slaking woke up and groggily grabbed the chair again, launching it at the floating sun-shaped rock and sending Sunny smashing backwards into one the room's wooden walls. Erik's Solrock hit the ground, before racing back into the air, powered by rage. In a sudden furious frenzy, Sunny spun up to the Slaking at lightning-fast speeds. Before the beast had time to react, the Solrock covered itself in flames and began rapidly spinning around it, circling the Slaking with intent over and over. Sunny managed to create a fiery vortex, trapping his foe inside.

"Yes!" Erik thought to himself. "There's no way Slaking's getting out of that."

Moments passed by slowly, but with each millisecond that passed, Slaking's doom seemed more and more certain to Erik.

Until the normal-typed Pokemon leapt out of the fire, its wild and unkempt fur soaking up the flames as if they were made of water. Slaking grabbed the Solrock with a paw so large it encompassed most of Sunny, before the beast lifted Erik's Pokemon into the air with ease, then slamming the Solrock down forcefully on its outstretched knee, smashing Sunny's shell mercilessly.

"That's exactly what will happen to Blaze," Norman taunted, a small chuckle following which hit Erik's ears with poison.

"How did he just soak up the flames?!" Erik questioned demandingly.

"I knew you'd be coming to challenge me here one day, with Blaze," Norman responded, keeping his eyes locked directly at Erik's own. "So I trained my Pokemon to withstand fire, as well as making the entire gym fireproof."

Erik wanted to respond sharply, but held his tongue. He needed to fix his focus on the battlefield, not in a war of words with his father. He grabbed another Pokeball from his belt, he desired to send in Blaze, to let his Combusken teach Norman a lesson. But he was afraid to. Instead, he sent out another new Pokemon, Snappy.

The Trapinch took to its first battle by opening its huge jaws and roaring at the Slaking. The sound made by Snappy however was more of a soft growl, which only made Norman and his Pokemon laugh in unison. Infuriated, Snappy lowered its head and charged, aiming for the Slaking's knee in an attempt to send it crashing into the ground.

The Slaking caught Snappy mid-charge, picking it up and hurling it through the window for the Trapinch to painfully land in one of the garden's flower beds. Snappy climbed weakly to his feet, before slumping hopelessly back down to the ground. The Slaking moved to jump out of the window and finish it off, until Norman held out a hand calmly to stop it, spotting something his Pokemon hadn't.

The Slaking turned slowly, lumbering around to be blasted by a paralysing wave of electricity. The beast stuttered and shook violently, the paralysis coursing through its body as it spotted Dancer. The Pikachu charged up another wave of electricity, but this time instead of launching it at the Slaking, she ran at him, aiming to inflict maximum damage.

Norman's Pokemon still moved quickly enough to grab Dancer, holding her in a tight grip by the tail as she hung upside down. The Pikachu didn't give up, sending an electrical blast from her crimson cheeks which slammed into her opponents stomach. The Slaking reacted by hurling her into the wall, then charging into her, and grabbing her by the neck with one hand.

Dancer was pinned up strongly against the wall, the Slaking launching a fist with full force into the Pikachu's stomach, smashing the wind out of her. Before Dancer had time to recover, she was met by another fist, the power of which sent her rocketing out of the Slaking's grasp and into the floor.

The Slaking went in for the final blow, launching a third enclosed fist at the weakened Pikachu lying breathless on the wooden floor. But suddenly stopped, standing frozen as his fist lay in mid-air. Sparks of electricity flew aggressively off of the beast as the paralysis had caught up with it, Slaking couldn't move his arms, in fact, he seemed unable to move any part of his body apart from his head. Roaring in pain, Norman's Pokemon was hit by a final blast of electrical energy emanating from Dancer's cheeks, as Erik's Pikachu slumped to the floor, unable to carry on battling.

Erik's team had finally taken down Norman's first Pokemon, but the price of the feat was horrendously high. Only Blaze and Bounce were still at full fighting strength, and whilst Leaf was weak, she was the only other member of his team able to fight. Norman still had two unused Pokeballs attached to his belt.

Norman threw out a Vigoroth as his second fighter, Erik fearing to send out Blaze so instead asking the weakened Leaf to take down the normal-typed opponent. He was unsure if the time was right for Bounce's psychic attacks.

Vigoroth seemed to glide as it moved even quicker than the Slaking before it, bolting across the room to Leaf and slashing her with claws like knives. Leaf recoiled, falling backwards but not before launching spores into the air which latched onto the creature and drained health from it, transferring the energy into Leaf. It was a finely balanced contest, but the Gloom was still weak from the earlier fight with Slaking.

A ferocious wave of swipes from the Vigoroth left Leaf kneeling down, too weak to muster up the energy for a counter-attack. Again, she had managed to use the force of the blow in order to send more spores into the air, which zapped onto the Vigoroth, sapping yet more health off of the foe. Both Pokemon could barely stand, the Vigoroth may have moved a lot faster than the Slaking, but lacked its immense fortitude.

Erik refused to risk Leaf any further, withdrawing the Gloom and sending out Bounce, hoping the Spoink would finish off the weakened foe.

Bounce began hopping around joyfully, like she didn't have a care in the world, but Erik knew that underneath the happy demeanour she was focused her mind on a psychic attack aimed at the Vigoroth. Norman's creature moved rapidly, the Spoink left vulnerable as she was fixated on a psychic attack.

Vigoroth slashed Bounce relentlessly and without mercy. After the unabiding flurry of swipes, Erik's Spoink was left in a lifeless slump on the floor, leaving the battlefield as quickly as she had entered it.

Erik shed a tear, but couldn't decide why. Was it because he had just lost Bounce? Or because the only Pokemon he had left able to fight was Blaze? After Norman had spent almost the entire time informing Erik that he would kill the Combusken.

Blaze launched itself at the weak Vigoroth with a kick of his left foot. The attack slammed into the creature, sending it crashing to the ground. The Combusken didn't allow his opponent time to recover, kicking out with his right foot this time and launching the Vigoroth through the window, the weakened Pokemon landing with a thud onto the solid pavement, defeated.

"You've done well to get this far, son," Norman smirked. "But now it's one on one, your Gloom, Pikachu and Trapinch are so weak they will be easy pickings. My final Slaking is much stronger than the last, I hope you will be able to handle losing Blaze."

Again, Erik chose to kept his attention fully focused on the battle at hand, rather than giving his father the satisfaction of a reply. He shouted to Blaze to use the same tactic as before, and try and send this new Slaking rocketing through the window and out into the garden like the Vigoroth before it. As always, his most trusted friend obeyed without hesitation.

Blaze threw himself at his foe, both feet hanging in midair as he rocketed across the room, before slamming into Slaking with all his might. The beast didn't move an inch.

Norman laughed, louder and more confidently than he ever had done before. For the first time, Erik could see defeat looming, as the Slaking picked Blaze up by his leg, the Combusken launching a burst of flames into the creature, but Norman's Pokemon effortlessly soaked up the fire in its thick fur.

Erik had never lost a battle, but if all his Pokemon were to fall here he'd be left with only Rocky, the Numel he had caught whilst climbing Mt. Chimney who rested securely in storage. His Journey wouldn't be over, but it might as well be.

Slaking threw Blaze with all the strength it could muster, the Combusken crashing into the sofa with such force it sent the couch flying back into the wall behind, Blaze following. The Slaking pounced after him, both arms raised so high they almost burst through the roof. Blaze was in a daze, sprawled uselessly over the floor as the Slaking began its descent downwards into the fire-typed Pokemon.

"Blaze!" Erik roared, almost screaming his friend's name in desperation. "Get out the way!"

The Combusken snapped to attention with his trainer's cries, rapidly rolling out of the way as the beast smashed the sofa in two with so much power the entire room began to shake violently. Erik fell backwards into the wall, struggling to remain upright as what felt like an earthquake took the room.

Blaze leapt to his feet, sending another wave of fire at the creature from his beak. Once more the Slaking's fur soaked up the attack, the beast seemingly bursting into laughter at the attempt as he shook the flames from himself. Blaze inhaled in preparation for another attack, but was hit full pelt by a powerful fist, the Combusken being launched back into Erik as the two crashed to the ground together.

"Blaze.." Erik whispered, winded. His Pokemon looked him dead in the eye, too weak to pick himself back up, too weak to carry on fighting. "Please, keep going. I need you, my oldest friend."

Erik could see his words were no use, Blaze tried to get up but couldn't bring himself to. He remembered Maxie's words, how his Pokemon channelled his fear, and there was no denying it. Erik wasn't only afraid, he was terrified. Blaze was about to be finished off and the only Pokemon he had left would make for "easy pickings', they were all in no condition to fight. All the bonds he had made, all the friends he had gained, all about to be taken away from him by his own father.

"Wait!" Norman shouted, it took Erik and Blaze a second to realise what at. The Slaking clambered over to the two, ignoring his trainer's commands, and went to slam a fist into Blaze to finish the Combusken off, uncaring that Erik lay underneath his Combusken.

As the beast's enclosed fist clouded out the light, time seemed to move in slow motion. Erik's life flashed before his eyes as he felt as if it were about to come to an end. Firstly, he saw his father's face, much younger and happier, he then saw his mother, Caroline. Now Wally flashed before him, then Cecilia, then May, the thought of her held in his mind for a split second longer than the rest, before Blaze came before him.

His Combusken roared, a sound so shrill it caused the hairs on the back of Erik's neck to stand up on end, as Blaze leapt up and grabbed the fist with all his remaining strength. Using the last of his energy to save his trainer, the Combusken began to be overpowered by the single fist from Slaking, but it allowed enough time for Erik to roll out of the way.

As Blaze was about to be crushed by the fist, he spun his gaze to look Erik in the eye, and held it for a moment. Erik swore he could see fire in his Pokemon's eyes, a re-energising flame that said to him, "I can't let you down, Erik."

Blaze found the strength he was searching for, pushing Slaking's fist but up to both the beast's and Norman's surprise. The Combusken then took his chance, blasting flames into the Slaking's gaping mouth, fire filling the inside of the creature. Norman's Pokemon began swinging his huge fists wildly around the room in pain, lashing out at anything and everything in complete agony as it punched a hole through the wall and nearly hit its trainer, before Norman dived gracefully out of the way.

Blaze flew across the room, tackling the flailing beast out of the window as they crashed down into the garden below, the Combusken having a soft landing on the Slaking. Erik's Pokemon wasn't finished there, Blaze launched an unrelenting wave of flames across the garden, setting it alight and trapping both Pokemon inside a fiery circle.

The fires rose quickly, licking up at the sky and emitting fierce crackling sounds as both trees and flowerbeds melted in the heat. Erik and Norman stood side by side at the window, both failing to spot either of the Pokemon in the flames.

Suddenly, Blaze rocketed out, having been thrown with force by the Slaking. The beast emerging from the garden not long after, his fur covered in fire. Blaze struggled to his feet, having used up the last of his energy as the Slaking stumbled and staggered in its menacing approach, before collapsing on the floor as it was consumed by flames. Erik quickly recalled Blaze into his Pokeball, he had beaten his father.

Erik didn't know quite how to react, a rush of emotion overcoming him as Norman stood in stunned silence. He had beaten his father fair and square in battle, but had also lost friends whilst doing so. He wanted to jump for joy and touch the sky, sigh wholeheartedly with relief and break down in tears, all at the same time.

For the last few years he had dreamed of this very moment, and each time he expected to be elated when it finally happened, but now it was here he just felt shallow. Norman was defeated, but it seemed to Erik that any chance of having his old father come back to him was now gone.

"Well done, my son." Norman extended a hand out as he stared Erik directly in the eyes.

"Just hand over the badge," Erik replied, refusing his father's hand.

"Okay, but there's something I also wish to show you." Norman handed over the badge, a grey object in the shape of two interlinked circles, one sat neatly atop the other. "Follow me," Erik's father continued, gesturing to his son with a strong wave of his hand as he lifted the metal trapdoor with the other, and descended down the newly revealed staircase.

Erik followed, the stairway was steep and short, his feet hanging precariously over the edge of each step as he held onto the walls to either side with his hands to stop himself from falling down into the dark abyss his father was seemingly leading him into.

A sharp creaking sound pierced Erik's ears, the sound being shortly followed by a dull light penetrating the darkness from the door Norman had just opened. Erik followed his father into the room, which looked to be Norman's bedroom, with a double bed accompanied by an oak desk, topped with candles, papers and pens at the far wall.

A large man sat on a leather chair, facing the desk. Erik could only see the back of him but from what he could tell he looked to be aged around forty or fifty, possessing a bulky frame comprised entirely of muscle, with chestnut brown hair which was short and finely cropped.

"Norman," the man spoke, a voice laced with authority. "And from the extra set of footsteps, I presume young Erik has beaten you."

"He did," Norman replied, standing aside and letting Erik take centre stage as the man ascended from the chair. Turning around, Erik noticed a familiar face, one which embodied menacing features with narrow, dark eyes. The man wore a jet black suit, with purple undershirt and tie, a large letter "R" above his left breast. It was Kanto's Foreign Minister.

"It's good to see you again, Erik," a smile cracking the man's features as he spoke, his piercing eyes judging Erik. "Giovanni, if you didn't remember."

"Why is the Foreign Minister wearing a Team Rocket outfit?" Thoughts echoed around Erik's mind, the notion of his dad working for the criminal organisation stung his brain like an angry Beedrill. "Or maybe," a new thought arose, "Giovanni is the illusive leader of Team Rocket. He would certainly be in a position powerful enough to influence them."

"Why so silent?" Giovanni added. "I would hazard a guess at your thoughts? You're wondering why the Foreign Minister would be wearing a Team Rocket uniform, correct?"

Erik hesitated before answering the elected official. "Yes," he finally replied.

"Because I lead them. Your Father joined us a number of years ago. In fact, we sent him to Hoenn to influence things over here."

Erik was stunned. "What.." was the only reply he could muster. "Why?.." he meekly continued, he knew his father wasn't exactly an honourable man, but he never would have thought he would be working with Rocket.

"Because he wanted what's best for you, Erik," the boss replied instantly, a wry smirk remaining on his face throughout.

"How is your organisation having influence over Hoenn of any benefit to me?!" Erik snapped, more out of surprise than anger.

"Oh no we don't just influence it, we control it," Giovanni's smirk grew wider with each word he uttered.

"You're the authority of Hoenn?!"

"Two thirds of it. You see, the authorities of this region are made up of three parts. Firstly, the Trainer's Union, which is comprised of the eight Gym Leaders. Secondly, a foreign diplomat, where I used my influence over in Kanto to take the role. Finally, the Corporate Partnership, led by a certain Mr. Stone."

"You see, Son," Norman followed on. "Any law or rule passed within Hoenn has to have a majority vote, out of three voters. Giovanni and Mr. Stone are two of those voters, whereas a member of the Trainer's Union volunteers for the role, which I make sure to always be myself through bribes and favours to the other Gym Leaders."

"But what about the common people? Do we not get any say?" Erik asked of them, but Giovanni just laughed before he could finish asking a plethora of further questions.

"The common people?!" Team Rocket's leader chuckled. "Why would they have any power?!"

A thousand arguments entered Erik's mind, but two questions at the forefront of his mind had still been left unanswered. "Why tell me all this? And who are Team Magma really?" he enquired.

"Team Magma are our strikeforce over here," Giovanni replied. "We have established a Pokemon monopoly over Kanto and Johto, and we now wish to move onto Hoenn. They have two tasks, to increase the landmass of this pathetic little island to make it more hospitable for us humans, and to cause general mayhem so we can force votes to control who is able to use Pokemon in the region."

"But so far," Norman continued again. "Almost every time to question has been put to a vote, one of the other Gym Leaders has passionately wanted to volunteer to deny the proposal. We are getting closer though with every mischievous deed Magma commits. We've even managed to ban trainers without a badge"

"What about Team Aqua? Are they your minions too?" Erik enquired to the two, he could feel his anger surging from a pit in his stomach.

"They were a minor mishap," Giovanni answered. "Roxanne and Mr. Stone voted them in to help counter Magma after the break-in back at Rustboro. They are nothing to worry about, however."

"You didn't answer my other question," Erik snapped again. "Why tell me this."

"Do you not remember our conversation when we were at your parents' wedding?" Giovanni replied, the smirk suddenly disappearing off his face; he now looked at Erik with complete seriousness. "You are to be my successor, that's why you were moved to Hoenn, why you've had so much help along the way. Norman here was supposed to kill Blaze to toughen you, then your training to join us would've been complete."

"Wait!" Norman interrupted before Erik could reply. "You promised me that you'd leave Erik out of this!"

"Norman, you have allowed this all, you gave him Blaze and led him along our path. Deep down, you've always known that this course of action is what's best for your son."

Erik thought his dad was going to reply, but Norman just dropped his head and said nothing. He could feel raw anger surging through his body, his whole life had been controlled and manipulated by Giovanni and Team Rocket. All his achievements, his successes, and his losses; was it all part of some grand plan laid down by the mafia boss?

"I have told Maxie you would join and lead Team Magma when you are ready. The fool believed me," Giovanni continued, noticing the silence. "Our true intention is to release Groudon back into the world, an ancient Pokemon of untold power that we can control and manipulate. With his power we would be unstoppable, however, we are yet to find where he is buried, or how to release him. We believe some orbs could possibly hold the key to this."

"What would you want me to do?" Erik asked.

"To make sure Magma and Maxie are completely buried within the rubble when Groudon explodes back into this world. Their job will be complete, and we can leave no trace of our involvement. Then, you will be ready to fully join Team Rocket as my second in command."

"I will never join you!" Erik growled. "Now you've told me your plans, I will do all I can to stop you!"

"Brave," Giovanni replied with complete calm, like he was expecting this reply. "But foolish." The Rocket boss then turned to face Erik's father. "You see Norman, you fail to kill Blaze, and this is what happens. Oh well, we have a plan B," he finished, facing Erik once again.

"What plan B?!" Erik retorted.

"In case you failed to comply, Norman has been training another for this role. He's not as strong as you, but with our guidance and the power of Groudon handed to him upon release, he will eventually become unstoppable."

"Who?!"

"A friend of yours by the name of Wally. In fact, you aided us by helping him capture Ralts." Giovanni turned to Erik's father. "Make up for your failure of killing Blaze, and kill the boy's Ralts instead, it will harden him up, making him vulnerable to conversion to our side."

His friend's name screamed around Erik's head like a klaxon repeating the word "Wally!".

"I've got to save Wally before they can get to him!" he thought, before bolting out of the room and back to where he had last seen the green-haired boy.
 

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Quite a father versus son battle there! I still quite like how you take advantage of the surroundings (the couches for instance). While I'm scratching my head a bit how a Slaking can soak in fire without an ability or item (are there any items that can absorb fire? lol), realistically it's not hard to picture Norman to do that. I do feel sorry for Bounce being dead and the other Pokemon pretty much being exhausted.

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Chapter Seventeen - Revenge​



Erik stormed through Petalburg Woods on the back of his bicycle, feeling slightly dirty within himself whenever he recalled the fact the vehicle was purchased for him by Giovanni; but that wasn't important. What mattered now was finding Wally before anyone else could, making sure his green-haired friend couldn't be manipulated by Team Rocket like he almost was.

Emerging from the forest onto the northern section of Route 104, he could spot no evidence of Wally ever being here. It had been far too long; the battle with his father and talk with Giovanni had eaten up an entire afternoon, and now his friend could be anywhere. The only remaining option Erik could call on was a visit to Wally's uncle in Verdanturf Town, but first, there was something he had to do. Route 115 awaited.

The last time he was here, Erik had exited Meteor Falls and descended the hilly pathway southwards towards Rustboro, he was in too much of a rush back then to catch one of the inhabitants of the route. This time, he made his ascent up the mountain, a steep climb leading him closer to the Falls, sour memories entering his mind as he took a left as the a gap in the hills forked, with the cave exit at the end of the right hand trail.

A short trek through a congregation of trees forced Erik's miniscule journey to conclude at a bright open meadow, with flocks of wild Swablu, Jigglypuff and Tailow littering the open grass field filled with yellow and white flowers that gleamed in the sun's powerful rays.

Flickering his gaze through all the wild Pokemon, he locked eyes with one of the Swablu, the creature swatting the air smoothly with cotton wings. A rustling in the trees behind Erik caused his attention to snap backwards, seeing a bush move slightly as his vision remained fixed on the movement. He felt as if he were being followed the entire time, but could never even manage a glimpse of the perpetrator, until a sudden noise made him jump out of his skin.

An innocent chirp came from directly behind him, the Swablu that Erik had immediately bonded the moment their eyes met now hovered by his side. He turned slightly, and held out a hand to the Pokemon currently swiping from side to side through the air. The Swablu seemed to float towards it, cotton wings motionless in the air as it bashed its nose playfully against Erik's hand.

"Welcome to the team, Cotton."

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Erik stared at the waters of Route 118 with fear as if the calm river which split the route in half beckoned him underneath once more. The last time he was here, he had attempted to surf across the waters on the back of Lady, ending up sinking and almost drowning as his old Tentacool was unable to bear his weight on her back. He had not yet caught a Pokemon along the route, as he watched the lake in judgement for the strongest swimmer.

Hordes of Magikarp swam weakly around the waters like children going for their first paddle, side by side with legions of Tentacool. The jellyfish-like creatures swam with slightly more conviction, with one in particular leading the group alongside a significantly smaller version, possibly the leader's son or daughter.

Erik took a step back, then ran forward to gain as much momentum as possible as he launched a Pokeball into the air, the capsule moving through the route like a homing missile towards its target. The lead Tentacool spotted it coming, throwing a tentacle into the air like a whip to swat the Pokeball away, but the defensive swipe only served to knock the device onto the leader's child, the ball opening and absorbing the young Tentacool inside, before zipping through the air back to Erik.

Erik glanced at the Pokeball as it returned to his hand, the magnetic field around it being drawn to the wrist device given to all trainers. The device's own focused magnetism turning itself on, pointed at the direction of the ball, once the new capture had been secured inside. It was his third Tentacool, so optimistically named it 'Lucky', after his mother's favourite phase, "Third time lucky".

Something caught the corner of his eye, causing him to look upwards. The entire army of Tentacool charged towards him, two dozen or so of the wild Pokemon all angered by his actions. Erik saw only one option, he ran.

To cross these waters he would need to battle the army of Pokemon with an army of his own, and luckily, he knew exactly where to get one.

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Erik stood at the lake's edge, the calm waters stirring into life once the legion of Tentacool spotted their enemy hovering by the waterside. He was flanked to either side by Leaf and Dancer. Blaze, Cotton and Snappy waiting behind as their backup, with Rocky and Lucky together in the daycare centre. Erik had two Pokeballs clenched in either hand as the army of Tentacools spotted the trainer and began their charge through the water towards him once more.

He threw the Pokeballs into the water, containing four of the five Pokemon that Erik had caught along the Route 105, 106, 107 and 108 and on an abandoned ship, the fifth remaining in his pocket for now. He had spent the previous day training with those Pokemon, teaching them to swim with him on their backs, two were weak and could hardly fight, but the other two proved strong, easily able to bear his weight and fight at the same time.

The first of the quartet to emerge back out was a Wailmer, named "Dive", who blasted a few of the charging Tentacool away with powerful foamy liquid, before submerging itself once more. The Tentacool halted at their leader's command, as they search the waters for the rest of Erik's Pokemon.

Two Magikarps leapt up at the same time, Ship and Splash, but were instantly taken down by the army, more whip-like tentacles wrapping around them and strangling the life out of the famously weak water Pokemon.

"Why did I have to capture two of those things," Erik groaned, "Pip! Save them!" he shouted to the next Pokeball he threw out. A Wingull howled as it entered the watery battlefield, swiping down on the Tentacools as it deftly dodged their whips whilst launching pecks. Ship was saved, but Splash was almost defeated, breath sucked out of the Magikarp entirely by the Tentacools' leader.

The lead Tentacool was suddenly grabbed by a set of tentacles, one of his own seemingly turning against him. Erik wasn't fooled though, this Tentacool was his own, "Horde", who saved Splash at the last moment.

Dive emerged once more, and together with Pip sweeped up the remaining dozen or so Tentacools, who were powerless to resist without their leader. Horde joined them after the leader had been taken care of underwater. Erik was victorious, there would be no resistance to him swimming across the lake now, and he could do so on either Dive or Horde. It was a relatively easy victory, as it usually was against wild Pokemon, who without a trainer lacked any sort of desire, drive or direction. The only negative from the whole situation for Erik was the fact he couldn't shake the feeling that the entire time he was being watched.

He recalled his Pokemon, placing six Pokeballs onto his belt; Blaze, Snappy, Leaf, Dancer, Horde and Cotton. Once six were attached to his belt, the other Pokeballs in his hand disappeared into storage, he was able to get away with using more than six Pokemon as he didn't battle a trainer and kept only five Pokeballs attached to his belt, with both Pip and Cotton in each pocket. Now was the time to cross the lake on the back of Horde, the Tentacool easily handling the weight of Erik on his back.

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The surf to the golden sands of the route's far side passed by far more quickly than Erik expected, only half a minute had passed as Horde glided along the water's surface. Erik laughed as he felt a tentacle softly wrap around his lower leg, until the whip suddenly tightened, pulling him under the water as another tentacle lashed out and struck Horde.

Erik had thought it was his own Tentacool playing with him, but now he stared face to face with the leader from earlier, the creature locking into his eyes with pure rage. Erik panicked as a tight grip wrapped around his flailing right arm, thinking it was the Tentacool's second whip, before the grip hoisted him out of the lake and back onto the beach. The lead Tentacool was dragged up by the force and sent sprawling into the warm sands, as Erik looked in shock at his saviour; iconic green hair catching his eye before anything else.

"Hello again. I remember you, Erik," came a voice so calm and assured it seemed to soothe the raging lake behind them.

"Steven," Erik replied, climbing to his feet and shaking himself down in an attempt to release water from his drenched clothes. "Thank you."

"Not to worry, you must have angered those Tentacool," Steven laughed, a sound as soft as the sand they stood on. "On your way to Fortree City I assume? I always knew you had it in you to defeat your father and obtain your badges."

"You did?" Erik replied, shocked at how the man seemingly knew so much, although he was Mr. Stone's grandson after all, the head of one of the three authorities of Hoenn.

"You gave off an impressive aura when we first met, a drive and passion I rarely see in trainers nowadays. Yes, I knew you would always go far." Steven kept his steely eyes locked on Erik the whole time, making the young trainer feel slightly intimidated.

"I'm not that good, honestly," came Erik's modest reply. He felt himself itching the back of his head with one arm, and was almost certain he had gone red from embarrassment.

Steven just laughed. "But you are. Pokemon respond to their trainer's love, they buy into their goals. Much like children, if a Pokemon both loves and respects their parent, or in this case, trainer, they'll obey without second thought, believing their mentor to be guiding them along the right path. Pokemon channel your emotions and the stronger the bond between you, the more they'll be able to push themselves beyond their own limits, just for their trainers.

"So you're saying, the bond between my Pokemon and I is strong?"

"Incredibly so, I can sense your passion and determination. Yes a Pokemon gains strength and experience the more they battle, but their true power comes from their trainer. If you are set in your goals Erik, and treat them with the same love and respect they show you, nothing will be able to stop you."

"Then why are Magma grunts so weak, they have a goal they are set to?"

"They are followers, not leaders. Pokemon cannot be led through force, or fear, or even just care and love. They need someone who can guide and lead them. A further reason is that Magma use fire and poison types only, some people can only relate to a certain type. Other's are at their greatest strength when using another, for instance, I relate to Steel-typed Pokemon. I love their unbreakable determination and raw grit, so my bond is greater with a Pokemon of that type."

"What about me, I seem to relate the same to everyone?"

"Some trainers are like that, usually the strongest ones. They don't differentiate between types, or strength, they love their Pokemon the same no matter what they are."

The advice hit Erik like a ton of bricks. All the strongest trainers he had faced were well respected in their own right, they were leaders, of Pokemon Gyms or organisations, and all cared deeply for their Pokemon. Erik had always been a determined and driven character, with an overall goal to firstly knock his Dad off his perch, and to become the Pokemon Champion. Now, he also desired to take down Team Rocket for the pain they had caused both him and his family.

"Thanks for the advice, but why help me?" he enquired.

"You seem like a good kid, Erik. Besides, I might need your help soon, I'm searching for a Pokemon named Latias, a huge flying beast with four legs, white at the front and crimson at the back. Once I find it, I will come looking for you, will you help me?"

"With what?"

"You'll see, I can't reveal too much until the right time, I'll see you then." And with that, Steven flew off on the back of a released Skarmory. Erik still had no idea what his goals were, or if he was anything more than just Mr. Stones's grandson.

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Heavy rain lashed down upon Erik's face, his clothes feeling ten times as heavy as they normally were. It was a strange occurence of events, as soon as he had entered the route, he noticed bucket loads of rain poured down; whereas just behind him on Route 118 there was not a drop to be seen, in fact, it was rather sunny.

The pathway through to Fortree City, the location of the sixth gym, was carpeted with grass almost as tall as Erik was, the thickets continuing as far as he could see. When he walked up to it, he could barely fit his head over, nor could he see the wild Pokemon coming, which he had unknowingly stepped on. The wild Gloom tackled him to the floor.

Erik grabbed the creature and wrestled it to the floor himself, turning the tables on the Pokemon as the rain continued crashing down, drops as big as pellets. Holding the Gloom down with one hand, he reached into his bag with another, fumbling around until he found a Pokeball and capturing the wild Pokemon, naming it "Rain". He climbed to his feet and wiped the sweat off his brow, relieved that Gloom were physically weak and this one in particular had no bad intentions other than a small revenge for stepping on its toe, otherwise the grass type would've released spores at him.

The new Pokeball zapped into thin air as it went into storage, with Erik releasing Blaze and Leaf from their own capsules to help guide him through the overwhelmingly tall grass with Dancer acting as his rear guard through what was almost like an open-skied jungle or forest, rain lashing down at the group with each passing moment.

Erik pushed his way through a bundle of grass, then another, slowly trudging through muddy ground which felt more like an ice rink.

Suddenly, a loud rustle came from his left, causing the group to stop suddenly and prepare for another fight with a wild Pokemon, but this rustle seemed too large to be another Gloom or the like. Listening intently, no further sound could be heard, like the stalker had stopped moving when Erik did. As he began pushing forward again, the rustling restarted almost in synchronization.

"Run," he whispered to his team, the four of them bolting northwards, hoping they could be clear of the grass and their pursuers soon enough. It hurt his pride to run from conflict, but this was a foe he couldn't see, who seemed to be watching his every move; fear had taken over. The thickets cleared abruptly, leading Erik and his Pokemon to a clearing which proceeded a lake of raging water, the only way across being a single wooden bridge that seemed even more slippery than the mud they had just ran across.

"Blaze, flush them out with fire," he roared to his Combusken, who responded by blasting flames at the tall grass, to no avail, the torrential rain just washing out the newly made fires. "Okay, we wait here for our stalker, where we can see it," he decided, sweat trickling down his rain-soaked face.

The thickets rustled violently as Erik faced towards them, prepared for everything and anything that could emerge from within. Two shadowy figures could now be seen, holding something, as they moved at ease through the tall grass, stopping their movements the instant they caught sight of Erik standing and watching. He had obviously outrun them and they had lost sight of him. As the couple realised they'd been caught, they stepped out into the clearing, leaving Erik to spot two familiar faces; Gabby and Ty.

"You two.." he growled, his voice so quiet it got lost in the pattering of raindrops. "Why are you following me?!" he followed, rather more fiercely than before.

"We've been promoted," Gabby answered, in a matter-of-fact tone. "Our roles are now to follow you, conducting reports on your actions, and to show our viewers what a villainous little child you are."

"The gig's up, though," Ty followed, in his usual relaxed tone. "Our orders came from high up, and included a clause that if we were to be caught by you then our mission would be canceled. There's no way you would give us enough negative footage if you knew we were watching, you'll be on your guard and act unnaturally in any situations that arise."

"So we're going to make you a deal," Gabby snapped.

"We are?" Ty continued, seemingly shocked at her words, but a quick stomp on his foot by his partner caused the cameraman to quickly change his tone. "We are!"

"Last time we made a deal, you never held up your end!" Erik growled.

"Will you two let me speak!" Gabby shouted, her voice like a thunderclap in the rain. "We cannot continue now that you've caught us, so we challenge you to a battle. If you win, we will have no choice but to cancel and probably end up having our careers ended. If we win, you must give us an exclusive interview, reading directly from a script that we write for you."

Erik pondered for a moment, he didn't have to battle them, he could just walk away now and that would be the end of the duo. But on the other hand, the two were weak trainers, and this was his chance to get revenge for their actions previously.

"Deal," he announced, a wry smile appearing on Gabby's face, her male counterpart setting down his camera to reveal six Pokeballs attached to his belt.

"You can't back out now, Erik!" Gabby declared. "The authorities gave us each six Pokemon in order to protect ourselves from you when they gave us this task. If we couldn't frame you, we'd end you another way; in battle!"

Erik considered backing out, but refused, he'd never go back on his word. He grabbed Snappy and Dancers' Pokeballs, lobbing the capsules through the rain to face Gabby's Loudred and Ty's Magneton.

Loudred made the first move, launching a sound-based attack at Dancer; a piercing noise controlled directly by the creature's vocal chords. The Pikachu moved swiftly after tentatively waiting to see what the reporters' Pokemon would do, aiming an electrical attack at the beast's gaping mouth, frying the Pokemon from the inside and paralysing its body, Dancer taking damage from the soundwaves in the process.

"Now let's see how powerful these borrowed Pokemon are!" Ty declared, and he wasn't disappointed. Magneton sent electrical currents zapping through the air, the electricity charging further and further each time it collided with a raindrop, before crashing into Snappy's rain-soaked skin. The ground type was normally immune to electrical attacks, but the Magneton's raw power combined with the rain vaporised the Trapinch in one hit.

Erik took no chances, sending Blaze into the fray in order to melt the foe's steel shell as the Combusken had done many times beforehand. Dancer followed the Magneton's lead, finishing off the paralysed Loudred with electrical sparks, with Blaze rolling from side to side to avoid the Magneton, slowly closing in on his target.

The Combusken would have to get near enough to his foe so that the rain couldn't extinguish his attacks. Blaze closed in, but that's just what the Magneton was hoping for, the Combusken couldn't dodge an attack from right in front of him.

Blaze realised the threat, stopping himself mid-leap, but it was too late, he had gotten too close. The Magneton prepared its attack, before suddenly being tackled into the lake behind it by Dancer, the lake's surface conducting the electrical blast and frying the Magneton. The Pikachu managed to avoid being dragged down with it, clinging onto the ledge by one paw, before being helped up by Blaze.

"Right!" Gabby roared. "I'm done being nice. We will take you down with two one-on-one battles instead of doubling up! Ty, wear him down then I'll finish him off when his Pokemon are weak," she demanded, Erik noticing that she too had five Pokeballs remaining.

"Whatever you say," Ty said, sounding exhausted of his colleague. The cameraman grabbed a Pokeball, but instead of launching it into the sky, he threw it into the lake, to Erik's brief bewilderment.

A huge leviathan-like creature emerged from the water's surface, roaring so fiercely the ground beneath Erik's feet shook. He heard of Gyarados before, but had not yet encountered one of them. He was in awe of the creature but wasn't entirely sure what it evolved from.

Dancer remained on the battlefield, launching electrical strikes into the lake, with Erik hoping the electricity combining with both the rain and the lake to prove too much for even this huge leviathan. His wishes proved true, the Gyarados was fried as electricity licked up the edges of the lake and up into the sky.

A Pelipper was Ty's next choice, Dancer immediately combining electricity with rain to zap the water and flying dual type out of the air, leaving Ty with just three Pokemon remaining. A Breloom was to be his fourth fighter.

Erik sent Cotton out, knowing that the Swablu's flying attacks gave him a double advantage over both Breloom's fighting and grass types.

Cotton immediately used his aerial dominance effectively, the Breloom agilely swatting the air with closed fists in an attempt to crash a blow into the Swablu, but Cotton deftly dodged it each time, swiping at the helpless Breloom below with both beak and wings.

Cotton pecked at the Breloom, flew back up, spun back around and began his descent for yet another attack, dodging a further fist, and aiming a fifth peck at Ty's Pokemon. Erik watched in horror as Ty's Breloom had tricked the Swablu, feinting an attack with one fist before following in with the other, a paw crashing into and knocking the life out of Cotton, the Swablu harmlessly falling to the ground.

Erik sent out Horde next, the Tentacool using its poison-typed advantage to blast venom at the weakened foe, but the Breloom survived the attack, leaving Erik to realise that he had made the same mistake twice. He had sent out two raw and untested Pokemon against Gabby and Ty's powerful creatures, and as the Breloom leapt off the ledge and grabbed onto the Tentacool, he envisioned losing his third Pokemon in the battle.

The Breloom landed multiple blows, causing the two to sink underwater where Ty's creature presumably continued his assault as bubbles rapidly hit the lake's surface. Then stopped.

Seconds passed, then a minute, and still no sign of either of the two Pokemon. After a further minute Erik had just about given up hope. Until Horde emerged; weak, but alive.

The only Pokemon Erik had left that were in any condition for battle were Leaf, Blaze and Dancer, with Ty having two remaining and Gabby five. It was going to be close, and Erik was unsure whether he could actually beat both of them, he couldn't quit halfway through a battle though, the device around his wrist would send a signal back to whoever was in charge of trainers. He could refuse battle with the two as they weren't official trainers, but as soon as he entered battle with anyone, the device buzzed into action, registering the fight as an official battle.

A Seviper was Ty's penultimate Pokemon, the poison typed snake hissing aggressively towards Dancer. The Pikachu sent repeated paralysing waves of electricity through the rain, the attacks boosted by the droplets and once they hit the Seviper, it both damaged and paralysed the creature. Ty's Pokemon stopped and remained as still as stone, both Erik and Dancer freezing as they watched in concern as to what the snake's next move was

The Seviper began shedding its skin, the paralysis going with it as the snake emerged with a new coat of armour. Then it leapt through the air at the shocked Pikachu. Ty's Pokemon caused significant damage to Dancer, swiping at her with poisonous fangs as the electric-typed fighter attempted to dodge the attacks in vain.

Erik made sure to take the first opportunity he could to withdraw Dancer, sending out Blaze in her place. Seviper leapt at Blaze, the Combusken unable to get out of the way in time as the snake landed painfully on him, the two crashing to the ground with Seviper on top, Blaze grabbed the viper's mouth with both arms, poison dripping off razor-sharp teeth.

Erik's Pokemon was losing the wrestling match, the snake slowly but surely overpowering Blaze. Erik felt it again, the same feeling that overcame him in the long grass; fear. Fear that he would lose his oldest friend, it was the same powerful emotion that threatened to swallow him whole each time it looked as if Blaze was in perilous danger.

"Pokemon channel your emotions and the stronger the bond between you, the more they'll be able to push themselves beyond their own limits, just for their trainers." Steven's words spoke through Erik's mind, he had to be strong, that way Blaze could be strong too.

"You can do this Blaze, I believe in you!" he roared, a voice full of passion and fire.

The Combusken slowly turned the tables, overpowering the Seviper and grabbing it by the tail, nonplussed by the continuous jabs from the sharp point at the end of the snake's body. Blaze span around, swinging Ty's Pokemon with it until he generated enough force to hurl the Seviper through the air, sending it rocketing into the lake.

Fortunately, the Seviper couldn't swim, but as the adrenaline in Blaze's body dissipated, Erik realised that his Combusken had been paralysed by the blows from the snake's tail.

Horde and Dancer seemed too weak for battle, Blaze was paralysed. The only Pokemon that Erik had remaining to him was Leaf, against Ty's Vigoroth and Gabby's entire team. He had to believe, in order to drive his Pokemon through the battle.

"Go get them, Leaf," he whispered, as the Gloom marched out to meet the normal-typed Vigoroth.

Ty's Pokemon moved rapidly, swiping continuously at the Gloom with sharpened claws. Leaf struggled to release sleeping powder into the air, but what spores she did emit, the Vigoroth just shook off, only stopping its repeated blows to catch its breath, before slashing once more at Erik's Pokemon.

The weakened Leaf took advantage of Vigoroth's next breath to launch draining spores into the air which sapped her foe's health. Ty's Pokemon moved in for the kill, Erik watching the whole thing happen in what seemed like slow motion. The creature threw forward its arm, claws like knives as they moved inches away from Leaf's face, and stopped there. Vigoroth froze.

Realisation hit Erik like a slap in the face. It wasn't sleeping powder that Leaf tried launching into the air, it was disguised pheromones, she had learnt a new trick. To disguise her spores as to trick the opposing Pokemon

Vigoroth was immobilised by love, and withdrew his arm. Leaf took immediate advantage, ramming into Ty's Pokemon and sending it crashing down the ledge and into the lake below.

"You didn't teach your Pokemon to swim?!" Gabby complained. "Well luckily, all of mine can either swim or fly, and guess what? Erik's Pokemon are all weak. This will be easy for me."

Ty stepped aside to let his female counterpart pick up where he left off, as she sent a Dustox into the field of battle, Erik replying with the only Pokemon he felt was still fighting fit; Blaze.

The Combusken moved quickly, rolling forwards to dodge an aerial assault then easily burning the bug to a crisp, the creature frying before the rain could put the fire out. Blaze was enraged, channeling Erik's emotions, he had turned his fear into anger, using that emotion instead to fuel his Pokemon in battle.

Gabby sent another Dustox into the fray, which managed to get off a psychic attack on the paralysed Blaze, before it too was burnt to a crisp. Her third Pokemon, a Beautifly, was left to the same fate. A combination of Erik realising his true potential as a trainer along with Gabby being a rather weak one herself.

Instead of feeling like a scared child, Erik now felt a man, defeating his father and taking Steven's advice had allowed him to step out of Norman's shadow and become his own person. His mind was clear, he had become one with his Pokemon. Suddenly battle tactics, processes and knowledge filled the gap in his mind where his insecurities once lay. He remembered that a collection of small red berries, named Cheri Berries, in his bag could cure paralysis in Pokemon.

He fed the exhausted Blaze a Cheri Berry, the paralysis instantly curing, but the Combusken had expended too much energy whilst afflicted had worn Erik's oldest friend out, as Gabby threw her next Pokemon into play, a Masquerain. Erik switched in Dancer not only for her type advantage, but to see if he could channel his new found strength through her as well.

But the bond with Dancer wasn't as complete as it was with Blaze, the Masquerain moving quickly to strike Erik's Pikachu with an aerial attack, knocking the weakened Dancer to the ground.

Dancer struggled to get up as Gabby's insect circled around for another attack, the small but colourful bug and flying dual type emitting an irritating buzzing sound as its wings collided with each other.

Erik remained calm, he had to. He focused his thoughts, remembering his journey with Dancer, the connection the two had made after her initial reluctance to join him in his journey. He cleared any thoughts out of his mind apart from those of his Pikachu, and his determination to win the fight.

The Masquerain flew back in for the kill, flying at incredible speeds to use the generated force as an assault on its foe, until it was zapped out of the air by Dancer's retaliation, the Pikachu having climbed back to her feet and launching an electrical strike, the heavy rain conducting the power for the Masquerain to fly into like a bug swatter.

Erik had no choice but to resend Blaze into battle, against Gabby's Ninjask. Nincada's evolution zoomed around the battlefield as fast as a bolt of lightning, with Blaze struggling to keep up with its speed. A slash from the Ninjask bought the Combusken to his knees, with the bug type Pokemon easily dodging each and every blast of fire.

"Blaze," Erik shouted, an idea popping into his mind. "Surround yourself with fire, the rain will put it out but not before the Ninjask gets caught in the fire spin."

The Combusken immediately responded to his trainer, breathing fire and spinning in circles on the spot, using the last of his energy to do so. The Ninjask was caught in the flames, and once the rain had quenched the flames, Erik could see that the bug was no more, he had beaten the duo and gotten his revenge on both Gabby and Ty.

"Victory was there on a plate for you Gabby, and you still couldn't grasp it," mocked Erik. "You truly are an awful Pokemon trainer. Ty on the other hand, gave me a good challenge."

Ty smiled at the praise. His partner however, stormed off back into the tall grass, throwing insults back at Erik; labelling him evil, naive, and screaming that he had ruined her career.

"It was never anything personal, Erik," Ty called out to him, walking over to shake his hand. "I've always wanted to be a top cameraman, and just carried out the jobs given to me. Don't worry, I think you're a good guy really, and besides, that's Gabby out of my life!" he laughed as he picked up his camera and walked off into the grass, Erik accepting that the two were now finally out of his life.

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A trip to the Pokemon Centre, followed by the withdrawal of both Pip and Dive from storage had led Erik over the bridge and to the northern section of Route 119, where he immediately heard screams located from the glass building ahead of him.

The weather institute loomed beyond, with a bridge closing the gap between two cliff edges to his right that led off to Fortree City.

The institute contained three floors, and was constructed entirely of glass, allowing Erik to see that Maxie, Mylos and Grant stood at the top floor demanding something from a gentleman and two lab assistants. Cecilia stood on the ground floor battling two Magma grunts, but as Erik tried to move in to assist, a huge roar came from overhead.

A large red and white Pokemon flew overhead; Latias, with Steven riding atop.
 
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