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Check to see if your roleplay has been accepted! v.2

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The warden's Pokemon: Blazing Sun/Tranquil Moon and IC thread is accepted!

Charizard_Man's Pocket||MONSTERS: Destiny Rises is accepted!

~Genevieve~'s IC thead is accepted!

Mr. Mammoth's IC thread is accepted!

Rafeal_p's Pokemon: Unova Masters is declined.
You are lacking a rules section for one. And two, I still believe you need to develop your story line more, like a suggested last time you posted the roleplay. And three, I'm quite reluctant to accept another roleplay by you as last time, many of the posts broke the four line rule. If you adjust your storyline, add a rules section and promise that you will keep your quality up with the new 100 word rule and make sure everyone participating abides by it too, I may accept this roleplay again.
 

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Leaf Storm's How to Train Your Pokemon is accepted.

KululuCraze's The Rifts of Time and Space is declined.
When we post roleplays on this site, you have to include the storyline, a sign up template, a rules section and a rating. Please repost your roleplay with all of these. d:

KingKaos PokeRebellion is accepted!

Charizard_Man's IC thread is accepted!

Red's Hawt Chibi Pelippers' Bright Lights and IC thread is accepted!
 

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Flag's ... um....
Try posting this again, but in the Roleplay Discussion Thread! That's where this is more appropriate. ;D

Rafael P's IC thead is accepted!

danaxe's immense power is declined.
Alright, so when writing plots, you really need to develop them more. Plots really should be way longer than your average post for one. Explain who Team Terra is. What kind of war are they starting? Why did they come together? What do they want? Why is the player involved in this roleplay? Check out The Rules for guides on creating roleplays. Also, your spelling and grammar is... well, there is no nice way to put this; quite terrible. Learn up on these things and try to create the best thing you can before submitting a roleplay!

WolfOfEve's Zelda: Dimensional Link is accepted!
 

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The Cookie's Vox Populi is accepted!

Khawill's Peacekeeper's Academy is accepted!

jasonwolf's EXO is accepted!

jjx8672's Kanto: The Journey Begins is declined.
Your backstory doesn't really explain much, there needs to be more to it! How are the players involved? Who is this new threat? Explain into more detail!~
 

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{Swan}'s Game of Luck is accepted!

WolfOfEve's reposted OOC thread is accepted!

IceFyr1928's Pokemon: Revolution is declined.
It's fine, it just needs a rules section!

jasonwolf's IC thread is accepted!

manson1996's ... um, okay.
Submitting a roleplay thread around here works a little differently. I suggest reading the Rules thread to get a better idea of what to post.
 

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IceFye1928's Pokemon: Revolution is accepted!

ThatIceman's ... okay, so, uh
This probably isn't the right place for this. Probably in the Other Chat section!

jjx8672's Kanto: The Journey Begins is declined.
It's fine, just needs a rules section. Sorry for not replying to your PM. It's also fine if you want to do things like you originally intended. Just make sure you outline what the player will be doing!

Vato and ytfeL's SCHOOL YEARS and IC is accepted!

Steller the Raichu's One way Out is declined.
The storyline is quite vague. Maybe you should explain this Quroza, why it hit Earth and what else it impacted. Why it radiates energy like it does? Why Sentor wants to take over the world and etc.

Khawill's IC is accepted!
 

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danaxe's confusion island is declined.
You'll need more of a plot line if you want this to go ahead. Why are these travellers sent to confusion island? Explain Team Galactic's involvement. There has to be a motive other than a 'secret'; is there untold riches? Rare Pokémon? Explain things more!

SwiftSign's Sword Art Online: Infinity Edition is accepted!

SkittyBot's Mystery Dungeon Adventures through Dreamland is declined.
You'll really need to explain this a little more; why was the player sent to this world? If you can't answer that, maybe explain their life before this. Are there any problems in this world? What are they?

Vato's POKéMON: A Journey Beyond Time & Space and IC thread is accepted!

WolfOfEve's IC thread is accepted!
 

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IceFyr1928's IC thread is accepted!


Pppgggr's Pokemon: The Walking Dead is accepted!

juniebug910's Sun and Moon, World's Collide is declined.
Your back story is stunning, but you dont really explain what the threat is now. Also, explain how the pokemon world and nippon intertwine. Unless pokemon were there from the start, worlds dont just collide for no reason!

danaxe's confusion island is declined.
You haven't changed a whole lot since last time. Though you've explained why team galactic are there, how does three pokemon like palkia, dialga and giratina live on the island? is this a newly discovered island? Your story line seems so rushed! Spend some time with it and try and develop it!

SwiftSign's IC thread is accepted!

Tman109ner's Revolution is accepted!

xcoser123...
This is roleplay, not cosplay! Try this section of the forum.

gimmiepie's Pokemon Survival Challenge is accepted!

Zacax: The Gunsmith's Pokemon: Clash of Dragons is accepted!
 

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Fuyu's The Children are Hunted is accepted!

fantasykisala's Pokemon: A Soulless World is accepted!

Xlugon Pyro's P3K Knato: Varidia Ranger Corps is accepted!

darkpokeball's Pokemon: The Pulse is accepted!

miley810's Rising Rebellion is accepted!

Miss Doronjo's I N N O C E N C E ☆ is accepted!

Crystar500's Pokemon Zombie Apocalypse is declined.
The roleplay's storyline is too vague to really hold its own. Instead of making a new RP, why don't you join this one? It's also a Pokemon Zombie RP!
 
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Pppgggr's IC thread is accepted!

Miss Doronjo's IC thread is accepted!

CJBlazer's Pokemon: Shadow Apocalypse is declined.
There's not enough depth to your storyline! Where did the virus come from? Is there a reason why these Pokemon are immune to it? Where is it set? What is the human's response to this virus? Anyway, it's very similar to a zombie type roleplay, which we already have one of. Why don't you join that?

~Genevieve~'s Legendary Guardians is declined.
You really need to describe this rebellion more and why they are chosen by Legendary Pokémon. Players have to know who they are and what they are doing before they join!

Nideous' IC thread is accepted!
 

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Detwak's Digital Destruction is declined.
The story is really vague. You'd have to explain where digimon came from in the first place, why they attacked, why they were chosen. You'd also have to explain who the new threat is and what kind they pose as normal people wouldn't fight someone just because they were 'evil'. d:

~Genevieve~'s Legendary Guardians is accepted!

Flydro's Tainted Waters: The Wrath of Suicune is accepted!

Manganum's Pokémon: Aether's Edge and IC thread is accepted!

Zero Darkness Imagination - When dreams comes true is declined.
The concept is good, but it doesn't make much sense. Why are these things happening? You'll need to explain more of a back story.
 

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OrangeNess' Professor Layton and the Gypsy Tales of Doom is declined.
As you are making a roleplay about a series outside Pokémon, you'll need to write up a backstory of Professor Layton and how puzzles and the storyline are important!

AlexOzzyCake's La Storia della Arcana Famiglia is accepted!

aipharomeo's ... okay!
This isn't the hack section, this is the roleplay section! Click here to go to the emulation boards~

Flydro's IC thread is accepted!

Ash_Ketchum123's Another New Game is accepted!
You can add in the sign-up sheet you PM'd me. d:
 

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gimmiepie's IC thread is accepted!

WolfOfEve's HYRULE The Golden Era is accepted!

aspie3000's World War Three: SI is accepted!

gimmiepie's Aeterna is accepted!

Fusion200's Adventure Time! Pararell meetings is declined.
Alright, so, when you're making a roleplay based on a series that isn't Pokémon, you need to write more of a backstory about the series so those who haven't seen it understand what it's about. Also, you need more of a plot anyway. How about you explain why it happened? How? When? Where? Why? Go into more detail! And just from a roleplayer's point of view, having people constricted to using only characters from the story isn't really appealing at all. ): Why don't you include the idea to let people create their own characters?

Ryker's The Life of a Pokémon Ranger is declined.
So you'll need to go more into depth about this new threat as well as explaining why the students are chosen to overcome this thing and just... explain things more. Same as above! How, where, when, why, who etc, etc etc.

{Swan}'s REBOOT: Game of Chance and OOC thread is accepted!

CharmingAngel30's Link Artes Exhibition : Symphony of the Graces is accepted!

Za_Destroyer's Transformers: The Dying God is declined.
Like I said to Fusion200, you need to properly explain a back story of a non-Pokémon roleplay. Also, explain the virus, how it effects Primus, who was involved in it and how it effects everyone else.

jov0006's Rising Shadows is declined.
Um... you really need to explain who these people are and how they are bad! It's like you've begun writing in the middle of the plot! Can you write a background about all the organisations? d:
 
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