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Old January 29th, 2014 (05:15 AM).
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The suspense you add in every issue is incredible. I do hope you plan around making those extra panels, because they could add detail and give more space to permit longer stories (since the Duskull one was hard to explain in just a few panels).

Also, I'd like to say that slow character reveals that you've made in the characters (like Riolu not being a complete rusher, Absol always trying to stick to the main task) are amazing. I do hope you plan more character developments!

PS - I hope the next issue has something to do with Goldeen and Poliwrath from back there.
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Old January 29th, 2014 (05:30 AM).
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Old January 29th, 2014 (06:20 AM).
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I only got to see the third issue since school wifi doesn't like me but love how it was set. Fan me :D

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Old February 1st, 2014 (04:04 PM).
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Here's Issue 29! As you can see there are 4 more panels!
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Old February 8th, 2014 (08:29 PM).
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Idk how, but these mashups of different art styles regarding backgrounds, sprites and effects are really working for you. XD Good job as always.
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Old February 10th, 2014 (08:28 AM).
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Another great couple of issues, i should check this thread more often
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Old February 10th, 2014 (12:57 PM).
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Old February 21st, 2014 (05:56 PM).
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Just caught up with this again, wowww it's gotten good. The Thieve's Guild bit was a little odd given that the thieves had no reason to bring them to the guild, but this trials thing is looking really fun! I can't wait to see the next issues :D
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Old March 14th, 2014 (12:55 PM).
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Finally Issue 31! Sorry I haven't been very active lately.
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I'm really liking your comic so far; it's an interesting read! I have one suggestion, though; maybe you could try using real in-game textboxes in your panels? They would look more complete that way, if you know what I mean. Anyway, I'm looking forward to your next issue. Can't wait to see how they deal with Hippowdon. d:
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Old March 23rd, 2014 (03:48 PM).
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another good couple of issues, good to know its still running
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Old March 26th, 2014 (03:43 AM).
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Old May 4th, 2014 (05:49 PM).
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Hey everyone! Sure has been awhile hasn't it. Well I'm giving up yet!
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Old August 21st, 2014 (06:50 AM).
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Hey guys long time no see! THE RIOLU IS RETURNING! Right now I have 3 more issues done and here's just one of them!
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Old August 23rd, 2014 (07:43 PM).
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Old August 30th, 2014 (09:54 AM).
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Well, you probably lost most of you're audience when you stopped for a while, and this sub is not very active. People don't tend to post in other threads then their own.

I don't feel like reading all the back catalog, so I started at 34. The dialogue is natural, but the progression feels weird. Everything goes incredibly fast, but it doesn't feel like there is happening that much.

I also like how it's not that static. Characters change place from frame to frame (well, mostly), and the comic feels diverse.
I would make it a little longer though, have some more room to give the characters some depth, without losing pace. And please give a summary so people can catch up.
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Old January 4th, 2015 (05:21 PM).
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Hey guys it has been awhile!... A long while.. I'm just wondering if anyone wants me to continue with this comic. Or just don't because of how long I've been gone.
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Old January 6th, 2015 (12:41 PM).
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Here, I'll post the next issue and see if anyone will still like this. If not I won't do this anymore.
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