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Old September 10th, 2010, 11:20 PM
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I've seen some great LP's on this forum (hilarious ones, too) so I decided to make one for myself. I'm not that good at making funny commentaries but I'll try my best to make this one great. Have fun everyone :D

--START--

Update 1: Start of a Horrible Adventure
(Not the game. The game's great:D)
Spoiler:

INTRO TIME!




Ack! A Gengar! Skip, skip, SKIP!
*presses A repeatedly*



Much better... Stupid Gengar...
*presses Start*



"Control" Tutorials are for squares...moving on



NEXT! (What is up with all these intro stuff)
*presses A repeatedly...again*


Whoa! How'd you get there? o_0



What do you mean "affectionately" :\



Battling what? Other people? Evil? Bacteria?
Evil people that gives off bacteria?



Uh-oh. I hope he's not gonna say what I think he's gonna say

*ponders on it for a moment*
Spoiler:

*presses A*



OH THE HORROR!


I'd better skip that part



Why do you even need to know Professor "I-eat-silly-creatures-that-are-apparently-called-Pokemon"?

Just for that I'm not telling you anything...



How the-
This man is a sorcerer of some sort...

Spoiler:










I'm scared...



Does he know sorcery, too?



Really? How come I've never met him?



I thought you were a sorcerer? How come you even forgot your own grandson's name? I'm starting to think you're a poser

OAK: Do you want this to happen to you?

Spoiler:


...Nevermind.



Great. Now you remember?

Spoiler:


I was just joking...



Woohoo! I have my own legend! Beat that, Baro!



Aaah! I didn't mean it Baro! Please spare me!



Whew! Wait, what happened to that Professor guy? Oh well. At least I'm free from his evil curse.



Time to spend my life rotting inside my room



Where's all my magazines?



And why are all my clothes the same?

That sorcerer have been messing with my stuff!



Might as well go down and get my hair all fixed.



Of course I'm up. It's four in the afternoon.



What? I'm suppose to get it for you? Go get it yourself you lazy son of a-




I can't believe you would do this to me! I'm gonna watch TV all day and there's nothing you can do about it...



...Damn it. I think my parents are in on this with that sorcerer guy. They even cut off our cable just to send me to that horrible guy. I guess I have no choice then.


Mom, I just want to tell you something important...

...

...

...

You're the worst parents ever...and it's afternoon...

Spoiler:

(The look on mom's face)


Moving on...



Since when have I lived in this place? I thought I live in Celadon City. Darn you, sorcerer!



That's it. I'm going back inside. I'm not gonna leave this house until I turn twenty or something.



Aaah! The sorcerer has enchanted our house! Now I can't get back in ever again!

(I had to restart the game. Good thing I saved when I got out.)





Whew. That was close. I have a feeling more of that will happen these coming days... I'm scared...

(Done for the first update. Hope you enjoyed! Please give feedbacks on how I did on my first LP. Thanks! :D)


Yeah. I know it's not that funny, but meh.
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Old September 11th, 2010, 10:58 AM
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Originally Posted by Ash_Ketchum123 View Post
I've seen some great LP's on this forum (hilarious ones, too) so I decided to make one for myself. I'm not that good at making funny commentaries but I'll try my best to make this one great. Have fun everyone :D

--START--

Update 1: Start of a Horrible Adventure
(Not the game. The game's great:D)
Spoiler:

INTRO TIME!




Ack! A Gengar! Skip, skip, SKIP!
*presses A repeatedly*



Much better... Stupid Gengar...
*presses Start*



"Control" Tutorials are for squares...moving on



NEXT! (What is up with all these intro stuff)
*presses A repeatedly...again*


Whoa! How'd you get there? o_0



What do you mean "affectionately" :\



Battling what? Other people? Evil? Bacteria?
Evil people that gives off bacteria?



Uh-oh. I hope he's not gonna say what I think he's gonna say

*ponders on it for a moment*
Spoiler:

*presses A*



OH THE HORROR!


I'd better skip that part



Why do you even need to know Professor "I-eat-silly-creatures-that-are-apparently-called-Pokemon"?

Just for that I'm not telling you anything...



How the-
This man is a sorcerer of some sort...

Spoiler:










I'm scared...



Does he know sorcery, too?



Really? How come I've never met him?



I thought you were a sorcerer? How come you even forgot your own grandson's name? I'm starting to think you're a poser

OAK: Do you want this to happen to you?

Spoiler:


...Nevermind.



Great. Now you remember?

Spoiler:


I was just joking...



Woohoo! I have my own legend! Beat that, Baro!



Aaah! I didn't mean it Baro! Please spare me!



Whew! Wait, what happened to that Professor guy? Oh well. At least I'm free from his evil curse.



Time to spend my life rotting inside my room



Where's all my magazines?



And why are all my clothes the same?

That sorcerer have been messing with my stuff!



Might as well go down and get my hair all fixed.



Of course I'm up. It's four in the afternoon.



What? I'm suppose to get it for you? Go get it yourself you lazy son of a-




I can't believe you would do this to me! I'm gonna watch TV all day and there's nothing you can do about it...



...Damn it. I think my parents are in on this with that sorcerer guy. They even cut off our cable just to send me to that horrible guy. I guess I have no choice then.


Mom, I just want to tell you something important...

...

...

...

You're the worst parents ever...and it's afternoon...

Spoiler:

(The look on mom's face)


Moving on...



Since when have I lived in this place? I thought I live in Celadon City. Darn you, sorcerer!



That's it. I'm going back inside. I'm not gonna leave this house until I turn twenty or something.



Aaah! The sorcerer has enchanted our house! Now I can't get back in ever again!

(I had to restart the game. Good thing I saved when I got out.)





Whew. That was close. I have a feeling more of that will happen these coming days... I'm scared...

(Done for the first update. Hope you enjoyed! Please give feedbacks on how I did on my first LP. Thanks! :D)


Yeah. I know it's not that funny, but meh.
sweet got the first post, nice LP you did great for your first LP. I like your random pictures
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Old September 13th, 2010, 03:22 AM
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sweet got the first post, nice LP you did great for your first LP. I like your random pictures
Thanks! I appreciate it a lot. Anyway, I think I'll be able to update at least twice a week. Maybe more but not less.

Without further ado (heh heh, ado :D) here's update number two!

(BTW, I may or may not be able to finish this now...)

UPDATE 2: My Rival Named Rival or I Want My Charmander!
(It's short 'cause I haven't finished this yet so, meh.)
Spoiler:



I HAS MY OWN HOUSE! I AM SO PROUD :D
(Too bad I can't go back in anymore )

Oh well, time to go around this place that Professorcerer guy sent me...


*ago*

...Why did I even decide to talk to you?






Oh-kay. That's enough talking to villagers...



"Producing great trainers", eh
Maybe I should help...

Time to check this place out...



Awww! It turns out to be a school
Now I can't help "produce" great trainers...

That teacher looks good... I'mma go ask her out

Hey lady-



Heh heh heh...



Mmmkay, that's fine as long as I get to- WHOA WHAT THE F***?!

*looks at blackboard*
Spoiler:


You dare to teach that to your students?! I can't believe you would torture them like that! That's it we're through!
Spoiler:

(look on teacher's face)


I'm out of this whacked school. I'm just gonna go out of town and never come back to this wretched place.



Just a little more steps :D...





WTF

Who are you and what do you want?!




Who ever said that?! Was it this guy...



'Cause if it was him, I'm not listening to any of you...





I forgot. You're that Professorceror's grandson. Damn both of you...

(To be continued...I guess)
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Old September 13th, 2010, 03:10 PM
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First off, it feels a little off for you to be using 'sorcerer' jokes without any real explanation, and the 'Baro' reference felt a little forced, since the 'character' of Baro wouldn't really care about you having your own legend, he would just trim it to become a nightmare of utter despair and insanity.

All in all though I give it two decks of cards out of a well-off household.

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Old September 14th, 2010, 01:40 AM
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Thanks for the feedback, Yuoaman :D

I really appreciate you telling the truth. This will help me in my future updates. Speaking of which, I'll be posting the continuation of my last update later or right now.
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Old September 17th, 2010, 11:57 AM
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Looks good, hope you continue this LP.
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Old October 10th, 2010, 01:20 AM
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Sorry for the really, really late update

I can't think of any witty comments right now (stupid writer's block)

Anyway, before anything else, could you guys help me pick a starter so I can continue? And a nickname, too, if you may.

Here they are:



(If ever the stupid pics doesn't come up, the starters to choose from are: Mareep, Trapinch, and Spheal)

Again, sorry...
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Old October 11th, 2010, 09:14 PM
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I'd go with Mareep. It's awesome.
Also, I laughed pretty hard at the second one.
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Mmmkay, that's fine as long as I get to- WHOA WHAT THE F***?!

*looks at blackboard*

Spoiler:





You dare to teach that to your students?! I can't believe you would torture them like that! That's it we're through!
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Old October 14th, 2010, 02:54 PM
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Double post, but make sure you DON'T STAY AT A POKEMON CENTER BEFORE BRINGING THE PACKAGE BACK, YOU WILL BE UNABLE TO CONTINUE THE STORY!
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