Alright, thank you.
The reason I did this little exercise with you is mainly because I needed more dimension for your character's personality, and I know that sometimes a character can't be wholly realized without some interaction in-character.
These admitted faults round him out more. You know, as an employer, they like getting told that their potential hire is
outgoing and
kind and
disciplined. This is not a bad thing, but even you admitted that your character was "good all the time" and needed to offset that with some non sequitur mischief to keep from having it "get boring."
I implore you to review your character's personality again and then give me a good mix like you've just done with this exercise. You can also read the applications of your other potential teammates, Greiger and STARDU5T, for a feel of their characters, and to see if what you come up with doesn't step on their toes in terms of being too similar. I'm not demanding you do a complete make over, but how far you want to go to create a role is your business.
(If it helps or inspires you in some way, my two characters Castiel and Amaryllis are complete parodies of my personal traits. That made it easy for me.)
That's that. Now, the technical:
We can't have a mention of a canon place, like Eterna. I suppose it's my fault for not making that clear. The reason being is that it sets Jubilee in a region--in this case, Sinnoh. For your character to travel to this Pokemon town, it'd have to be somewhere in that region, keeping it reasonable. That's why I've had the option for other neighboring, human-abandoned towns or wild areas, to keep where Jubilee is ambiguous and to give you guys the opportunity to make up a backstory that's a little more free.
All in all, quote me when you finish touching up your app, and I'll give it another review. If you have any questions or concerns while you are doing it, don't hesitate to approach me.
