Aw... Dark Angel loves The Pokemon Gym leader, too. And, that's not told in confusing subtext story.
- Same reviewer as above, for "His Angel," a romance parody about Ash and Max. While it's closer to the actual point of the story than the last one... I think there's more confusing subtext in this review than in the actual story.
This is a cute and funny story. Please make some more. Ash and Misty forever.
- Also for "His Angel." This wouldn't be as hilarious if it weren't for the fact that I purposefully tagged the story as an AAML (which was partly true -- although the M stands for something completely different) to see how many people would fail to read the story and review assuming it
was an Ash x Misty story. I wanted to see if people on FFNet really
did do stuff like that. Apparently, at least one does.
Somehow, I don't think a Legendary Pokemon would threaten like that. The girl with the Cloyster labelling herself as a melody (with a little "m") might. Especially if she possesses a shell that locks up Melody (Pokemon 20: The Movie) so that Ask can't get to Melody because the Cloyster girl labelled herself as Melody. I certainly don't think his beloved island girl, Melody, would leave Ash. But, getting away from the girl with the Cloyster who wants to lock her up so she can't breath in the shell... well, that's completely another disappearing story. As to wrath, I believe that defines Melody quite well (reference: Pokemon 20: The Movie) if this Cloyster girl is running around and telling all of Ash's fans that Melody is the ex and Cloyster girl is next. And, seeing as to the headache that appears in the beginning of this story... I would check what's in Cloyster girl's Palm that would cause Ash to blame a Legendary Pokemon for what I think is Cloyster girl's doing.
I'm off to watch some Beethoven and hope Cloyster girl will leave that little bit of Melody alone. Oh, wait... I forgot, she took that bit of Melody, too.
- Same as the first reviewer, for "So the World Turned to Ash." No, I still don't get the Cloyster reference.
Is this supposed to be the real thing? if it is, Well I only read the first two pages of it and I have already found many mistakes. one, it doesn't start like that, two, there is no electronics,three,you spelled Nights "Knights", and four, there are no pokemon.
After my response that essentially states that, no, this isn't the real thing:
Well SORRY! I just thought it was supposed to be the one William Shakespear wrote.
- I love it when people don't actually read all the way through the first chapters of "A Midsummer Knight's Dream." You get all kinds of confused reviews.
See here for more explanation on 'hermaphrodites.'
http://www.madsci.org/posts/archives/2000-02/951254825.Dv.r.html
(Bottom line is, in order for this fic to actually have worked, Wes's ... would not have been functional, nor would he have had any... Sorry, Wes!)
- Um, well, see, it makes sense in the context of the fact that I really
did write an mpreg crackfic involving Wes from Colosseum because a friend of mine mentioned the idea and didn't think I'd actually write it. I'm just including it in here because out of context, it's even better. That and the poster and friend in question is a doctor-in-training who ignored the mpreg and went straight for how it would be
logical.