Looks like we're back to "high number/10 for a map that needs major improvement.
Umm...You're not new at mapping at all, I remember seeing this map last year--along with your other maps--and telling you you should post here. Took a while. :\
Anyway, the first god thing about this map, is that the Doctor will be in it.
That's it.
First of all, you have tall grass in a Town. Accessible tall grass. By the looks of it, you could maybe get to it without having a starter Pokemon. It should not be there. If you made it only accessible through Surf, and not just a tiny little patch in the middle of a Town, it'd be fine. There are tile errors all over the dirt path and the mountains. For instance, the transition between the puddle--which is not needed and looks incredibly random--is...there isn;t a transition. It goes into a little bit of grass and then randomly goes back to the path. Btw umm...you do know how to use the block editor, right? Those rocks on the grass, but with mountain underneath them look really bad. Actually, FireRed has rocks with grass underneath them already. :\ There is not a single tree in this town. And the mountains are incredibly straight and narrow, and should not be used as a border for any place other than a cave. Now you're going to have to make the border block grass, and it'll look bad. So many one tile and two tile paths too. You need to widen the map to give the player more room to walk. Flowers are incredibly unnatural too. Then again the whole map is tbh. :\ Have a loot ak some of the maps in this thread by Colcolstyles, DrFudgey and QuilavaKing if you want to see what you're doing wrong and what it should be like. I feel there's more I can say but I'm too lazy so bye.
Map Name: Kajoten Town
Map Game: Fire Red
Comments: I'm new at mapping and this might have errors that I didn't see, if it does can you tell me exactly where. This is the starter town in my hack Pokemon Lost Time, in this hack i will be introducing The Doctor from Doctor Who and his Tardis.
Spoiler:
Umm...You're not new at mapping at all, I remember seeing this map last year--along with your other maps--and telling you you should post here. Took a while. :\
Anyway, the first god thing about this map, is that the Doctor will be in it.
That's it.
First of all, you have tall grass in a Town. Accessible tall grass. By the looks of it, you could maybe get to it without having a starter Pokemon. It should not be there. If you made it only accessible through Surf, and not just a tiny little patch in the middle of a Town, it'd be fine. There are tile errors all over the dirt path and the mountains. For instance, the transition between the puddle--which is not needed and looks incredibly random--is...there isn;t a transition. It goes into a little bit of grass and then randomly goes back to the path. Btw umm...you do know how to use the block editor, right? Those rocks on the grass, but with mountain underneath them look really bad. Actually, FireRed has rocks with grass underneath them already. :\ There is not a single tree in this town. And the mountains are incredibly straight and narrow, and should not be used as a border for any place other than a cave. Now you're going to have to make the border block grass, and it'll look bad. So many one tile and two tile paths too. You need to widen the map to give the player more room to walk. Flowers are incredibly unnatural too. Then again the whole map is tbh. :\ Have a loot ak some of the maps in this thread by Colcolstyles, DrFudgey and QuilavaKing if you want to see what you're doing wrong and what it should be like. I feel there's more I can say but I'm too lazy so bye.
