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Old June 26th, 2013, 07:46 AM
Airhead
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★ Life can be bland, ★
Life can be pain,
Life can be a weak mans bane.
But for those who are strong,
For those who know what is waiting,
Who know life is not worth debating.
It holds love, it holds happiness, it holds truth,
Wasn't today proof?

To see your smile,
It makes my life worth living,
It gives me inspiration to start giving.
WHY CAN'T YOU SEE,
JUST TO BE...
WITH YOUUUUU~
WOULD MAKE ME
OH-SO-INVINCIBLE...
Ohhhhh... yeah!

Why can't you see,
You're causing me pain,
Why can't you see,
There is nothing to gain...
From taking...
Just taking...
Whatever is left of me...

OH YEAH!

Lovin' you,
Just lovin' you,
Why do you turn me away?
Why won't you let me stay?
To be your friend,
To be your guardian,
All I ask, is to be...

★ YOUR FRIEND~ ★

Last edited by Airhead; October 26th, 2013 at 01:13 AM.
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Old July 10th, 2013, 04:20 PM
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Sailor Moon ™
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I rather enjoyed it, other than the bits in between with the "Yeah's". Do you have it composed in your mind yet? Sometimes, when I'm writing Lyrics, I look for multiple fillers (Such as, "Oh", "Ooo", "Yeah", etc.) and compose the song in my head. After it's composed, I have a bit of a sound to try each filler to. It goes smoothly from there.

Hope I helped! Keep writing. ♥
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Old July 30th, 2013, 12:58 AM
Airhead
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I came up with it one day when I was having a nature walk. I decided to post it and well, I am glad somebody finally posted! xD

Thank you! I will try and come up with more songs.
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Old July 30th, 2013, 02:14 AM
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Heh, cool song dude, I also like to make lyrics and create songs (In Fact, might even post them..). Have you tried creating music to it? I also love the scream effect in one of the verses, so I take it it is kind of a rocky kind of song? Possibly even metal?

Either way, it sounds pretty awesome, could see that turning into a hit.
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Old August 2nd, 2013, 10:18 PM
Airhead
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Hey, thank you! I just came up with it one day, but I'm glad you liked it! Yeah, I did think rock might go well with it.

If you want to get recognized, may as well take a risk, right?
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Old October 26th, 2013, 01:15 AM
Airhead
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Hey, guys, I just wrote some other songs. Well, one is a little old, but whatev's.

My Secret Treasure:

http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=311317

Bein' Mad:

http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthr...40#post7716840
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