Pokemon DuskShadow

Made with RPG Maker XP and Pokemon Essentials 2010.
(not really sure if this belongs here in the beginner's showcase, but i guess..)
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Screenshots:
yeah, i saw you skip down here.
WARNING! May contain vile material AWESOMENESS!


Releases:

Credits:
Poccil - Pokemon Essentials
4th Gen. Matt's resource kit - .. who do you think?

Nintendo & Game Freak - Pokemon
Kyledove/Kymotonian - Tiles
DonLawride - Bethment Forest
PokeRemixStudio.Floatzel - Music
VG Music - Music

SUPPORT US!!! c:

This is looking alright. I like how you called Professor Oak an immigrant. That's classy, my friend.

I only have a few problems/questions: will you be changing the main character's Overworld sprite? It's a little bland, don't you think?
As for problems, well- Denvlair. That's a little hard to say and isn't exactly aesthetically pleasing. I mean, Telemoth sounds awesome (sounds kinda similar (not in a copied sort of way, though) to Telmar from the Narnia books. I like it), but Denvlair and Arvenez don't really seem to fit with it.

But, you know, it's up to you, I guess.

This is looking alright. I like how you called Professor Oak an immigrant. That's classy, my friend.

I only have a few problems/questions: will you be changing the main character's Overworld sprite? It's a little bland, don't you think?
As for problems, well- Denvlair. That's a little hard to say and isn't exactly aesthetically pleasing. I mean, Telemoth sounds awesome (sounds kinda similar (not in a copied sort of way, though) to Telmar from the Narnia books. I like it), but Denvlair and Arvenez don't really seem to fit with it.

But, you know, it's up to you, I guess.

Well, i accept your constructive criticism, and I can tell you, everything i did with names and towns and stuff, i came up with, so just to let you know..
But i'm sorry to say i can't really help sucking at spriting, so that player sprite isn't gonna be changed. After all, this is a solo project.

And I shall follow it. GL

Gmack said:

Well, i accept your constructive criticism, and I can tell you, everything i did with names and towns and stuff, i came up with, so just to let you know..
But i'm sorry to say i can't really help sucking at spriting, so that player sprite isn't gonna be changed. After all, this is a solo project.

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Well, I guessed that you came up with it. That's why I brought it up. I spend a lot of time proofreading fiction, and I've read probably a good seventy manuscripts for fantasy novels that just sound terrible because the places are named horribly.

As for the spriting, I can't really say that's an excuse. I'm working on a solo project, and my spriting isn't too spectacular, but I'm working on it. That's what you have to do. Work on it. You can't just give up because you're not great at it.

You know what? Thanks. I'll do just that.
I appreciate it, and i agree, it isn't an excuse, since i can learn.

You're very welcome, my good man. You've got a very good attitude there. Luck you wish, sir, a wish of fish.

Hootz, it's been a long time since new progress on this has been shown! :/
Well, progress is REALLY slow now, but i'm not quitting this game! So DO expect some updates in the near future, just not now, sorry. :(
But by no means, close this topic. The game's still going fresh.

I'll possibly make you a trainer, and over-world sprite if you wish.

You know what? I'd really appreciate that, thanks! :D
I'll pm you the stuff, and thanks again.