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Old March 28th, 2013, 08:38 PM
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For those of you that don't know me I'm ShinyUmbreon189 aka on other forums as HalfBaked and RealTalkRealFlow. I'm a rapper and have been in the game for a few years now and I think it's time to post my lyrics on PC. No fake lyrics here, it's all real talk. No money, drugs, women, fashion, etc. No promoting killing or mentioning my money, gold chains, diamonds on my neck/wrists, no 24" rims on my car, etc. My lyrics are based on real events or my beliefs on specific situations/events.

Others have said my lyrics are powerful while some are mind opening and powerful at the same time. Some have said they have really good flow and delivery and some have said events are saddening. I'm a versatile rapper, all my songs are based on different topics and no writers block issues here like on the radio. My lyrics aren't repetitive. There is profanity but not in every line/bar some songs have 10 swears while one has 2 or 3, it varies song to song. I will not be posting the hooks to my song those because those are exclusive to certain people I know and still in the construction of them.

All these lyrics are written by me and would really appreciate it if other people don't steal them for I have dedicated a ton of time in writing them, so please no stealing my lyrics.

Every week or so I will upload a new song or whenever I feel for that matter. May be 2 days may be 2 weeks may be a month may be the next or same day. It depends.

First song is "The End" and it's my true beliefs on what the govt. is doing to this country. Please no disagreeing with my lyrics and try to turn me away from the lies when they're blatant. I will allow constructive criticism but I've never had these issues anyways so post what you would like about the song or songs and word structure.


Government hiding behind all they're conspiracies
Destroyin us, so devious with all they're theories
Theyre takin our rights, another way to control us
Then when we disagree those dictators go after us
World domination, causin nothin but chaos
They're corruption has put all the people in danger
Those murders are a hoax, makin em stronger
Fed up with they're lies, can't take theyre shit any longer
We ain't got no leaders no real motivation
Just a cold corrupt nation with a fucked up generation
Peoples brainwashed thinkin Obama's the inspiration
Can't believe were so blind we don't see all his destruction
He ain't helpin shit, he makin it worse
Historys repeating itself, we done gone in reverse
Lied to so many times, don't know whats fake or real
Get ready, it's bout to turn into a battlefield

(Yo we need to open our eyes and mind you know,
The govt can't hide forever,
eventually the truths gonna come out
See politicians they ain't nothin but Illuminatic puppets
Or whatever them motherfuckers wanna call it)

They're the reason posses are goin on these killin sprees
But them school shootings ain't nothin but conspiracies
And for what, to get ahold of our gun control?
Like criminals don't have guns, we won't be all helpless
Thats why a .22 pistol in the streets of Chi-Town
Strictest gun laws maintains the highest body count
Gangstas doin drive-bys wantin to fuckin throw down
All over guns and drugs they want in pounds of amount
Killin' innocents over nothin but money and corruption
Over shit smuggled here by illegal immigration
End of the world new world order beginning of another
Civil War mothafuckers were not ready for the gore

(People they're lyin to us about everything
School shootings, taxes, war, news, 9/11, storm tradgeties
It's all a way for them to get inside our head and manipulate our mind
But they ain't gettin mine)


Post away, and I will update with new material soon!

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Old March 28th, 2013, 11:02 PM
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wow you are too good i cant belive it ...... i am not so good in poetry but i am good in writting fiction. i hope you continue your work. take care
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Old March 28th, 2013, 11:42 PM
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Thanks homie I really appreciate it. It's not exactly poetry (rap lyrics) but still counts as poetry and it's my true beliefs and I believe it's legit non-fiction but people just don't realize it.

Most of my songs are written through inspiration, usually I can't write something serious like this unless somethings motivates me to. I mean I can but it wont sound as clean, delivery wont be as good, flow wont seem spot on, etc. I like to mess around with the rhyme schemes as well and not just A,B C,D, E,F with double each until the whole song is over. In this one I added rhyme schemes in one bar/line so more than one word rhymed while maintaining my flow and skipped bars/lines to rhyme into the next one after it while the one in between rhymed with the following line like Town, count, down, amount. See how that works? They are all similar in rhyme and have the same characteristics but are completely different rhyming words. You gotta know when to use them and not to use them. I can't stand it when rhyming is competitive, I'm versatile with my rhymes, you'll see more rhyming techniques in other songs like ,multisyllable rhymes, perfect rhymes, bending rhymes (pronounced in different ways to rhyme), etc.
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Old March 30th, 2013, 08:45 PM
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I know its rap lyrics... good work i will be waiting for more
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Old April 8th, 2013, 08:40 AM
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Well met.
Though, I personally believe that all lyrics are poetry, albeit a different kind.
Regardless, these are rather impressive. I'll be on the lookout for when you add more.
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Old April 10th, 2013, 09:27 PM
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Okay I have another song I'm gonna post and it was when I was going through hard times, I got songs over all kinds of topics just so you guys know. So here's the lyrics, it's got 3 verses instead of 2 and the 2nd verse is 50% longer, than the other 2. 16, 24, 16.

Back in the days, when I was just a little kid
Where no hatred or my worries ever existed
Back when life was good had no responibilites
No possiblities that I'd ever be out of safety
Had motivation, parents were good role-models
They didn't down the bottles and they didn't do the drugs
They taught me right from wrong can truely say they're my idols
Like guardian angels everlasting symbols
Of love and hope that someday I'd grow up to be strong
And I'd thrive to survive any hard times in my life
That I would never give up, no matter how hard the obstacle
Lifes cruel to you at the same time it's beautiful
You make your own destiny, gotta show your bravery
Good things will come out of it, and that's a guarantee
Two wrongs don't make a right, but don't turn away from fright
If you do the right things, everything will be alright


I kept asking myself. Why does life gotta be so hard?
Seems since birth, I've been dealt with a losing card
Its got me to my knees with pain i cant ignore
Making a break to the door, wanna pour shots to ease my pain
Hoping that all this torture will never remain the same
Playing tricks on my brain, can longer sustain the pain
It's givin me a migrain trying to puzzle together
Words And emotions impossible to explain
Started pickin my poison to escape reality
Made me feel safe, mind set free of anxiety
Feelin no stress the only thing that calmed my nerve
Not really giving a fuck, if I was kicked to the curb
Had nothing to live for, didn't exist in this world
No money, no job, no friends I was constantly bored
Only had my pen and pad, wrote down what was on my mind
Pissed off at mankind and it made me wanna reside
In society told myself I'd never be successful
Was so hostile towards others and I felt so shameful
So hateful, so regretful, I didn't think I was normal
This hatred inside of me, had me anti-social
I failed the mission cuz I didn't wanna listen
Always felt I was the victim and I didn't feel like livin
Need the fountain of youth, so I can feel good again
To be awaken for my weaknesses that I can re-strenghthen

Everyday I feel this pain, just want it to go away
Wakin up the next day rerun of yesterdays replay
lifes nothin but a decay starin at the gateway
With nothin else to lose hopin in my life will be okay
I doubt it will it's the same fucking routine
Over and over, I need to chill out with some codeine
Then cleanse my soul, of all this pain with an elbow
Of marijuana smoke, so I don't turn into a psycho
I've had enough of this shit can't handle it one bit
Another minute of it, then a crime I may commit
I feel so unfit, why am I even here in the first place?
According to me, I put my family to a disgrace
I'm starin at a bottle of this 40 oz of liquor
Wanna wash my pain away, got my finger on the trigger
Russian Roullete, drugs all up in the chamber
I'm in danger unless I come up with a life changer
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