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Old September 19th, 2007 (09:07 AM). Edited September 20th, 2007 by RocketMemberMichael.
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Prepare 4 Trouble: Make It Double! It is back, I don't know if you read the first comic, Prepare 4 Trouble, but the link is in my signiture, it has been ended for a year now and here it is, a sequal.

Inspired By: MattSilver, he created the remake of his old comic so I thought I'll do mine, and I am pleased, thanks Matt!

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Chapter 1: A Whole New Adventure I hope you enjoy this, even if you have not read the original you can still read this.

Comic 001
Comic 002
Comic 003

Latest Comic: 003



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Thanks and I hope you enjoy Make It Double.
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Old September 19th, 2007 (10:38 PM).
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ALrighty then, 1st post and all:

First thing that catches my eye is the size - it's kind of blurry and out of focus. Did you save as a JPEG or something?

Sprites: Original enough, good to look at. No super bad recolours - that's good.

Speech Bubbles: Good, well organised - no problems there.

PLot: Original and pretty cool man. It's full of drama and stuff - not a journey. Nice title too (Make it Double!)

Credit: Where's the credit list? I think people will acuse you of not crediting, and maybe even stealing.

That's the only problems I see. If you do fix them, I'm happy to edit my post and make it seem like Im saying all positive! :D

Keep it up!

PS (Off topic): Did you get my PM? If you did, reply maybe?
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Old September 20th, 2007 (03:39 AM).
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Thanks Matt

The Credit List is there if you read it properly.

Is it blurry? Well I will fix that problem.

I did get your pm and I will pm you back later

New comic later, you will enjoy it, btw I edited my post, now you can join.
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Old September 20th, 2007 (08:27 AM).
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Wow you're setting the scene for me really!!1

I'm getting the feeling that Maxie is going to be killed by someone a little niffed off when he goes into speech mode.

High quality text bubbles and good characters sprites I like!!!

I'll say one thing: you've got me hooked
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Old September 20th, 2007 (10:25 AM).
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Great, it is good to see I have got someone hooked, I am guessing you did not read the first one Pein did you, BTW Matt yeah it is blurry, I will fix that, I have another comic, read that one too...

I am not making a comic today, I might update my other one, Besides the more post the more comics.

Pein thanks for your post, keep reading and about the Maxie comment, yeah speech mode is funny...He will do that alot, Giovanni did that in the original, By the way look at the girl swimming in the corner...He he he...
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Old September 20th, 2007 (06:11 PM).
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Quote originally posted by RocketMemberMichael:
Thanks Matt

The Credit List is there if you read it properly.

Is it blurry? Well I will fix that problem.

I did get your pm and I will pm you back later

New comic later, you will enjoy it, btw I edited my post, now you can join.
Sorry. Didn't see the credit list (Shouldn't it be a little bigger?)
I might join up later - we'll see.

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