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Old November 9th, 2007, 11:29 PM
Jubilation
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Join Date: May 2006
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Welcome to my first proper sprite comic!

Episode One: Welcome To Kanto!
Episode Two: Start Of A Journey
Edit: Um I'm having some trouble viewing them properly. Please give me some time to fix this. Amachi: You had an extra 'http://' at the front

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Old November 10th, 2007, 06:02 AM
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Why did they walk all the way to Viridian City to get their nonexistent Pokemon healed, and then walk all the way back to Pallet town?
TUP is a bad thing, even in a text bubble, and the plot is extremely cliche.
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Old November 10th, 2007, 06:06 AM
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They went to Viridian to get supplies before they got their pokemon
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Old November 10th, 2007, 06:08 AM
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Can you fix the links Kero× so I can read the comic?
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Old November 10th, 2007, 06:08 AM
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They went to Viridian to get supplies before they got their pokemon
Then why not explain that in the comic? I got the links working and all, and this comic is in need of improvement. For one, I have no idea where the plot is going - but it is early days.

The sprites are kind of unoriginal, and you haven't listed credit on the first post (People may accuse you of stealing btw). :D

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