[Help workshop] Quick storyline idea thread - Page 19

GoGoShinyDunsparce · #**451** March 10th, 2012, 06:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SwiftSign

I like the concept, however from what you've said so far there doesn't seem like much of a driving force - and filling a Pokédex (only to 150 I hope) is quite a tall order unless they're strategically placed. Perhaps, since they are cops, you could give the player a 'partner', who on occasion tops up your Pokédex (could you an element of random luck on which get added to the Pokédex). Rarer Pokémon sightings could come in the form of missions from either the police chief or from talking to/helping locals - as another way to filling in the dex rather than battling and/or running around searching hopelessly.

Perhaps it would also be more user-friendly if you were only required to see the Pokémon rather than capture them.

I agree with SwiftSign that you'd need a relatively small Pokedex, cappayne! Or add maybe a few days off or sth after each assignment to pick up some new Pokes...? That Pokemon-giving partner idea is genius imo, by the way.

I have an idea for the name/gender choice intro part in my hack:

Spoiler:

Btw your rival is your tomboyish twin sister Holly, and to a lesser extent your older brother Orchis (he helps out more than hinders you though). As for your second sister, the eldest child - who knows where she could be?

ledzepization · #**452** March 14th, 2012, 04:05 AM

Alright, I've had this one in my head for a while, but I haven't acted on it yet.

Background:
Is has been 86 ARBY( Years After Red Blue Yellow) and the world is at war. The two leading factions are Red Team(currently supported by the Pokemon Nation) and Blue Team. Red Team is led by the students of Red. Blue Team is led by former students of Red Team who left in search of Blue into the uncharted regions. In 82 ARBY the war began, and now, four years later, Sinnoh has been bombed and completely detroyed , with few members of Red Team surviving.

In-Game:
You are RJ, the star of Red Team, who has managed to flee aboard an escape vessel along with a thousand other citizens of Sinnoh, off into the uncharted regions. You awake aboard the ship to find that it is being assaulted by Blue Team ships. You select your starter and fight the numerous members of Blue Team until you manage to escape aboard an escape vessel. When you finally land you discover a forgotten land filled with "unstable" Pokemon and mysterious sentinels. You find this region to also be the current HQ of Blue Team and the lost home of the Capitalists. You decide to destroy the Blue Team at its heart and discover the secrets of these mysterious people.

Well please comment and criticize(constructively of course). And as for now this story line idea is mine.

GoGoShinyDunsparce · #**453** March 14th, 2012, 08:04 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ledzepization

Alright, I've had this one in my head for a while, but I haven't acted on it yet.

Background:
Is has been 86 ARBY( Years After Red Blue Yellow) and the world is at war. The two leading factions are Red Team(currently supported by the Pokemon Nation) and Blue Team. Red Team is led by the students of Red. Blue Team is led by former students of Red Team who left in search of Blue into the uncharted regions. In 82 ARBY the war began, and now, four years later, Sinnoh has been bombed and completely detroyed , with few members of Red Team surviving.

In-Game:
You are RJ, the star of Red Team, who has managed to flee aboard an escape vessel along with a thousand other citizens of Sinnoh, off into the uncharted regions. You awake aboard the ship to find that it is being assaulted by Blue Team ships. You select your starter and fight the numerous members of Blue Team until you manage to escape aboard an escape vessel. When you finally land you discover a forgotten land filled with "unstable" Pokemon and mysterious sentinels. You find this region to also be the current HQ of Blue Team and the lost home of the Capitalists. You decide to destroy the Blue Team at its heart and discover the secrets of these mysterious people.

Well please comment and criticize(constructively of course). And as for now this story line idea is mine.

Wow, that sounds really exciting and fun to play! I take it there wouldn't be any gym leaders, badges or Elite 4 in your hack?

ledzepization · #**454** March 14th, 2012, 10:16 PM

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Originally Posted by GoGoShinyDunsparce

Wow, that sounds really exciting and fun to play! I take it there wouldn't be any gym leaders, badges or Elite 4 in your hack?

Well, I was thinking that scattered throughout the region there would be some boss-like trainers that would resemble gym leaders in that they stay in one area and have all Pokemon of one type. As for the badges, maybe you would get spoils of war??? Not sure though, and no for the E4. But I'd only include the boss-like trainers who were central to the story line. I don't want them to be like regular gym leaders in that they have no relationship to the story.

AnimeNinja621 · #**455** April 10th, 2012, 12:04 AM

Okay, here's my idea.
It's going to be long, because I have no idea how to post a hyperlink, so...

Pokémon Amethyst Version (title can change as you wish)
A new adventure awaits you! Start off as a new boy or girl in the Sigma region, in your sprawling hometown, Lilia City.
Includes Pokémon from Kanto, Johto, Hoenn, and Sinnoh
Starters will be either Ho-oh or Lugia with same stats as normal Fire and Water starters, so that there would be no fighting your way through with just a legendary
Main purpose: Defeat Team Epsilon and become region champ
Plot starts here:
Boy(preset-name Carson)/girl(preset-name Stephany) starts off in Lilia City
Is asked to run errand for mother—deliver package to Professor Evergreen who is on the outskirts of Lilia City (can name routes whatever)
Upon finding Prof. Evergreen, she asks player to accompany her onto an expedition
During said expedition, Evergreen and Carson/Stephany are trapped in the ruins
Player blacks out
During black-out, a question is asked: I…I see a color. It’s very faint…Is it silver…or is that gold…ow…my head hurts…which is it?
Upon selecting gold, player will reawaken on mountain with Ho-oh above them
Upon selecting silver, player will reawaken on sea cliff with Lugia above them
Both stories progress by player (and unconscious Prof. Evergreen) witnessing Ho-oh and Lugia disappear randomly, leaving an egg in their place
Scene returns to Lilia City
Prof. Evergreen invites player to her lab
Upon arrival, player is greeted by baby Ho-oh/Lugia
After baby Ho-oh/Lugia refuses to leave player, Prof. Evergreen gives player a Pokeball, now with Ho-oh/Lugia inside of it (Lv. 5)
Prof. Evergreen shows player news about a new team of Pokémon bandits, who call themselves Team Epsilon. Evergreen also says that this group often raids the nests of legendaries, which meant there was a high chance that they kidnapped Ho-oh/Lugia
Player sets out to try and track down Team Epsilon, so Evergreen gives Player a Pokedex and five Pokeballs, before sending him/her on their way
On the way back, Mother meets up with Carson/Stephany and gives the player a pair of running shoes after a heartfelt goodbye
Player continues down route until arriving at first town, Kappa Village
New rival(character name could be player’s choice, or preset-named Amy) meets Carson/Stephany
After tutorial, she challenges Player to a battle and after winning (Amy has Chikorita Lv. 10 and Starly Lv. 9), Amy runs away, yelling that she would like to meet the player again
After player continues on, player arrives in Delta Town, where player learns that the Gym Leader, Fire-user Alexander, used to be part of Team Epsilon
Player enters gym, planning to ask Alexander, but is shunted into the actual challenge.
Alexander, “King of Dark Flame!”
Pokémon are Lv 12. Houndour and Lv. 14 Quilava
After battle, player asks Alexander of his time in Team Epsilon
Alexander replies with that because he was just a grunt, he could not learn of their plans entirely. He did know, however, that the second Gym leader, Caitlin, was a retired police officer who used to chase Team Epsilon. With that, player leaves and starts off again
Upon reaching Theta Town, player fights Amy again, and Amy gives player a Charcoal/Mystic Water, depending on whether they have a Ho-oh/Lugia
Player then fights Gym #2, Water-user Caitlin
Caitlin, “Mermaid of Beauty!”
Pokémon are Lv. 17 Vaporeon, Lv. 19 Finneon, and Lv. 20 Lanturn
Caitlin tells player that she learned that Team Epsilon wanted to find the legendary bird Pokémon, Articuno, Moltres, and Suicune. After failing once, they tried to capture Suicune, Entei, and Raikou, but lost them as well. After they learned that Lugia and Ho-oh were masters over the three trios, Team Epsilon planned to capture them
Player leaves, and while exiting the gym, a hooded man (Team Epsilon grunt) pushes past him
Player chases after the grunt, and grunt keeps running until the grunt and player are at the opening of Mt. Alpha
Grunt battles player, and after losing once, another Grunt pops up and attacks with previous Grunt.
Amy pops up and player’s first Double Battle ensues
Amy has Bayleef Lv. 18, Dratini Lv. 18, and Staravia Lv. 18
After winning, Amy gives player her email address and tells them to message her soon, before heading into the mountain
Player heads into Mt. Alpha

What happens next? If anyone is willing to make a hack ROM off of this story, message me on PokeCommunity and I’ll reply back as soon as possible!
P.S. Sorry if I cause trouble because of this, but I cannot help with the actual making of the ROM. Mainly because I suck at scripting and mapping and crap. But story-making is my strength.
~AnimeNinja621

All right, there it is. Since you might've read this, you can see that I cannot
help with the actual ROM. So if you'd like to create a ROM off this story, message me!
Arigato!
AND DON'T STEAL THIS. I WILL SERIOUSLY HUNT YOU DOWN.

teejermiester · #**456** April 10th, 2012, 02:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by AnimeNinja621

Okay, here's my idea.
It's going to be long, because I have no idea how to post a hyperlink, so...

Spoiler:

Well, for one you can just click the spoiler button in the top right of the posting window, like I did...

Also, the story is good, but I'm not sure how many people there out there who go into here looking for stories to turn into hacks. If you really want this thing done, you'll have to suck it up and learn how to map and script, no matter how hard it is. Everyone is new at the beginning, they worked at it and became better.You do that, focus on this, and you might have a beauty on your hands. But until you try, you'll never know.

firekoopa · #**457** April 23rd, 2012, 06:57 PM

So... I don't really know, this is just some basic idea I had worked on lately...

The Player (Raven) is informed of Prof. Oak's visit in the Town nearby and visits him to get his Pokemon, an Eevee. Later on, your Rival (Neves) talks you into a challange. Perform the infamous Trainer Challange (8 Gyms and Island Champion).

Over time you figure out about Styra Coorperation. The developer, manufacturer and distributor for the major goods in the Neisha Region. They are notorious of making their goods expensive (therefore all the goods are X2 the original price). Over time the player figures out that Styra has been kidnapping young trainers, and after some time learns that the kidnapped trainers all have high amounts of Gym Badges.

After the third Gym Battle, you too get escorted for a "talk" somewhere outside city. They attempt to capture you, but fail to do so. The player is then notorious through out Neisha as Styra claims that he had stolen important files, and unable to enter any cities in "fear of being captured". Instead, he has to travel through a bunch of caves to reach his Homeplace again, where the professor (his dad) believes in his son's/daughter's inosennce and promises to keep his location a secret until the problem has been resolved. Unfortunately, Styra employees quickly locate him, and this time manage to successfully capture him and bring him to the Styra HQ Building. The player manages to sneak around and figures out two plans that Styra had nearly put into practice:

By studying the mysterious power of Gym Badges, Styra has been able to produce a new HM, which shall be known as HM64 (unobtainable though). This enables any Pokemon, tamed or not, to obey Styra without any question. To make this HM, they needed to gain as much Gym Badges earned by Skilled Trainers as possible.

The second plan is to forge the products with special transmitters to enable the frequencies of HM64 all across the region when mass-produced.

Both plans get stopped by Raven somehow over time.

When you defeat the Island Champion, your rival will head to Grand Island, which is a new Overworld Map all together, infamous for being the first completely man-made Island ever. Here is where all the skilled trainers come (where under Gym Leader 7 + 8 and the Island Champion). When you follow him however, you find that his constant training towards the top has turned him malicious, as with stress and all that crap of having his skill being constantly pushed to the very limits in this place (and losing to the player only in the first part of the game already pissed him off well enough)

Somehow the leader of Styra will get involved in the second part of the game, but don't knwo how exactly.

And yes, in some way your Rival will return to being nice.

The End!!! Rate it, I'm unoriginal!!

Doa · #**458** May 4th, 2012, 11:49 PM

Hey, I'm Doa. I would like to point out that this is the very first time I have ever posted anything within the PokeCommunity Forums. If I seem as though I'm a stranger to these forums, that's why. Also, if I somehow manage to break any of the rules, inform me immediately - I do not intend to be a nuisance. Anyway, I came to this particular thread after searching for where to pitch my idea for a Pokemon ROM.

I call it "MindPink Version". It takes place approximately...mmm...14 years or so after R/B/Y/FR/LG, and by definition that would be about 11 or 10 years after G/S/C/HG/SS. This is a stage in which each of the primary regions (save Johto, I'll explain later) of the Pokemon world are more aware of how many Pokemon there are, particularly the Kanto region in which the game would take place (FR/LG hack, most likely). There might be other regions, including the about-to-be-official region of Sevii (as in the islands), but most of the initial gameplay should be limited to Kanto.

As this takes place around this year as opposed to '98, there would undoubtedly be a lot of changes to the region and its inhabitants. Here's a list of ideas/plot points/things to note:

- You, the main character (either male or female), are one of the uncommon people throughout the Pokemon world that exhibits abilities akin to those of Pokemon. Your ability is a fairly weak psychic connection, so you might be able to have clairvoyant dreams or perhaps even commune telepathically with a legendary. And, of course, you have a knack for battling, and don't tend to talk very much (so basically you're the typical poke-protagonist with a mumbo-jumbo twist).

- Your friend/rival, male, also has Pokemon-like traits, particularly those of Dark-types. Like you, his abilities are very weak and not very well understood - the only notable plot feature is that he can commune telepathically with a certain legendary with a tendency to inflict nightmares (more on the Pokemon that surpass the 1st/2nd/3rd generations later).

- Professor Oak is now pretty old. He doesn't leave his lab very often (though I'm not sure if he has a bed there or anything), and the house Daisy used to occupy is now owned by your rival's parents. He gives you an Espeon, whereas your friend receives an Umbreon. Anyway, he is the only member of his family left in the Kanto region; most of his relatives have moved on to Sinnoh to account for the...uh...loss...of Oak's senior, Professor Rowan. This just goes to show how old Oaky really is.

- Your house used to belong to Red. You can tell by the out-of-place tiles where the heavy battling and training was more powerful than normal. This Red (and his family) is nowhere to be found in Kanto, and his house came into your family's possession.

- Pallet Town is changed, but not as much as some other cities. The lab is built in a new style, the houses look like they've had a few minor renovations, and the water has crept up to engulf the area where the flower garden thing was. However, this is considered a historical district of Kanto, and therefore hasn't seen the level of renovation the other cities and villages have.

- Route 1 leads straight (and I literally mean straight) from Pallet Town to Viridian City; there are a few patches of grass, but they are off to the sides. The road to Viridian City looks fairly developed.

- Viridian City is supposed to look really modern. I'm not really sure how modern yet. What is notable is that whomever Viridian City's Gym Leader turns out to be, they seriously don't want a challenge (haven't seen any in years or something) and will refuse to battle you unless you complete the "insurmountable" task of collecting the other 7 badges.

- More to be added as soon as I have a better grasp on what I want this to look like.

Anyway, the plot of the game would be that you collect the 7 badges so that you can challenge Viridian. However, you start to feel a strange mental connection with the benevolent legendary Pokemon Cresselia. You also sense that your close friend (whom you meet a lot more often on your adventures than in games past), is having nightmares caused by malevolent legendary Pokemon Darkrai. At some point between 7th and 8th badges, you have to face Cresselia (who wants to be caught) and straight after, Darkrai (who would prefer to be left alone to scare the Magikarp out of your childhood friend). You would finally beat the 8th gym, then the Indigo League (which has seen action, but possibly for other reasons), and then have a tender moment in which your friend gives up his adventure and lets you have his well-trained Umbreon (and this might be the only scene in which you speak).

I'm not sure where to go after this, but I have a few ideas, such as:
- Enter the run-down Johto region, where Pokemon battling has been reserved for the criminal organizations that appear to run its hostile and unintelligent populace, and save Professor Elm
- Take on modern Hoenn in a situation most like the Kanto you've just experienced
- Head to Sinnoh to assist the Oak family and challenge their gyms along the way
- Help Sevii become officially registered as a region
- Something else entirely

Oh, and I'm thinking about letting trainer battles be an opt-in (YES/NO) kind of thing. It would be very unlike previous games, and there would always be the tough trainers that prefer the old-school method.

I would also have to replace Ho-Oh and Lugia (and their entries) with Cresselia and Darkrai. Perhaps a few of the worst Pokemon from Gens 1-3 could be replaced with the best from 4 and 5.

However, I have no idea where to start in terms of tools, and can only come up with plot so quickly. Perhaps someone could point me in the right direction in terms of ROM tools? Perhaps someone could take this project upon themselves, or assist me with it? Perhaps someone could pitch ideas? Perhaps I should drop this altogether?

Your thoughts would be much appreciated.

mavy42 · #**459** May 12th, 2012, 04:29 PM

what do you think of this story people...
I thought i would start up a hack for this story called Pokemon Colossus...
but rom hacking just is hard... so here is the story.....

1st Region: Protoss Region
Story: You (Player) came from the family of ninjas… Now you are 18 years old, training for 8 years and had mastered the art of being a ninja. Today you get your own Pokemon and as a ninja, you are destined to defeat
The 8 Masters of the Infinity Clan and collect the different signs that they hold as proof of defeating them! Defeat Koga and his 4 subordinates along with your rival to become the strongest ninja and become the new gym leader of the Fuchsia City Gym!!!!

Story: After being gym leader for almost
2 years, a Pkmn Trainer named Red defeated you so you venture into the Kalimdor Region
after knowing that Red is the new champion of
The Indigo League. You fight the gym leaders to have the power to defeat Red and
The Elite Four while meeting new and old friends along the way and learning tales of some Legendary Pokemon

3rd Region: Atum Region
Story: After defeating Red, you then again
meet your rival. He is now involved in an evil
organization called Team Omega and asks you to join the group. Here you may choose to be good or evil. If good, you will meet an old man who tells you the secrets of the remaining Legendary Pkmns and must collect the 8 shards guarded by Legendaries which will call upon the strongest Legendary Pkmn. If evil, you are with Team Omega collecting the 8 shards and in the end fight with your rival and become the master of Team Omega.

so what do you think of it?

PS: It's thankful if you start a hack with this story even though it's me and my brother's idea... I want to play it on a real hack....

vanillagfx · #**460** May 19th, 2012, 05:17 PM

Well I'm making a hack based on Lance, he grows up in blackthorn and he goes with his grandpa to dragons den to train to be a dragon master. I thought of something happening where he passed out or something and ended up in kanto. And then later on after he finishes kanto and becomes the champion he travels over to johto again. o.o

Ghost_x1000 · #**461** May 30th, 2012, 10:15 AM

New poster here, so if I make any mistakes, be sure to let me know.

Anyway, how's this for an idea.

You start out as the son/daughter of a famous pokemon professor from a heretofore unknown region. Your father is journeying around the world, giving lectures on pokemon, and has invited you to come along with him.

Arriving in Kanto for a famous symposium, however, you, your father, and his assistants are kidnapped by a mysterious group of trainers and pokemon, and taken to a isolation camp in an undisclosed location.

That's where your adventure really begins...

During the night, a breakout occurs in one of the pokemon warehouses and you find yourself meeting your first pokemon and using it to escape from the camp. However, it seems you're not the only one who had such an idea. Your rival, the son/daughter of another famous pokemon professor, also escapes, and manages to tell you a little about what is going on.

Apparently, in spite of being disbanded 18 years ago by Red, and then again 15 years ago by Gold, Team Rocket has returned to Kanto and Jhoto. Only this time, rather than committing small muggings and petty theft, they've decided to go for the big times: capture all of the most brilliant pokemon professors of the era, collect DNA samples from the most powerful of pokemon (read: legendaries), and use the two to clone and/or create (through recombinant DNA techniques) a pokemon army with which to take over the world. (Because the mewtwo fiasco seems to have slipped everybody's minds by now.)

Your character and their rival head south and finally make it to Ecruteak City, where you're found by Daisy and Lyra. You then choose to go with one or the other back to their hometown. (this, in turn, leads you on one of the two main story lines).

If you go to Kanto, you get caught up in a storyline involving a massive almost-war between mew and mewtwo. You also gain a second rival, a ghost-type trainer from fuchsia city.

If you go to Johto, you get caught up in a storyline about attacks on villages by Ho-oh and Lugia happening. Your second rival in this storyline is a dragon-trainer from Blackthorn city.

No matter which storyline you take, both will take you back and forth between Kanto and Johto, and should take you through getting about 6-7 of the gym badges. Whichever story you choose, your rival will choose the other one, though you'll still see him/her regularly as the story lines have many crossover points.

As you progress through the stories, if you talk to NPCs or watch the televisions, you see that the problems aren't only in Kanto and Johto. Legendaries are rising up in Hoenn and Sinnoh as well.

When you finally get to the end of whichever storyline you're on, you finally find out team rocket's TRUE goal: to cause enough chaos and havoc to awaken Arceus, and then capture him. You and your rival find out that only one person is allowed to be told the sacred resting place of Arceus, and that's the league Champion.

You decide to head off and become champion, so you can stop team rocket's plot, but because of the sheer number of challengers the league has been getting, you find that to face the elite four you must now have all 16 badges of the Kanto and Johto regions.

After fighting your way through the gyms and elite 4 (including a champion Wes, from Orre region), you find out about the secret shrine in Mt. Silver, where Arceus rests. You head there, and find Red and Gold waiting for you. After they test your resolve (read: ability to beat their pokemon in battle), they let you through to the shrine, where you face off against the new Rocket Boss and Arceus.

After you beat the game and finish watching the credits, the scene cuts back to the camp where your father and the other professors are being held, with a rocket executive (who is probably the new leader, after you defeated the other one) looking at a row of cloning tanks and laughing evilly... *deep foreshadowing of a possible sequel happens*.

Sorry it's so vague, but I'm still working out the finer details myself.

The only thing left to add is that the Starter Trininty I'll be planning on using isn't going to be the usual fire/water/grass one. I'm planning on either having a psychic/fighting/dark trio, or having a ground/electric/water one.

Mooseqwert-Pokemaster · #**462** May 31st, 2012, 07:49 PM

Welcome to the Merda region! A new Adventure awaits you! Feel the thrill of browsing the starter garden, where you are free to pick starters from any of the various regions! I the marvelous professor Niso will help you along your path. I beleive this is your friend, her Name is Amanda isn't it? Or am I an old coot who forgets things? Well, I didn't let you have a pokemon just to train it. I beleive you can free us from the terrible reign of Team Hyakara and their terrible leader! Go! Help Us all!
---This has been an idea for a future game. Team Colored Sinew will continue to post the storyline every day except sunday, wednsday, and saturday. Stay tuned!

Shaf · #**463** June 25th, 2012, 06:48 AM

I am new here
So,my story line may not be good.Please give me feedback and IDEAS.
This is the storyline of my hack Pokemon Steel Legends
This is a hack of emerald but i also plan it on fire red because it may suit
Story:
You are a Teenager in the region of Skirost.This is your 16th birthday.
You wake up in your room and your mother calls you.Your mother is no-one but once renowned trainer Misty.She tells you to take over her gym after you showed your friendship to water pokemon.But you want to have your own destiny.So your Mom tells you to go to prof.Brendan. You receive your starter and receive the news that your Dad has been kidnapped.Your Brother takes over your Dad's Gym. The story takes place on your journey to save your father. The story continues as you hear the champion at Pokemon League may know where your dad is. There are two rival team. One is Team SkyHigh and the other is Team Assasin. You go defeating all the gym and go to the Champion and know that there are 3 islands which the dark teams wish to capture and make shadow legits. So you meet most of the steel pokemon trainer to gather more data and make your way to capturing the throne of capturing the steel legit.

MidnightShine · #**464** June 26th, 2012, 10:34 AM

Hello people, Mid here & I would like to share the plot of an event in my upcoming Pokemon Emerald hack, Pokemon Sinnova Emerald.

OK, here goes.

You venture through the Victory Road for a rematch against the Elite 4 (I know you can use fly but this is just an example). While you were finding your way through the Victory Road, you find this weird hole that wasn't there before. So, out of curiosity, you went into the mysterious hole.

You end up at a flower field filled with lush flowers & a cool breeze is blowing. You feel like you're in a dream. Suddenly, you hear a load roar. You, startled, decided to investigate where the roar came from.

Soon enough, you found out where the roar came from. To the north of the flower field is an ancient ruin. Two Unova Legendaries, Reshiram & Zekrom are fighting each other. Out of the blue, the Champion showed up. he told you about the Legend how Reshiram & Zekrom were put to sleep. But it makes no sense how they can suddenly wake up & fight each other.

So, you & the Champion, decided to try to calm them down. But before that, he asks you a very important question. He asked: "Do you sought the truth or ideals?" (If you choose truth, you face Reshiram; if you choose ideals, you face Zekrom). After that, you two engage in battle with the Unova Legends.

(After beating/catching Reshiram/Zekrom) You & the Champion are relieved. The Unova Legends have been defeated (Please do not take the 'defeated' seriously. It's just an expression used to describe your victory over Reshiram/Zekrom). Suddenly, Ghetsis appears......

He then tells you the reason why Reshiram & Zekrom were fighting. It was him who awakened the Unova Legendaries & he forced them to fight to see who was the worthy one to become an addition to his party. After his story, Kyurem appears. Kyurem then starts to attack you. It seemed like Ghetsis who was commanding it.

You then go into battle with Kyurem (You can't catch Kyurem because Ghetsis already captured it). After beating Kyurem, Ghetsis faints & Kyurem flies away. When he awakes, he find himself in the clutches of Looker. Looker then takes him away.

And that's the end of it. Feel free to give feedback/criticism is you want to.

~Mid, BW2's Biggest Fan

pokemonpal7 · #**465** June 30th, 2012, 07:20 AM

I was too enthusiastic and posted a progressing hack thread before the time is right. So I lost my detailed explanation. Might as well try to get started.

You wake up to a cutscene in bed to find the house shaking, and rubble beginning to fall down. You rush out of the house to avoid your death, but while running you are hit by a piece of rubble. You fight off unconsciousness and continue and as you exit, the house falls into a large crater. You collapse, but just before you black out, you see your mother a few steps in front of you who worriedly asks if you're okay, and what region you are from. Then, your vision fades. Once again, you wake up, but in a labarotory. A wo/man walks up to you, and asks you what your name is, what region you are from and what gender you are. S/He will be somewhat relieved that you remember these facts, and asks that you give her the time to explain. Oh, and by the way, this is the regional professor. I'm just going to write as Birch from now. He tells you his name, and asks if you remember anything about your past. You (automatically) reply no, and he continues to tell you that the regions are at war with each, this region's counsel want you to help their efforts as you were recognised as one of the best trainers in the region, and you can't retrieve any pokemon from the storage system, because it was shut down by Bill. Each regional Box Creator has designed a smaller version, so you may still use it for some amount of convenience.Also, your house was hit by a bomb, so you're homeless. Then you recieve one of your region's starter pokemon and set off on your journey. First, you will go through a small amount of training at an academy, where you will recieve 4 more pokemon, then be shipped off to the first region you will infiltrate - Kanto. Unless you live in Kanto, in which case you will go to Johto. The process is Kanto -> Johto -> Hoenn -> Sinnoh -> Unova. Just cross out the one you're from. You will fight the Captains, Lieutenants and General from each country (who you'll probably recognise) to take Medals from them. Medals are the gym badges of this gameAnd the gym leaders are the Captins, E4 are Lieutenants and the General is the Champion of the Region.

gr0ode · #**466** July 6th, 2012, 12:37 PM

Storyline:

Intro:
The story takes place in the Future (in the year 2124). You play as a boy/girl (or with edited sprite as man/women) and you work as a space pilot. The energy sources on earth have been exploited and people are now looking for other energy sources on the moon. In the year 2104 Scientists dicovered black stones, on the moon, which contain dark energy in concentrated form , also called Turner-stones (as a tribute to Turner, who coined the term dark enery). Your grandpa, (Prof. Oak) (here scientist and in charge of the space travel mission) studies the Turner-stones and his mission is to exploit the energy of the stones. The Turner-stones seem to emit some kind of wierd radiation but you grandpa tells you that he manged to proof that it isn't dangerous.

You start off in your home town (of cause edited) and your grandpa sends you to a space mission to explore a Turner-stone source. The world is governed by one all powerfull government which has a very severy policy (because of the energy-crisis the crime rate expanded rapidly and the government does everything to maintain order). Than after a little chat with your grandpa (to explain the background story etc.), you go to a space training station and have to collect your space-pass. Then you are allowed to fly to the moon. New technology brought up a space-phone and the astronauts can stay in contact with earth. There is an artificial nature section on the shuttle because scientists also try to find out if closed environements could survive in space in view of civilizing the moon. When you arrive on the moon you get a call from your grandpa and he tells you that the radiation of the Turner-stones has severe effets on animals which he didn't predit. All animals exposed to the Turner-stones mutated and became very big. Afterwards they attacked humans and sort of "poked" them and it seemed that they sucked by the people's body... the government announced code red in the city ...... Then the connection breaks off. You remember that the scientists brought along animals to the moon in the artificial nature section and leave your room to take a look. You hear strange noises from the artificial nature room but can't enter the room. Then you go on to the main section and listen to a conversation between the government and their police on the shuttle. The town in which your grandpa lives should be "put apart" and they get the mission to kill everyone which had contact with the Turner-stones.

On the Moon:
The government-police men put on their radiation suit and leave the room on the other side. You can't exit the room before you find Charile, grandpa's dog, which travelled along. You ask yourself why the dog isn't in the artificial nature room and wonder why he isn't affected by the radiation, then decide to take him with you as protection (here you obtain your first pokemon it could be Arcanine or some other pokemon dog). The government police shut down the energy supply and you can now enter the artificial nature room where have to fight your way through. Here you find a lot of dead bodies and also the first ghost (which you cannot fight yet). The mutated animals absorb the bodies of humans but someway their souls remain (they emit the same force as the Turner-stones). You remember that there is another space shuttle (its mission is to look for habitats on the moon) in reach, but it would be too long to get there by feet. You must obtain a hovercar (pokemon sprite/pokemon which can use surf) and find the hoverkeys (badge you need to use surf). After you go outside you remark that the shuttle is completely destroyed and that the animals managed to escape. You have to fight your way through (outside the battle pokemon sprite should replace trainer sprite and inside the battle the trainer sending out his pokemon to the fight shouldn't be visible). As you reach the new shuttle you have a beat the security (this time, inside the battle, a trainer sprite should replace the pokemon sprite and the trainer sending out the pokemon shouldn't be visible). Then you go to the cockpit of the shuttle and beat the pilot down and fly home.

In the Wasteland:
Here I only have a few rough ideas: When you arrive home, you crash the shuttle and find your vilage completely destroyed. The government has bombed the city with an atom bomb but this couldn't get rid of the ghosts. You enter grandpas's house and find a machinery which he used to trap the energy of the Turner-stones. Now you can beat ghosts and trap them in this device. (NPC disappear after you beat them) Ghots are everywhere and they can control pokemons (the mutated animals), but not only ghots await you but also radiated people who (like ghosts) work together with the pokemons. You will find a lot a messages written by a person who calls himself "The Lurker". He gives explations and seems to be the only survivor. (he also defines the name:"pokemon"/poking animals from the moon). In the game there shouldn't be too much pokeballs around, you rather have to defeat pokemon sprites to get pokemon. "The Lurker" explains to you that after beating the wild pokemon they will become domestic but he hasn't found a method to keep them on his side. Here the machinery of grandpa comes in handy you use it to store up to 6 pokemon, the rest is saved to a chip. You can modify the accessible pokemons by connecting to a pc, but therefore you have to repair the pc's first. In pokemon centers you will find first aid kids. Your quest is it to make it through the city alive and escape the government which wants your death, but be warned about radiated people, the pokemon and the government police which tries to get you and bring you down. AND BEWARE OF THE GHOSTS STRIVING FOR REDEMPTION!

The End:
To save the world and get rid of the pokemon, you travel back to the moon (the origin of the bad) where you have to beat the 4 guardians (pkm league) and bring back the world to peace. There you meet Arceus (pkm champ) and you have to proof yourself to him and perhaps he brings peace to the world after you beat him?

Good idea or bad idea? New ideas are always welcome.
I'm not sure about the moon thing maybe you just start off in your hometown and the turner-stones will open a gate to "hell" and zombies and ghosts are invading your hometown, you will then have to get rid of them and the government is trying to shut your city down or smth like this
Please give me some feedback

ROBO-BOY · #**467** July 10th, 2012, 04:20 AM

Hack Information:
Hack of: Ruby
Language: English
Creator: ???

Information:
Hi. This is one of my newest storyline ideas and I was wondering what everyone thought so...

Storyline:
You start off late one night in your room in our world. You pick up either your puppy or kitten (This will decide your starter) and head over to your computer to check your Facebook when a message comes up saying only this: Enter for Adventure.
You click Enter and you and the animal you chose faint.
You wake up in a treehouse made out of metal. you turn to look at your pet and see that it has transformed into a machine(Mechapup for the puppy; Stetten for the kitten)!
You pick it up, still loving it, and go outside. You see a village of metal houses, trees, animals and mountains.
You have arrived in Cyberworld, is what you are told by a lady that walks up to you. She tells you that Cyberworld is a proggrame created by a person calling himself ROBO-GOD.
You venture out to find ROBO-GOD so he can send you back to Earth to check your Facebook, all the while defeating evil people and their metal companions, Up-Grading your monster, and capturing more in Cyber Cubes.
You run into a friend from the real world, Taylor, who does not ever tell of what she is doing there.
Will you ever get home? Will Taylor come to? Whill your monster turn back into an animal, or will you have to hide it from everyone for the rest of your life? And what will become of your other Metal Monsters that you captured along the way?

Cyberworld: The Metal Monsters

Ferox · #**468** July 10th, 2012, 12:38 PM

This is the idea I'm currently toying with.

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The Kanto region is relatively familiar but extended as Pokemon have changed the landscape. Mountains and rivers have opened up, and human settlements suffer from erratic attacks, usually by large dragon types but occasionally others as well. Sometimes defenses hold, sometimes cities burn.
Kids are encouraged to train their own Pokemon and travel, as that way if a town is ravaged there is less likelihood of a whole family being wiped out.

There are three teams pursuing their own agendas. The familiar Rockets, trying to exploit captured Pokemon; the Wardens, aiming to capture and confine the problematic Pokemon, and the Slayers who believe that the Pokemon which are dangerous to humans are better off destroyed.

There are also rumors concerning the origin of Pokemon. How does the Pokerus work, did a child really turn into a Kadabra? What do they want?

So you travel and train and learn a little more about the world, knowing that one day it is very likely that something will attack your home. Do you wait for it? Do you seek it out? Do you try to negotiate? Can you make it peaceful, or just safe enough?
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There's a lot of ideas there I'm toying with, it still needs a lot of fleshing out.

ThatOnePokemonKid · #**469** July 10th, 2012, 02:28 PM

I've had this idea for a while now and I'm not sure if it would be a doable thing or if people would even play it. I just wanted to come up with something original y'dig?

Now, let's get to business. Why not a game based of Fire Red or R/S/E on the Age of Discovery/Colonial Era? Here's my overall concept

You are a 16 year old boy/girl who recently arrived in the New World. Why did you go? Simple, some 50 years before, some explorers set sail and landed on a new land home to a group of mysterious creatures called "Pokemon". Your Grandfather was captain of one of the ships and you decide to relive history and go for yourself... alone. When you arrive you discover something sinister, an underground society called the Freetrainers (spinoff of the Freemasons lol) have taken over the land. They want nothing more than to rule the New World (haven't come up with region name yet) with an iron fist. The leader of the group is named Lord Norman. You must put an end to him and his tyrannical enslavement of people and Pokemon.

Features?
- 1st, 2nd, 3rd and 4th gen Pokemon
- No gyms, just the settlement leader and Lord Norman's inner circle for a double battle. Win? They surrender and give you proof of defeat (badge) Lose? You scurry to a doctor
- Region composed of 5 islands, each island except for the main will have 3 settlement leaders + 3 of Norman's henchmen
- Main island will be the final battle, NORMAN! This island will contain the largest settlement and his castle/lair/cave/bouncy pit. I dunno
- Each settlement will have an Apothecary (Pokemon Center) and Merchant (PokeMart)
- Only 2 legendaries, not sure which ones though
- Certain islands will have certain Pokemon

Please leave honest feedback, good and bad, hope you like the idea!

ROBO-BOY · #**470** July 11th, 2012, 06:51 AM

Pokemon: A Ruined World

You are a seventeen year old boy from Pallet Town, Kanto. Your world is coming to an end. Pollution, evil Pokemon and vicious attacks on the earth by a mysterious orbital laser have caused your planet to the brink of destruction.
You pick up your Pokemon, Pidgey, gather your mother, father, little brother and twin sister into the living room and make a plan. Your father, a renowned Professor of Astronomy, was able to find a world large enough to house the human race and all of Pokemon kind.
However, you are not sure whether the air is breathable and so you go off to the International Department of Spacial Activity in Saffron City and give them a document allowing the use of one spaceship to get to the new world.
But it's not that simple. People will try to stop you. Pokemon will block yor path in anger. Your friends will turn foe. And in the end, not all of you make it to Saffron...

Pokemon: Battles for Planet Pallet

You, your brother and your mum, along with several people that know what they are doing, are of board the Saffron Space Walker, a spacecraft that is set to take you to your destination; the newly discovered Planet Pallet, named after the hometown of the astronomist who first found it. On your way, you find that all the orbital lasering that has happened on Earth was from Team Rocket's new Orbital Pro Destructo 3000. You destroy it using the ship's cannons and then leave on.
When you land on Planet Pallet, you are finally able to use your Pokemon, Pidgey.
The air is fine, and that would have been the end of the mission, if it weren't for the fact that several green monsters had come up and attacked them. Pidgey fought them off, but they were to much for him, so everyone escaped back onto the ship, but it could not fly. It had been damaged by the aliens!
So you all have to sneek outside, contemplating whether or not you would have to stay stranded on this planet forever, knowing all the while that all of their loved ones back home's time was running out.
You decide to do something. So you sneak out and decide to find their leader and take them out.
Along the way, more and more ships arrive, sometimes saving your life, other times, being there to heal your Pokemon. You meet your father near the end, but he is being mind controlled and in order to save the human race from extinction, you must kill the alien queen controlling him, which unfortunately kills your father aswell.
But you have made a great sacrifice for your kind, and have saved the human race.
But what about the others back home..?

Pokemon: The End of the World

You are on your way back to Earth with your Pidgey in the Presidential Rocketer, being the hero of the Human Race. You set off to the Capital Cities of the Pokemon world, gathering all the people and Pokemon together to bring them to Planet Pallet.
Saffron, Goldenrod, (Whichever one the OA/I is), Rustboro/Lilycove, Jubilife, Striaton and Hotha(Auzza Region[shall be another hack]).
But again, people(AKA, Team Rocket), are trying to stop you and will go to any length to bring about the end of the miserable creatures that never brought them money or glory; Pokemon.
Once everyone gets into the air, the world crumbles into dust. You were just in time. But, Team Rocket had their own rocket and took down the Auzza, Unova and Sinnoh spacecrafts. But you, Hoenn, Johto and the Orange Islands' spacecraft blew up Team Rocket's rocket and Team Rocket was gone forever... or so you thought.

Ferox · #**471** July 11th, 2012, 10:45 AM

What do people think of the plot possibilities of including human-pokemon hybrids in a game? Someone mentioned the possibility in a list of nightmare fuel and I'm seriously considering including some as characters.

Doa · #**472** August 6th, 2012, 09:58 PM

I'm not really all that active, but I did come up with a brilliant idea that overshadows my MindPink project.

Presenting...

Pokemon: RocketCrystal

Introduction:

Spoiler:

Beginning the Journey:

Spoiler:

Johto:

Spoiler:

Questioning Orders:

Spoiler:

I'm not sure where to go with the second half of the story, but I guess anyone willing to take up the story (you don't need my permission, by the way, and the name's probably taken), they should go ahead and write it.

santyclop · #**473** August 7th, 2012, 01:12 AM

hey i umm i dont know if this idea is alreadsy out there somwhere but i got this out of a dream lol, any ways the story would revolve around a young boy who has been enlisted in the kef (kanto expeditionianary force) he is part of a small group of trainers sent to guard a famous explorer "professor sequoia" but en-route to the destination they make land fall on a strange landmass that dosnt show up on records, sequoia sends you and your fellow squad mate out to survey the surrounding area, however your ambushed by a group of government officaials from a strange nation youve never heard of. your friend is taken hostage and your told to leave emediatly. when you return to the professor she has already set up a mobile lab to do tests on the local surroundings, the main goal of this would be to rescue your frind and get home safely. the gyms would be replaced with "generals" and the elite four would be the vice chancellors to a strange figure name "the commander" i have many ideas and even a secuel to this stor planned in my head, problem is i dont have the skill to create this great piece. let me know how it sounds to others, and possibly if anyone would be willing to help me make it. thanks all

jeyemgi · #**474** August 10th, 2012, 05:48 AM

hi, i don't have time making hacks, but i do have some interesting storyline in the back of my head, that you might want to make into a hack, POKEMON REGION CLASH, the story start when your father gone through an adventure to be a pokemon champion, his name is known to the world as the "greatest loser of all time" because he never? won a single match (i mean in an official battle). so as a son/daughter you don't want to be like your father, and now you will begin your humiliating? journey (cause your the son of the well known greatest loser of all time you will humilated by others(rivals and trainers) in your road of becoming champion).you will choose one of your father's baby starting pokemon and start your journey. once a year there is a battle of the champion, each region(KANTO, JOHTO, HOENN, SINNOH, UNOVA, ORRE, FIORE, and ALMIA) will send their champion to participate in this 1 week competition(REGION CLASH). when i said region clash it will be also the battle of the legendaries and of course the trouble makers will teamup? to catch the legendaries and ruined the competition. but don't worry you can find someone to help you. that's all for now.

CypherLanguage · #**475** August 22nd, 2012, 03:24 AM

Here's an idea I've been toying around with.

The setting is somewhere in ancient history, approximately the same time Apricorn balls were invented. You play as a child in a small farming village. When wild pokemon (though that term won't have been invented yet, so they'll be called something else) try raiding the storehouses, you go to try stopping them (with no chance of success - they are monsters after all). A traveler who refuses to give their name assists you, and gives you a starter Eevee.

The traveler explains that they have been exploring and observing how humans and mystic beasts interact, and believes that there is going to be a change in it soon. They go on to explain why a monster of your own would be adequate protection to go investigating yourself.

The plot eventually leads to a confrontation with Giovanni's ancestor - a Conquest-style warlord - that decides whether Link Power or Poke Balls will continue on as the means of controlling pokemon.

Since this would take place before most modern items were invented, the item selection would be very limited: TMs would not exist, but there could be more Move Tutors. Herbal Medicine and Berries would be the primary methods of healing in the field, although they would all be buyable. Only Apricorn balls would exist, and they would only be bought at one place (similarly to Pokemon Colosseum and it's Outskirt Stand).

As for enemies, there would be fewer enemy trainers, but the slack would be taken up by human enemies with their own movesets: swordsmen who had mastered Cut, Martial Artists, and quite a few tutors who would test your worthiness by using their technique against you. That said, battles really wouldn't be any different than the mainstream games.

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