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Old January 1st, 2008 (2:13 PM). Edited October 11th, 2012 by liveletlove_Mix.
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Old January 1st, 2008 (2:28 PM).
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Uh, Mix... what happened to your old thread? =P And I don't think you're allowed to link to Serebii or any other forum for that matter. But anyways, you already know I like your fic, even though I never got past chapter four. Your long chapters just kill me, no matter how good they are. But that shouldn't stop others from enjoying your excellent descriptions and diction.

Theres been one thing I've been meaning to ask you: Why do you randomly double space (and sometimes triple space) between paragraphs? It looks like you just wanted the chapter to be longer with those random inputs.

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Old January 1st, 2008 (3:41 PM). Edited January 1st, 2008 by Astinus.
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Removed your links, Mixy. There's no advertising here. We'll just wait for the chapters to be posted here instead of going to other forums.

I'll read over your edited chapter to see what's changed. I was hoping you would bring this back here and finish it. But the review is going to have to wait since I have beta work and other reviews waiting.
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