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Old February 1st, 2008 (8:12 AM).
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Umm...ok this is my first poem here ya go!
I wrote this when I was bored lol.

From your every glimpse,
to every smile
It makes me faint,
and fly a mile.

When you come,
in my sight,
It makes my heart
shine and light.

You make my heart burst,
You take away my hunger,
and my thirst.
All I want to do is,
Love you first.

Your beauty is not something,
that is available to buy.
And something without which,
I would die.

When I see your eye,
gleam and shine.
It makes me wish,
that you were mine.

Hope you like it

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Old February 23rd, 2008 (12:09 PM).
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can you make another one that actualy is good
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Old February 23rd, 2008 (6:20 PM).
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Great job for a first attempt, hope you'll make some more. Now if you'll excuse me, I have to get off the floor.
Seven weeks until I graduate

Most certainly going to die

I'm so tired of reading and writing papers.

This is God's way of punishing me

At least I'm getting married this summer

I'm going to need a job

The hell are you reading these for?

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Old March 21st, 2008 (4:18 PM).
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Originally Posted by Guns n' Roses View Post
can you make another one that actualy is good
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Great job for a first attempt, hope you'll make some more. Now if you'll excuse me, I have to get off the floor.
Constructive criticism please.

I think it was Plato who said this: Suddenly, at the spark of romance, everyone is a poet...
Ah, my favorite subject. It's kind of easy to describe how you feel about love in the beginning, isn't it? I tend to run out of words to say, but that doesn't mean I don't stop loving. I'm sure you feel the same way, and I admire anyone who writes love poems. You're on your way awesome work.

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