Great job for a first attempt, hope you'll make some more. Now if you'll excuse me, I have to get off the floor.
Constructive criticism please.
I think it was Plato who said this: Suddenly, at the spark of romance, everyone is a poet...
Ah, my favorite subject. It's kind of easy to describe how you feel about love in the beginning, isn't it? I tend to run out of words to say, but that doesn't mean I don't stop loving. I'm sure you feel the same way, and I admire anyone who writes love poems. You're on your way awesome work.
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