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Old Posted February 17th, 2008 (08:37 PM). Edited February 22nd, 2008 by Charchic.
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Pokemon - The Regionz Secretz

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The following may not be suitable to all ages.
The following is suitable for 13+ - IT CONTAINS COMIC VIOLENCE AND SWEARING..

STORY: Welcome to the world of Pokemon, a world filled with mysterys, secrets and legends that if left untouched...are harmless. But sadly, like with many of the world's magnificent natural things, humans will enventually get their hands on them. But the next mystery they are about to stumble on, will not only change the fate of the regions, but will change the fate of the universe!

After being kidnapped Michael Smith and Liam Ankrah were taken to Team Death's hideout of doom, where Liam Ankrah carelessly looking into the eyes of Nurse Gloom, a Death Grunt. As so they were forced to flee to the nearest region, to the Kanto Region, where they are due to meet up with Martha Jones. A young fifteen year old girl from Pewter City.

But there is more to Martha Jones then you know. And this will all be reveiled eventually.

SO STAY TUNED FOR MORE ADVENTURES. IN POKEMON - THE REGIONZ SECRETZ.

IF YOU READ PLEASE COMMENT!

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CHAPTER ONE: JHOTO


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Pokemon: (Yeah okay...Rares allowed)
Side: (Good, Evil, Nuetral)
Occupation: (Rocket Grunt, Professor, ETC.)
Sprites:

PLEASE POST IF YOU READ THIS

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CAST - FROM LEFT TO RIGHT

NOTE, SOME OF THE FOLLOWING CAST MAY HAVE NOT SHOWN UP IN THE COMIC YET, THAT DOESN'T MATTER, ALSO. YOU MAY NOTICE CHARACTERS SUCH AS ARCHIE AND SHELLY ARE NOT ON THE CAST. WELL THEY ARE NOT EXACTLY MAIN CHARACTERS.



Name: Michael Smith
Age: 15
Pokemon: None
Gyms Beat: None
Biography: Not much is known about Michael, but he is scared of getting killed and his mother is his hero. He also hates Martha.

Name: Liam Ankrah
Age: 16
Pokemon: None
Gyms Beat: None
Biography: Not much is known about Liam eider, except he is very annoying as he ask too many questions.

Name: Martha Jones
Age: 15
Pokemon: Pikachu (F - Sparky) & Squirtle (M - Shellshock)
Gyms Beat: 1
Biography: Martha lives in Pewter City, which made it easy for her to get to the Pewter City Gym where she won her first battle, then her father Leon Jones the owner of a Day Care center in Sinnoh sent her a Pichu which eventually evolved, she wants to travel to Misty's gym eventually...and hates Michael.

Name: Jacqueline Masfield
Age: 41
Pokemon: Clefairy (F - Fairy)
Gyms Beat: 6
Biography: Jacqueline (A.K.A Jacqui) is Michael's mother, she used to be a great Pokemon trainer but now hates battling. Michael wants her to finish the last two gyms and she has recently started considering it. She lives in New Bark Town with her son.

MORE BIOS COMING SOON.
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Old Posted February 17th, 2008 (10:13 PM).
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It's okay. You need to work on the story though. It seems...kinda pointless so far. The bodies don't look dead, they look like they're still standing. And, try making the sounds in the comic, don't put *gunshot*

7/10 for effort. I'm sure it'll get better. ^^; Good work though.
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Old Posted February 17th, 2008 (10:21 PM).
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Thanks, yeah the story will develop, I also have a plan for what is to come, and it is quite exciting XD It will be fun to write. I will improve yeah. I haven't made comics for quite a long time so it is wierd coming back.

Thanks for the post.
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Old Posted February 18th, 2008 (12:23 PM).
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New episode up, enjoy. Comic Two: http://i29.tinypic.com/2f0d88w.png
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Old Posted February 18th, 2008 (05:32 PM).
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do we need to add overworlds to our app.?
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Old Posted February 18th, 2008 (05:45 PM). Edited February 18th, 2008 by Charchic.
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Yeah you do. Uhhmmm this comic now has a site, check it out, www.PokemonMS.co.uk

New comic, the plot thickens, you may notice I have quite a few original people on this. Including the new team, the nurse, the cameraman etc. Have a look and post please.

http://i32.tinypic.com/nx9a82.png
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Old Posted February 19th, 2008 (06:09 PM).
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i really like this comic, but there could always be improvements...like telling us who is who...also the dead people dont look deade, you should flip them sideways or just "X" the eyes, but its good, ill keep reading
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Old Posted February 19th, 2008 (06:24 PM).
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Thanks. Keep reading because the plot will get better.
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Old Posted February 19th, 2008 (06:28 PM).
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ok well since you have the option to join i might, just one question, wat type fo ows do you want (r/s/e, fr/lg, other) and wat type of trainer sprite (r/s/e, fr/lg, d/p, other)
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Old Posted February 19th, 2008 (06:31 PM).
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Any overworlds. I ain't fussy. People say don't mix R/S and FR/LG cos it looks unprofessional, I ain't trying to be professional, but D/P trainer sprite please.
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Old Posted February 19th, 2008 (06:40 PM).
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okay then heres my character

Name: cody hallows
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Pokemon: riolu chimchar treeko
Side: good i guess
Occupation: a snagger if thats allowed...if not a trainer

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if he can be a snagger ill give you the other sprites
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Old Posted February 19th, 2008 (06:44 PM).
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Yes a snagger is allowed.
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Old Posted February 20th, 2008 (10:15 AM).
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okay well then heres the other sprite
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Old Posted February 20th, 2008 (10:27 AM).
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Thanks, new episode today!
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Old Posted February 21st, 2008 (07:43 PM).
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Yo. No comic yesterday. Sorry about that. But here is a new one for you.

Comic Four: http://i25.tinypic.com/2iqcxgl.png

I'll add some extras to my post, as you see I have added the cast. Soon to come will be the sprites sheets you can use etc.

New comic later today, maybe more than one. I'll get on making it now.
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Old Posted February 22nd, 2008 (04:54 AM).
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good new chapter, just dont double post
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Old Posted February 22nd, 2008 (08:55 AM).
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Arrgh. I'd just jump in the water.
But honestly, how does Groudon even fit in the cave. He's supposed to be massive.

And why is the old Frontier guy there.
Are there ever any gym leaders with a bigger sense of morality than a nose for money >.<
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Old Posted February 22nd, 2008 (10:06 AM).
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hmm this looks very interesting
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Old Posted February 22nd, 2008 (12:08 PM).
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Thanks for the post.

New comic tomorrow maybe.

I'll see.
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