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Old November 21st, 2009 (10:40 AM).
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Isaac Asimov is the best. Three laws of robotics WOO! <3 <3 <3
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The Laws that govern Robots, must not be broken. He's a genius if i do say so myself. He even coined the term "Robotics", and possibly "Positronic".

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Speaking of robots, my school basically dumps its "outdated" technology whenever anything new rolls in. Outdated referring to 1.6 GHz Pentium 4's and such.
O_o That's sad... I on the other hand, still have my Pentium 4, 1.8 GHz computer from 2003. It's six years old as of a few months ago. I'd be sad to let it go. My brother owns a laptop though, so if I need to run a high powered application, i.e.Spore or Sims 3, then I'll just use his.

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Needless to say, I'm making a homunculus computer to take over the school and teach these people not to be so wasteful.
A homonculus is used to define an artificial human(Sorry for being a logic Nazi. XD). I'd love to see how you'd combine those two. People should be less wasteful. My Primary school had an old, really old, Windows 98 computers. A a side note, be careful when trying to manipulate the forces of nature. I'll let Randall Munroe explain...

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A homonculus is used to define an artificial human(Sorry for being a logic Nazi. XD).
It's "homunculus." :P

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A a side note, be careful when trying to manipulate the forces of nature.
Oh, there's no manipulation involved. I'll simply build the thing and unleash it. Hopefully it won't decide to like tea and crumpets instead of senseless destruction, because that would be very anticlimactic.

Anyway, I've got a complete computer now, but when I turn it on it just beeps at me. So something isn't working. Need more parts...
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Old November 21st, 2009 (11:20 PM).
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Quote originally posted by txteclipse:
It's "homunculus."
I hate typos, especially when I'm the one doing them. XD


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Oh, there's no manipulation involved. I'll simply build the thing and unleash it. Hopefully it won't decide to like tea and crumpets instead of senseless destruction, because that would be very anticlimactic.
I sure hope not, because it would seriously destroy the computer to have tea poured down its system. XD


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Old November 22nd, 2009 (12:30 AM).
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Quote originally posted by txteclipse:
It's "homunculus."
Both spellings are correct. Root "****", meaning man... "Homu" is only the more popular spelling due to pronunciation.
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Your fic character(s) have just been Rick Rolled. How do they react?
Being the fan of 80's music that she is, Lisa would sing along and dance. It would only be after the video that she would reflect on how she had been out-witted. Then things could turn ugly, depending on her mood...
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Old November 22nd, 2009 (08:03 AM).
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Your fic character(s) have just been Rick Rolled. How do they react?


Casey would be staring at the screen like "What just happened?". The joke would fly right over his head.

Rotom would dance to the music.

Caro would laugh and forward the e-mail/link to everyone he can think of.

Sheridan would facepalm and close the window.

Giratina would laugh very hard and nail Zero.

Zero would react similarly to Casey.
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Old November 22nd, 2009 (01:40 PM).
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Been a while since I've been here :P


Your fic character(s) have just been Rick Rolled. How do they react?


Shayla would laugh and forward it on to everyone she knows including her siblings.


Jasper would be like "Huh?"


Alice would get the joke and delete the email with the link from Shayla before she could get Rick Rolled.


Emmett would reacte similarly to Shayla.


Rosalie would get pissed off.


Edward would be slightly amused and send the link to Shayla.


Bella would probably laugh at it for a while before deleting the link.

Yeah, I'm writing a Twilight fic :P
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Your fic character(s) have just been Rick Rolled. How do they react?

Neo Past: Ignores it
Neo Future: Takes an axe
Sarina: Clicks on another link
Apollo: Finds errors in the video
Erif: Dances continuously, making the video get 100000 views per day
Exis: What is this thing called a computer?
Dark Neo: MUNCH MUNCH MUNCH MUNCH

Yeah, that's most of the main characters.
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Old November 22nd, 2009 (11:51 PM).
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Your fic character(s) have just been Rick Rolled. How do they react?

Laugh. And forward it on.
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Old November 23rd, 2009 (01:08 AM).
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Your fic character(s) have just been Rick Rolled. How do they react?

Phaiel: Depends on the situation. If he was looking forward to a file, he'd get angry. If not, he couldn't care less.

Kana: Laugh loudly and forward it to Phaiel to see how he'd react.

Sebastian: Create his own video featuring a compendium of unnaturally disturbing gifs with Rick Astley's Never Gonna Give You Up playing in the background, send it to the sender and ten other people with the note,
"Send to 10 other people within 5 days or else, you'll be next..."
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Old November 23rd, 2009 (05:28 AM).
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I have concluded that Tasmania is very green, full of buskers and does not particularly like the free internet concept in certain hotels.

Your fic character(s) have just been Rick Rolled. How do they react?

Hmm... Wes may either get annoyed or just quickly ignore it, depending on the situation, I suppose. Rui may gt confused, and not know about it in the first plac, even... if she did know she might also get annoyed, but not majorly. Espeon would act on it, to the rick roller's demise, Umbreon would go along with it happily, Makuhita would punch the rick roller, Croconaw would ignore it or make a remark about how sad it was rick roll was still being used, Johnson WOULD be oblivious, and I can't be bothered with the other characters.

Oh, and Miror B would proceed to dance and sing along.
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Old November 23rd, 2009 (06:16 AM). Edited November 23rd, 2009 by txteclipse.
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In other news, I somehow managed to delete a fair portion of my most recent chapter of the Eon Chronicles. As if I don't write slow enough.
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Old November 23rd, 2009 (10:35 AM).
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Lulz...

Welcome back bobandbill!!! Once again, the FFL proves to be a Black Hole. XD

In Fanfic news, I'm finding time to write, albeit slowly. I've switched to third person so this is going to get some getting used to.

In other, non-related news, I've started watching Elfen Lied. I have to say though, the part where small children sadistically kill a dog in episode 8 shocked me more than the first episode. And I'm a Sadist! O_o

If you're not into gore, don't watch this. I guess I should stop watching it at night though... I might not be able to sleep tonight. Hence one of the reasons that I'm here right now.
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Old November 23rd, 2009 (10:47 AM).
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Yeah... can't say much progress for my fic either XD

I've been watching Hunter X Hunter, myself...

At first I was skeptical (about the premise) but actually I really do like it, it is in some ways quite complex and in others ridiculously childish, which I do like in an anime. Of course there is always that forbearance of kids having super human powers, but that's okay. XD
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Elfen Lied was a bit too "clean" for me. It was like the scalpel of gory anime, rather than the bat-with-barbed-wire. The characters were also painfully shallow, which didn't help my being generally unfazed.

I much prefer things like Now and Then, Here and There, even though they're less messy, because the violence is just so intimate and unglamorized, and it's against characters I can care about.
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So, who here's actually looked in the poetry forum? xP

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Old November 24th, 2009 (12:32 AM).
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Your fic character(s) have just been Rick Rolled. How do they react?

Dianne: *chuckle* "Hm..." *sends it to everybody*

Ash: "Oh, man...who the heck in his or her right mind would send this to everyone?!"

May: *raises eyebrow* "Interrupt my Contest training, thanks, Di."

Misty: "CORSOLA, SPIKE CANNON!"

Dawn: *cracks knuckles*

Conan/Jimmy: *raises superpowered sneakers' dial to DANGER* "She's dead meat..."

Rachel Moore: "Nice song, shame Dianne's about to die."

Kirsten Thomas: (VERY similar to Rachel's, except for the cracking knuckles)

Harley Hartwell (I watch the dub): "Where's my sword?"

Kaito (Magic Kaito): "I think I have a new victim to steal from."

Amelia Fuller (Aoko Nakamori, MK): "Usually, my mop is reserved for Kaito, but I think I can make an exception..."

Brock: "Wow, cute girls..."

Pearl: "Hey, I could use this idea for our next double act!"

Diamond: *chuckles* "Wow, cool." *dances*

Platinum: "I am Lady Platinum Berlitz, and I come from the Berlitz house!! I AM NOT TO BE TAKEN FOR A FOOL!!" *calls out Empoleon*

Timmy Turner: "I wish I had something to beat Dianne with!"

Cosmo: "Wow! I've been Rickrolled!" *dances*

Wanda: "Alright, who's the smart aleck who sent this to us?"

There's too many to count...
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So, who here's actually looked in the poetry forum? xP

-hint hint-
Me! I even won PotW somehow! I kind of want to post some of my other stuff, but...it sucks. XD
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I poked around in it for a little while, but I'm not a big fan of poetry so I soon left. |3
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:P. I was gone until I figured out how to hook up my wireless keyboard to my wii. :p I've been itching to get this story off my chest, but I have no desktop, so I am going to write it on a blogging website or something, or maybe in my email. I love having my keyboard, it is so slow with the wii controller. :p Well, see you all around. xD

Happy Turkey Day everyone.

Oh speaking of Thanksgiving, my teacher made everyone scared of eating turkey. He said that someone died because the sleepy drug in it. Said they never woke up. Now people won't eat turkey :p. I'm excited. This boring break that I got just turned out to be some sort of exciting. Well, toodles~

p.s. It SUCKS not having my desktop because I CAN'T do a lot of the stuff like flash games and musics. :(. But eh.. I'll stop there, I've rambled enough.
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Hey guys., I hate to ask this but I was wondering if someone would take a look at my Twilight fic for me? I'm desperate for reviews. Link is in my sig. Pretty please?
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I found this funny for some reason. Anyone like to guess as to why?
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Old November 24th, 2009 (09:20 PM).
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Hey guys., I hate to ask this but I was wondering if someone would take a look at my Twilight fic for me? I'm desperate for reviews. Link is in my sig. Pretty please?
Ooooh, Twilight. Been meaning to reread that book and try to finish the series.

lol Breaking Dawn is going to be awesome

I'll try to read it come the holiday, and review as best I can.
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I found this funny for some reason. Anyone like to guess as to why?
Maybe because Astinus is the moderator of this section?
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