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Old October 23rd, 2003, 02:32 AM
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A Crystal Traveller's tale of Hoenn (Chain Story)
Well this is the return of an old chain story - you know the routine: reply with an exciting number of paragraphs. I'm starting.

It's a bright summer morning, as Kenta is on an adventure exploring the vast areas of Johto. Little does he know that this will be the biggest.


"Well this is a good view of Goldenrod City," Kenta said as he looked at a mountain view, "I can see the Radio Tower!"

Kenta looked at his PokGear as it was making sounds, and he pushed a few buttons.

"Kenta! So nice to talk to you!" said Marina's voice, coming out of the PokGear, "I seen some new area in Johto, and I think you will like it!"
"Great," Kenta replied, "What sorta place is it?"
"Some ruins," Marina replied, "I don't exactly know, and this place is full of sand..."
"Sounds boring..."
"I know but..."
"What?"
"There is some new Pokmon around here and... ahhhhh!" Marina screamed as the PokGear connection closed.
"Marina!" Kenta yelled, "Marina!!!!!!"

"She what?!?" a furious Jun'ichi replied over the PokGear, "SHE'S GONE?"
"I'm afraid she has gone missing..." Kenta replied, "I called her on the PokGear but the phone said that her PokGear couldn't be reached."
"WHAT?!?"
"SHE'S... GONE..."
"WELL THEN KENTA... WE ARE JUST GONNA HAVE TO FIND HER THEN..."
"But we haven't a clue where she is..."
"Let's meet at the Goldenrod Pokmon Center later. We'll talk about it then." Jun'ichi replied and shut the connection.


Marina awoke to find herself lying on a metal floor.
"Where am I?" Marina said.
She was in a room that was metal all around. There was a door at the side.
"I have got to get out of here."
A few Unown came towards her.
"Unown? Am I in the Ruins of Alph?"
The Unown went around her.
"What... are these things doing?"
She tapped on her PokGear but found all functions except the the map inaccessible.
"What? I can't even access the time and day!"
She turned on the map.
"No..."
The map didn't show her area, as the Ruins of Alph would be shown.
"I'm not even in Johto..."
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Old November 24th, 2003, 06:28 PM
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"Marina... my poor Marina is gone..." Jun'ichi cried.
"So are we just gonna sit here?" Kenta asked.
"We've got more than once place to look..."
"But then..."

A lady ran in.
"I have recieved intelligence that Marina of New Bark Town has been kidnapped." the lady said.
"I'm sorry, but..." Nurse Joy was interrupted.
"Uhmm we know." Kenta said.
"Argh! Marina's gone! And... and... and..."
Jun'ichi fell to the ground.
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Old November 25th, 2003, 12:05 AM
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This is double-posting in a way isn't it!?
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Old November 25th, 2003, 02:07 AM
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Actually it's called reviving the topic.
And I must say, I expected better than a comment about me "double posting in a way". I might have expected you make a reply in this Omega-Brendan. It's not like I'll ever put Satoshi in it. I might not do so at all. If the story stays in control.
But I must say... I think people hate me.

Can a mod remove the posts in this thread?
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