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Old July 8th, 2008 (09:34 AM).
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I came up with this one day, and after I edited it, it came out well. None of this is true about my family, but a friend of mine told me to post it here. So here goes,

My Dad's a triple large
My Mom's an XXL
My Brother's just as big
And my size isn't well.

It could have been potato chips
Cakes and doughnuts too
Although they taste quite good
They're not quite good for you

So keep this poem in mind
When you sit down to chow
Eat many fruits a vegetables
And you won't be a cow!

Yes, it's short, sarcastic, and sort of rude, but it's a fictional poem, it's not true at all. XD
Except for the part about eating fruits and vegetables, of course. Everyone needs to do that. XD So tell me what you think, feel free to say as many mean, bad, things as needed. You earned it! XD
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Old July 8th, 2008 (09:38 AM).
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It's awesome. XD
Very short and sweet. I like how the first and third lines don't rhyme but the second and forth lines do.
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Old July 8th, 2008 (05:32 PM).
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Heh. I should read that to my sister. She eats like a hog! xD

Anyway, I like this. You should post poems more often! :D
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