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Old July 13th, 2008 (6:52 AM). Edited August 3rd, 2008 by ๒inaryקlastic.
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Prolouge: http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/7528/prolougegm0.png
Episode 1: http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/4361/episode1iw0.png Impossible!
Prolouge: http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/5...olouge2bm9.png
Episode 2: http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/6139/episode2sr6.png Transmisson (look very carefully at frame 1 and 2)
Episode 3: http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/1204/episode3lw1.png Earthquake?!
Epsiode 4: http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/1725/episode4uc9.png The Base (Look VERY carefully at frame 4)
Episode 5: http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/4415/episode5ll6.png The Two Way Force Field
Episode 6: http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/1307/episode6yw2.png Weavile and Sneasile Snatchers

I have had a few comics in the past but they weren't that much of a hit. I hope this one is better. Please post your comments and please tell me how I could improve.

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Old July 13th, 2008 (7:06 AM).
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Old July 13th, 2008 (7:09 AM).
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Hm... I will stay tuned to see what happens next.
a rip in the universe seems like destructive fun >:D

you forgot the K in "know", but that's only a simple spelling mistake.
do what I do.

use spell check in microsoft word.

can't wait to see where this is going...
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Old July 13th, 2008 (7:21 AM).
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The whole point I made this sprite comic is so I could destroy stuff :D YAY!!! it's gonna include alot of Legnedary Pokemon and loads of destruction... I'm currently working on the first episode.
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The whole point I made this sprite comic is so I could destroy stuff :D YAY!!! it's gonna include alot of Legnedary Pokemon and loads of destruction... I'm currently working on the first episode.
excellent!

I'm glad someone finally said "screw it" and made a comic full of destruction and lengendaries.

Good luck with it.
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Old July 13th, 2008 (8:42 AM).
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There's the next episode up ^.^ hope u guyz lyk it :D
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Old July 13th, 2008 (8:47 AM).
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HM!!!!!!11111

You could work on text bubbles.
amybe a little more text could be used for better understanding.
but besides that, your going on the right track. :P
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Old July 13th, 2008 (9:03 AM).
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It was only a little episode which explained that space looked different so it didn't contain that much speach so it could build suspense... There's some spoilers below so read them if you wanna find out what happens next

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There will be alot of destruction in the first chapter and in the second chapter Deoxys will appear on earth. There will be an episode in the first chapter and it will be of Kyogre and Groudon fighting... Oh and the Earth just moved
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Old July 13th, 2008 (12:49 PM).
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Work on your grammar and spelling. Mainly, that's all. You might also want to not confuse us and explain via dialog a bit more, and have some sort of plot twist. Having Deoxys (Any other legendary) fight the rest of the legends combined and winning while some chosen one is elected is a tad overused. So don't do that :]

Good luck, you also might want to make sure you credit people from whom you borrowed stuff. K?

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honestly

i think it's pretty good, i mean the sprites are actually looking at the sky, and the void looks cool

i want more!
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Old July 19th, 2008 (6:38 AM).
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I Know it's another Prolouge but they're only really there to explain stuff so don't get worried as there won't be many of them...

Hope you likey :D
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Work on textbubbles! That's really important. If someone doesn't like the way the text is displayed, then they probably won't read it.

Secondly, google up some tutorials on how to make proper fight scenes using sprites. Seeing as you have MS Paint, you're going to need a miracle to pull off effects. By doing this, you can make your upcoming GroudonxKyogre battle more epic-like and less bland.

Also, try to stick with Mystery Dungeon backgrounds instead of the GBA ones. They look bad if placed with the wrong sizes. For example, Lucario was way too big around all of those trees. If you haven't been, go to the Spriters Resource for backgrounds. They have a ton for Mystery dungeon. If you have been there, then stick to those.

And another thing, MS Paint has the most useful ability to resize sprites correctly. If you don't know, open MS Paint-Image-Stretch/Skew. (Control + W works also.) It should be a small window, where it says stretch, you can use 200/300/400/500. (ONLY THESE. OTHERS WILL DISTORT THE SPRITE) (And type the same two numbers in both boxes under the stretch option. At the bottom where it says Skew just leave alone.) By doing this nifty feature, you can make panels that are zoomed in. Adds more detail, trust me.

Don't be discouraged though. I was merely trying to help you out. I'm sorry that I killed your buzz by being the one to type a long list of complaints. It's just, I know how it feels when you think you're doing great and some guy pretty much says you're doing it all wrong. In my case though, they never help. I'm trying to help you improve. So, good luck with the comic. I hope you improve.
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Old July 19th, 2008 (8:55 AM).
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Thanks alot !!! The reason I didn't resize Lucario is because I knew it would get disroted... I've been on spriters resource (thats where I get most of my sprites) and I have already made some Battle Backgrounds but not many Move Templates ... Thanks for being honest... You've really helped
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No pro-blem-o. Just follow that small little post up there and you can resize without worrying about distortion.
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There's the next episode (look carefully at the first and second frame) it's just a little one... Oh and I've got new software so my comics are gonna be better from now on ...
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Those r pretty kool!
I look forward to see some more. =)
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Thanks Eveeon and Estooz. There's the next one up I thinks it the best one yet in terms of Graphics... Enjoy ^.^
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Wow, that's pretty good. If it made me want to see more, that's pretty good.
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Wow this is really good.
But wouldnt you think Palkia would get really mad if space got ripped?
Oh and add Darkrai :D
Other than that really good!
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Old July 22nd, 2008 (8:55 PM). Edited July 22nd, 2008 by Tyrantrum.
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I really like this.
I don't understand what happened to Lucario though. :\
He just randomly gets warped. :\




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Thanks Eeveeon and I drum. The Lucario bit will be explained in the NEW chapter. In the new chapter it will focus on individual characters for about 3 or 4 episodes. It will explain some of there past and what's gonna happen next. It will be in a weird time order though. It will tell one Pokemon story and then tell another Pokemons story from the very begining. There will also be more clues on this mysterious Pokemon that tends to appear so keep your eyes peeled (OW!)
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Thanks Aggronomer

There's the next Episode up

It has the first fighting scene in

And sorry I haven't posted for a while, I'm beging to lose interest as no one is posting comments
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hahahaha! Trika Strikes! the last page is cool
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Thanks Darkly

Yup thats the mysterious Pokemon and his team.

More will be explained on him Later.
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