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Old August 6th, 2008, 11:26 AM
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Join Date: Jun 2008
Location: Hastings, NY.
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I currently write for a local band intitled, iamthequarantine.
I'm not that good, but they can't write at all.
This is a song I wrote for them.
Blahhhhh.


Its time I stopped hiding, My patience subsiding
I’ll let it pass over.
And now I Think I shouda’
Lived a new one, For a little bit longer.
I hate my paranoia.
I think I shouda’, Ended it sooner.
Its much less harder
When you gamble, not learning their names.
I think I shouda’ met a new one.
A little earlier in the game.

Ohh, my paranoia.
It starts a new one, an unexpected problem.
People are trying to get me.
It sounds a little bit cliché.
I remember the faces from my past.
I turned every corner searching for a dagger,
To stab me in the back.

This emotion is heavy,
We both know that I’m not that strong.
I might as well collapse.
I live to worry now don’t feel sorry.
Its beginning to fight for control.
Its madness inside and out.

I wouldn’t say that I’m going mental.
Its just another self induced battle.
If I get out alive after this one.
I have no choice but to sign up for another.
My brain makes these decisions for me.
These people don’t make it any better.

Ohh, my paranoia.
It starts a new one, an unexpected problem.
People are trying to get me.
It sounds a little bit cliché.
I remember the faces from my past.
I turned every corner searching for a dagger.
To stab me in the back.
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Old August 8th, 2008, 02:51 AM
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Renyui!
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Location: Sydney, Australia
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Nature: Hasty
Nice stuff! The last paragraph doesnt strike me as well as the rest, but good job!
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