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Old March 7th, 2009, 01:14 PM
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The master123 and BeattheSpecialStage's roleplays decline.

The master123: You've got enough material for my tastes, but I think you should go back and re-read it out loud to yourself. It's awkward and the grammar is funky.

Beat: You just described what happened in the manga. D: Try to elaborate more on your own plot and what the roleplayers are actually going to do.



tim0789's OOC thread approved.
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BeatTheSpecialStage's RP approved.

Alysa's and LilyAquakat's threads both declined for being submitted into the wrong subsection. Alysa's threads also failed to meet formal requirements. Glaceon Frost's RP declined for severe lackings in plot and failure to meet formal requirements. All of you need to go and give the section rules a good readthrough.
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Goulerbot's RP approved. Alysa's RP declined for lacking a sign-up sheet. The rest is fine, so please include one and you're ready to go. Quilavaking's thread declined for being in entirely the wrong place.
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u0850913's RP, Pokemon: Sinnoh Legends, declined for lackings in plot. We already have quite a few RPs that could be classified as 'those simple RPs', but with all of those, the thread creator went through the trouble of actually writing it out properly and I expect as much from you.
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Goodies.'s, slls81's, and Flax's RPs approved. u0850913's RP declined for duplicate(s). cooldude345's and ~Fire Eagle~'s RPs declined for lackings in plot. Both of you will have to be a bit clearer about your settings.
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Old March 17th, 2009, 02:18 PM
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Wolfwhispers's RP approved.
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u0850913's, Pikalover10's, FrozenSnowman's, Dark Mike's, Rabbit's, and lukefonfabre's RPs approved. Designation_Leader's, Royal's, and ZephyrII's RPs declined for lackings in plot. All of you need to be clearer on the subject matter, but in varying degrees.

Designation_Leader: Yours is a close call, but I want a bit more specifics on what the RPers are doing in the here and now and the general area where they're doing it.

ZephyrII: the idea is sound, but I want you to elaborate a bit more on the RPers' situation, how long they have been around, things which they should know from having been where they are etc.

Royal: you still have quite a bit to work on. I need a lot more specifics on the setting and some elaboration on what the RPers will find themselves doing.
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Keahi's, Royal's, and ZephyrII's RPs approved. Darkaoz's RP declined for lackings in plot. You are being extremely vague about the actual starting point of the RP and the events surrounding it. Expand, please. :\
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.Swift's, Techeon's, and Vindicated's RPs approved. Vanasaur001's, pokemongarnet's, dream's epilogue's, Jake™'s, and Neiko Star's RPs declined for lackings in plot. All of you need to be more detailed about what is going down in the RP and how. Ninja Tree's thread declined for being a non-entertaining piece of spam and doeboy9's thread declined due to doeboy9 rather blatantly not reading up the rules here before posting.
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Approved:
dream’s-epilogue’s Twin Horizons roleplay
.Swift's OOC thread


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pokemongarnet’s The Harono Region
lukefonfabre’s Pokemon Teams

King900000’s Secrets of Sinnoh

I really wish you had more actual plot, than just outlining of the Pokemon franchise. D:
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Pending OOC Threads approved.

Pending RPs...all declined. Yes. All of them. I see messy presentations, I see rushed work, I see glaring holes were description should be...just put in more effort guys, seriously.
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Old April 15th, 2009, 06:35 PM
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Royal and SilverCrown's roleplays accepted.
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Dutchesse's RP Survivors approved. Pending OOC threads approved. Pokemongarnet's RP The Harono Region declined for lackings in plot. It was just...very cookie-cutter, very vaguely described, and generally spoke of rushed work. Take your time writing and set up a proper plot. Djinni's RP Is this the end of the world? declined for being submitted to the lounge rather than the main section. The plot could also use a good bit of fleshing out.
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I Laugh at Your Misfortune!’s Pokemorph Journey
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Pokemongarnet’s Harono Region
dumbpikAchu’s Return of the Fossils.
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Poké-fyu's, Neiko Star's, and gishnax's RPs approved. Sirolu's RPs all declined for severe lackings in plot. They were just very rushed work that lacked basically all direction, setting and backstory. Please put some more thought and effort into your RPs.
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warudo.kun!'s and Amaranthine's RPs approved. Sirolu's RP declined for severe lackings in plot. Same problems as before. ~Rotom~'s RP declined for lackings in plot. The base idea is fine, but please expand on it a bit.
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CTFx's, Ramzam's, and Rekhyt's RPs approved.

~Rotom~'s RP declined for lackings in plot. I don't see much improvement from the last, and what little extra there is is just sounding more and more like Eragon. :\

Luke the Umbreon's RP declined for severe lackings in plot. It's not really making much sense...at all, and it's rather obvious that you just typed that out in five to ten minutes with the 'new thread' box. A bit more effort, if you please.
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grishnax's and Neiko Star's OOC threads approved. Bralucas' thread declined for being in the wrong section altogether.
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gilligan2011's and lunar mew's threads both declined for very obvious reasons. Please read the section rules to find out what said reasons are.
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Accepted:
PokeOps
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The Kanto Journeys - You've got a good start, but you don't tell us anything about the thieving, really. Take some more time to go a little more in-depth about what's been really happening.

The Meat Grinder - Looks good, but again, more info.



Pokecommunity is being ridiculous, so I'll update this later when I can actually do this accepting/declining process without going out of my mind.
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Mika's, ~Rotom~'s and Sloofish's RPs approved. Hansa's and .Razr's RPs declined for lackings in plot. I'll give you the details when I'm not in such a hurry. ;P
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Royal's RP declined for lackings in plot. Just...more description and preferably more originality, please. It was all cookie-cutter and not of very good quality either. :\
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Seriousness's RP declined for severe lackings in plot. Just...sloppy, rushed work and lack of details all around. You need to put quite a bit more effort into it. To be honest, it sort of looks like you took a piece of tracing paper, sketched out the really rough outlines of a certain other RP, threw in a bit of filler text and called it yours. Not cool. :\
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Flax's and KillehKiwi's RPs approved. Sumner's and Starmario's RPs declined for lackings in plot. Starmario, please work on both coherence and detail. I was seriously having trouble even following that all too scarcely elaborated plot. Sumner, your RP was really just the base generic variety with little to no detail. Please put a bit more effort into it. Vexx123's RP declined for severe lackings in plot. Though honestly, I may as well say 'complete lack of plot'. Yes, plot, setting, you actually need those things. Work on it. :\
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Old May 26th, 2009, 02:56 PM
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OH MY GOD GUYS.
I AM SO SORRY YOUR ROLEPLAYS HAVEN'T BEEN LOOKED AT FOR NEARLY A WEEK NOW. DX

It's totally my fault, I'm supposed to be covering and I'm not doing a good job of it. ;A;


Accepted Roleplays:
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Sumner's
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Anyone not mentioned above did not get their roleplays approved.
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