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Old August 29th, 2008 (03:28 PM). Edited July 23rd, 2010 by obLonG.
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This is my first sprite comic,whaddaya think?Isn't the banner awesome?And please comment if I need work done or just want to comment about my comic:
These comics are rated from G to pg-14

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1: Brendan and Handy.

2: Not Goodity

3: Hated Love

4: The hand, the bitxx and the axxhole

5:This is not a Plot Device

6tupid backpack,love is for kids

7:Rise of demon may

8:Beams and Pee

Filler: Point of view

9: He looked

10: They're shiny

11: Discussing, Disgusting

12uspense and Crossbreeding

Filler:Important Generation Rape

13: Slap of Bitxxiness[Pg-13]

14: The Anti-Heroes [NEW]
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My new video series(demos available for feedback, click the link to go to the thread):


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Old August 29th, 2008 (03:42 PM).
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I... don't get it. He's on a truck... and that thing is Ping Pong? I'm confused. O___o;;
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Old August 29th, 2008 (03:46 PM).
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In pokemon Ruby you start out in a moving truck,so hes in a moving truck playing ping pong on the computer with a giant floating glove
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Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



My new video series(demos available for feedback, click the link to go to the thread):


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Old August 29th, 2008 (04:01 PM).
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i dont get it either... although my 'comics' never made sense either but i like the hand.. but i dunno why.
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Old August 29th, 2008 (04:02 PM).
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He's just on the computer(The box thingy hes sitting in front of)playing ping pong with the hand.
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Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



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Old August 29th, 2008 (08:01 PM).
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ohhhhhh...i get it now. He's riding in a truck playing ping pong on the computer and with it. So, why did you decide to put the computer as a hand?
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Old August 29th, 2008 (08:10 PM).
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The hands not really a computer.Its a living breathing hand(breathing not actual feature)just read comic 2
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Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



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Old August 29th, 2008 (09:39 PM).
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Is the hand meant to be master hand from Super Smash Bros/Melee/Brawl? lol I like the last scene in comic 2.
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Old August 30th, 2008 (02:43 AM).
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Thanks and no its just a normal hand.
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Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



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Old August 30th, 2008 (06:30 PM).
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wow, alot of questions about a hand. lol. anyway, haha psycho mudkip. loved that bit.
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Old August 30th, 2008 (06:40 PM).
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i seriouslt still get it or find it funny... im sorry but i dont and bit with the title is way to messy
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Old August 30th, 2008 (07:04 PM). Edited September 3rd, 2008 by obLonG.
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The titles are also written in normal text right above the Comic but I'll fix the titles in the next comic.I also got the Title page up
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You can stand and pee.Sure just go ahead and tinkle.Have some fun.Knock yourself out for all I care.Heck,pee all over your bathroom if need be.Just don't stand and poop.

Who Am I?
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Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



My new video series(demos available for feedback, click the link to go to the thread):


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Old September 4th, 2008 (11:11 AM).
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I actually love this
First I didn't understand, then I got it.
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Old September 4th, 2008 (01:45 PM).
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Thanks man.And i'm sorry that I took so long to get the 4th comic up.Its just that I had this play I had to perform.
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You can stand and pee.Sure just go ahead and tinkle.Have some fun.Knock yourself out for all I care.Heck,pee all over your bathroom if need be.Just don't stand and poop.

Who Am I?
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Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



My new video series(demos available for feedback, click the link to go to the thread):


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Old September 5th, 2008 (11:42 AM).
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these are great, i love how its not a total cliche pkmn comic u gotta make more

the hand is the one from in your PC when u move pkmn and stuff
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Old September 5th, 2008 (12:48 PM). Edited September 5th, 2008 by obLonG.
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It was the originaly going to be the pc hand but I changed it to the Sinnoh trainer card hand cuz thats more manipulatable to show what its doing or how it feels.And comic 5 is up.Do you think I should make some supporter banners?
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Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



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Old September 8th, 2008 (12:44 PM).
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Old September 8th, 2008 (01:12 PM).
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... I still don't really understand alot of this. Okay, so you have a hand as a character, I get that, but...

Okay, the 2nd makes sense for the most part, but then what's with the weird transition between 3 & 4? The mudkip chasing the person does nothing really funny or important, it's just kinda thrown in there. I assume it was just to set up for #4, but... it just seems like wasted potential, that could've been entertaining if it wasn't rushed through.

#5 confuses me also witth he masterball part, but... I'm not sure I want to know. XD

And, may I ask... what is going on with the backgrounds of random sprites? They're distracting from the actual comic, and look time-consuming. You could just use your time to make more comics, since I doubt anyone has a positive reaction to them. The first comic's layout looks nice, and the title doesn't distract from the comic. I suggest using that, it looks much nicer.
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Old September 8th, 2008 (09:24 PM).
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Thanks for the feedback and yes #3 was just a set up for #4.And you don't want to know the masterball meaning in #5.Trust me I didn't like it either.
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Who Am I?
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Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



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Old September 12th, 2008 (11:19 PM).
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thats pretty cool. i suck at those thingies
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This is a pretty awesome comic. It's a good thing I posted before one month was up.
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lol this is well good when you Posting your next one?
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Old October 13th, 2008 (11:56 AM).
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This is a mess. I can't tell what's going on at any point in time and the panels are spread out all over the place. Why not just put them side-by-side?
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Old August 14th, 2009 (08:08 PM).
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A note to say that this comic is now on hiatus(as if it wasn't while I was gone.Heh)until further notice.Read my sig for details.
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Who Am I?
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Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



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Old August 18th, 2009 (03:51 AM).
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For those of you think I'm just sitting there trying to fool you,well you're wrong!
To show you what I'm working on I'm going to upload a sneak peek from time to time to show you anything new underway.

So sneak peek #1 away!:
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Who Am I?
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Pokepark, my old comic. Is now dead. And it will stay dead. Instead I've moved on to a new project.



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