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Old September 19th, 2008 (02:30 PM). Edited November 11th, 2008 by Glitter Stain.
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Old September 19th, 2008 (03:53 PM).
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Woah, that is actually really good. It kind of sounds like lyrics to a song. That would be a great song Remember just too add fullstops at the end of the sentences, so it is readable/singable.
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Old September 19th, 2008 (04:06 PM).
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Quote originally posted by *Dark*Master:
Woah, that is actually really good. It kind of sounds like lyrics to a song. That would be a great song Remember just too add fullstops at the end of the sentences, so it is readable/singable.
Thanks. I didn't think about this possibly being a song, but I guess you're right.
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Old September 19th, 2008 (05:39 PM).
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Oops...i opened it...

Dude-tte, that was seriously awesome, and gave me the chills; i'd be the one to open it.
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Old September 19th, 2008 (06:29 PM).
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Quote originally posted by Cobalt36:
Oops...i opened it...

Dude-tte, that was seriously awesome, and gave me the chills; i'd be the one to open it.
Well, thanks for your comment. I'm glad to know that you'd be the one to open the box. XD
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Old September 19th, 2008 (06:36 PM).
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This stanza is by far the cutest thing I have ever read about boxes. Ever.
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Old September 19th, 2008 (06:40 PM).
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Quote originally posted by Gymnotide:
Shorten this line.

I thought that I ought to shorten the line. I'm working on it, but I don't think it's that distracting whether I change it or not.

This stanza is by far the cutest thing I have ever read about boxes. Ever.
Thanks for your comment. And, XD, cute boxes.
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Old September 22nd, 2008 (02:15 AM).
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this is incredible. i never would thought of something great with a box. good job
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Old September 25th, 2008 (12:09 PM).
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Quote originally posted by Mikau1:
this is incredible. i never would thought of something great with a box. good job
Thanks, I didn't think it was incredible. XD
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