Human Destruction

Okay, this is my first Roleplay, and I'm still not quite sure what the difference between the lunge and regular roleplay section is.
I assuming though that this is where you get tips on your story, how to make it better, and maybe a couple early sign-ups (corret me if I am wrong)

Here is my roleplay (oh, yes I have gone over this one, and fixed the horrible grammer and spelling in my earlier one).

It has been 100 years since the settings of the last Pokémon games.
Throughout the stories of the 1st, 2nd, 3rd and 4th generation games, the "Heroes" of the story preformed several foolish actions that would doom the world for a long time to come.
This is a list of actions that have led the world into a state of turmoil, aided by the very people who tried to avert this.
Year 2000 in the Pokémon world.
2000:
Kanto:
1. After team rocket's leader Giovanni, is defeated, he is let escape by "Red". He goes to work on a secret plan.
2. Red, in his foolishness goes on to capture the three legendary Kanto birds.
3. Red goes on to capture Mewtwo, having escaped and turned over a new leaf.

2001:
Kanto:
1. Several Pokémon have started to realise the disappearance of the legendaries in their region, and start to slowly take over it. Reports of Pokémon turning against their trainers start to appear.

Jhoto:
1. "Gold" destroyed team rocket radio tower plans, without noticing the maps that read the location of many more radio stations.
2. Many wild Pokémon start evolve quickly and become overpowered due to secret radio stations (in Jhoto that evolve Pokémon).
3. Gold captures the three Jhoto dogs, Lugia and Ho-oh, and Celebi.
4. Gold releases the unknown upon Jhoto.
5. Reports appear in Jhot of strange apparitions, Pokémon and buildings created by letter like figures in Jhoto.
6. Coastal cities in Jhoto start to suffer rapid whirlpools.

Sinnoh:
1. Dialga becomes more worn out as it struggles to control dilemmas in time, because of the capture of Celibi.

2005:
Kanto:
1. Pokémon in Kanto continue to go out of control.

Jhoto:
1. Reports of strange letter Pokémon continue, and several sightings lead to these Pokémon being called "The Unknown". These Pokémon use their powers to create a boat and escape to several caves in the Kanto isles, but many stay in Jhoto.
2. Many bodies of water in Jhoto start to become polluted due to the fact Suicune can no longer purify them.

Hoenn:
1. "Landon" captures all three weather pokes (Groudon, Kyogre and Raquazza), as well as the three Regi's of Jhoto, Mew (which was taking refuge in Hoenn at the time, to try and calm the havoc in progress) and the Lati-twins.

Everywhere:
1. In every region, Weather starts to fall into turmoil, Pokémon seem more uncontrollable, and continents, minerals and bodies of water seem to stop forming (because of the Regi triplet's capture). Scientists are stumped.

2007:
Everywhere:
The amounting turmoil continues to excel.

Sinnoh:
1. " Platinum" succeeds in freeing Dialga, Palkia and the free pixies, but then captures them.
2. Space itself stops advancing and in a chain reaction, Orre in destroyed and temporarily balances the crisis. Without Dialga time goes unmonitored, and because of the pixies capture, several virtues seem to slowly disappear.
3. Platinum continues, capturing Darkrai, Cresselia and Shaymin, as well as several Manapy.
4. Dreams and nightmares go out of control and many forests turn into managled bodies of vines and thorns.
5. Regigigas and Heatran are captured. Volcanoes cease to be active and continents cease to move.
6. Arceus wakes up, drained of much power.

Everywhere:
1.The tie of the capture of the legendary Pokémon, and the events, is finally made.
2. The four, "Legend Hunters" are called to release their legendaries, but do not, instead teaming up and locking them in coded master balls (of which only they can open). They then store these in the PC system.
3. Giovanni, expecting this, releases his secret weapon he has been preparing for years; a computer virus devastating all the PC stations and storage areas. Every poke ball in storage flies out of the storage areas, but just as this happens, a brief space distort sends most of the poke balls, scattered all around the globe, including Every legendary that was stored.

2008:
Everywhere:
1. It is decided that every Legendary captured, must be rounded up (it is unknown to all about the coded balls).
2. The 4 legend hunters are killed in riots.

The course however, was not swift, and 100 years later, barely any progress has been made.

What has happened over the 100 years:

The state of the world continually degraded, leaving barren wastelands all over the world.
2010: Mewtwo's poke ball was found by Team Rocket, and they started work on the code.
2015: The Pokémon leagues in all continents disbanded to aid the world.
2020: The first of the five puzzles on Mewtwo's poke ball is solved.
2022: Contacts are made by the governments with Arceus, who tells them he is weak at the current point of time, and will take another 178 years to recover. He does, however tell them; he can solve the codes of the Poke balls given to him (a first to the governments) in a month or less. And that there are some legends remaining:
Giritina, Something he called a "Deoxys", Jirachi, and some "Manapies"
2030: Deoxys, done using it's power to scan the world's state of turmoil, decided to wage was with Jirachi, forcing it into a sleep it could not awake from until his defeat, but then left the world for space again, destroying the hope of wishing away the turmoil.
2050: Humans started to retreat underground to escape most weather effects and wild Pokémon, which by now, most of were attacking humans on sight. Humans, had started to recover and re-tame Pokémon lost in the PC disaster.
2070: The following cities, have been destroyed-
Cerulean, Cinnabar (the actual island is all gone), Pacifalog, Litteroot and the entire battle area island on Sinnoh.
2080: Two more digits on Mewtwo's poke ball are solved.
2118: Arceus has regained enough power to light up, on the sky, and display the locations of all remaining legendary Pokémon balls. Everyone can see these, and a group of powerful Pokémon trainers (which is uncommon in this age due to death), which is you, sets out to find them, before evil doers, and of course team rocket.

There are a few different paths you can undertake. You could be a trainer attempting to regather all the Legends for Arceus, or a protestor/team rocket member trying to gather them for yourselves or destroy them.



Things to note on your quest:
Your views are rather unique in this age. Most people now believe the only way to end the turmoil in to destroy the balls, which they have the technology to do at every major city.
The world is now without many of its communicating systems, is unpredictable and most maps are at least 60 years old.
The world is in an economic depression.
Pokémon have advanced (as in, genetic evolution), and many have new unpredictable evolutions that can be triggered.
The world is now fairly violent and gang prone.




Rules
Nobody really likes them but they must be followed if this Roleplay is gonna work! Read them or you won't be accepted!

All PC rules apply here! As obvious as it is, some tend not to follow. O.O
No Godmodding at all! Not even with permission! Okay?!
No bunnying unless you have permission! Understood?
Joining up to this RP means you have to join a series of RPs. This is the first chapter of the Pokemon Chapters series, so when the next chapters pop up, you must join them! Not much of a commitment... really!
Keep swearing at a low, same goes with violence and any lovey-dovey scenes! (Who wants to be having loved-dovey seens anyway o.O)
Once all spaces are filled, I'm afraid you won't be able to join, so hurry And remeber, there are only two spaces available
If you want to be accepted, you must have good grammar, spelling and you must follow the sign-up sheet properly :|
Have fun ^^ I mean, if you're not having fun. what's the point in RPing


Okay, the sign up sheet.

If you wish to be on the good side, hunting the legends for Arceus:
Name:
Gender:
Age ( 13 to 15):
Personality:
Appearance:
History:
Pokémon: (maximum of 6, 2 may have new evolutions which you must describe to me)

If you wish to be on the other side of things:
Same as the first sign up, but you must add this:
Team Rocket/Protestor (trying to destroy the legends)

Okay, that's it!

Name: Cloud

Gender: Female

Age: 15

Personality: Ever since she was young, Cloud had a mean streak towards pokemon, although when it came to people she could talk forever quite happily. Her attitude towards pokemon changed when she was 10 though, and now they are her only true companions. She is shy towards new people, and takes a while to open up due to the attack. Also, she is hotheaded when it comes to descision making and quick to get her own way, due to her slightly spoiled upbringing.

Appearance: Long Dark Hair, Warm clothes (Blue fleecey coat, Yellow/Red Striped Beanie, White ski trousers) Always keeps a bag with food and other useful supplies in.

History: When she was 10 years old, a gang raided on her home outside Looting all her most prized possessions, and badly injuring her parents. Since she was too young to carry them to medical aid in Snowpoint, she decided to go there alone and bring someone back, but she only made it about a half a mile before she collapsed. she awoke in a warm cave with a glaceon and an egg, and food collected in a small pile. over the course of around a month, she learned to communicate with glaceon, and learned that the egg was not hers, but she found it next to Cloud when she found her. The egg soon hatched into a Mareep, and with glaceon at her side, Cloud decided to head back to "civilisation".

Pokémon:
Glaceon(f)
-Hail
-Ice Beam
-Blizzard
-Bite
-Ice Fang
-Shadow Ball
"Fluffy" the Flaffy(m)
-Charge
-Discharge
-Signal Beam
-Rain Dance
-Headbutt
-Light Screen
"Ember" the Quilava(m)
-Flame Wheel
-Flamethrower
-Rollout
-Aerial Ace
-Eruption
-Slash

Sorry if somthings wrong, its my first sign up sheet :) Also, if its not long enough, I could probably pad it out a bit, looking at some on other RPs and it looks a bit short, not sure :s

Clouddyl said:

Name: Cloud

Gender: Female

Age: 15

Personality: Ever since she was young, Cloud had a mean streak towards pokemon, although when it came to people she could talk forever quite happily. Her attitude towards pokemon changed when she was 10 though, and now they are her only true companions.
Appearance: Long Dark Hair, Warm clothes (Blue fleecey coat, Yellow/Red Striped Beanie, White ski trousers) Always keeps a bag with food and other useful supplies in.

History: When she was 10 years old, a gang raided on her home outside Looting all her most prized possessions, and badly injuring her parents. Since she was too young to carry them to medical aid in Snowpoint, she decided to go there alone and bring someone back, but she only made it about a half a mile before she collapsed. she awoke in a warm cave with a glaceon and an egg, and food collected in a small pile. over the course of around a month, she learned to communicate with glaceon, and learned that the egg was not hers, but she found it next to Cloud when she found her. The egg soon hatched into a Mareep, and with glaceon at her side, Cloud decided to head back to "civilisation".

Pokémon: Glaceon(f), "Fluffy" the Flaffy(m), "Ember" the Cyndiquil(m)

Sorry if somthings wrong, its my first sign up sheet :) Also, if its not long enough, I could probably pad it out a bit, looking at some on other RPs and it looks a bit short, not sure :s

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Everything is fine, but your pokemon, might want to be a bit more evolved and elite.

ok, Fluffy'll evolve like, stright away, and i'll turn Ember into a Quilava, but a pretty strong one :)

This is my sign up!
Name: Tandra

Gender: female


Age: 14

Personality: Tandra is a closed and silent sort of person, preferring to be on her own and avoiding large crowds and groups of people. She likes to be around pokemon more than people and often hides in forests and bushlands whenever possible. In any situation, Tandra can remain calm enough to do what is needed to give her time to plan a victory, escape, etc.

Appearance: taller than the average height for girls her age, wearing a long maroon, split tailed dress coat. Black jeans, sneakers and a maroon 3/4 sleeve shirt. She always carries a bag which almost magically seems to have naturally many things in it.

History: Tandra was born in the year 2104, a decade before Arceus regained enough energy to show where the pokeballs containin the legendary pokemon were. At that time, Tandra lived in Johto alone, as her father and mother had mysteriously disappeared when she was a year old and had been found by a lady who was in her 40s' at the time. The woman cared for her as if she was her own child. later, when she was old enough, the woman decided to let her try to tame a few pokemon to see if she had the strength to. Tandra's first pokemon was her foster mother's pokemon's egg. The egg hatched into an Absol, therefore immediately obeying tandra without causing her any harm. Slowly, Tandra began training the Absol to listen to her commands and to use it to catch more pokemon for her team, training and evolving them. Strangely though, with all the genetic disturbances coming and going, her Absol didn't evolve or change once besides the colour of her fur. When Arceus had gathered enough energy to reveal where the pokemon were, Tandra decided she wanted to stop any more disasters happening and set out to find the pokemon no matter what.

Pokémon:

1. Tuliae-Absol(M) It's also strangely coloured due to genetic um, problems(attachments)
Moves: Shadow Ball, Shadow Claw, Protect, Thief, psycho cut and dark pulse

2. Amber-Ninetales(F)
Moves: Flamethrower, substitute, Fire Blast, detect, sunny day and Dragon rush

3. Husky-Houndeath(F) The evolution of Houndoom. It has another pair of smaller horns at the back of it's head and the front horns are extended. It's tall is longer and there are three rings around it's legs instead of two. It still has the same colours.
Moves: Crunch, Hidden power[fire], Dark void, Dragon dance, Shadow Claw and iron tail.

4. Treilk-Honchkrow(M)
Moves: Fly, feather dance, sky attack, per beam, Haze and night slash

5. Glacie-Weavile(F) Powder snow, Surf, Blizzard, fury attack, pursuit and night slash.

6. Tantum-Lioine(M) The evolution of Arcanine. It has a larger mane and all the fur on it's chest and legs are gone. Instead of orange, the fur on it's body is a deep sapphire blue while the mane and tail is sky blue. The stripes are still black.
Moves: Extremespeed, Aura sphere, Overheat, Flare Blitz, fire fang and Fire Burst(a move that is like ember but more stronger)

Name: Yassan
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Personality: Usually deemed by others as cold and unfeeling, most don't realize that Yassan just isn't into talking or how others see him. For stark contrast, when put around others like him, it's impossible to shut him up. He is the atypical loner, preferring the company of his thoughts and his pokemon to the company of others.

Apperance: Tall (6'2) and thin, with most of his strength concentrated in his lower body, Yassan has black hair and a number 1 crop, which he typically grows to a #3 before shaving it back down to a #1. Warm clothes (Leather jacket, jeans, and boots) and an old army pack in which he carries spare clothes and food.

History: Originally from Mahogany Town, Johto; Yassan and his older sister attempted to move to Sinnoh in the hope that the colder climate would keep pokemon away from humans. Unfortuantly, the two were ambushed by a gang near Goldenrod, killing Yassan's sister and capturing him. While in captivity, Yassan was pretty much a slave, doing whatever needed doing or what nobody else wanted to do. This was how he met his first pokemon, a Larvitar. After escaping the gang that enslaved him with the help of his new Larvitar in an undisclosed accident (the result of his captors living a tad too close to the ocean), he made the journey to Newbark Town, where he found a Cyndaquil in the remains of Elm's pokemon lab. Managing climb the frozen Tohjo Falls, he succeded in crossing to Kanto and boarding a ship bound for Sinnoh.

Pokemon: Pupitar (M) [Rock slide, sandstorm, thrash, crunch, dig, toxic]
Typhlosion (F) (flamethrower, ember, smokescreen, overheat, sunny day, earthquake)
Hitmonchan (M) [comet punch, revenge, bulk up, ice punch, fire punch, thunder punch]
Arkhyados [M] [flamethrower, wing attack, aerial ace, hyper beam, dragon dance, fly]
(an evolved form of Gyarados- (dragon/fire, which resembles a larger, orange and white Gyarados with dragon-like wings and two stubby legs for landings, and an even worse temper than the original gyarados) [picture coming soon]

Clouddyl said:

ok, Fluffy'll evolve like, stright away, and i'll turn Ember into a Quilava, but a pretty strong one :)

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No, you stilll don't understand....you are on a quest to save the world! Your pokemon are already pretty stong! you can have a max of 6 pokemon on your team, which I reccommend a minimum of 4, and two of those pokemon can have evolutions that you make up and describe to me. They should be fairly stong. Refer to the power of dragonqueen's team.

dragonqueen0210 said:

This is my sign up!
Name: Tandra

Gender: female


Age: 14

Personality: Tandra is a closed and silent sort of person, preferring to be on her own and avoiding large crowds and groups of people. She likes to be around pokemon more than people and often hides in forests and bushlands whenever possible. In any situation, Tandra can remain calm enough to do what is needed to give her time to plan a victory, escape, etc.

Appearance: taller than the average height for girls her age, wearing a long maroon, split tailed dress coat. Black jeans, sneakers and a maroon 3/4 sleeve shirt. She always carries a bag which almost magically seems to have naturally many things in it.

History: Tandra was born in the year 2104, a decade before Arceus regained enough energy to show where the pokeballs containin the legendary pokemon were. At that time, Tandra lived in Johto alone, as her father and mother had mysteriously disappeared when she was a year old and had been found by a lady who was in her 40s' at the time. The woman cared for her as if she was her own child. later, when she was old enough, the woman decided to let her try to tame a few pokemon to see if she had the strength to. Tandra's first pokemon was her foster mother's pokemon's egg. The egg hatched into an Absol, therefore immediately obeying tandra without causing her any harm. Slowly, Tandra began training the Absol to listen to her commands and to use it to catch more pokemon for her team, training and evolving them. Strangely though, with all the genetic disturbances coming and going, her Absol didn't evolve or change once besides the colour of her fur. When Arceus had gathered enough energy to reveal where the pokemon were, Tandra decided she wanted to stop any more disasters happening and set out to find the pokemon no matter what.

Pokémon:

1. Tuliae-Absol(M) It's also strangely coloured due to genetic um, problems(attachments)

2. Amber-Ninetales(F)

3. Husky-Houndeath(F) The evolution of Houndoom. It has another pair of smaller horns at the back of it's head and the front horns are extended. It's tall is longer and there are three rings around it's legs instead of two. It still has the same colours.

4. Treilk-Honchkrow(M)

5. Glacie-Weavile(F)

6. Tantum-Lioine(M) The evolution of Arcanine. It has a larger mane and all the fur on it's chest and legs are gone. Instead of orange, the fur on it's body is a deep sapphire blue while the mane and tail is sky blue. The stripes are still black.

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Excellent! Your in! Accepted!

dc_united said:

Name: Yassan
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Personality: Usually deemed by others as cold and unfeeling, most don't realize that Yassan just isn't into talking or how others see him. For stark contrast, when put around others like him, it's impossible to shut him up. He is the atypical loner, preferring the company of his thoughts and his pokemon to the company of others.

Apperance: Tall and thin, with most of his strength concentrated in his lower body, Yassan has black hair and a number 1 crop, which he typically grows to a #3 before shaving it back down to a #1. Warm clothes (Leather jacket, jeans, and boots) and an old army pack in which he carries spare clothes and food.

History: Originally from Mahogany Town, Johto; Yassan and his older sister attempted to move to Sinnoh in the hope that the colder climate would keep pokemon away from humans. Unfortuantly, the two were ambushed by a gang near Goldenrod, killing Yassan's sister and capturing him. While in captivity, Yassan was pretty much a slave, doing whatever needed doing or what nobody else wanted to do. This was how he met his first pokemon, a Larvitar. After escaping the gang that enslaved him with the help of his new Larvitar in an undisclosed accident (the result of his captors living a tad too close to the ocean), he made the journey to Newbark Town, where he found a Cyndaquil in the remains of Elm's pokemon lab. Managing climb the frozen Tohjo Falls, he succeded in crossing to Kanto and boarding a ship bound for Sinnoh.

Pokemon: Pupitar, Quilava

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Great, except for one problem, refer to the advice towards to the power level of your pokemon I gave Cloud.

When does it start? just out of interest
EDIT also, tomorrow i need to add somthing to the SU, i though of some new personality stuff that needs adding

Clouddyl said:

When does it start? just out of interest
EDIT also, tomorrow i need to add somthing to the SU, i though of some new personality stuff that needs adding

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It starts when I have 5 accepted sign-ups, If you need to add some things to the SU, simply do it and post or pm me to alert me it has been updated.

Name: Beo Zan
Gender:Male
Age: 15
Personality: Beo is a laid back kid, when it comes to what has happened to the world. He can be cocky at times, this may be due to the way his father raised him. When it comes to pokemon Beo is caring and will do anything to help them, no matter what the cost. He has a hero complex about him, he would basically give up his own life if it meant to save another.

Appearance: Beo stands at 5'6, with an atheltic build. He has light blue eyes, but the color at times will change to black. He wears a black tight short sleeve shirt (basically like an under armor shirt) his hair is spikey with a goldish yellow color. He wears loose jeans, and tennis shoes. A scar can be seen going down the left side of his face, he recieved this from an attack by a wild ratata when he was six.

History: Beo was born in pallet town, where him and his father would spend most of there days. Beo's father had become part of a small group of pokemon trainers to help restore balance to the world, his father would start training Beo to become a trainer around the age of six. When He turned ten his dad left on a mission and never returned, but somehow his electabuzz had made itself back to Beo. With the dissaperance of his father Beo would leave Pallet town and then journey on the road. Eventually him and electabuzz would grow stronger, and catch many more pokemon, within the next five years Beo would put together a strong team. With his recently evolved Electivre leading the team.

Pokémon:
1: Electivre(M)
Moves:
1:volt tackle
2:agility
3:Earthquake
4:thunder
5:ice punch
6:Mega Punch
2: Charizod(M)-the evolution of charizard, it is a very dark black, its eyes are just full white, but when angered the turn a fire red, it has a third horn in the middle of its forehead the points straight up. Due to more genetic alterations it has a second tail, the flames on its tails are light blue.
Moves:
1:overheat
2:Flamethrower
3:Iron Tail
4:Seismic toss
5:Slash
6:Flaming power- New move Raises the power of all fire type moves
3:Umbreon(F)
MOves:
1:Double team
2:Moonlight
3:Physic
4:Shadow Ball
5:Bite
6:Hyper Beam
4PoliKing(M)- the evolution of poliwarth know one knows really how this came about, but when Beo's poliwarth came into contact with a firestone it evolved. It is now a fire and water type pokemon, although there is only one real difference between it and poliwarth, insted of the dark blue outside, it has red spots all around its body.
1:Hypnosis
2:Belly Drum
3:Hydro Pump
4:Blast Burn
5:Double slap
6: Flamingwater- Combination of water and fire thrown from its mouth, power- 110 Acc-85 PP-5

(P.s. if you need more information im sure i could do it, I did this quickly becuase i have to study for my midterms)

dboring said:

Name: Beo Zan
Gender:Male
Age: 15
Personality: Beo is a laid back kid, when it comes to what has happened to the world. He can be cocky at times, this may be due to the way his father raised him. When it comes to pokemon Beo is caring and will do anything to help them, no matter what the cost. He has a hero complex about him, he would basically give up his own life if it meant to save another.

Appearance: Beo stands at 5'6, with an atheltic build. He has light blue eyes, but the color at times will change to black. He wears a black tight short sleeve shirt (basically like an under armor shirt) his hair is spikey with a goldish yellow color. He wears loose jeans, and tennis shoes. A scar can be seen going down the left side of his face, he recieved this from an attack by a wild ratata when he was six.

History: Beo was born in pallet town, where him and his father would spend most of there days. Beo's father had become part of a small group of pokemon trainers to help restore balance to the world, his father would start training Beo to become a trainer around the age of six. When He turned ten his dad left on a mission and never returned, but somehow his electabuzz had made itself back to Beo. With the dissaperance of his father Beo would leave Pallet town and then journey on the road. Eventually him and electabuzz would grow stronger, and catch many more pokemon, within the next five years Beo would put together a strong team. With his recently evolved Electivire leading the team.

Pokémon:
1: Electivire(M)
2: Charizard(M)
3:Umbreon(F)
4: Poliwrath(M)

(P.s. if you need more information im sure i could do it, I did this quickly becuase i have to study for my midterms)

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The sign up is fine, but please note the electrivire is the correct spelling. Accepted, but you are allowed to evolve two of those pokes, and describe their new evolutions to me.

BTW: That reminds me, everyone, put genders on your pokemon!

Name: Kazuru, Team Rocket
Gender: Male
Age: 15

Personality: Kazuru is unlike the other members of Team Rocket. He wishes to fight and battle until his opponent is left scarred for life. He is so aggressive that he is actually locked in a cell and draws on the wall. He only wears a smile when he is about to bring pain. While Kazuru is referred as the "Monster" he has a gentle side when he is around Pokemon. He likes to groom them and watch over them like a concerned parent for their young. When he gets too into a battle and starts to run amuck his Pokemon have a power to calm him. This usually brings him back to normal.

Appearance: Kazuru is 6 ft with brown muscular skin and has green eyes of evil. His black hair goes down to his back. He covers his forehead with a black bandanna, with the team rocket symbol on the front. Since he is referred to as a "Monster" Kazuru refuses to wear a shirt and only wears his torn Team Rocket blakc pant. He wears shackles around his arms and ankles. When he enters battles he breaks the chains that bond him and puts on his black mask of battle, shaped like an angry Charizard.

History: When Kazuru was only eight he found himself separated from his parents during a strong weather storm. When Kazuru awoke he found himself surrounded by Ursarings with battle scars all over their bodies. Kazuru was very afraid and so the Ursarings began to attack as to eat him. As Kazuru prepared to be killed, another Pokemon appeared. The Pokemon that had protected him was Ursaring's new evolution, Terroraring. It was the same as a regular, except it had red fur, black claws, and a dragon tail. The Terroraring extended its claw to Kazuru and took him away. Kazuru feared he would be lunch again, but instead Terroraring gave it some fruit and berries. Terroraring understood that Kazuru was a human, but also knew he was weak. Kazuru and Terroraring trained together for four years. At the age of twelve Kazuru had transformed into a monster. Then one day, while Kazuru and Terroraring were training Team Rocket stepped foot into their territory. Team Rocket claimed to capture Terroraring, but Kazuru went wild and attacked them all. Terroraring gave Kazuru the shards of their clothing and their Pokeballs. Kazuru captured Terroraring and returned to Team Rocket's base. When Kazuru arrived he destroyed most of the place along with Terroraring, until an elite from Team Rocket was able to capture him. It took three more years to train Kazuru to obey Team Rocket and now he is their weapon of collecting the rest of the Legendary Pokemon as they unlock Mewtwo from his Pokeball.

Pokémon:
Terroraring(M)
Toxicroak(F)
Sceptile(F)
Aquaeon(F), an evolved Vapereon, with two horns on its head, sky blue skin, white scales on the back, and gold eyes.
Sudowoodo(M)
Pikachu(M)

Here are the move sets for my Pokemon. I gave Terroraring and Aquaeon some new moves I made-up.
Terroraring: Hyper Blast, Secret Power, Focus Blast, Hammer Arm (Hyper Blast has 20 more power and 10 less accuracy than Hyper Beam)
Sceptile: Solar Beam, Leaf Blade, Energy Ball, Bullet Seed
Toxicroak: Poison Jab, Dark Pulse, Brick Break, Giga Impact
Pikachu: Volt Tackle, Iron Tail, Thunder, Slam
Aquaeon: Giga Impact, Hydro Pump, Aqua Typhoon, Surf (Aqua Typhoon has 10 more power than twister, but the same accuracy)
Sudowoodo: Mimic, Double-Edge, Hammer arm, Strength

K9S8 said:

Name: Kazuru, Team Rocket
Gender: Male
Age: 15

Personality: Kazuru is unlike the other members of Team Rocket. He wishes to fight and battle until his opponent is left scarred for life. He is so aggressive that he is actually locked in a cell and draws on the wall. He only wears a smile when he is about to bring pain. While Kazuru is referred as the "Monster" he has a gentle side when he is around Pokemon. He likes to groom them and watch over them like a concerned parent for their young. When he gets too into a battle and starts to run amuck his Pokemon have a power to calm him. This usually brings him back to normal.

Appearance: Kazuru is 6 ft with brown muscular skin and has green eyes of evil. His black hair goes down to his back. He covers his forehead with a black bandanna, with the team rocket symbol on the front. Since he is referred to as a "Monster" Kazuru refuses to wear a shirt and only wears his torn Team Rocket blakc pant. He wears shackles around his arms and ankles. When he enters battles he breaks the chains that bond him and puts on his black mask of battle, shaped like an angry Charizard.

History: When Kazuru was only eight he found himself separated from his parents during a strong weather storm. When Kazuru awoke he found himself surrounded by Ursarings with battle scars all over their bodies. Kazuru was very afraid and so the Ursarings began to attack as to eat him. As Kazuru prepared to be killed, another Pokemon appeared. The Pokemon that had protected him was Ursaring's new evolution, Terroraring. It was the same as a regular, except it had red fur, black claws, and a dragon tail. The Terroraring extended its claw to Kazuru and took him away. Kazuru feared he would be lunch again, but instead Terroraring gave it some fruit and berries. Terroraring understood that Kazuru was a human, but also knew he was weak. Kazuru and Terroraring trained together for four years. At the age of twelve Kazuru had transformed into a monster. Then one day, while Kazuru and Terroraring were training Team Rocket stepped foot into their territory. Team Rocket claimed to capture Terroraring, but Kazuru went wild and attacked them all. Terroraring gave Kazuru the shards of their clothing and their Pokeballs. Kazuru captured Terroraring and returned to Team Rocket's base. When Kazuru arrived he destroyed most of the place along with Terroraring, until Giovanni was able to capture him. It took three more years to train Kazuru to obey Team Rocket and now he is their weapon of collecting the rest of the Legendary Pokemon as they unlock Mewtwo from his Pokeball.

Pokémon:
Terroraring(M)
Toxicroak(F)
Sceptile(F)
Aquaeon(F), an evolved Vapereon, with two horns on its head, sky blue skin, white scales on the back, and gold eyes.
Sudowoodo(M)
Pikachu(M)

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Sweet! accepted!

Now everyone, one last thing I need you all to do:
add 6 moves each to your pokes. Each new evolution may have 1 REASONABLE move it can't normally get and one made up move that is not overpowered. The rest of the moves may be a combination of egg and level up moves.
Tutor moves will be available to get during the game from certain places and people.

Please post after editing.

K9S8 said:

Here are the move sets for my Pokemon. I gave Terroraring and Aquaeon some new moves I made-up.
Terroraring: Hyper Beam, Earth Claw, Focus Blast, Hammer Arm, Rage, Thunderbolt
Sceptile: Solar Beam, Leaf Blade, Energy Ball, Bullet Seed, Pound, Quick Attack
Toxicroak: Poison Jab, Dark Pulse, Sludge Bomb, Brick Break, Giga Impact, Thunder Punch
Pikachu: Volt Tackle, Iron Tail, Quick Attack, Thunder, Thunderbolt, Slam
Aquaeon: Giga Impact, Ice Beam, Iron Tail, Hydro Pump, Aqua Typhoon, Surf
Sudowoodo: Mimic, Double-Edge, Wood Hammer, Hammer arm, Earthquake, Strength

Since Kazuru called the "Monster" I thought it was only fair to give his Pokemon a set of power house moves.

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Great, now list the power and accuracy of the new moves and post them under your pokes on your orig. post.

Name: Mina Aino

Gender: Female

Age : 15

Personality: Mina has a one of a kind personality, she usually loves to chase famous boys, and she is very hyper and active and will do anything to impress her crush (always different) She is sometimes a Klutz but loves to be helpful, most people tend to back away from her help sometimes, and when she's on a date she'll sometimes freeze up and stutter when speaking. She sometimes tries to sing but is afraid of anyone hearing it.

Appearance: She has long waist long Blonde hair with a Hair Bow on the back, she wears a Japanese School girl's uniform and she has Blue eyes ans also has gold coloured crescent shaped earings. She Carrys a Magical Gold Heart shaped Brooch.

History: Mina was a very crazy child that would always try to be as active as possible by always playing sports, she'd always get dirty in which her mother would tell her to be more lady like, ever since the great calamity with the crazy pokemon mishaps she started to worry and she thought that she should help put a stop to it, She remebers that her past lover that moved away told her that he'd like to help the world one day if it was in trouble and she promised him that she'd try to do the same which leads her to now, she wants to help end this calamity. But as Mina wasn't sure what to do, her cousin Eugile who is a member of Team Rocket, Eugile tells Mina that the best solution there is to help the world is to join Team Rocket and to follow what they do. As Mina Believes this, she decides to join team rocket.

Pokémon:
Lucario (male) : Aura Sphere, close combat, Rock Smash, Bone Rush, Mach Punch, Strength
Dragonite(male) : Hyper Beam, Fire Punch, Twister, Dragon Rage, Fly, Brick Break
Leafeon(male) : Razor Leaf, Solar Beam, Giga Drain, Leech Seed, Energy Ball, Grass Whistle

Sorry Bamachi, we are supposed to be full....but I guess you could sign up as a rocket member if you want. Just edit you post and reply if you are okay with that.

Name:Raff Zeraki: Team Rocket.
Gender:Male
Age: 14.
Personality: Raff, has a good heart, and is pressured into things easily, but when joining team rocket, he did not put that into, category. But he thinks it is the only way, to solve all of these problems. He is also very angered, easily as well, and cares about his pokemon and no other pokemon that other trainers may have.
Appearance:Long Black hair, that goes past his back, on the sides it goes past his shoulders and down to his arms. His eyes are dark green, with black around his Iris. He is about, 6'2-6'3 slim structure, a bit muscular to it, has a slim a bit see-able six pack. Long black jacket, and long blue jeans, a bit baggy but only a little for comfort. Has black gloves, that are seemed to look like arm warmers, that go up to his elbow, with a red skull and cross bones, on both top of the hands of the gloves. His shoes, are black combat boots.
History:Was born in, Black thorn city, set out catching pokemon, at age 13. He is now 14, he joined Team Rocket, as they were short on members, so they let Raff, join..He also, got taught about pokemon, by his Father, who has watched the world crumble over the years. His mother died in a Fire, on a vacation trip, to Kanto by a pokemon riot. Which, is a reason why Raff, just wants to destroy those pokemon that have caused, this...to Avenge his mother.
Pokémon:
Arcanine/Saber
Flare Blitz
Extreme Speed
Thunder Fang
Flame Thrower
Aerial Ace
Take Down
Gyarados/Hydra
Ice Fang
Dragons Insight: New move, Increases not only speed and attack, but increases his special Defense, but lowers his special Defense.
Earthquake
Water Fall
Dragon Rage
Dragon Breath

Gliscor/Vampire
Swords Dance
Stealth Rock
X-Scissor
Ice Fang
Roost
Double Team
Gengar/Nightmare
Focus Blast
Shadow Ball
Thunder Bolt
Sludge Bomb
Hypnosis
Dream Eater
Abdsol/Omen
Aerial Ace
Will-o-Wisp
Night Slice: Has 10 more power than Night slash, but 10 less Accuracy.
Swords Dance
Psycho Cut
Toxic
Breloom/Boxer Iris
Sky Uppercut
Seed Bomb
Iron Tail
Stone Edge
Mach Punch
Mega Punch

Raff said:

Name:Raff Zeraki: Team Rocket.
Gender:Male
Age: 14.
Personality: Raff, has a good heart, and is pressured into things easily, but when joining team rocket, he did not put that into, category. But he thinks it is the only way, to solve all of these problems. He is also very angered, easily as well, and cares about his pokemon and no other pokemon that other trainers may have.
Appearance:Long Black hair, that goes past his back, on the sides it goes past his shoulders and down to his arms. His eyes are dark green, with black around his Iris. He is about, 6'2-6'3 slim structure, a bit muscular to it, has a slim a bit see-able six pack. Long black jacket, and long blue jeans, a bit baggy but only a little for comfort. Has black gloves, that are seemed to look like arm warmers, that go up to his elbow, with a red skull and cross bones, on both top of the hands of the gloves. His shoes, are black combat boots.
History:Was born in, Black thorn city, set out catching pokemon, at age 13. He is now 14, he joined Team Rocket, as they were short on members, so they let Raff, join..He also, got taught about pokemon, by his Father, who has watched the world crumble over the years. His mother died in a Fire, on a vacation trip, to Kanto by a pokemon riot. Which, is a reason why Raff, just wants to destroy those pokemon that have caused, this...to Avenge his mother.
Pokémon:
Arcanine/Saber
Flare Blitz
Extreme Speed
Thunder Fang
Flame Thrower

Gyarados/Hydra
Ice Fang
Dragons Insight: New move, Increases not only speed and attack, but increases his special Defense, but lowers his speccial Defense.
Earthquake
Water Fall

Gliscor/Vampire
Swords Dance
Stealth Rock
X-Scissor
Ice Fang

Gengar/Nightmare
Focus Blast
Shadow Ball
Thunder Bolt
Sludge Bomb

Abdsol/Omen
Aerial Ace
Will-o-Wisp
Night Slice: Has 10 more power than Night slash, but 10 less Accuracy.
Swords Dance

Breloom/Boxer Iris
Sky Uppercut
Seed Bomb
Iron Tail
Stone Edge

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Ok, you are accepted, but only to even the numbers a bit, there are some problems with your pokes though, they need 6 moves each.
. No other sign ups from here on!

Is this all ready then? just curious 'cause I'm a bit bored, need somthing to do y'know...

All right,I added genders and moves to my pokemon, and I have little to do but wait until the RP gets started. If i need to do any further edits, don't hesitate to Pm me.