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Old December 28th, 2008 (10:09 PM).
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Alright here is a poem. Yesh, I know this poem is in my sig. I just want to see what people think. And i can't get that kind of feedback with it just as a sig.

One soul in Four bodys
Three from One mind
Three die, all live
One dies, all die
The Four
Dragon, Fire, Slime, Shield
Three exist for One
Three fight for One
One lives for Three
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Old December 29th, 2008 (12:13 PM).
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Is this in reference to some kind of Hecatae like creature? Other than that, I can't make much sense of it. It's interesting and all... but it could use some editing, mainly just to bring out the main idea of it more prominently.
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Old December 29th, 2008 (06:26 PM).
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A WHAT!? and it's not supposed to be totaly clear.
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Old December 30th, 2008 (10:06 AM).
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The Hecatae (heh-KA-tay) are three mythical wise women (specifically from Greek mythology) who were kind of like diviners. All existed for each other, and if one died, the others did as well. Anyways, that's beside the point. I find what you were trying to describe similar to that but also very different.
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