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Old April 9th, 2009 (08:25 PM). Edited April 9th, 2009 by Vannah☆.
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UPDATE:

Revamped Sprites! A lot of credit to West!

011 Kocinip!

036 Flowirp!

065 Blorwee!
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Old April 9th, 2009 (11:47 PM).
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Flowirp and Blorwee are very good. I love the shadings on those two. The backsprite for Flowirp is good, the only thing that bothers me is its tail. It looks kinda puny compare to its front sprite.
As for Kocinip, i think its okay. BBut the colors are bit too bright, especially that yellow. Also its left eybrow looks a little bit weird, if you ask me. Its backsprite is good. only thing to comment beeing the part of its left wing. I dont know what it is exactly.
Other than that it love those fakemon. Especially blorwee. Awesome job
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Old April 9th, 2009 (11:58 PM).
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Sounds like a good hack, dont make us down!
Also Amazing good pokemon, i say grats to the spriters
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Old April 10th, 2009 (12:53 AM).
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This has gone up!
Looks good now, the Fakemon are sweet!
GL!
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Old April 10th, 2009 (05:52 AM).
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Quote originally posted by vannah08510:
UPDATE:

Revamped Sprites! A lot of credit to West!

011 Kocinip!

036 Flowirp!

065 Blorwee!
Cool! I see you "Recolored" my back sprite for Flowirp. But it still looks awesome! They all do. Just Kocinips head on the back sprite, looks a little funny, but oh-well. And thanks for giving me credit.
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Old April 10th, 2009 (08:56 AM).
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Oh, and what's weird about the head? I really appreciate the comments, guys. You're really helping me and the rest of the spriters here to become a lot better. Anyway, we haven't had many new sprites lately that we're willing to show you guys, but I'll be done doing all the evolutions of the starters and their backsprites by tomorrow at the latest. Then I'll start on some new material and give you guys an update.
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Old April 10th, 2009 (09:08 AM).
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Oh, and what's weird about the head? I really appreciate the comments, guys. You're really helping me and the rest of the spriters here to become a lot better. Anyway, we haven't had many new sprites lately that we're willing to show you guys, but I'll be done doing all the evolutions of the starters and their backsprites by tomorrow at the latest. Then I'll start on some new material and give you guys an update.
Good! But the tail on Flowirp is way too long. The other two look awesome. But the back sprite's head looks a little fat. But it doesn't matter.
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Old April 10th, 2009 (09:41 AM).
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Kay! Striving for perfection ~ Hmm.. Koccinip's getting to remind me too much of Spearow. Hrm...

I won't be making flowirp's tail any shorter than that, as its longer than the top leaf in the artz. Anyway, we're probably going to be steering away from the concept arts a little. I'll show you something in a pm, West. =3
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Old April 10th, 2009 (12:13 PM).
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keep the updates comming, i love seeing what you guys are working on

wishing i was a beta tester right about now
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Old April 10th, 2009 (12:16 PM).
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keep the updates comming, i love seeing what you guys are working on

wishing i was a beta tester right about now
haha
Don't worry! Our first alpha will be out soon.
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Old April 10th, 2009 (02:30 PM).
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Quote originally posted by ~Watermelon:
This has gone up!
Looks good now, the Fakemon are sweet!
GL!
Glad you're back I'm glad you think its improved, we all do :D
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Those sprites are looking much better, thank you everyone for your comments on the sprites, it does make improving way easier
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Old April 10th, 2009 (02:45 PM).
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This hack looks really really cool.

The fakemon are all really well done (especially that Blorwee, I think it's my favorite) and, in my opinion, are much better looking than most of the DPPt pokemon. I also really like the new fire starter; the old one was kind of freaking me out. Another thing I like is that the fakemon will have edited stats, making it more of a mystery to play.

I don't really find the story very compelling though. The description on the first post is kind of confusing and vague, this part I'm assuming is on purpose. Like who exactly are Team Enigma and the Rangers? Were the attacks some sort of revolution, sociopath attacks, etc?

I'd love to help with this hack in any way possible, but I don't know how to script or map or any of those things... But if you need help with story, plot, or even grammar, I'd like to try and help when I have time. I'm apparently a pretty good writer.
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Old April 10th, 2009 (03:09 PM).
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Quote originally posted by agent bones:
This hack looks really really cool.

The fakemon are all really well done (especially that Blorwee, I think it's my favorite) and, in my opinion, are much better looking than most of the DPPt pokemon. I also really like the new fire starter; the old one was kind of freaking me out. Another thing I like is that the fakemon will have edited stats, making it more of a mystery to play.

I don't really find the story very compelling though. The description on the first post is kind of confusing and vague, this part I'm assuming is on purpose. Like who exactly are Team Enigma and the Rangers? Were the attacks some sort of revolution, sociopath attacks, etc?

I'd love to help with this hack in any way possible, but I don't know how to script or map or any of those things... But if you need help with story, plot, or even grammar, I'd like to try and help when I have time. I'm apparently a pretty good writer.
Thanks With the storyline, I tried to describe as best as I could, guess I didn't do a very good job though . Basically, Enigma is the classic "Evil Team" before the game starts, which is the 10 years prior to the start of the game section of the story. What they do that makes them different is they actually succeed in taking over the region, and from then on they are set up as the government. When the player starts the game, Enigma has been in rule for quite a while, and everyone has accepted them as government. Like it says in the story, they are not cruel, but there is not as much freedom as there used to be, and now people are going missing. You'll basically find out a lot more history in the Alpha, there is quite a history lesson at the start
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Old April 10th, 2009 (04:58 PM).
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@ vannah08510:
i think they mean that one side of Kocinip's face is a bit out of proportion to the other side.

@ whole team: this project seems to be advancing in leaps and strides espescialy the fakemon keep up the great work.
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Old April 10th, 2009 (05:41 PM). Edited April 10th, 2009 by Vannah☆.
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Update:

A small update, but an update nontheless. Here's 020, Illime.




Well, Koccinip again. xD Only until everyone or mostly everyone is satisfied.

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Old April 10th, 2009 (06:18 PM).
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Quote originally posted by MegaMaccer:
Thanks With the storyline, I tried to describe as best as I could, guess I didn't do a very good job though . Basically, Enigma is the classic "Evil Team" before the game starts, which is the 10 years prior to the start of the game section of the story. What they do that makes them different is they actually succeed in taking over the region, and from then on they are set up as the government. When the player starts the game, Enigma has been in rule for quite a while, and everyone has accepted them as government. Like it says in the story, they are not cruel, but there is not as much freedom as there used to be, and now people are going missing. You'll basically find out a lot more history in the Alpha, there is quite a history lesson at the start
I'm lookin' forward to that alpha then. :D

I also like that the "evil" team isn't evil. And in regards to that, does the "evil" team not being evil open up the possibility of multiple endings?
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Old April 10th, 2009 (08:24 PM).
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Quote originally posted by agent bones:
I'm lookin' forward to that alpha then. :D

I also like that the "evil" team isn't evil. And in regards to that, does the "evil" team not being evil open up the possibility of multiple endings?
Sorry, let me rephrase that. The evil team is Evil, but they are not a "Team". You join a rebellion started by key figures who you will meet when you play . There may not be multiple endings, but there will definitely be an open ending, possibly a cliff hanger type ending
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Old April 11th, 2009 (07:22 AM).
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WOW... the hack looks really very professional...!!!!

Keep up the gr8 job...!!

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Old April 11th, 2009 (10:23 AM).
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Expect a bigger update soon with the rival, hero, heroine, and possibly some other fakemon revealed.
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Old April 11th, 2009 (11:15 AM).
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Quote originally posted by vannah08510:
Expect a bigger update soon with the rival, hero, heroine, and possibly some other fakemon revealed. ^_^
you should just release it now
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Old April 11th, 2009 (11:35 AM).
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I should, shouldn't I? : D Well, Ill try to think of something to occupy people in the mean time. Hey... no one really commented on my Illime. D: Give me the critique!
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Old April 11th, 2009 (11:53 AM).
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i think the sprite looks really good, the shading is nice, but its left leg looks a little too bright to me
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Old April 11th, 2009 (01:05 PM).
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Alright, they are finally here! The Hero, Heroine, and Rival intro sprites. Now, I'm not 100% sure how this works, but I'm fairly sure we can use more than 16 colours on the intro sprite. If I'm wrong, please tell me, and if I'm right, let me know
So, here they are, don't forget to comment:
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Old April 11th, 2009 (02:36 PM).
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Those intro sprites are looking good! ^.^ I like the hero more than the girl...the girl looks kinda...idk bigheaded..?
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Old April 11th, 2009 (02:47 PM).
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Quote originally posted by EddFurret:
Those intro sprites are looking good! ^.^ I like the hero more than the girl...the girl looks kinda...idk bigheaded..?
And I realized that. xDD Here we go. I cut her down a pixel.
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