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Old February 28th, 2009 (08:50 PM).
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Love is a word that I don't believe
Coz I think even without it I'll find relief
But this all changed since the day you came
You gave me love I'll never feel again.

You made it possible for me to believe in love
You did give me love as pure as a white dove
My life has never been the same
All have changed since the day you came.

You gave me hope and courage to face my days
So for these I wont ever give you rainy days.
I never felt this happiness all my life
So I thank you for entering my life

And now that I've already found you
I'll never want to lose and hurt you
I want to thank you for giving me love
And I want you to know you're everything I have.


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Old February 28th, 2009 (08:57 PM).
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well pretty good poetry=]
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Old February 28th, 2009 (09:00 PM).
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I think its quite good~
keep it up ^^
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Old February 28th, 2009 (09:04 PM).
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well all I can say is it's quite good.
I like it though so keep it up.
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Old February 28th, 2009 (09:12 PM).
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I like it
good job.

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Old February 28th, 2009 (09:14 PM).
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hmm...it's quite good and touching:3
keepup the good work!!!
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Old February 28th, 2009 (09:36 PM).
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it pretty good good job^_^
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Old March 5th, 2009 (03:54 AM).
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I liked it good work on that
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Old March 5th, 2009 (04:13 AM).
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Im not a huge fan of poetry but it seemed to be quite good
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Old March 15th, 2009 (04:45 PM).
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OMG! THat would make a great song! I Love it!
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Old March 16th, 2009 (12:07 AM).
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OMG! THat would make a great song! I Love it!
Really huh..thanks!=]
but I prefer this as poem..thanks guys.
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Old March 18th, 2009 (03:13 AM).
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wow! it's brilliant! i like it! ^-^
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Old March 21st, 2009 (08:34 PM).
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Wow, this is so good, I love it so much...Good work!
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Old March 22nd, 2009 (07:20 AM).
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I really liked it, but you could try to find more different rhyme patterns...I am not a friend of aabb.
there is nothing better than a love poem :3
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Old March 23rd, 2009 (06:23 PM).
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I really liked it, but you could try to find more different rhyme patterns...I am not a friend of aabb.
there is nothing better than a love poem :3
I'll try....but thanks a lot.
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Old March 23rd, 2009 (07:23 PM).
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Wow that was really good. I almost shead a tear reading your poem. Keep up the great work!
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Old March 24th, 2009 (03:27 AM).
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Wow that was really good. I almost shead a tear reading your poem. Keep up the great work! ;)
Really? wow,..thanks guys =]
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Old March 26th, 2009 (05:49 PM).
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That's really a great poem FranCine!, it's really good!
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