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Old March 1st, 2009 (04:19 PM).
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What was the start of all this?
When did the cogs of fate begin to turn?
Perhaps it is impossible to group
that answer no,
From the deep within the flow of time
We loved so many,
But hated much.
we hurt others and we hurt ourselves.
Yet even then we ran like
the wind,
Whilst our laughter echoed
Under cerulean skies.

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Old March 1st, 2009 (04:21 PM).
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pretty good keep up the good work Ranken=]
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Old March 1st, 2009 (04:33 PM).
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well pretty good poetry of yours=]

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Old March 1st, 2009 (04:34 PM).
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I liked it good work you got there=]
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Old March 1st, 2009 (07:43 PM).
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Wow Ranken. I never knew you were in to poetry. That poem is pretty good :> I like it. Keep up the good work! :>
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Old March 1st, 2009 (07:43 PM).
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hmm..pretty good keep it up gogogo!!
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Old March 2nd, 2009 (03:50 PM).
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thanks guys I'll be sure to work more of my poetry=]
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Old March 6th, 2009 (04:23 PM).
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it good I liked it! good job!
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Old March 15th, 2009 (09:04 AM).
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I like it. Is this your first?

I just want to ask, but what kind of poem is this?

It's too short to be a sonnet, so is this a free verse?
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Wow I didn't know you're a poetry writer Ranken, it's pretty good..I think this is a free verse lol
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Old March 26th, 2009 (05:47 PM).
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Great poem Ranken! awesome work you got there!
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Quote originally posted by BHwolfgang:
I like it. Is this your first?

I just want to ask, but what kind of poem is this?

It's too short to be a sonnet, so is this a free verse?
poems dont have to be classified....but if thats the case it free verse....
but well written....i would say get up the good work but everyone else already said that so....i look forward to reading more of ur poetry..
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