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Old May 22nd, 2009 (2:08 AM). Edited May 22nd, 2009 by Kindo.
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Long ago.......In the middle of the night.......Pikachu was playing in a silent meadow, when an unexpected sound sliced through the air.....Pikachu was drawn to the location where the sound was coming from......If Pikachu had never been drawn none of this would happen

Chapter One

"You are awake"said a deep voice.
"Pika?" Wondered pikachu as he stepped closer into the bright sun,he thought that he was outside when he heard a strange sound.
He crept closer to the sound.....and closer.......then came to a stop because of the wall in his way.
"Pika!Pika!pikapika!"Screamed pikachu as he ran into the wall again.
"Do not try to escape because there is no escape from my clutches"Said the deep voice.

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Edison once remarked that "I am proud that I never invented weapons to kill". Because the electric chair isn't a weapon, and it doesn't kill people. It just helps improve their cardioneural functions. A lot.
Old May 22nd, 2009 (10:00 PM).
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Wrong section to start off with.

Also, this really doesn't meet the standards of PFF&P. It's sloppy work, with good grammar missing. There's also no description, so it's very confusing and hard to follow.

It's also unfinished.

Closed for not meeting the standards, as per the rules.
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