FireRed hack: [HotM July] Pokémon Identity

[~Gary~]

hey i liked the hack alot it is very intresting and nice

cannot wait for chapter 2 and or 3

[Lati-Fan95]

Hey, you managed to look her more female without losing this special feeling about her! She looks pretty good now, nothing to say against her! Any other things you've done so far (I don't wanna be annoying or something but I even played through it a 2nd time because it's so epic and I also looked at all the maps after you played through the demo and right now, I'm even more excited about this, I'm even so far that I'm grinding to pwn the grass gym leader you put into Silvertone!)

[Leafbarrett]

I am hooked. I am ****ing HOOKED. <3

During the third rival battle, it hit me. You set up a completely new starter type triangle. Dark->Psychic->Fighting
I'm impressed. Never would have thought of that.
Also, you win instant bonus points for having Ralts as a starter.

If there is any way I can help, any at all, just ask. I want to see this completed as fast as possible (without sacrificing quality of course).

[KuwabaraTheMan]

What you've done with this is amazing. Never before have I been so captivated by the story to a Pokemon hack, or any Pokemon game at all. You've done a great job with that, and I can't wait to see what happens next.

[Trainer Ninja]

I just got 2 words for this hack.... 100% awesomeness.

Can't wait till rest are up.

[SonicBlazePlatinum]

I like the player character sprites. The helmet is cool also. Where do you deliver the Lava Cake?

[Lati-Fan95]

Originally Posted by SonicBlazePlatinum

I like the player character sprites. The helmet is cool also. Where do you deliver the Lava Cake?

Well, remember that guy that ran into you when you entered the Lighthouse? The one that forgot to buy a cake and a present for his kid! Give him the cake!

[nicknoord]

great game and very original
i did found a grammar glitch
it's when you have the dream about your mom she said something about your sister and here being worried
anyway don't remember the words but you should fix it

[Scarex]

Well, the hack is not bad

Although I really like that do not change the graphics on Fire Red, no, it's like losing style do you recommend for a more proper, moreover, is well ^ ^.

Good luck with the hack

Greetz!

[Sarcastic Prince]

Originally Posted by nicknoord

great game and very original
i did found a grammar glitch
it's when you have the dream about your mom she said something about your sister and here being worried
anyway don't remember the words but you should fix it

Actually, there's more.

I'll show you a list of it. Don't take me wrong though, I just wanted to
improve this Hack.

Spoiler:

It's "what's", not "whats".


"Sunrise Town" is a name. The "T" for "town" should start
with a capital letter.


This sentence isn't correct.
It should be: What's up, Aster?


It should be "It's", not "Its".


This sentence isn't correct.
It should be: No, no! Don't apologize!


It's "is", not "it".


It's "name's", not "names".


It's "it's", not "its".


It's "let's", not "lets".


It's "it's", not "its".


It's "it's", not "its".


This sentence doesn't have a period.
It should be added.


You forgot the "!" at the end of this sentence.


It's "let's", not "lets".


This sentence isn't grammactically wrong,
but the Earthquake used in the Script is totally problemetic.
A rumble is not enough.
Replace the rumble with this:
setvar 0x8004 0x3
setvar 0x8005 0x0
setvar 0x8006 0xC
setvar 0x8007 0x3
special 0x136
pause 0x3C

That's how you call an Earthquake is.


It's "there's", not "theres".


It's "it's", not "its".


It's "that's", not "thats".


I don't think the sentence is correct.
It should be: [player]?: Why can't I play with them?
They're my friends.


It's "can't", not "cant".


This girl's name is Sadie, not Jennie.


3 grammar mistakes here.
One is "its", the other is "anyone's", and you also forgot to
add a period at the end of the sentence. They should be
replaced with "it's" and "anyone's".


It's "it's", not "its".


This sentence isn't correct. It should be:
Aster, do you know she is now?


This sentence isn't correct.
It should be:
Gotta hide, gotta hide!


This sentence isn't correct.
It should be: Hide, fool!


It should be "name's", not "names".


There's a Tile Error here.


It's "it's", not "its".


It's "isn't", not "isnt".


There are 2 grammar mistakes here.
One is "anyones", and the other is "its".
They should be replaced with "anyone's" and "it's".


It's "it's", not "its".

Apart from the 30 grammar mistakes, this Hack's pretty
cool and original. And I have a question.
Will you make OWs for the major people?
Like Kaius, Aster, the mysterious girl, etc.?
I hope you do, because that will make the Hack better.

[SonicBlazePlatinum]

In the next alpha are we returning to the slums? The names like Bum and Bug Catcher are capitilized, is that going to be fixed? Good ROM Hack VGAura!

[Sarcastic Prince]

Originally Posted by SonicBlazePlatinum

In the next alpha are we returning to the slums? The names like Bum and Bug Catcher are capitilized, is that going to be fixed? Good ROM Hack VGAura!

It's quite easy to fix actually.
Go to A-Trainer, and decapitalize the Trainer Names.
It's very simple.
It's just like taking a candy from a baby.

[VGAura]

Thanks for making such a thorough search for grammar errors.
Thanks to you, I understand now that I need to make sure my contractions are correct in the future.

I don't quite understand what you are trying to say about this one, I think you made a typo.
Is it just to decapitalize the "d" in Do?

Originally Posted by Sarcastic Prince

This sentence isn't correct. It should be:
Aster, do you know she is now?

Also, you should not be able to read the newspaper from the bottom right corner of Lilah’s store. That will be fixed as well.

[Sarcastic Prince]

Originally Posted by VGAura

Thanks for making such a thorough search for grammar errors.
Thanks to you, I understand now that I need to make sure my contractions are correct in the future.

I don't quite understand what you are trying to say about this one, I think you made a typo.
Is it just to decapitalize the "d" in Do?


Also, you should not be able to read the newspaper from the bottom right corner of Lilah’s store. That will be fixed as well.

Correct.

Thanks.

Oh! And I didn't make a typo or anything, I just wanted
to say to decapitalize the "D" in "do", but I just
don't know how to spell decapitalize at that time
and it would be stupid to spell a word wrong during a
grammar mistake report.

[Zang123]

hey thanks for making such a great hack! ive never played one like it and i hope the next beta will be released before 2011...

[sabre91]

This absolutely blew my mind.

Me posting about it should be 'nuff said, considering I never do so.

Keep up the good work.

[Halcyon]

After playing the demo, I wanted to say:

I absolutely love the storyline; as well as Seedot's new moveset.
Keep up the good work, I'll be looking out for it. ;)

[big NATE alpha]

I hope we get to see more progress soon. I completed the demo, and I'm dying to see what happens after the player "dies"! It's coming along well, I'm very impressed. This is definitely one I'm going to keep an eye on.

[Sinta12]

The demo was tons of fun, is this hack still progressing?? I want to know cause i look forwards to playing it more .

[daggerd]

I actually think its better than the official pokemon games. I just know I will have forgotten about it when the next demo is out so i'm putting the banner in my sig to remind me.

[Slapagnome]

Oh... My... God... This hack was freaking AWESOME! I loved it so much. I can't wait for the next part. I love this game for the fact it is just random, like me! I am in the process of working on a hack and I have to say, this just gives me inspration to go crazy with it. I would love to make something like this, not story wise, but humor and just that type of stuff I love. This was very well done, good job. (Btw, my fav. part in the whole game is the part where you are kicking the bum, not because kicking bums is fun, I never tried it, just it was an awesome part)

[big NATE alpha]

Oh, I hope more updates come soon!
I'm thinking about starting over just to play it again... I love this hack!

BTW, for all you lazy people or those who aren't exactly the best...
Ralts is the best starter to choose if you do the sidequests for the girl with the Vulpix. She'll eventually trade you her Vulpix for a Hoppip, so then your Vulpix will be super-effective against Aster's Seedot/Nuzleaf, and vulpix and kirlia will be super-effective against a tough Heracross you'll be fighting in the story.

[daggerd]

I couldn't find a way into silvertone so I walked through the slums and got into a place where police got me then into an underground tunnel where a girl was and then into a gym with the person who helped at the start in.Also the first time I played it when I walked out of the door the scientists didn't react and I went into a room with an unown in.

[The Cynic]

Originally Posted by big NATE alpha

Oh, I hope more updates come soon!
I'm thinking about starting over just to play it again... I love this hack!

BTW, for all you lazy people or those who aren't exactly the best...
Ralts is the best starter to choose if you do the sidequests for the girl with the Vulpix. She'll eventually trade you her Vulpix for a Hoppip, so then your Vulpix will be super-effective against Aster's Seedot/Nuzleaf, and vulpix and kirlia will be super-effective against a tough Heracross you'll be fighting in the story.

I did that (mainly because I like Ralts) when I first played the hack. What you're forgetting however is that both Vulpix and Kirlia are weak to the Larvitar that Kaius has. Luckily I had both a Shroomish and a Wooper so it all worked out fine.

[Konekodemon]

Oh no! You killed me. Did my character really die?