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Old January 27th, 2008 (06:01 PM).
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I was on http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net and I was making some cards. They're from a set I call the Tickectmaster Tourney Edition. I got the Ticketmaster part from an ad I saw on the NHL All-star game. In case you can't see the cards, I'll write down the stuff:

Supernova
Quick-Play Spell (it shows counter, typo)
Secret Rare
TTE-EN000
When your opponent attacks, pay 100 (typo) Life Points
to stop the attack and destroy all monsters on your
opponents side of the Field.



Doom Bringer Horizon
Field Spell
Secret Rare
TTE-EN001
When this card is in play, the ATK of all DARK monsters
is increased by 100 points.



Valley Kingdom
Continuous Trap
Ultimate Rare
TTE-EN002
As long as this card remains active, decrease the ATK of all\
LIGHT monsters by 400 points.



There'll be more in the set.
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Old January 27th, 2008 (07:32 PM). Edited January 27th, 2008 by Frostweaver.
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YGO maker finally fixed their annoying font to be acceptable now <3
I'll use it if it's not for the pure fact that finding a suitable picture is extremely difficult for monsters.


Supernova- broken... mirror force is down to 1 for a reason. 100 LP is beyond neglectable (heck even 1000 LP cost will make this broken... look at Soul Taker for comparison). This isn't even mirror force. It's raigeki. Defense mode won't save you. Not stoppable by Jinzo/Decree too since this is quick play spell. back on the ban list please...

Doom bringer horizon- 1000 brute atk may sound nice and indeed quite difficult to stop when even the tomato suicides into the monarch for laughs. But we're better off thinking of ways to get out Dark Gaia, or fill our graveyard with dark monsters to pull out those nifty phantom darknesss stuff. This is not weak but powerful (and breaks all tradition), but right now dark focuses on graveyard explosive summoning for the most part. The only real practical thing we can do with this is to have major easy access to the higher level viruses in terms of combo. I'm still saying this card needs to be toned down though since it just breaks thresholds too much, and if the metagame ever shifts to a semi-slower pace, this card becomes breakthrough (if it last for one turn, so be it, 1 turn making all your monsters 2k+ atk power is probably OTK)

Valley Kingdom- continuous trap sucks... and the effect is -400 on light only? It's just not powerful enough at all... not enough light monsters played, and -400 is not that much. Cards nowadays rely on extremely weird (and usually lengthy) effects and less on the brutal stats.



By the way, unless rules changed, I'm sure Digi wants all of our fake cards in the fake card thread.
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Old January 28th, 2008 (03:06 PM).
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Quote originally posted by Frostweaver:
YGO maker finally fixed their annoying font to be acceptable now <3
I'll use it if it's not for the pure fact that finding a suitable picture is extremely difficult for monsters.


Supernova- broken... mirror force is down to 1 for a reason. 100 LP is beyond neglectable (heck even 1000 LP cost will make this broken... look at Soul Taker for comparison). This isn't even mirror force. It's raigeki. Defense mode won't save you. Not stoppable by Jinzo/Decree too since this is quick play spell. back on the ban list please...

Doom bringer horizon- 1000 brute atk may sound nice and indeed quite difficult to stop when even the tomato suicides into the monarch for laughs. But we're better off thinking of ways to get out Dark Gaia, or fill our graveyard with dark monsters to pull out those nifty phantom darknesss stuff. This is not weak but powerful (and breaks all tradition), but right now dark focuses on graveyard explosive summoning for the most part. The only real practical thing we can do with this is to have major easy access to the higher level viruses in terms of combo. I'm still saying this card needs to be toned down though since it just breaks thresholds too much, and if the metagame ever shifts to a semi-slower pace, this card becomes breakthrough (if it last for one turn, so be it, 1 turn making all your monsters 2k+ atk power is probably OTK)

Valley Kingdom- continuous trap sucks... and the effect is -400 on light only? It's just not powerful enough at all... not enough light monsters played, and -400 is not that much. Cards nowadays rely on extremely weird (and usually lengthy) effects and less on the brutal stats.



By the way, unless rules changed, I'm sure Digi wants all of our fake cards in the fake card thread.
Jeez, that was brutal. I'm not a pro. And I don't wanna get in a flame war OK. Look, if you don't like them, then just say they're not all that great. You don't have to point out all the flaws. And if all faks are supposed to be in the fakes thread, I'll get someone to move it.
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Old January 28th, 2008 (09:02 PM).
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Quote originally posted by col_hacker:
Jeez, that was brutal. I'm not a pro. And I don't wanna get in a flame war OK. Look, if you don't like them, then just say they're not all that great. You don't have to point out all the flaws. And if all faks are supposed to be in the fakes thread, I'll get someone to move it.
ya, this area is full of criticisms

anywho digi has merged this.

out of boredom, a set idea:
there are those non-monster cards that say "When this face down card is destroyed, (do this)", so i'm wondering about a set of cards like this that say "when the face down card is destroyed, do this. When this is flipped face up (normally), do this (but a weaker effect)."
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Old January 28th, 2008 (10:35 PM).
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Hm, existing Sandmoth sort of have part of it, as it gets recursion and atk boost if it's destroyed while facedown. Interesting concept though I'll tweak it a bit if I'm doing it maybe~

As for the criticism, isn't it worse to just bust in and say "I don't think they're very good"? It sounds so much like a filler and random comment just to put someone down. Writing out all the whys clearly will clarify/support the comment, and also inform the card maker about methods to make the card more playable~ I'm sure that you can try to walk into the poetry thread to say "I don't like this poem" with no other comments attached, and the Mod of that forum will come by to demand clarification too in the same manner~

Not like I don't make mistakes, that's why I always had to make revamp copies of the same card XP;

(Making fake cards that are playable are quite an accepted norm in any YGO related fake card forum/thread/event~ Of course, there's always the joke cards but usually they are exaggerated or their effect is filled with different allusions to make it obvious that the card is for jokes.)
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Old January 29th, 2008 (02:46 PM).
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I used to create Cards all the time for Yu-gi-oh. I never had a chance to put these all on YGO CardMaker as I know longer have time. However This would be my Kirby Set.

Kirby of the Stars 4
Effect
When this monster battles a monster, at the end phase of your turn, you may send this card to the graveyard to special summon a fusion monster with Kirby in it's name from your Fusion deck, and then shuffle this card into your deck.
1500/1200




Fire Kirby FIRE 5
Pyro/Effect
This card is special summoned by the effect of Kirby of the stars when that card battles a FIRE or Pyro monster. During your oppoenets standby phase, inflict 600 points of direct damage to their lifepoints directly.
1900/1200


Ice Kirby WATER 5
Aqua/Effect
This card is special summoned by the effect of Kirby of the Stars when that card battles a WATER or Aqua monster. When this card battles a monster, destroy that monster.
1900/1300


Spark Kirby LIGHT 5
Thunder/Effect
This card is special summoned by the effect of Kirby of the stars when that card battles a LIGHT monster. For each card you play, increase the attack and defense of this card by 100 until the end phase of your turn.
1800/1000


Stone Kirby EARTH 5
Rock/Effect
This card is special summoned by the effect of Kirby of the stars when that card battles a EARTH or a rock monster. This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle.
2000/1200


Fighter Kirby EARTH 5
Warrior/Effect
This card is special summoned by the effect of Kirby of the stars when that card battles a EARTH or Warrior monster. When this card attacks a monster with higher attack points than the monster it attacks, increase it's attack by 300.
2000/1200


Tornado Kirby WIND 5
Spellcaster/Effect
This card is special summoned by the effect of Kirby of the stars when that card battles a WIND monster. Increase the attack of this card by 200 for each non-WIND monster on the field.
1600/1200


Bomb Kirby DARK 5
Warrior/Effect
This card is special summoned by the effect of Kirby of the stars when that card battles a DARK or Warrior monster. When this card deals battle damage to a player's lifepoints, choose one monster on the field, and destroy it.
1700/1200


Hammer Kirby WIND 5
Warrior/Effect
This card is special summoned by the effect of Kirby of the stars when that card battles a WIND or Warrior monster. When this card battles a EARTH monster, destroy that monster without applying damage calcuation.
1800/1200


Ninja Kirby DARK 5
Warrior/Effect
This card is special summoned by the effect of Kirby of the stars when that card battles a monster with Ninja in it's name. If this card is targetted by a spell or trap your oppoenet controls, remove this card from the game. At the end of that turn, special summon this card.
1900/1300


Needle Kirby EARTH 5
Plant/Effect
This card is special summoned by the effect of Kirby of the stars when that card battles a EARTH or Plant monster. This card can attack all monsters on your oppoenets side of the field once.
1950/1000


Cutter Kirby FIRE 5
Warrior/Effect
This card is special summoned by the effect of Kirby of the stars when that card battles a FIRE or Warrior monster. This card can attack twice during the same battle phase.
2000/1200


Sword Kirby LIGHT 5
Warrior/Effect
This card is special summoned by the effect of Kirby of the stars when that card battles a LIGHT or Warrior monster. If all your other monsters in defense position, increase the attack of this card by 400.
2100/1200


Paint Kirby LIGHT 5
Spellcaster/Effect
This card is special summoned by the effect of Kirby of the stars when that card battles a LIGHT or Spellcaster Monster. Once per turn, during your mainphase, you may change the battle position of one monster on the field.
1700/1200


Crash Kirby DARK 5
Spellcaster/Effect
This card is special summoned by the effect of Kirby of the stars when that card battles a DARK monster. Skip your battle phase and destroy all monsters on the field, then special summon one Kirby of Stars from your hand or deck. This effect cannot be used the same turn it's special summoned.
1500/1200


Wing Kirby WIND 5
Winged-Beast/Effect
This card is special summoned by the effect of Kirby of the stars when that card battles a WIND or Winged-Beast monster. You may pay 1000 lifepoints during your mainphase. If you do, this card can attack directly.
1500/1200


Mirror Kirby LIGHT 5
Spellcaster/Effect
This card is special summoned by the effect of Kirby of the stars when that card battles a LIGHT or Spellcaster monster. If this card was to be designated by a spell card, you may change the designation to another monster instead.
1500/1200


Wheel Kirby FIRE 5
Machine/Effect
This card is special summoned by the effect of Kirby of the stars when that card battles a FIRE or Machine monster. If this card battles a monster with lower defense than the attack of this monster, inflict the difference as battle damage to your oppoenets lifepoints.
1700/1400


Jet Kirby WIND 5
Machine/Effect
This card is special summoned by the effect of Kirby of the stars when that card battles a WIND or Machine monster. discard a card from your hand ot negate an attack to this card.
1500/1400


Parasol Kirby WIND 5
Warrior/Effect
This card is special summoned by the effect of Kirby of the stars when that card battles a WIND or Warrior monster. This card is unaffected by trap cards.
1500/1200


Cook Kirby EARTH 5
Spellcaster/Effect
This card is special summoned by the effect of Kirby of the stars when that card battles a EARTH or spellcaster monster. When this card is special summoned, destroy one monster on the field and gain lifepoints equal to the attack of that monster. You cannot select Cook Kirby.
1500/1200


Cleaning Kirby WIND 5
Spellcaster/Effect
This card is special summoned by the effect of Kirby of the stars when that card battles a WIND or Spellcaster monster. When this card is special summoned, destroy 2 spell or trap cards on the field.
1500/1200


Meta Knight LIGHT 4
Warrior/Effect
Increase the attack of all your oppoenets monsters by 400 points.
2300/1700


King Dedede WIND 5
Warrior/Effect
When this card is summoned successfully, name a card. Your oppoenet cannot summon or activate the named card as long as this card is on the field.
2500/1800


Burnin' Leo FIRE 4
Pyro/Effect
Tribute this card and return one Kirby of the Stars to your deck and shuffle it to special summon one Fire Kirby from your fusion deck.
1800/1200


Chilly the Snowman WATER 4
Aqua/Effect
Tribute this card and return one Kirby of the Stars to your deck and shuffle it to special summon one Ice Kirby from your fusion deck.
1800/1200


Dynablade WIND 8
Winged-Beast/Effect
This card can attack twice during the same battle phase.
2600/2100



Marx DARK 11
Fiend/Ritual
This card can only be ritual summoned by "Nova Wishes". Remove one LIGHT and one DARK from your graveyard from play to remove one monster on the field.
3100/1400



Dreamland FIELD SPELL
Increase the attack and defense of all Ritual and Fusion monsters by 400 points. If you have King Dedede is in play, increase it's attack by 400 points.


Nova Wishes Ritual
Remove LIGHT and/or DARK monsters from your hand and in play equal to or more than 11 stars to ritual summon one Marx from your hand.


Gourment Race SPELL
Activate this card only if you control one King Dedede and one Kirby of the Stars on your side of the field and no other monsters. Destroy all spell and trap cards on the field, and gain 300 lifepoints for each spell and trap destroyed this race.


Whispy Woods 5 EARTH
Plant/Effect
When this card is attacked, destroy the monster that attacked this card.
2100/1500

Paintroller 4 EARTH
Warrior/Effect
You may discard one card from your hand during your mainphase. If you do, choose a monster on your oppoenets side of the field. That monster cannot attack until the next battle phase.
1400/1300

Mr. Shine 4 DARK
Spellcaster/Union
You may equip this card to a monster named Mr. Bright during your mainphase or unequip it. A monster equipped with this card cannot by a card effect. If the equipped monster was to be destroyed as a result of battle, this card is destroyed instead.
1800/1300

Mr. Bright 4 LIGHT
Spellcaster/Effect
You may equip this card to a monster named Mr. Shine during your mainphase or unequip it. A monster equipped with this card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. If the equipped monster was to be destroyed by a card effect, this card is destroyed instead.
1800/1300

Javelin Knight 4 EARTH
Warrior/Effect
When this card is normal summoned successfully, search your deck for a card named Axe Knight, and put it into your hand.
1000/500

Axe Knight 4 EARTH
Warrior/Effect
When this card is normal summoned successfully, search your deck for a card named Mace Knight, and put it into your hand.
1000/500

Mace Knight 4 EARTH
Warrior/Effect
When this card is normal summoned successfully, search your deck for a card named Tridant Knight, and put it into your hand.
1000/500

Tridant Knight 4 EARTH
Warrior/Effect
When this card is normal summoned successfully, search your deck for a card named Javelin Knight, and put it into your hand.
1000/500

Heavy Lobster 6 FIRE
Machine/Effect
When this card inflicts battle damage to your oppoenets lifepoints, it's damage is treated as effect damage instead.
2500/1700

Shadow Kirby 4 DARK
Effect
Remove this card from the game to special summon one Kirby card from your fusion deck. At end of turn, return the fusion monster to the fusion deck.
1500/1200

Dark Meta Knight 4 DARK
Warrior/Effect
This card deals no battle damage to your oppeonets lifepoints. When this card attacks a monster with higher attack than it, increase it's attack by 500.
1700/1200

Heavy Mole 5 EARTH
Machine/Effect
When this card attacks, and was to deal battle damage to your oppoenet, you may choose not to do any battle damage, and instead destroy a card on your oppoenets side of the field.
1900/1400

Dark Matter 8 DARK
Fiend/Effect
This card cannot be special summoned. This card cannot be tribute summoned except by triubitng 3 monsters. When this card is tribute summoned successfully, remove from play your deck, hand, graveyard, and all other cards you control. Gain control of all monsters on your oppoenets side of the field. When this card is destroyed, special summon one 0 Squared from your removed from play. You do not lose the duel when you cannot draw.
0/0

0 Squared 12 DARK
Fiend/Effect
When this card is special summoned by the effect of Dark Matter, if this card is in play during the end of your next end phase, inflict 10000 damage to your oppoenets lifepoints.
0/0


The Amazing Mirror Continious Spell
When you play this card, pay half your lifepoints. Choose a monster with 1500 attack or less. Put a token of that monster into play under your control. It's a DARK and Fiend in addition to it's other types. When this card is destroyed, destroy all tokens on the field.

The Fountain of Dreams Field Spell
Either player may discard two cards from their hand to ignore the summoning conditions of a monster in their hand or graveyard.


The Knights probably wouldn't be printed these days, and I think I errata'd Zero Squared in the past
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Old January 29th, 2008 (03:31 PM).
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Ravnica-inspired cards:

Staff of Alchemy [R]
4: Artifact
Cards in your hand have transmute 2UB. (2UB, Discard a card: Search your library for a card with the same converted mana cost as the discarded card, reveal it, and put it into your hand. Play only as a sorcery.)

Cytoplasm Vault [R]
3: Artifact
Each creature with graft you play comes into play with an additional +1/+1 counter on it.

Mizzium Observosphere [R]
5: Artifact
Spells with replicate cost 2 less to play.
Replicate costs are reduced by 2.

Pact of the Necromancer [R]
1{B/G}{B/G}{B/G}: Enchantment
Whenever you play a dredge ability, you may pay BG. If you do, put a 2/1 black and green Zombie creature token into play.
When a Zombie you control is put into a graveyard from play, each other player sacrifices a creature.

Gaze of Rakdos [U]
1{B/R}: Sorcery
Untap target creature and gain control of it until end of turn. That creature gains haste until end of turn. You lose life equal to its converted mana cost.

Mat'selesnya's Anthem [R]
1GW: Enchantment
Green creatures get +1/+1.
White creatures get +1/+1.

Boros Mage-Priest [C]
1RW: Creature - Human Wizard
RW, T: Boros Mage-Priest deals 1 damage to target creature or player and you gain 1 life.
Though the Boros are more known for their fleet-of-foot swordsman, the mage-priests lining the rear are as necessary as the infantry to ensure victory.
1/3

Swear to Secrecy [U]
1UB: Instant
Counter target spell unless its controller puts the top X cards of his or her library into his or her graveyard, where X is three times the converted mana cost of that spell.
“Even if someone were to penetrate our illusions, he must make a choice between secrecy or death.” --Circu

Terms of Peace [C]
1W: Instant
Prevent all combat damage that would be dealt this turn. If U was spent to play Terms of Peace, creatures that attacked this turn don’t untap during their controllers’ next untap step.

Jarad, Necromancer Outcast [R]
2BBG: Legendary Creature - Elf Zombie
Nonland cards in your graveyard have dredge X, where X is the card’s converted mana cost. (If you would draw a card, instead you may put the top X cards of your library into your graveyard, where X is the converted mana cost of a nonland card in your graveyard. If you do, return that card to your hand. Otherwise, draw a card.)
3/3

Savra, Resurrected Cytomancer
2GUU: Legendary Creature - Elf Wizard Mutant
Graft 3 (This permanent comes into play with three +1/+1 counters on it. Whenever a creature comes into play, you may move a +1/+1 counter from this permanent onto it.)
When a creature without graft comes into play under your control, put X +1/+1 counters on it, where X is the creature’s power. It becomes 0/0 and has graft.

Cerebral Absorption [R]
2{U/B}{U/B}: Enchantment
When a player plays a spell, you may put the top X cards of that player’s library into his or her graveyard, where X is that spell’s converted mana cost.

Mat'selesnya, High Priest [R]
3GGW: Legendary Creature - Elf Cleric
Mat’selesnya, High Priest has shroud as long as you control five or more creatures.
Spells you play have convoke. (Each creature you tap while playing a spell reduces its cost by 1 or by one mana of that creature’s color.)
2/5

Fade into Reality [C]
2UB: Sorcery
Return target nonland card from your graveyard to your hand.

Zomaj Hauc, Izzet Magelord [R]
3URR: Legendary Creature - Human Wizard
At the beginning of your upkeep, you may return target instant or sorcery card from your graveyard to your hand.
3/4

Angelic Reversal [U]
3W: Instant
You gain 3 life for each creature attacking you. If R was spent to play Angelic Reversal, instead Angelic Reversal deals 3 damage to each attacking creature.

Death Sentence [C]
4B: Instant
Destroy target creature. If W was spent to play Death Sentence, you gain life equal to that creature’s converted mana cost.

Deathgaze [U]
3G: Instant
All creatures able to block target creature this turn do so. If B was spent to play Deathgaze, that creature gains deathtouch until end of turn.

Feather, Angelic Guardian [R]
4RWW: Legendary Creature - Angel
Flying, first strike
X: The next X damage that would be dealt to target creature you control is dealt to Feather, Angelic Guardian instead. Spend only red and/or white mana this way.
5/5

Szadek the Restless [R]
4UUBB: Legendary Creature - Vampire Spirit
Szadek the Restless is unblockable.
When a creature you control deals combat damage to a player, that player removes the top ten cards of his or her library from the game.
6/6

Skyknight's Training [C]
{R/W}{R/W}: Enchantment - Aura
Enchant creature
Enchanted creature gets +1/+1 and has flying and haste.
“During times of peace, we train children who want to ride rocs. Then they don’t want to ride anymore.” --Klatton, Boros Skycaptain

Tilling the Marsh [C]
X{B/G}: Sorcery
Put the top X cards of your library into your graveyard.
Draw a card.
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Old February 4th, 2008 (06:22 PM). Edited February 4th, 2008 by Scarlet Weather.
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Incredible Machinations
Normal Spell
Select three or fewer differently named light-attribute machine type monsters in your deck and remove them from play. Special summon one Light-attribute monster from your fusion deck listing those monsters as fusion materials.

Well, XYZ now has an instant summoning method. It's cool... it's fun. Is it usable?

And another thing...

Destiny Drive
Normal Trap
Activate only when your opponent declares an attack. Send one "Destiny Hero" monster from your deck to the graveyard in order to negate that attack.

Eh, thematic and useless now that Foolish Burial's around, I guess, but I could see the anime using it to dump Malicious or Dasher, couldn't you?

Just for kicks...

Death By Extreme Boredom
Continuous Spell
If your opponent plays a card that they have not unlocked in YGO WC08 by beating computerized duelists over and over again, force them to unlock it before they return to the game. Negate this effect if the card your opponent activates does not exist in YGO WC08

The Arch-Nemesis Brigade
Normal Spell
Activate only if there is a(n) "E-Hero" or "D-Hero" monster on your opponent's side of the field. Special summon that monster's arch-nemesis. If you don't know what that monster's arch nemesis is, stop playing children's card games and go read comic books like the rest of the world. Jeez, what a loser.

.... I think I've just officially transcended the boundaries of sanity.
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Old February 5th, 2008 (06:37 AM).
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what a pity there are so less magic players here....

@RaikouRider243
in general like your ideas of cards, but...

1)Swear to Secrecy: this seems to be a bit cheap for its effect And being an uncommon card

2)Feather, angelic guardian:...Feather, are you serious about this name???just want to mention it cause the translation into german is too laughable for a lengendary angel...

3)Savra,resurrected cytomancer:...uhm i have to admit that i didn´t read the book...does she die???and if, why isn´t the queen of the Golgari ressurected by the golgari?just questions...
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Old February 6th, 2008 (08:57 AM).
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well, this is the first of YGO cards in a series I'm doing called Final Destruction. They are all ultra rare or above, and designed to turn duels around at the last posible minute.

Sub-Atomic Blast
Normal Spell
Ultimate Rare
CLC-V102
Activate this card only when your life points are 1000 or less. Reduce your Life Points to 1 and Destroy all monsters on the opponent's side of the field. Deal damage to your opponent's life points equal to the ATK of all monsters destroyed by this effect.



I know it's a bit too powerful, but, like I said, the cards in this series are supposed to turn things around at the last minute. That's why it can only be played if You're at 1000 or less.
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Old February 6th, 2008 (10:35 AM).
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Sub-Atomic Blast: Wall of Revealing Light & Solemn Judgment say hi. Really, it isn't all that difficult to decrease your LP by that much for what could very well be an OTK.

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Incredible Machinations
Normal Spell
Select three or fewer differently named light-attribute machine type monsters in your deck and remove them from play. Special summon one Light-attribute monster from your fusion deck listing those monsters as fusion materials.

Well, XYZ now has an instant summoning method. It's cool... it's fun. Is it usable?

Outside of XYZ...I don't think so. It could help with the Cyber Dragon fusions if you use them...but not much otherwise, I think.

And another thing...

Destiny Drive
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Activate only when your opponent declares an attack. Send one "Destiny Hero" monster from your deck to the graveyard in order to negate that attack.

Eh, thematic and useless now that Foolish Burial's around, I guess, but I could see the anime using it to dump Malicious or Dasher, couldn't you?

Not...exactly. Foolish Burial still does similar and is faster. The only perk this has is negating an attack, but... Maybe if had a Sakuretsu-style effect.

Just for kicks...

Death By Extreme Boredom
Continuous Spell
If your opponent plays a card that they have not unlocked in YGO WC08 by beating computerized duelists over and over again, force them to unlock it before they return to the game. Negate this effect if the card your opponent activates does not exist in YGO WC08

No comment. Really.

The Arch-Nemesis Brigade
Normal Spell
Activate only if there is a(n) "E-Hero" or "D-Hero" monster on your opponent's side of the field. Special summon that monster's arch-nemesis. If you don't know what that monster's arch nemesis is, stop playing children's card games and go read comic books like the rest of the world. Jeez, what a loser.

.... I think I've just officially transcended the boundaries of sanity.
......Uhh.........................no comment here, either.
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Old February 6th, 2008 (11:08 AM).
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Quote originally posted by Ichaste Pekoni:
Sub-Atomic Blast: Wall of Revealing Light & Solemn Judgment say hi. Really, it isn't all that difficult to decrease your LP by that much for what could very well be an OTK.
which is what it's supposed to do. if a card with a CHANCE to win for you is bad, i suppose cards like Exodia, Destiny Board, and Exodios are downright horrible, then... Particularly Exodios, which, whem combined with wall of revealing light and a few things to prevent said wall from being destroyed, is an guaranteed win if you have the exodia cards.
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Old February 6th, 2008 (11:44 AM). Edited February 6th, 2008 by Forci Stikane.
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Quote originally posted by Commander_Latios:
which is what it's supposed to do. if a card with a CHANCE to win for you is bad, i suppose cards like Exodia, Destiny Board, and Exodios are downright horrible, then... Particularly Exodios, which, whem combined with wall of revealing light and a few things to prevent said wall from being destroyed, is an guaranteed win if you have the exodia cards.
Destiny Board IS horrible...but for other reasons.

Regardless, Exodia needs the deck to focus on it in order to really be successful. You can't exactly toss the pieces & Exodios into a random deck and expect them to work. Sub-Atomic Blast, on the other hand...is a hyped-up burn card that can also fit in stall as well as most other decks that run 3 Solemn. In a general case, you might see a Monarch & other beatstick, which would give you around 4000 damage on top of a Raigeki. It's abusable, splashable...

Aaanyway...new completely-fake cards:

Ra's Servant
LIGHT/Warrior/Effect
4 Stars/1700 ATK/800 DEF
If this card is sent to the Graveyard from the field or your Hand, you may remove this card from play to Special Summon 1 "Ra's Servant" or "Horus, the Black Flame Dragon LV4" from your hand or Deck.

Great Dragon Lord Ra-Hora
LIGHT/Dragon/Fusion/Effect
12 Stars/4000 ATK/4000 DEF
"Ra's Servant" + "Horus the Black Flame Dragon LV8"
This card can only be Special Summoned by removing the above-listed monsters on your side of the field from play (You do not use "Polymerization"). You can negate the activation and effect of any Spell, Trap, or Monster cards and destroy them. Each time a card is destroyed by this effect, increase the ATK of this card by 500.
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Old February 6th, 2008 (11:56 AM).
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Quote originally posted by Ichaste Pekoni:
Destiny Board IS horrible...but for other reasons.

Your comparison is a little flawed, though: Exodia needs the deck to focus on it in order to really be successful. Sub-Atomic Blast, on the other hand...is a hyped-up burn card that can also fit in stall as well as most other decks that run 3 Solemn. In a general case, you might see a Monarch & other beatstick, which would give you around 4000 damage on top of a Raigeki. It's highly abusable, splashable...
but there are so many easy ways to counter it, it balances out. cuts your points to 1.... just imagine what happens if (i think) the other person pulls something like waboku on you (again, not sure, but i know there's something that removes all LP damage for 1 turn....) and then what happens to you?

of course, there are also such fundamental ways that everyone who played the game knows to blcok it. De-spell, magic jammer, the list goes on and on.

not to mention luck of the draw and what your opponent happens to be throwing at you. you have to remember to calculate in the other factors before saying a card is too unbalanced.

and if you didn't like this, you're gonna get a kick out of Painsplit and Final Slice...
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Old February 6th, 2008 (12:03 PM). Edited February 6th, 2008 by Frostweaver.
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Ra Servant- super malicious with lower level and much higher attack power, just lacking the Destiny Draw? ._.; It really needs to say, from hand or field to the graveyard to prevent foolish burial tricks, even if it's not "anytime" like Malicious. It already got RotA and is lv 4 summon unlike Malicious. I am personally against it having foolish burial as another way to summon it too.

Ra-Hora- basically instant win, and not TOO hard to get out (at least compare to say those VtoZ who got a much weaker effect let's say). Horus 8 can come out, just not long lasting. Thankfully, RotA and foolish burial both search for Ra's Servant in an equivalent speed to instant, thus you're basically saying, as long as Horus 8 even lasts 1 round, you got Ra-Hora... o___o;


Sub-Atomic Blast- they say that Raigeiki got all the same "weaknesses" too >_<. Not to mention, Life Equalizer right after this and you cannot fail. You've just turned the only backfire of this card to another win condition switching over to life equalizer burn. To fight against life absorbing monolith, throw in the bad reaction to simochi and that burn from sub atomic will go through no matter what.

Problem with this is that you can use it whenever, and however you want without much careful need of timing or weakness. The moment you clear the backfield (giant trunade, heavy storm, MST, Royal Decree, or having your own solemn judgment/Dark Bribe, will stop any possible counter they have by the means of protective spell/traps), you are nuking them for damage beyond believe, especially the phantom darkness monsters having insane attack power too. You may go down to 1, but there's many ways to work around it. Solemn Judgment *still* works to have the first 0.5 LP in history to protect yourself for example, if you even need to at all. Another thing is to just poke the enemy with a monster if they somehow survivied the subatomic blast.

I don't even want to imagine people using Shallow Grave/torture golem and nuking the enemy 2 times in a row O___O;
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Old February 6th, 2008 (12:20 PM). Edited February 6th, 2008 by Commander_Latios.
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whatever. this series isn't really the ones i give two hoots about, i just felt like it.

here's another, different one i made for a friend. I don't even want to hear about it being too uber, it's not even my character being portrayed. So don't whine at me about it being too uber, I never intended this to be like an actual card that might possibly get released. Just something made in my sparetime for a friend. so don't go nuts, k?



and, as i've stressed at least three time in this post, IT IS NOT INTENDED TO BE SERIOUS OR BALANCED AT ALL.
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Old February 6th, 2008 (12:39 PM).
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...Actually, that's not too bad for a monster. It's pretty much a dead draw until you get enough monsters out to summon it, and even then there's still a real S/T weakness (Smashing Ground & Creature Swap, for instance). The only problem is that nowadays you need to specify summoning conditions with anything that has more than 8 stars (no, you can't just "assume" the 3-tribute deal).

Quote originally posted by Frostweaver:
Ra Servant- super malicious with lower level and much higher attack power, just lacking the Destiny Draw? ._.; It really needs to say, from hand or field to the graveyard to prevent foolish burial tricks, even if it's not "anytime" like Malicious. It already got RotA and is lv 4 summon unlike Malicious. I am personally against it having foolish burial as another way to summon it too.

Okay, fixed.

Ra-Hora- basically instant win, and not TOO hard to get out (at least compare to say those VtoZ who got a much weaker effect let's say). Horus 8 can come out, just not long lasting. Thankfully, RotA and foolish burial both search for Ra's Servant in an equivalent speed to instant, thus you're basically saying, as long as Horus 8 even lasts 1 round, you got Ra-Hora... o___o;
Pretty much, yes. The original idea was to use Ra itself, but...that would have been dumb for obvious reasons.
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Old February 6th, 2008 (12:49 PM).
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Quote originally posted by Ichaste Pekoni:
...Actually, that's not too bad for a monster. It's pretty much a dead draw until you get enough monsters out to summon it, and even then there's still a real S/T weakness (Smashing Ground & Creature Swap, for instance). The only problem is that nowadays you need to specify summoning conditions with anything that has more than 8 stars (no, you can't just "assume" the 3-tribute deal)
Thanks for the compliment. It's only even untouchable by the other monsters attack because this character (created by my friend, whom this card was designed for) is so skilled in combat she has never taken a hit in battle.

if you want an overpowered card, you should see the one for my other friend. Level 12 ritual with 6000 points and can attack 4 times a turn. That one was mostly just for card-making practice, to get the hang of it.

i intend on redoing both of the friend-cards into something a little more realistic.

I alo have a collection of random cards i made for the heck of it, let me know if you wanna see any. (For the most part, you gotta like star wars or naruto to like 'em)
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Old February 6th, 2008 (02:29 PM).
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Eh, but reading the original Naruto pilot started me on making the Yokai card series (albeit they have no images).

Mobile Frontline Base
Continuous Trap
Once per turn, you can special summon a level four or lower Union monster from your graveyard. When this card is sent to the graveyard, destroy all cards summoned by this effect.

XYZ needs more oomph? I shall give it more "oomph", and a nice little bit of swarm capability. :3

Alphabet Soup
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Discard two cards from your hand in order to remove one "V Tiger Jet", "W- Catapult Wing", "X Head Cannon", "Z Metal Tank", and "Y Dragon Head" in your hand, deck, or graveyard from play and special summon one "VWXYZ Dragon Catapult Cannon" from your fusion deck, ignoring summoning conditions.

Nomi Support FTW! If Cyberdark Impact can be created, so can this!

Wi-Fi Connection Error
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Spend fifteen minutes trying to hook up to the internet and download the card of the day while cursing at your unreliable internet access only to discover it's something completely useless.

You can tell that I hate the whole "duel multiple opponents to get good cards" set-up for WC08, right?
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Old February 6th, 2008 (02:57 PM).
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Quote originally posted by ACC-M:
Eh, but reading the original Naruto pilot started me on making the Yokai card series (albeit they have no images).

Mobile Frontline Base
Continuous Trap
Once per turn, you can special summon a level four or lower Union monster from your graveyard. When this card is sent to the graveyard, destroy all cards summoned by this effect.

XYZ needs more oomph? I shall give it more "oomph", and a nice little bit of swarm capability. :3

Foolish Burial support, anybody? It won't help with recursion, of course, since the parts gets removed, but it's still a nice boost.

Alphabet Soup
Normal Spell
Discard two cards from your hand in order to remove one "V Tiger Jet", "W- Catapult Wing", "X Head Cannon", "Z Metal Tank", and "Y Dragon Head" in your hand, deck, or graveyard from play and special summon one "VWXYZ Dragon Catapult Cannon" from your fusion deck, ignoring summoning conditions.

Nomi Support FTW! If Cyberdark Impact can be created, so can this!

Well, hand size doesn't matter to VWXYZ, so the discarding part shouldn't be too bad (you should have ways to refill your hand, anyway). Hooray for signature summoning!

Wi-Fi Connection Error
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Spend fifteen minutes trying to hook up to the internet and download the card of the day while cursing at your unreliable internet access only to discover it's something completely useless.

You can tell that I hate the whole "duel multiple opponents to get good cards" set-up for WC08, right?
Heh...I want to see a set made around that last one.

You do know that we once again have ghosts to get free DP from, right?
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Old February 7th, 2008 (02:57 AM).
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After replaying ZOE: Anbuis again, I'm really hoping Konami to release cards based on it.
They've done MGS before, so Kojima probably won't mind.

But anyway, original cards based on Anubis. Naked Jehuty itself is intended to be "lol", because it's like that in the original game.

OF (Orbital Frame) - Jehuty
LIGHT/Machine/Effect
Level 4/1800 ATK/1600 DEF
Each time this card destroys 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field by battle, put 1 EXP Counter on it (max. 6). When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, Special Summon 1 "OF - Damaged Jehuty" from your hand or your Deck.

OF - Damaged Jehuty
LIGHT/Machine/Effect
Level 4/1600 ATK/0 DEF
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "OF - Jehuty". When this card is Special Summoned, transfer all EXP Counters that were on "OF - Jehuty" before it was destroyed as a result of battle to this card. Each time this card destroys 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field by battle, put 1 EXP Counter on it (max. 6).

OF - Naked Jehuty
LIGHT/Machine/Effect
Level 12/5000 ATK/5000 DEF
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "OF - Jehuty" or 1 "OF - Damaged Jehuty" with 6 EXP Counters on it.
This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly, and unaffected by the effects of Spell Cards, Trap Cards and Effect Monsters.
(The "direct attack" and impossibility to destroy it is reference to the ZERO SHIFT system.)
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Kay... I'm just gonna skip to the cards.

Leaderboard
Field Spell
Pay half your life points in order to download a ghost that has as much chance of being a dude with a crappy deck or a zero-card deck that you can farm DP from as a dude who cut his deck down to five cards and gets an automatic Exodia win on the first turn.

Tag Roulette
Normal Spell
Point to a random bystander with a deck and demand that they join you in a tag duel. This simulates your chances of actually getting a good partner on WC08 tag duels. Good luck overcoming Murphy's law.

Boring Practice Hours
Normal Spell
Deal one hundred points of direct damage to your opponent for every hour they spent beating CPU duelists to unlock packs in the card shop. Ten bucks says that if they own WC08, this card is an instant-win.

False Joy
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Activate only when your opponent duels through at least 25 CPU opponents to receive the latest pack. Deal damage to them proportionate to their annoyance when they discover that the pack is labeled "for begginners" and the key monster is "Master of Oz".

OMGZ ITZ A N00B!
Quickplay Spell
If your opponent has ever lost to someone they thought was a n00b on WC08 after they spent at least six hours preparing their deck and several more unlocking the packs to open their card pool enough to build it in the first place, screw the rules you win the duel.

WHAT DO YOU MEAN IT ISN'T INCLUDED?!?!?
Normal Spell
Deal direct damage to your opponent proportionate to your annoyance when you find out that WC08 didn't include Zombie Master and Archfiend monsters, among others.

YOU COULD HAVE AT LEAST INCLUDED SOMETHING FROM PHANTOM DARKNESS!
Counter Trap
And then deal damage proportionate to ACC-M's rage when he found out that he'll have to wait at least a year for the next game to come out to build his Yubel control deck. *sniff*

The Last Pack
Normal Spell
Congratulate yourself for unlocking all the WC08 packs. Cry when you realize that in the end, it was completely meaningless.

....

Okay, frustration dealt with. Serious card time.

Infernal Emperor
Monster/Dark/Fiend/Effect/4*
Atk 1600/ Def 1000
Instead of declaring an attack with this monster, you can special summon one "Infernal Minion Token" (Dark/Fiend/Effect/1*/Atk 0000/ Def 0000). This token cannot be offered as a tribute for a tribute summon on the turn it is played.

Miracle Guardna
Monster/Light/Fiend/Effect/4*
Atk 1600/ Def 1000
If this monster and an Earth, Fire, Wind, and Water attribute monster are in your graveyard, your opponent cannot declare an attack.
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Old February 11th, 2008 (03:47 PM).
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Here we go:

Defensive Glop
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During every turn, you may eat one case of Jell-o so your opponent will then give up all hope of trying to damage you.

Turtle Tower
Quick-Play Spell
You may summon as many "Floral Crab"* cards from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard so that by the time you're done looking for all of them, your opponent will have gone to your room, gotten a rulebook, given up trying to prove you wrong, gone home, leaving you as the winner.

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Old February 14th, 2008 (01:07 PM).
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Some designs I've been thinking about for a new set of creatures I call Weazels, which are basically humanoid weasel creatures mafia-ish/terriost types mainly. An attempt at a set of these that will be compariably playable if they were actually played cards (despite not knowing much about Yugi-Oh or anything.) Feel free to comment, suggest things, constructive criticism but no saying its plain stupid. (And yes the name is lame, its actually deliberate)

Please do note i'm not great with wording for such cards, being more used to MTG.

Weazel Minion
Beast-Warrior/3 Stars/Earth
1400 ATK/800 DEF

Note: Basic Weazel, not very strong

Weazel Hitman
Beast-Warrior/3 Stars/Earth
800 ATK/1000 DEF
Effect

When Weazel Hitman battles another monster, increase its Attack points by 1000 and decrease its Defense points by 1000 for the duration of the Battle Phase.

Weazel Sabatour
Beast-Warrior/4 Stars/Fire
1700 ATT/700 DEF
Effect

Discard a card from your hand: Roll a six-sided dice, if the result is 3 or 4, destroy a monster on the opponents side of the field and your opponent loses 1000 life points. If the reult is 1, 2, 5 or 6 tribute Weazel Sabatour and you lose 500 life points.

Note: Somewhat inspired off Snipe Hunter, only its more haphazard. It can also make an okay attacking monster too.

Cowardly Weazel
Beast-Warrior/4 Stars/Dark
2000 ATK/500 DEF
Effect

This monster cannot be summoned onto the field if there are no monsters on your side of the field with "Weazel" in thier name.

Weazel Smuggler
Beast-Warrior/1 Star/Dark
100 ATK/150 DEF
Effect

This monster can attack your opponents life points directly.
When Weazel Smuggler deals Battle damage to an opponent, you may draw 1 card.

Weazel Engineer
Beast-Warrior/3 Stars/Dark
800 ATT/1200 DEF
Effect
You may tritube this monster and discard a card from your hand to remove a Machine-type monster in play from the current duel. This cannot be use if you have no cards in your han.

You may tribute this monster and discard a card from your hand to search your deck for a card named "Weazelbot Mk 1" and special summon it onto your side of the field.

Weazelbot Mk 1
Machine/6 Stars/Dark
2400 ATT/1600 DEF
Effect

You may tribute this monster and discard a card from your hand to search your deck for a card named "Weazelbot Mk 2" and special summon it onto your side of the field.

Weazelbot Mk 2

Machine/8 Stars/Dark
3400 ATT/2600 DEF
Effect

When Weazelbot Mk 2 is special summoned, halve your life points.
When Weazelbot Mk 2 attack a monster in defense mode with defense less then its attack points, deal the difference to the opponents life points. (They call that piercing damage right?)

Weazel Deception
Counter Trap
When a spell or trap card is activated, tribute a monster with "Weazel" in its name to negate the effect of that card and destroy it.

Weazelling Out
Quick Play Spell
Pay 300 life points as you play this card. Return a monster on your side of the field with "Weazel" in its name to your hand.

Slippery Weazel
Beast-Warrior/ 4 Stars/Water
1700 ATT/1000DEF
Effect

This monster cannot be the target of Spells, Traps and the effects of effect monsters.

Weazelled Out!
Trap
No monster can be tributed or returned to a players hand this turn (Effects relating to tributes cannot be used)

Note: Might need to change this one dramatically.

Sleeping With the Fishes
Trap
Destroy any one non-Water attibute, non-Aqua type monster on your opponents side of the field. The monster destroyed by this card cannot be special summoned back onto the field by any card effect.

Getaway Vehicle
Spell - Equip Magic

This can be only equipped to a non-Machine monster with "Weazel" in its name.
Increase equipped monster's Attack and Defense by 300 points
At the begining of the Battle Step you may tribute Getaway Vechicle to reduce all damage dealt during the Battle Phase to equipped creature to 0.

Weazel Kingpin
Fiend/4 Stars/Dark
0 ATK/1500 DEF
Effect

The Attack Points of this monster is equal to the number of cards with "Weazel" in thier name other tham Weazel Kingpin on the field and in the graveyard times 100.
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Old February 14th, 2008 (02:43 PM).
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Quote originally posted by Soulflame Ninetales:
Some designs I've been thinking about for a new set of creatures I call Weazels, which are basically humanoid weasel creatures mafia-ish/terriost types mainly. An attempt at a set of these that will be compariably playable if they were actually played cards (despite not knowing much about Yugi-Oh or anything.) Feel free to comment, suggest things, constructive criticism but no saying its plain stupid. (And yes the name is lame, its actually deliberate)

Actually I think it's rather creative. I'm kind of hooked on the set already.

Please do note i'm not great with wording for such cards, being more used to MTG.

Weazel Minion
Beast-Warrior/3 Stars/Earth
1400 ATK/800 DEF

Note: Basic Weazel, not very strong

Eh... but the base card of the set really needs something going for it. At least it gets Weazel support.

Weazel Hitman
Beast-Warrior/3 Stars/Earth
800 ATK/1000 DEF
Effect

When Weazel Hitman battles another monster, increase its Attack points by 1000 and decrease its Defense points by 1000 for the duration of the Battle Phase.

Hmm... with current wording this basically means that Weazel Hitman has 1800 Atk/ 2000 Def when another monster attacks it as well. Not sure if that was the intention here or what, but... anyway, fairly lame considering that it becomes a near-useless wall monster with Skill Drain out because of its weak stats, as well as being basically a wimpier version of Steamroid (eighteen hundred attack monster that gains five hundred points when it attacks, but then loses five hundred points during the next battle phase. Besides, a hitman is tough even when he isn't on the job. Maybe a S/T destruction effect when it destroys a monster and a skill boost? Or perhaps a suicide effect, so that when it gets killed your opponent takes a hit?

Weazel Sabatour
Beast-Warrior/4 Stars/Fire
1700 ATT/700 DEF
Effect

Discard a card from your hand: Roll a six-sided dice, if the result is 3 or 4, destroy a monster on the opponents side of the field and your opponent loses 1000 life points. If the reult is 1, 2, 5 or 6 tribute Weazel Sabatour and you lose 500 life points.

Note: Somewhat inspired off Snipe Hunter, only its more haphazard. It can also make an okay attacking monster too.

0.0 I have the urge to call Jonouchi Katsuya and ask if he's added this card to his deck yet. Actually, aside from the higher stats it doesn't even really compare to Snipe Hunter. I think a lot of what makes Snipe Hunter valuable is that it isn't limited to just one card type: it can kill anything on the field, S/T, facedown monster, beatstick, you name it Snipe Hunter kills it. My suggestion is to make it a two-thirds ratio, same as Snipe Hunter, and also to cut the self-destruction clause, then limit the thing that Saboteur can destroy in some way (face up monster, for example). Also, the wording on most official cards reads "destroy this card" not "tribute this card" when they're talking about sending it to the graveyard because you failed to pay a cost or an effect backfired.

Cowardly Weazel
Beast-Warrior/4 Stars/Dark
2000 ATK/500 DEF
Effect

This monster cannot be summoned onto the field if there are no monsters on your side of the field with "Weazel" in thier name.

Muscle hits the field. Pity that Gene-Warped Warwolf has the same Atk without the summon clause, and gets support from Non-Spellcasting Area and Justi-Break.

Weazel Smuggler
Beast-Warrior/1 Star/Dark
100 ATK/150 DEF
Effect

This monster can attack your opponents life points directly.
When Weazel Smuggler deals Battle damage to an opponent, you may draw 1 card.

Good Card. Very Good card. I can see the deck building up around these.

Weazel Engineer
Beast-Warrior/3 Stars/Dark
800 ATT/1200 DEF
Effect
You may tritube this monster and discard a card from your hand to remove a Machine-type monster in play from the current duel. This cannot be use if you have no cards in your han.

You may tribute this monster and discard a card from your hand to search your deck for a card named "Weazelbot Mk 1" and special summon it onto your side of the field.

That line about "this effect cannot be used if you have no cards in your hand" is unnecessary, because you obviously can't discard to activate the effect if you have no cards in your hand. 0_o Also, you can just say "Search your deck for a 'Weazellbot Mk 1'", the "a card named" isn't needed. Actually, I think this is pretty weak. Machine-type Removal could be used against an annoying Cyber Dragon, but only if the opponent doesn't tribute it away for a Monarch or Malicious Edge first. Against Gadget that effect is pretty lame, because Gadget players will have another Gadget in their hand to summon next turn. Also, remove the "from the current duel". Just say "remove from play". The special summoning of Weazellbot is actually pretty lame since it's a one-tribute monster anyway, and there are niftier methods of calling it to the field quickly. To wit: D-Hero Malicious removal, special summoning Cyber Dragon from the hand, Metal Fiend's Sanctuary, Dandylion... the list goes on. This way you're giving up two cards to get one, and a card that doesn't even have a fancy effect to go with it in the end to even the odds up. Meh, I'll pass.

Weazelbot Mk 1
Machine/6 Stars/Dark
2400 ATT/1600 DEF
Effect

You may tribute this monster and discard a card from your hand to search your deck for a card named "Weazelbot Mk 2" and special summon it onto your side of the field.

Same problem here. Mk 2 is actually a better excuse for tossing two cards for because two-tribute monsters are much harder to summon quickly than one-tribute. Problem is that this is a less-then-stellar monster to toss two cards for when you could be tossing one. Not to mention the annoying fact that unless you tribute-search again, you won't get a fancy effect to go along with the monster. At least up his stats or something.


Weazelbot Mk 2

Machine/8 Stars/Dark
3400 ATT/2600 DEF
Effect

When Weazelbot Mk 2 is special summoned, halve your life points.
When Weazelbot Mk 2 attack a monster in defense mode with defense less then its attack points, deal the difference to the opponents life points. (They call that piercing damage right?)

Indeed they do call that piercing damage now. Actually, I think you can eliminate Mk 1 and just skip straight to this bad boy. (Maybe discard two cards from the hand for Engineer's effect instead of one as a cost for summoning such a high Atk monster so quickly). This is sort of like an uber Evil Hero Malicious Edge with theme support. It's balanced by the S/T and effect weakness, but piercing damage on something this big with a quick summoning method (once you eliminate the middle man) is nothing to sneeze at.

Weazel Deception
Counter Trap
When a spell or trap card is activated, tribute a monster with "Weazel" in its name to negate the effect of that card and destroy it.

Sort of a thematic Dark Bribe, but instead of upping the opponent's hand size you decrease your own field presence. Eh, okay.

Weazelling Out
Quick Play Spell
Pay 300 life points as you play this card. Return a monster on your side of the field with "Weazel" in its name to your hand.

Interdimensional Matter Transporter removes the card from play for no cost, and then puts it back at the end of the turn free of charge. Plus, it's non-monster specific. This one really needs some more... oomph, shall we say.

Slippery Weazel
Beast-Warrior/ 4 Stars/Water
1700 ATT/1000DEF
Effect

This monster cannot be the target of Spells, Traps and the effects of effect monsters.

This I like. It's possible to run over it with a high Atk monster, but it's pretty well shielded from any other method of destruction. (Well, Lightning Vortex still kills it I suppose because it doesn't specify a target). Still, a very all-around useful card.

Weazelled Out!
Trap
No monster can be tributed or returned to a players hand this turn (Effects relating to tributes cannot be used)

How about you just say "no monsters can be tributed or returned to the player's hand this turn under any circumstances". That effectively cancels anything out. Good card for stopping falling Monarchs, and makes Exiled Force and Neo-Spacian Ground Mole completely useless.

Note: Might need to change this one dramatically.

Sleeping With the Fishes
Trap
Destroy any one non-Water attibute, non-Aqua type monster on your opponents side of the field. The monster destroyed by this card cannot be special summoned back onto the field by any card effect.

Since there aren't many water attribute or aqua type monsters being widely played these days outside of the occasional Mobius, I'd say this is a deviously good, very splashable little card.

Getaway Vehicle
Spell - Equip Magic

This can be only equipped to a non-Machine monster with "Weazel" in its name.
Increase equipped monster's Attack and Defense by 300 points
At the begining of the Battle Step you may tribute Getaway Vechicle to reduce all damage dealt during the Battle Phase to equipped creature to 0.

Maybe reword it so that you can tribute Getaway Vehicle in order to negate a card effect targeting that monster or destruction in battle (as opposed to battle damage, which only refers to the LP loss) as well?

Weazel Kingpin
Fiend/4 Stars/Dark
0 ATK/1500 DEF
Effect

The Attack Points of this monster is equal to the number of cards with "Weazel" in thier name other tham Weazel Kingpin on the field and in the graveyard times 100.
No to the last one. Even Goblin King got one thousand point boost increments for the fiends on the field, as did Ultimate Baseball Kid for Pyros. King of the Skull Servants got one thousand point bonuses, and he went digging in the graveyard as well. Besides, with the current number of Weazel cards, even if you had three of every card on the field or in the graveyard his max Atk would total at... *counts quickly*... er... 2700, which is pretty weak considering what you'd have to go through in order to meet those conditions. Besides, a Kingpin should be tougher then that. Maybe give him the combined total Atk of all Weazels on the field, at least? Some of them have pretty good stats, so with one or two Weazels you're talking a pretty decent conditional beatstick.
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