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Old March 12th, 2011, 02:39 AM
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Basically, when we check the forums (Roleplay Corner and Roleplay Lounge) and there are newly submitted threads by you, we will make a new post here and state whether or not your thread was accepted.


If they are denied, we may post a hint/tip on what was wrong. If your RP was denied, it's most often because of one or several of the following reasons:

- No rating? All RPs must have a rating. Re. Mem. Ber.

- Too short plot? Your background story/plot/setting should be 5-6 full lines or preferably more. Shorter than that and you can't really get much info into it.

- Does your background actually act as background info? Does it tell your roleplayers where the roleplay takes place, what the goal or purpose of the RP is, why their character might potentially be involved...? Double-check!


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If your RP is denied, you may fix what I've pointed out here (or in a PM if you asked for one) and then post it again and hope to be accepted the second time :3


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Last edited by Adventure; June 1st, 2014 at 04:15 AM. Reason: "Pokémon Roleplay and Other Roleplay"? Jeez, this was outdated. Changed the pronouns to plural also ;)
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Old March 13th, 2011, 12:08 AM
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Totodile12345's OOC thread has been moved to the Roleplay Corner and approved.

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Old March 13th, 2011, 08:32 AM
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Both of alpagamer323's duplicate RPs have been denied. Please read the rules before posting. Also, you have to improve your grammar and start using a spell-check (type up the post in Word or something) if you want to host an RP.

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Old March 14th, 2011, 01:32 AM
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Blaziken 15's RP is approved. The plot is very short, but I hope you have planned enough to make it roll.

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Old March 15th, 2011, 01:07 PM
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Blaziken 15's OOC thread is approved.

Nakuzami's RP thread is moved to Other Roleplay and approved, since that forum needz moar luv. No, seriously, it's because the RP doesn't focus on pokémon.

Nakuzami's OOC thread is also approved.

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Old March 16th, 2011, 02:12 AM
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Diamond1234's OOC/SU thread accepted.

Lynette's RP thread approved.

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Old March 17th, 2011, 01:18 AM
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Lynette's OOC thread has been accepted.

killet513
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killet513's RP thread is now accepted.

Totodile12345's RP thread is denied for now. You have to describe the setting, now it's just a background story and nothing about where you'll be playing.

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Old March 17th, 2011, 11:58 PM
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Marina E. Silver's RP thread and OOC thread are accepted.

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Old March 18th, 2011, 10:19 AM
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Cookiez's RP thread denied.... because it's pretty much an imitation of this http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=246077. You could join that instead, and suggest that the world you want to play in gets put up?

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Old March 18th, 2011, 11:45 PM
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dajman1996's RP thread is accepted.

fire woven
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Old March 20th, 2011, 12:13 PM
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Royal's RP thread and OOC thread are accepted.

fire woven's RP is now accepted.
fire woven's OOC thread is also accepted.

ultragon's RP thread is denied because the plot is too short. On my screen it was just 4 lines. Compare it to most of the RPs around.


(the following is not just directed at ultragon) I think I'm gonna start being a little harder on the plot part, because there are so many RPs appearing with a story that feels like it's just haphazardly thrown together or thought+written up within a few minutes.

Before you create an RP, you have got to have an idea. Evolve that idea and ponder if it would work out as an RP. Then think about how the RP would best be played and what role you as a game master should take.

But before all this, you should ask yourself if your plot even makes sense. A horrible monster/demigod/villain has returned and wants to spread crime/murder/destroy the world? Oh, let's hand a pokémon to 10 young kids and have THEM go stop the evil! -.-' that's... not really logical unless you're making a parody-RP. Which most here aren't. Sure, you can do like this if you twist it so that it is necessary to have the trainers young and new because of their pure hearts or untouched auras or something like that. But otherwise it's pretty weird.

Now, illogical plot isn't the same as using unnatural or mysterious and thus "illogical" things to achieve an interesting/unusual plot. I don't mean to sound full of myself at all, but Darkrai's Balloon is probably an example of a simple idea with an unusual plot where some "magical" things happen.

Just... something to think about when you decide that you want to create an RP of your own. Creativity is your friend.

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Old March 21st, 2011, 11:38 AM
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TiTaN.JuStIn's RP thread is accepted.

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Wasen's RP thread is denied for now. Check my PM for details.

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Old March 21st, 2011, 02:48 PM
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Totodile12345's RP thread is accepted.

Wasen's RP thread is now accepted.

النار 's thread is pending until you send me a VM promising to add a rating as soon as the thread is accepted.

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Old March 24th, 2011, 06:12 AM
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FallenAngelSilver's RP is denied because the plot is too loose. Freeform RPs should have some guidelines set up, or they can easily die after a while from lack of creativity and story.

MoonstoneSkitty's RP is denied because the opening post's text is all jumbled together. It's very hard to read; you should use the ENTER key to make several paragraphs instead of one big wall of text. From what I could read with some effort, it seems like it could be accepted though. Please post it again, with proper formatting, and we'll see.

jackblaze's RP is denied. There already is a pokémon academy RP that hasn't even started yet, and they are pretty similar. And the plot for yours is pretty much non-existant. Unless an academy RP is very detailedly set up, it works the best if there is a background story to build on and having the academy as mostly a setting.

Ash_Ketchum123's RP thread is accepted. It looks awesome!

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Old March 25th, 2011, 07:11 AM
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النار 's RP thread is now accepted.

Totodile12345's OOC thread is accepted.

Makbet
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Old March 26th, 2011, 10:14 PM
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998435's RP thread is accepted.

Seraph Darkfire's RP thread is accepted. (although your SU was very short)

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Old March 27th, 2011, 10:33 PM
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Seraph Darkfire's OOC thread is accepted.

Seraph Darkfire's new RP thread is pending until you VM me promising to add a rating as soon as the thread is approved.

Marina E. Silver's RP thread is accepted.

jackblaze's RP thread is pending until you VM me promising to add a rating as soon as the thread is approved.

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Old March 28th, 2011, 12:13 PM
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Seraph Darkfire's RP thread is now accepted.

jackblaze's RP thread is now accepted.

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Old March 29th, 2011, 10:17 AM
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Diamond1304's RP thread is accepted!

FallenAngelSilver's RP thread is denied. Because 1) you have already made an RP much like this one, 2) there's not really enough story or rules to build a roleplay on.

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Old April 1st, 2011, 10:46 PM
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TabrisNagisa's OOC thread has been accepted. (note that you may not make another out of character/discussion thread for the same RP later. You'll have to use this one then)

MoonstoneSkitty's RP thread is accepted.

Lilliana's RP thread is accepted.

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Old April 2nd, 2011, 08:17 AM
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jackblaze's OOC thread is accepted.

PiKasnAp
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Supervegeta
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Old April 3rd, 2011, 12:53 PM
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miley810's RP thread is accepted, even though your SU sheet is awfully short... I guess you want the players to play the personalities of the legendaries shown in the movies?

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Old April 5th, 2011, 02:43 AM
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998435's RP is denied for now. I can frankly not understand the plot. You should read over your post properly before posting it because now there are several grammar errors that confuses the reader. And maybe you should explain what tale beasts/tail beasts are a little more carefully (unless you're amining for already knowledgeable Naruto fans, but maybe you should state so then).

HunterZero's RP thread is accepted.

Marina E. Silver
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Old April 6th, 2011, 07:14 AM
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HunterZero's OOC thread is accepted.

Cubaser's RP thread is accepted.

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Old April 7th, 2011, 11:43 PM
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mathewsggm's RP thread is denied. You should evolve the plot and build and describe a world where your players can play! :) And, read the rules before posting, please.

Fire Walker's OOC thread is pending until you PM/VM me promising to add a rating as soon as the thread is approved. The RP looks very interesting!

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