Go Back   The PokéCommunity Forums > Creative Discussions > Roleplay Theatre
Reload this Page Forum Info Check to see if your roleplay has been accepted! v.2

Notices
For all updates, view the main page.

Roleplay Theatre The realm where writers gather to create glorious tales or silly drama together and chronicle their adventures. Start or join roleplays featuring Pokémon, other franchises or something completely original!



Closed Thread
 
Thread Tools
  #1    
Old March 12th, 2011 (02:39 AM). Edited May 9th, 2015 by Apotheosis.
Apotheosis's Avatar
Apotheosis Apotheosis is online now
adventure seeker
Moderator, CS
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Skaia
Gender: Female
Nature: Naive
Posts: 19,442
~ the "Check to see" thread ~

Basically, when we check the subforums (Roleplay Stage and Roleplay Casting) and there are newly submitted threads by you, we will make a new post here and state whether or not your thread was accepted.


If your thread is accepted, it will now be visible on the index and ready for people to post in. Hooray!


If your thread is denied, we may post a hint/tip on what was wrong. It's most often because of one or several of the following reasons:

- No rating? All RPs must have a rating. Re. Mem. Ber.

- Too short plot? Your background story/plot/setting should really span a couple of paragraphs. Extremely short info texts usually don't set up the RP well enough.

- Does your background actually act as background info? Does it tell your roleplayers where the roleplay takes place, what the goal or purpose of the RP is, why their character might potentially be involved...? Double-check!


This means
, don't ask the moderators via VM/PM to check your thread; if your thread doesn't show up for a while, you can check this thread to see if it was denied and what the major reason is.

If you want more detailed feedback on your thread, after it's been denied in this thread, then you can PM the moderator about it.

If your RP is denied, you may fix what I've pointed out here (or in a PM if you asked for one) and then post it in the RPS/RPC again and hope to be accepted the second time :3 Your RP is not less worthy just because it took a couple of rounds to get through- it might even be better than average since you've fixed it up!


Let's keep the PokéCommunity Roleplay Theater a place of quality, guys!
__________________

mod of Roleplay Theatre and Pokémon General
paired with seeker, creator of Phoenix Rising
  #2    
Old March 13th, 2011 (12:08 AM).
Apotheosis's Avatar
Apotheosis Apotheosis is online now
adventure seeker
Moderator, CS
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Skaia
Gender: Female
Nature: Naive
Posts: 19,442
Totodile12345's OOC thread has been moved to the Roleplay Corner and approved.
__________________

mod of Roleplay Theatre and Pokémon General
paired with seeker, creator of Phoenix Rising
  #3    
Old March 13th, 2011 (08:32 AM).
Apotheosis's Avatar
Apotheosis Apotheosis is online now
adventure seeker
Moderator, CS
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Skaia
Gender: Female
Nature: Naive
Posts: 19,442
Both of alpagamer323's duplicate RPs have been denied. Please read the rules before posting. Also, you have to improve your grammar and start using a spell-check (type up the post in Word or something) if you want to host an RP.
__________________

mod of Roleplay Theatre and Pokémon General
paired with seeker, creator of Phoenix Rising
  #4    
Old March 14th, 2011 (01:32 AM).
Apotheosis's Avatar
Apotheosis Apotheosis is online now
adventure seeker
Moderator, CS
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Skaia
Gender: Female
Nature: Naive
Posts: 19,442
Blaziken 15's RP is approved. The plot is very short, but I hope you have planned enough to make it roll.
__________________

mod of Roleplay Theatre and Pokémon General
paired with seeker, creator of Phoenix Rising
  #5    
Old March 15th, 2011 (01:07 PM).
Apotheosis's Avatar
Apotheosis Apotheosis is online now
adventure seeker
Moderator, CS
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Skaia
Gender: Female
Nature: Naive
Posts: 19,442
Blaziken 15's OOC thread is approved.

Nakuzami's RP thread is moved to Other Roleplay and approved, since that forum needz moar luv. No, seriously, it's because the RP doesn't focus on pokémon.

Nakuzami's OOC thread is also approved.
__________________

mod of Roleplay Theatre and Pokémon General
paired with seeker, creator of Phoenix Rising
  #6    
Old March 16th, 2011 (02:12 AM).
Apotheosis's Avatar
Apotheosis Apotheosis is online now
adventure seeker
Moderator, CS
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Skaia
Gender: Female
Nature: Naive
Posts: 19,442
Diamond1234's OOC/SU thread accepted.

Lynette's RP thread approved.
__________________

mod of Roleplay Theatre and Pokémon General
paired with seeker, creator of Phoenix Rising
  #7    
Old March 17th, 2011 (01:18 AM). Edited March 17th, 2011 by Apotheosis.
Apotheosis's Avatar
Apotheosis Apotheosis is online now
adventure seeker
Moderator, CS
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Skaia
Gender: Female
Nature: Naive
Posts: 19,442
Lynette's OOC thread has been accepted.

killet513
's RP thread will be accepted if you VM me with a promise to add a rating as soon as the thread is up >.<
killet513's RP thread is now accepted.

Totodile12345's RP thread is denied for now. You have to describe the setting, now it's just a background story and nothing about where you'll be playing.
__________________

mod of Roleplay Theatre and Pokémon General
paired with seeker, creator of Phoenix Rising
  #8    
Old March 17th, 2011 (11:58 PM).
Apotheosis's Avatar
Apotheosis Apotheosis is online now
adventure seeker
Moderator, CS
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Skaia
Gender: Female
Nature: Naive
Posts: 19,442
Marina E. Silver's RP thread and OOC thread are accepted.
__________________

mod of Roleplay Theatre and Pokémon General
paired with seeker, creator of Phoenix Rising
  #9    
Old March 18th, 2011 (10:19 AM).
Apotheosis's Avatar
Apotheosis Apotheosis is online now
adventure seeker
Moderator, CS
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Skaia
Gender: Female
Nature: Naive
Posts: 19,442
Cookiez's RP thread denied.... because it's pretty much an imitation of this http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=246077. You could join that instead, and suggest that the world you want to play in gets put up?
__________________

mod of Roleplay Theatre and Pokémon General
paired with seeker, creator of Phoenix Rising
  #10    
Old March 18th, 2011 (11:45 PM). Edited March 20th, 2011 by Apotheosis.
Apotheosis's Avatar
Apotheosis Apotheosis is online now
adventure seeker
Moderator, CS
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Skaia
Gender: Female
Nature: Naive
Posts: 19,442
dajman1996's RP thread is accepted.

fire woven
's RP is pending... see my PM.
__________________

mod of Roleplay Theatre and Pokémon General
paired with seeker, creator of Phoenix Rising
  #11    
Old March 20th, 2011 (12:13 PM).
Apotheosis's Avatar
Apotheosis Apotheosis is online now
adventure seeker
Moderator, CS
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Skaia
Gender: Female
Nature: Naive
Posts: 19,442
Royal's RP thread and OOC thread are accepted.

fire woven's RP is now accepted.
fire woven's OOC thread is also accepted.

ultragon's RP thread is denied because the plot is too short. On my screen it was just 4 lines. Compare it to most of the RPs around.


(the following is not just directed at ultragon) I think I'm gonna start being a little harder on the plot part, because there are so many RPs appearing with a story that feels like it's just haphazardly thrown together or thought+written up within a few minutes.

Before you create an RP, you have got to have an idea. Evolve that idea and ponder if it would work out as an RP. Then think about how the RP would best be played and what role you as a game master should take.

But before all this, you should ask yourself if your plot even makes sense. A horrible monster/demigod/villain has returned and wants to spread crime/murder/destroy the world? Oh, let's hand a pokémon to 10 young kids and have THEM go stop the evil! -.-' that's... not really logical unless you're making a parody-RP. Which most here aren't. Sure, you can do like this if you twist it so that it is necessary to have the trainers young and new because of their pure hearts or untouched auras or something like that. But otherwise it's pretty weird.

Now, illogical plot isn't the same as using unnatural or mysterious and thus "illogical" things to achieve an interesting/unusual plot. I don't mean to sound full of myself at all, but Darkrai's Balloon is probably an example of a simple idea with an unusual plot where some "magical" things happen.

Just... something to think about when you decide that you want to create an RP of your own. Creativity is your friend.
__________________

mod of Roleplay Theatre and Pokémon General
paired with seeker, creator of Phoenix Rising
  #12    
Old March 21st, 2011 (11:38 AM).
Apotheosis's Avatar
Apotheosis Apotheosis is online now
adventure seeker
Moderator, CS
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Skaia
Gender: Female
Nature: Naive
Posts: 19,442
TiTaN.JuStIn's RP thread is accepted.

ultragon
's RP thread is accepted.

Wasen's RP thread is denied for now. Check my PM for details.
__________________

mod of Roleplay Theatre and Pokémon General
paired with seeker, creator of Phoenix Rising
  #13    
Old March 21st, 2011 (02:48 PM).
Apotheosis's Avatar
Apotheosis Apotheosis is online now
adventure seeker
Moderator, CS
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Skaia
Gender: Female
Nature: Naive
Posts: 19,442
Totodile12345's RP thread is accepted.

Wasen's RP thread is now accepted.

النار 's thread is pending until you send me a VM promising to add a rating as soon as the thread is accepted.
__________________

mod of Roleplay Theatre and Pokémon General
paired with seeker, creator of Phoenix Rising
  #14    
Old March 24th, 2011 (06:12 AM).
Apotheosis's Avatar
Apotheosis Apotheosis is online now
adventure seeker
Moderator, CS
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Skaia
Gender: Female
Nature: Naive
Posts: 19,442
FallenAngelSilver's RP is denied because the plot is too loose. Freeform RPs should have some guidelines set up, or they can easily die after a while from lack of creativity and story.

MoonstoneSkitty's RP is denied because the opening post's text is all jumbled together. It's very hard to read; you should use the ENTER key to make several paragraphs instead of one big wall of text. From what I could read with some effort, it seems like it could be accepted though. Please post it again, with proper formatting, and we'll see.

jackblaze's RP is denied. There already is a pokémon academy RP that hasn't even started yet, and they are pretty similar. And the plot for yours is pretty much non-existant. Unless an academy RP is very detailedly set up, it works the best if there is a background story to build on and having the academy as mostly a setting.

Ash_Ketchum123's RP thread is accepted. It looks awesome!
__________________

mod of Roleplay Theatre and Pokémon General
paired with seeker, creator of Phoenix Rising
  #15    
Old March 25th, 2011 (07:11 AM).
Apotheosis's Avatar
Apotheosis Apotheosis is online now
adventure seeker
Moderator, CS
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Skaia
Gender: Female
Nature: Naive
Posts: 19,442
النار 's RP thread is now accepted.

Totodile12345's OOC thread is accepted.

Makbet
's RP thread is denied for being unreadable and lacking a SU sheet. You should hit the "preview" button sometimes to check what your post looks like before posting it. Now the tags aren't closed, among other things.
__________________

mod of Roleplay Theatre and Pokémon General
paired with seeker, creator of Phoenix Rising
  #16    
Old March 26th, 2011 (10:14 PM).
Apotheosis's Avatar
Apotheosis Apotheosis is online now
adventure seeker
Moderator, CS
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Skaia
Gender: Female
Nature: Naive
Posts: 19,442
998435's RP thread is accepted.

Seraph Darkfire's RP thread is accepted. (although your SU was very short)
__________________

mod of Roleplay Theatre and Pokémon General
paired with seeker, creator of Phoenix Rising
  #17    
Old March 27th, 2011 (10:33 PM).
Apotheosis's Avatar
Apotheosis Apotheosis is online now
adventure seeker
Moderator, CS
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Skaia
Gender: Female
Nature: Naive
Posts: 19,442
Seraph Darkfire's OOC thread is accepted.

Seraph Darkfire's new RP thread is pending until you VM me promising to add a rating as soon as the thread is approved.

Marina E. Silver's RP thread is accepted.

jackblaze's RP thread is pending until you VM me promising to add a rating as soon as the thread is approved.
__________________

mod of Roleplay Theatre and Pokémon General
paired with seeker, creator of Phoenix Rising
  #18    
Old March 28th, 2011 (12:13 PM).
Apotheosis's Avatar
Apotheosis Apotheosis is online now
adventure seeker
Moderator, CS
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Skaia
Gender: Female
Nature: Naive
Posts: 19,442
Seraph Darkfire's RP thread is now accepted.

jackblaze's RP thread is now accepted.
__________________

mod of Roleplay Theatre and Pokémon General
paired with seeker, creator of Phoenix Rising
  #19    
Old March 29th, 2011 (10:17 AM). Edited March 29th, 2011 by Apotheosis.
Apotheosis's Avatar
Apotheosis Apotheosis is online now
adventure seeker
Moderator, CS
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Skaia
Gender: Female
Nature: Naive
Posts: 19,442
Diamond1304's RP thread is accepted!

FallenAngelSilver's RP thread is denied. Because 1) you have already made an RP much like this one, 2) there's not really enough story or rules to build a roleplay on.
__________________

mod of Roleplay Theatre and Pokémon General
paired with seeker, creator of Phoenix Rising
  #20    
Old April 1st, 2011 (10:46 PM).
Apotheosis's Avatar
Apotheosis Apotheosis is online now
adventure seeker
Moderator, CS
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Skaia
Gender: Female
Nature: Naive
Posts: 19,442
TabrisNagisa's OOC thread has been accepted. (note that you may not make another out of character/discussion thread for the same RP later. You'll have to use this one then)

MoonstoneSkitty's RP thread is accepted.

Lilliana's RP thread is accepted.
__________________

mod of Roleplay Theatre and Pokémon General
paired with seeker, creator of Phoenix Rising
  #21    
Old April 2nd, 2011 (08:17 AM). Edited April 2nd, 2011 by Apotheosis.
Apotheosis's Avatar
Apotheosis Apotheosis is online now
adventure seeker
Moderator, CS
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Skaia
Gender: Female
Nature: Naive
Posts: 19,442
jackblaze's OOC thread is accepted.

PiKasnAp
's RP thread is denied because the plot is wayyyy too short. You'll need to think it through some more, describe the setting at least a little and explain what the players are supposed to do, and who they are supposed to be.

Supervegeta
's RP thread is accepted.
__________________

mod of Roleplay Theatre and Pokémon General
paired with seeker, creator of Phoenix Rising
  #22    
Old April 3rd, 2011 (12:53 PM).
Apotheosis's Avatar
Apotheosis Apotheosis is online now
adventure seeker
Moderator, CS
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Skaia
Gender: Female
Nature: Naive
Posts: 19,442
miley810's RP thread is accepted, even though your SU sheet is awfully short... I guess you want the players to play the personalities of the legendaries shown in the movies?
__________________

mod of Roleplay Theatre and Pokémon General
paired with seeker, creator of Phoenix Rising
  #23    
Old April 5th, 2011 (02:43 AM).
Apotheosis's Avatar
Apotheosis Apotheosis is online now
adventure seeker
Moderator, CS
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Skaia
Gender: Female
Nature: Naive
Posts: 19,442
998435's RP is denied for now. I can frankly not understand the plot. You should read over your post properly before posting it because now there are several grammar errors that confuses the reader. And maybe you should explain what tale beasts/tail beasts are a little more carefully (unless you're amining for already knowledgeable Naruto fans, but maybe you should state so then).

HunterZero's RP thread is accepted.

Marina E. Silver
's OOC thread is accepted.
__________________

mod of Roleplay Theatre and Pokémon General
paired with seeker, creator of Phoenix Rising
  #24    
Old April 6th, 2011 (07:14 AM).
Apotheosis's Avatar
Apotheosis Apotheosis is online now
adventure seeker
Moderator, CS
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Skaia
Gender: Female
Nature: Naive
Posts: 19,442
HunterZero's OOC thread is accepted.

Cubaser's RP thread is accepted.
__________________

mod of Roleplay Theatre and Pokémon General
paired with seeker, creator of Phoenix Rising
  #25    
Old April 7th, 2011 (11:43 PM).
Apotheosis's Avatar
Apotheosis Apotheosis is online now
adventure seeker
Moderator, CS
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Skaia
Gender: Female
Nature: Naive
Posts: 19,442
mathewsggm's RP thread is denied. You should evolve the plot and build and describe a world where your players can play! :) And, read the rules before posting, please.

Fire Walker's OOC thread is pending until you PM/VM me promising to add a rating as soon as the thread is approved. The RP looks very interesting!
__________________

mod of Roleplay Theatre and Pokémon General
paired with seeker, creator of Phoenix Rising
Closed Thread
Quick Reply

Sponsored Links

You may also like.. (Beta)
Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Minimum Characters Per Post: 25

Forum Jump


All times are UTC -8. The time now is 03:15 AM.