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Old December 2nd, 2011, 05:54 PM
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Supervegeta's IC thread is accepted!

Breezy.'s IC thread is accepted!

PokeGirlJade's Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Legend and Song is accepted!

Blaziken15's A Life Time on the Run REVAMPED is accepted!

ShadowExcadrill Pokemon Warfare: The Brotherhood rises. is declined.
The storyline so far is fine, you really just haven't specified where this is set. In a new region? In a previous region that's been renamed since some kind of cataclysmic event? Specify, please!

miley810's I feel like a monster is declined.
The overall storyline is fine, you're missing background information though. What school do these people go to? How did this gas leak in? Who made this gas? How do they know they only have a year to live? Please go into more detail!
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Old December 5th, 2011, 03:27 AM
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PokeGirlJade's OOC/SU thread is accepted!

mzmingle's Pokemon Mystery Dungeon - Forever Snowing is accepted!

Red's Hawt Chibi Pelliper's IC thread is accepted!

{Swan}'s Pokemon: A Fresh Start is accepted!
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Old December 8th, 2011, 05:52 PM
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shinysweety's IC thread is accepted!

mzmingle's Pokemon - Gym Leaders Adventure is declined.
The storyline is rather vague. No such thing as a 'The Best Trainer', yet they still had a Pokémon League? It doesn't make much sense at all. Who made the idea of the gym leader? Who organised everything? There's a meaning to everything! The idea of fighting for the position of gym leader is a good one, you just need a decent enough storyline to back it all up. Oh, and it might be good if you fixed up your grammar/punctuation.

Teawanee's Pokemon of pinwheel forest is declined.
You have no sign up sheet for one! That, and your storyline is... borderline acceptable. You need to add on it and grow more, like explaining how negatively it affects everyone, who organised the shindig, etc. Put more detail into it!

miley810's IC thread is accepted!

miley810's Team Rocket's Emerge is declined.
Oh my GOD! That is... haha, rather brutal for a PG14. You'll need to adjust that rating. And maybe make it a lot less morbid, or if you want to keep it that intense, have a reason why Team Rocket are so harsh with the children. But sheesh! You don't have to be so... whoa, yeah. Tone it back a little, remember there are kids younger than 10 who hang around here and roleplay (and join roleplays despite rating).
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Old December 12th, 2011, 03:42 AM
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TheFinalWatchman's OOC is declined.
Unfortunately, since it has been over two months since the last post of the OOC thread, you'll have to resubmit as a new roleplay or a revive. You cannot use the same players as last time without them signing up again. Y'know?

zapdos926's Age of Power is declined.
It's good so far, you just need to clarify a little what is waiting for them on the surface. Have the robots evolved? If there's a war, it means the robots are not peaceful or have a reason for the violence? Just go into this a little more.

{Swan}'s OOC is accepted!

RyanRoksXD's The Pokemon Hunger Games is declined.
It's really good! All you need it a rating! Just VM or PM it to me.

The Pokemon Hunger Games is accepted!
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Old December 16th, 2011, 03:33 PM
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miley810's http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=269214]Rocket's Emerge thread is accepted!

zapdos926's Age of Power is accepted!

TheFinalWatchman's Darkness Rises Again is accepted!

drunk ¬_¬'s Digimon: Breaking the Ultimate Limit! is declined.
All the information is good, you are just lacking any kind of storyline. You need to tell the players what they're gonna be up to in the Digital World. What you've got here is the equivalent of a Pokémon Roleplay that explains a region. I know you may have a storyline planned, but you need to write a bit of it down, kay?

Stingray's IC is accepted!

ChrisTom's Solum is declined.
It's really, really good! All I really need is your own rules section and you're set!

TurtleKing's The Elite Army is accepted!

SomariFeyWright's Paradox is declined.
Sure, you have the universe all set up, but you really need more of this storyline. A mysterious threat pulls them together? Gonna need a little more than that. You need to explain to players what they are getting themselves into.

Black Hawk's Rise of Reshiram is declined.
Um... you need more everything. Your SU template is barely acceptable, there's no rules section, you need a rating, you need more of a storyline than THAT. Explain everything about how Reshiram knows about Arceus' crazy happenings. Y'know? Needs more EVERYTHING.

Nakuzami's Bah, Humbug! Tournament of Snow is accepted!
Get Christmas-ing, everyone!!
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Old December 21st, 2011, 04:13 AM
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Kiyoshi the Polar Bear's THE ROARING TWENTIES and OOC is accepted!

juniebug910's Pokemon and the Brush Gods is accepted!

SeekerOfDarkness's IC thread is accepted!

SomariFeyWright's Paradox is accepted!

Zerin's The Legend of Zelda: A Link of Dimensions is accepted!

Ethan Gold's Pokemon Scarlet and Azure is declined.
Setting sounds cool, you'll just need a little more storyline. I don't just accept your basic "travel-da-world" ones anymore unless the world is described amazingly. So either go into a lot more detail or create more of a storyline than that, ok?

Red's Hawt Chibi Pelippers' the pokémon BET is accepted!

ChrisTom's Solum is accepted!

The Final Watchman's IC thread is accepted!

PokeGirlJade's Survivors of Mieko Island! is accepted!

TurtleKing's IC thread is accepted!

Nakuzami's IC thread is accepted!
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Old December 25th, 2011, 03:08 PM
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Red's Hawt Chibi Pelippers' IC thread is accepted!

WarGreymon-X's Echo of Time is accepted!

Pokemonmaster_draco's ...thingy is declined.
Nowadays, all submitted roleplays require a proper storyline, sign up template, rules, rating and yeah, an actual storyline. Not just a few sentences.

miley810's IC thread is accepted!

mzmingle's OOC thread is accepted!

PokeGirlJade's IC thread is accepted!
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Old January 2nd, 2012, 03:51 PM
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SomariFeyWright's The Dark Heroes is declined.
You need more of a storyline. Not just "you are a bad guy", you need to reflect on what kind of universe they are in, the setting, the time, etc.

miley810's X-men: Denied Souls is accepted!

Delcatty123's The PokePirates! is declined.
I... want to accept it, but it is lacking in storyline. You should really explain why Team Rocket have captured people and why flying types specifically. Really expand on the universe.

MrKyurem's Experimental is declined.
It's good! Just needs a rating.

TurtleKing's Digimon Heroes is accepted!

The warden's Pokémon: Demons in Paradise is declined.
It's good! Just needs a rating.

poopy777's World of The Vampires is accepted!

HunterZero's Pokémon: Unova Legends! is accepted!
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Old January 6th, 2012, 11:18 PM
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MrKyurem's Experimental is accepted!

Vato's Pokemon: A Roletastic Adventure is declined.
It has potential, but your wording is all weird and hard to understand. Plus, you really need to dwell a little deeper. Who exactly did it take and why is the player a survivor? Just ask yourself a few who, what, when, where, why, hows and go into more detail.

TurtleKing's OOC is accepted!

HunterZero's IC is accepted!

Raveness's mountaineers is declined.
First off, you're missing a rules and a rating. Though, the main thing you're missing is storyline. The concept seems interesting enough for a first time roleplay but you really need to go into more detail. Like I said to Vato, more who, what, when, where, why and hows. Ask yourself them about your storyline, go into more detail then give it another shot.
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Old January 11th, 2012, 10:08 AM
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Manipulation's Pokémon: Sinnoh Revolutions is accepted!

Yagerbomb's Blockade is accepted!

mzmingle's Gym Leader's Adventure is declined.
Better, but you need to elaborate a little more on storyline. Why did people stop battling, or did they never start? What compelled the Aurora League to begin or to make a Gym Leaders' school? Ask yourself a whole lot of whys and yeah, more explanations, please!

Red's Hawt Chibi Pelippers' Arcanum and OOC is accepted!

§acred†Beo!'s Path to Light and Darkness: Sinnohs Swan Song is declined.
It's fine, you just need a sign up template!
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Old January 13th, 2012, 04:20 AM
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§acred†Beo!'s Path to Light and Darkness: Sinnohs Swan Song and OOC is accepted!

miley810's Portal 3: The New Generation is declined.
No rating! Though, I might add the storyline is fenceline minimum. There's a lot more you could go into, like why Glados went back to using humans after she made the robots specifically for testing. Why those humans specifically? Yeah, more detail.

ShinyDiamond's Bara's Storm is accepted!

Curious.' Survivor: Pokestyle ♪ is accepted!

Gallant's Pokémon – The Omega Plate is accepted!

Zero Darkness' Time of Shadows - Inheritance Cycle is accepted!

Raveness' The hero alliance is declined.
Roleplays nowadays need proper storyline with sufficient backstory, ratings and rules sections to be appropriate for these boards. Your roleplay has none of the above!

The Slice of Cheese's The Ruler of the Earth is declined.
It's fine! All you need is just a rules section!
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Old January 14th, 2012, 05:45 PM
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Gallant's IC thread is accepted!

Manipulation's OOC thread is accepted!

Yagerbomb's OOC thread is accepted!

Alley Cat's Zodiac Reborn: The Power Within and OOC are accecpted!

RyanRoksXD's IC thread is accepted!

The Slice of Cheese's The Ruler of the Earth is accepted!
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Old January 18th, 2012, 02:40 AM
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Cookiez's Pokemon: A Darkness Rising is declined.
Though the background seems amusing, you'll need to go more indepth with the storyline. You need to tell the players what exactly they're getting themselves into!

RolePlayGirl 11's Warriors: Path Of Stars is declined.
It all seems pretty fine, the only thing you would need is background information of the series, at least a little bit, explaining some information for people who have never read the series before.

ShinyDiamond's IC thread is accepted!

FourCartridge's The Great Betrayal and The Hope of Arrid's Comet is accepted!

Manganum's Poképocalypse! and OOC is accepted!

miltankRancher's Parched Lands: A Godspeaker Roleplay is accepted!
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Old January 22nd, 2012, 02:10 PM
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~Genevieve~'s Mysteries of Hoenn is accepted!

pokehunter5's Pokediscovery, the rift in time is accepted!

shinysweety's Warriors: Power Of The Stars is accepted!

Black Hawk's Pokemon: Groundon's revenge is declined.
You've pretty much explained nothing in the storyline. Where is this place? How did these earthquakes happen? What happened after the earthquakes? Who are you?

Black Hawk's Hetalia is declined.
Yeah... what the hell are you writing? This is less acceptable than the last! No storyline whatsoever!

Rafael p's Pokemon: Unova Masters is declined.
Roleplays on this forum nowadays need a more structured storyline than 'team rocket attacks randomly, you are chosen to help out'. Explain why Team Rocket has come back, especially to Unova (remember, Unova is set in the past compared to Red/Blue/Gold/Silver so you'd need to explain that too). Why did Professor Juniper pick new trainers and not previously existing ones? Ask yourself a lot of whos, whens, whys, hows, wheres and whats before posting again.

TheAmazingAipom's Pokemon the Secret of Stardust is accepted!

The warden's Pokémon: Legacy of the Dragon Islands is accepted!

Beegu's Project Millennium: Search for the Eighth Dragon is accepted!
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Old January 25th, 2012, 06:26 AM
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Rafael p's Pokemon: Unova Masters is declined.
Better, but you need to explain things a little more. Why are Team Rocket looking for these dragons? How did they find Team Plasma? What is the situation with Unova at the moment? Go into more detail!

AnastasiaStardustXiaolong's Power rangers Dino Thunder:White Thunde is declined.
Okay, seriously... I have no idea what any of this... means. There's no punctuation, so that limits itself. The storyline itself is confusing since there are people (much like myself) who have no idea what the current Power Rangers storylines are so you'll need to explain who they are, who each individual is, who the bad guys are, what realm this is, what the Power Rangers do, etc. And, you need a rating.

Tokio's Pokémon Reborn: Synchronize is accepted!
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Old January 29th, 2012, 01:37 AM
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Black Hawk's The Ranger Apprentice is declined.
There is no storyline, there's no rating. Please go into more detail!

zakallop's RP for pokemon and pokemon gens and RP's for pokemon and pokemon trainers is declined.
This also has no storyline.

miley810's Pokemon: The Zivito Region is accepted!

Zero Darkness's The Elementals Rise is accepted!

THAT WONDERFUL PIXY GUY!'s Pokémon: Sinnoh's End is declined.
You already have this roleplay in the Corner that hasn't been inactive for two months.

Rafael p's Pokemon: Unova masters is accepted!

Raveness' Zeckrom is declined.
Yeah, uh, lack of any real storyline.

AnastasiaStardustXiaolong's power Rangers Dino Thunder:Neo White Thunder is declined.
I seriously... can't understand any of this. There's limited punctuation, grammar, spelling, why did you include the background information about the production of the series? Yeah, um, yeah.

Quto's Earth and Sky: Pokemon Battle Royale! is accepted!
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Old February 1st, 2012, 06:35 PM
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SamuraiGallade's Pokemon: Life of Adventures is declined.
You're lacking a real storyline, a sign up template and a rating. Storylines must be more indepth, not just "HEY HO LET'S GO" kind of deal.

Zerin's IC thread is accepted!

Rick1234's Pokemon Diamond Mist is declined.
You're in the wrong section for hacks and fan made games. Click here for that.
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Old February 6th, 2012, 07:16 PM
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Quto's OOC is accepted!

The warden's IC thread is accepted!

Zerin's Wolf's Rain: Blood for Paradise is accepted!

AshleyKetchum's Konoha Adventures is declined.
I don't mind a Naruto universe roleplay, it's just you need a little bit of motive to go with the story. The setting is fine, you really have to have a little more for the players to do. Maybe they're a part of the ninja academy and just graduated or something? You also need a rating and a sign up template.

roen52's Kingdom Hearts: Ascending Darkness is accepted!

|Equinox|'s Disease Deoxys is accepted!

Black Hawk's Hetilia: Paint it White is declined.
The storyline is way too short, it barely explains anything about who this girl is or any motives behind it all. If you wish to keep this a secret, at least have some kind of backstory about the Hetalia series for those who have no idea what it's all about.

Mira's Inner Demon and OOC is accepted!

Tokio's IC is accepted!
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Old February 10th, 2012, 03:49 AM
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Brisingr122194's ... things are declined.
Those kinds of things are meant for the Roleplay Discussion Thread.

Sir Bastian's ... okay
So, these kinds of things are also very much for the Roleplay Discussion Thread, when you introduce yourself. With these boards, the threads that are accepted are roleplays and out of character threads only. If you want either thread's contents PM'd to you to post in the Roleplay Discussion Thread, I can totally do that for you.

sHiNyMoltres@Rayquaza*inverted*EvE's Pokemon Codex is declined.
You have no rating for one. And the storyline is the bare minimum. It's quite hard to understand, I had to read through it three times until I understood what it meant. I suggest you reread it and repost with proper grammar and punctuation.

The Immortal One's The Aides is accepted.

Black Hawk's Undile's War is declined.
Um... please repost this when it's not a huge block of unreadable text with all the rules and sign up unneatly shoved in it, thank you. Plus, I can tell you now the storyline is not nearly enough.

Raveness A Wonderful World is declined.
The idea is okay but you did not explain at all what these wonderful games are.
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Old February 15th, 2012, 04:07 AM
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-Grayscale-'s (& |Equinox|'s) OOC is accepted!

juniebug910's Inuyasha: Legend of the Shikon No Tama is accepted!

Black Hawk's Dimension Rift, Wolves of Chiel and Kung fu panda are all declined.
As I've said before, your storylines are not acceptable. You need to elaborate more, especially in a universe that isn't on Earth or Pokémon! You need to give background information, talk about the setting, what happened before and what is happening now.

Rafael p's OOC is accepted!

TheAmazingAipom's Planet of the Pokemon is accepted!

Raveness The Hunger Games is declined.
Again, like I said to Black Hawk, there is not enough information on this roleplay. For those who don't know the Hunger Games, they will come into this confused as you haven't laid down any information on how the games work and etc. Also, you have no rating.

Chirm's Voyage is accepted!

shinysweety's Warriors: Power Of The Stars is accepted!

~Genevieve~'s IC is accepted!

chef30's IC thread is accepted! Good luck, your OOC has been inactive for some time.
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Old February 20th, 2012, 02:29 PM
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PkMnTrainer Yellow's Pokémon Fallout is accepted!

Raveness a world race is declined.
Your roleplay has all the things wrong with it like it has in previous submissions. I get the feeling you aren't reading these! ):
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Old February 23rd, 2012, 05:24 PM
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PkMnTrainer Yellow's IC is accepted!

aspie3000's Digimon Prophecy is accepted!

shinysweety's Pokémon Time Travelers is accepted!

Ruykii's Trainer Beckoning is declined.
Storyline on these boards nowadays needs to be far more detailed and specific. It can't just be anyone in anywhere, it needs a proper setting, a proper plot and a proper direction to it all. Roleplayers need to know where they're going when they sign up! You also need a rating on roleplays to post them into the corner.

darkpokeball's Pokemon: Armageddon Within is accepted!
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Old February 29th, 2012, 03:07 PM
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Rafael p's PMD Legends of Time is declined.
I'm a little iffy on a roleplay completely mimicking the storyline of a game without really any changes or differences. Though I probably would have accepted it if you had a rating. d:

Black Hawk's Before the Gods... is declined.
I get a feeling you do not read this thread as there are still all the things wrong with it as the last times; lack of backstory, lack of ACTUAL rules, lack of rating. Please fix these!

Greiger's The Shattered Era is accepted!

luigimario84's The Connected Worlds is declined.
The storyline is lacking. Yes, all the worlds have formed together, but how did it happen? What is this new dimension and what's going on inside it? What is the conflict? What happened to the people who didn't get sucked in? Please elaborate!
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Old March 6th, 2012, 02:57 PM
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Butch1's PokéPark - Shaking Mystery is declined.
Your lack of spelling makes me nervous. A roleplay corner isn't really the place you use text chat. I probably would have accepted it if you used correct grammar, punctuation and junk.

shinysweety's IC thread is accepted!

Mbrosforever's Wanderers is declined.
The storyline has potential, but can you explain where these wanderers came from? Why are they searching for a home? Also, you need a rules section and an empty sign up template (a filled one doesn't really count).

MilktankRancher's Uncharted Waters is accepted!

zapdos926's Remember, Remember is declined.
No rules section. x: But other than that, it's great!

Limanya's Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Darkness Lurking is accepted!
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Old March 12th, 2012, 04:01 AM
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zapdos926's Remember Remember is accepted!

Limanya's OOC thread is accepted!

mzmingle's PMD: Forever Snowing is accepted!

TheMagaMan49's Pokémon High School is declined.
We already have a similar roleplay (Pokemon Trainer Academy) but even then, you would need an actual plot, a rules section and a rating.

Raveness My little pony is declined.
Honestly, I really have no idea what's going on. I've never seen My Little Pony, and so would many others, so the plot really means nothing to me. If it was going to be using characters from the show, you'd need to include a bit of background information so everybody understands.
Also, it has no rating. d:

Black Hawk's MLP: Discord Returns is declined.
The same issue as the above. And you also have no rating!

Greiger's IC thread is accepted!
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