Our adventure takes place in the region of Baroque. Our heroine and her parents lived in a small town Cherryblossom Town. Unfortunately ,Darkrai visited the nearby village and torture people by nightmares, the heroine's mother is worried about Grandma, who lives in this town. Our heroine decidet to rescue her with his home pokemon Eevee .
Description: shy, young heroine
Description: Our main rival in the game, the character is not very nice person, despite the fact that, along with our heroine in childhood were friends.
Description: Norman lives in CheerBlossom Town, he likes gadgets and the invention, which itself creates.He will gave us the PTC. Is the older brother of our rivals.
Description: The second leader in the region of Baroque, she helps us get through the dark forest.
Description: She comes from the region Unova, she has positive attitude to the world and the people, she want to get into the League and beat the elite 4
What with the trees, and grass they look horrible no offense, i suggest just inserting the black/white or hg/ss tree and grass tiles, story needs some work, some mapping errors as well but the mapping out of what i can see doesn't look that bad..
Overall good job so far, has a lot of potential to become better.
I think your sprites need a lot of work. Read some tutorials on how to scratch sprite, hire a spriter,anything, but don't edit some Pokemon and call it a fakemon.
The graphics all clash with each other. You've got 3D houses, 2D grass, and a tree that looks like it's from another game. So yeah, I'd say work on the aesthetic stuff for now, because that needs the most attention.
I'd love to play. Some of the Fakemon are good, some really good, some not so good. (Spriting/designing pokes is hard) If I can upload a sprite of a Genie i made to deviant art you can have it(you may need to update it abit though).