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Old April 15th, 2011, 12:24 PM
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I'll give you 24 hours to add the proper credits to your thread. If not, you're thread's being locked, and you'll possibly be infracted.
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Old April 15th, 2011, 08:35 PM
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Okay, okay! I added those Credits, Alacus/Spriteman!
Okay!!!!
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Old April 15th, 2011, 08:43 PM
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Okay, okay! I added those Credits, Alacus/Spriteman!
Okay!!!!
There's a lot more you need to credit for both the tiles and Essentials DS
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Old April 15th, 2011, 09:00 PM
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What the hell is this, Skill screenshots..? what, demo? theres about a billion errors in the first screenshot.. and demo coming soon?? Badder? is that even a word..?
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Old April 15th, 2011, 09:20 PM
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There's a lot more you need to credit for both the tiles and Essentials DS
Read the thread!
I added the tilesets credits, the Pkmn Essentials Ds, and All!!
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Old April 15th, 2011, 09:22 PM
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Read the thread!
I added the tilesets credits, the Pkmn Essentials Ds, and All!!
There are a lot more people who made the features of Essentials DS and other who made tiles in your game. They are known to have made them, so saying otherwise is stealing.
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Old April 15th, 2011, 09:33 PM
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There are a lot more people who made the features of Essentials DS and other who made tiles in your game. They are known to have made them, so saying otherwise is stealing.
Oh, i understand you! like Luka's vs seq.?

Update!

2 stories instead of 1 and i am making a pool by asking which is your favorite!
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Old April 16th, 2011, 12:40 AM
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...The story makes absolutely no sense whatsoever.
Team rocket destroyed the camera so people died?
Then how would you be able to go back and save it?
There's also the complete impossibility of a whole region dropping off the face of the earth.
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Old April 16th, 2011, 12:54 AM
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After posting the 1st gym leader's sprite and editing the music i will add the demo here =)

I have updated the indoor tiles.
Now its Platinum and Alacus.
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Old April 16th, 2011, 06:35 AM
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From what I've noticed, people have been giving you some very useful constructive criticism, and you seem to just ignore it.
For you to improve your game, actually listen to other people and fix the things that aren't right in your game.
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Old April 18th, 2011, 04:50 PM
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The Plot doesn't make too much sense...

How do you stop something that already happened?

Why would Team Rocket/Galactic move to and set up in a whole new region because of two teens and a Pokemon Professor? I am not a professional at game making but this seems a little...strange.

What makes this region of Ueno different then other regions?
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Old April 18th, 2011, 05:04 PM
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I believe this takes place ofter the events of Diamond, which means Team Galactic wants revenge on the player. I don't know, that's how I interperet it.
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Old April 18th, 2011, 05:39 PM
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Pokémon Shiny Diamond
Credits

Poccil ~ Pokemon Essentials
venom12 ~ Pokemon Essentials DS
Alacus ~ Tiles
Spriteman ~ Resized Tiles-It's Neo-Spriteman, guy.
~~~~~Pkmn essentials DS credits~~~~~
Luka ~ VS Seq. and mouse model and etc...
Cybersam and Astro ~ Mouse model
CNG ~ Battle moves select menu
Help14 ~ Pokedex
Wichu ~ Sprites
FL. ~ Eggs Change and Unova Pokemon
You need to go to my thread, and copy ALL of the credits, and then paste them here, because I know for a fact that there are at least 7 more people that contributed to my project.

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Okay, here we go. First of all, your story makes absolutely no sense. I don't understand any of it. "Team galactic gots da deealguh and den teem rokket gots da palkiah and they blowed up the whole Sinnoh region and den dey wait dey didnt blowed up da hole ting nope just a little" What the hell?


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Second, many people are right about the tiles. They clash. You've got tiles from platinum, Alucus' tiles, and your maps, to be honest, stink poo. They are very blank and empty. The lab looks terrible, and the overworlds also clash with them. And in one screenshot, it looks like Lucas is humping a sign. Which leads me to the topic: Sprites. You need to create the sprites yourself, dude.


Spoiler:
Well, my hands hurt. You've got many other flaws in this game, but I'll leave that up to you.
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Old April 18th, 2011, 06:16 PM
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You basically took like 7 different styles of tiles and mixed them, which looks terrible. I recommend, as stated before, to stick to only one or two From the same generation (e.g. 8754321's DPPt/HGSS to GBA Tiles and Alistair's GBA tiles) or (BoomXBig's Hoenn remake tileset and perhaps Alucus' public DS tiles) Also, stick to 1 style of Overworlds. The only thing I would mix is GBA humans and HGSS Pokemon, which can still look bad btw, if you're not careful. Honestly, too many people use DP styled sprites so I recommend either GBA or BW.

That's all,
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P.S: Touch up on your English a bit more, dude, we can't tell what you're saying
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Old April 18th, 2011, 07:11 PM
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Oh, i understand you! like Luka's vs seq.?

Update!

2 stories instead of 1 and i am making a pool by asking which is your favorite!
Both of them are horrible. They lack explanation, detail and suspense buildup.

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One day at the Sinnoh Region, the people felt scared cause of something strange, more than strange. I tell you what ?
That sentence doesn't even make grammatical sense.
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Okay! Team Galactic/Galaxy controlled Dialga, and Team Rocket controlled Palkia, and still destroying (not the whole sinnoh) They destroyed some cities and some towns
Again, terrible grammar. What is the goal of these teams in destroying the Sinnoh Region?
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ave moved into the Ueno region, that is full of joy
Why is this region "full of joy"?

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The News: Sinnoh region is being destroyed soon, so move to an another region.
So everyone knows their home is about to be destroyed and they aren't doing anything about it?

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some people didn't hear the news
HOW can someone not hear such monumental news? Provided they have a TV/Radio, that is, which most people in Sinnoh do.

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Team Rocket destroyed the camera to make everybody die.
I think I just died.

@-This image
That is not Professor Oak, that's Professor Rowan.

Also, mixing tile styles is a horrible idea, stick to tiles from one "Generation" of Pokemon, the 4th being the best choice here.

One of the artists whose tiles you used is named "Alucus", by the way, not "Alacus" and stealing is looked down upon, very harshly. All you have to do is write a line of text, under the header "Credits". Most everyone knows whose tiles were used and no one is going to envy you, because you allegedly made a couple of tiles
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Old April 18th, 2011, 07:14 PM
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KingSnivy, do you understand the ideas of story structure, or even comprehensibility in the story?
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Old April 19th, 2011, 07:08 AM
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@ Karpman
No need for being annoyed, i know he is Rowan, but if you know.
I DIDN'T EDIT ROWAN'S NAME!!!
@ lx_theo
Yes, alot of people say it's boring.
So, i know a way to make the story better. using Spike's Story/Plot Tutorial.
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Old April 19th, 2011, 07:53 AM
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Good luck. I can help you with your story if you like?
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Old April 19th, 2011, 07:57 AM
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Good luck. I can help you with your story if you like?
Okay, no problem. PM me it. and.. You can be a spriter if you want..
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Old April 19th, 2011, 11:04 AM
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That's fine. I'm more of a GSC spriter though. I can attempt to do something for you though. I'll send it to you later I suppose.
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Old April 19th, 2011, 01:59 PM
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I'll be locking this now. You can edit the first post to include the proper credits and then send a PM to either me or Yuoaman notifying one of us that you've done so.

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