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Old April 26th, 2011 (10:02 PM).
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Look, KingSnivy, you truly need to take the advice of those that offer it. They aren't being rude, per se, they're just giving your some constructive criticism; which is vital for a developing game to become successful. I've taken notice that you support my game, Pokémon: Ironed Heart, which I thank you for. Let me ask you this: how do you think it has gotten this far?

It's simple. I have taken the advice and criticism that the other members of this forum have given me to make it a semi-successful game! Now, let me too give you some advice. Just focus on one thing at a time. I can tell you're getting ahead of yourself by adding in features and exciting yourself. While that's all well and good, you haven't put in much thought on the story.

I'll help you all I can. You're eager to make a game, and I like that. First thing is first, I'll try and help you with your story. Send me a private message and we'll see if we can't clean this messy thread of yours up.


Well said :D +1, lets hope he reads it!

Also kingshivy.. i think your rushing way to much, you got to take a lot of time to prepare for your game, which i don't think you have... maybe.. the plot you have now could be a draft, and your goal is to re-write this plot and try make it better, longer and more excitement... Read other peoples plots to get an idea, but ofc don't copy them.

Also, i don't think you've practiced your skills enough for this game, your mapping isn't perfect.. maybe thats how you like your maps to be but other people disagree, which you also have to take in hand, of what other people want your game to be like, because in the end if your releasing this to the audience you got to give them what they want! Thats why its always important to take critisism from the audience..

If you need mapping advice.. i say like I've said many time to you, look and the maps Nintendo makes, i try use there style on your maps, gives you a great idea!

Also please double check your grammar its terrible, people don't want to play a game with spelling mistakes, and don't go to far from what your capable of atm!
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Old April 29th, 2011 (06:30 AM).
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I have some questioning to do!
1st. Why is Prof Rowan in this new region (he shud be in Si(n)noh)
2nd. Why is Diamond in this region?
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You need to improve your Mapping and Grammar
(To be Honest i am also bad at both of them.)
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i like the inner tiles but in one event...
(the pokeballs are out of the table )
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Just like ProdigyX said Dont try to rush with the progress.
The Game will become Meaningless if it has no sense.
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Old April 29th, 2011 (09:44 PM). Edited April 29th, 2011 by TheMarkCrafter.
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I have some questioning to do!
1st. Why is Prof Rowan in this new region (he shud be in Si(n)noh)
2nd. Why is Diamond in this region?
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You need to improve your Mapping and Grammar
(To be Honest i am also bad at both of them.)
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i like the inner tiles but in one event...
(the pokeballs are out of the table )
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Just like ProdigyX said Dont try to rush with the progress.
The Game will become Meaningless if it has no sense.
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1st. No problem with that...
2nd. Check out Wesley FG's hack, Light Platinum.. It is Light PLATINUM
and haves a new region..
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Mapping, i am training.. Grammar.. what are the words that haves the wrong grammar.
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Thanks.. i lost who's tiles are
(glitch with the balls)
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Umm... okay
And yeah, the game will be mean if it has no sense..


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Look, KingSnivy, you truly need to take the advice of those that offer it. They aren't being rude, per se, they're just giving your some constructive criticism; which is vital for a developing game to become successful. I've taken notice that you support my game, Pokémon: Ironed Heart, which I thank you for. Let me ask you this: how do you think it has gotten this far?

It's simple. I have taken the advice and criticism that the other members of this forum have given me to make it a semi-successful game! Now, let me too give you some advice. Just focus on one thing at a time. I can tell you're getting ahead of yourself by adding in features and exciting yourself. While that's all well and good, you haven't put in much thought on the story.

I'll help you all I can. You're eager to make a game, and I like that. First thing is first, I'll try and help you with your story. Send me a private message and we'll see if we can't clean this messy thread of yours up.
Explaning..
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I can tell you're getting ahead by adding new features..
Okay, If someone could help, they can make a new script for umm.. do you guys want animated pokemon Like in bw?Okay,let a scripter someone join me to make a new script for animating..
And for the PM, that game will be SUPAH creative..
KingSnivy approves..
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Old April 29th, 2011 (10:47 PM).
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Grammar.. what are the words that haves the wrong grammar.

Okay, If someone could help, they can make a new script for umm.. do you guys want animated pokemon Like in bw?Okay,let a scripter someone join me to make a new script for animating..
And for the PM, that game will be SUPAH creative..
KingSnivy approves..
Grammar is the way you structure you're sentences.

And you can find a tutorial to animate the battle sprites here.
Credit to Luka S.J.
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Old April 29th, 2011 (10:52 PM). Edited April 29th, 2011 by TheMarkCrafter.
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Grammar is the way you structure you're sentences.

And you can find a tutorial to animate the battle sprites here.
Credit to Luka S.J.


I want them to be like this!


HIRING a Storyline writer!
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Old April 29th, 2011 (11:20 PM).
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Follow that tutorial and it should work then.
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Old April 29th, 2011 (11:27 PM).
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Follow that tutorial and it should work then.
That script is for the 2 frames!
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Old April 30th, 2011 (05:57 AM).
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HIRING a Storyline writer!
BTW, getting someone to write you a story?
Seems like a pretty big cop out.
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Old April 30th, 2011 (06:59 AM).
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I want them to be like this!


HIRING a Storyline writer!
No one's going to script that for you... Learn to script yourself, find a few tutorials on how to use rects and you will be able to code it yourself.
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Old April 30th, 2011 (07:05 AM).
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Rects? I just used gifs , i added zoom to sprites and updates. Just 4 flags for updates and flag for when it start to update for player pokemon here, and thats all but you need to know h\where to puts all updates.
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Old April 30th, 2011 (07:08 AM).
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Rects? I just used gifs , i added zoom to sprites and updates. Just 4 flags for updates and flag for when it start to update for player pokemon here, and thats all but you need to know h\where to puts all updates.
You've not heard of rects before? They're the same as .gifs just on an animation strip played by the code.
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Old April 30th, 2011 (09:29 AM).
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How about the new story? Cool or boring?
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Old April 30th, 2011 (09:52 AM).
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I don't see a story. It's a nicely written introduction, though!
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Old April 30th, 2011 (09:54 AM).
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I don't see a story. It's a nicely written introduction, though!
I lol'd because it's true. No story or plot.
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Old April 30th, 2011 (03:38 PM).
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You really should expand the story to overview the plot, or at least leave it at a good cliffhanger.
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Old April 30th, 2011 (05:49 PM).
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It's only an introduction.

I would assume that flamemaster is writing the main plot, as that's what I have been told.
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Old April 30th, 2011 (05:49 PM).
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Nice introduction, no story...

I'm amusing this is a remake of Diamond, so the plot should have something to do with Team Galactic reemerging, in my opinion.
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Old April 30th, 2011 (09:29 PM).
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I want them to be like this!

HIRING a Storyline writer!
Do you still need a storyline writer?
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Old May 2nd, 2011 (05:31 AM). Edited May 2nd, 2011 by TheMarkCrafter.
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The New Logo! How about it?

Not by me, By elaynni


Asking about the new story? Cool?
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Old May 2nd, 2011 (07:33 AM).
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The New Logo! How about it?
Not by me, By eyanni
Dude, seriously, you are very, very annoying.

Elaynii, is nice enough to help you out so much, yet to don't even have the time or consideration to spell her name. It's not like it's just her, it's every single person who help's you out, you don't even look then advice. Please, sort it out.
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Old May 2nd, 2011 (03:36 PM).
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The New Logo! How about it?

Not by me, By elaynni


Asking about the new story? Cool?
So the answer is....??

BTW the logo looks good.
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Old May 2nd, 2011 (05:49 PM).
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I think flamemaster and I have the section filled up, but, I could be wrong.

I think the story itself is decent at best, but, it's a good start. It still lacks a few details here and there, but, it's okay. :3
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Old May 2nd, 2011 (11:14 PM).
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If you actually look at KingSnivy's past on this forum, I'd give up on him.
He's not listening at all.
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2nd. Check out Wesley FG's hack, Light Platinum.. It is Light PLATINUM
Don't you get it? For the love of god. What, just because somebody else did it you have to?
And hiring a storyline writer... Gah, you're not ready yet.
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Old May 5th, 2011 (10:04 PM). Edited May 5th, 2011 by TheMarkCrafter.
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Old May 6th, 2011 (03:15 AM). Edited May 6th, 2011 by TheAngryPidove.
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Did you just seriously post an update because you edited the first post? Really?

Because that video doesn't seem like much; it's progress, but nearly anyone could do that. It's not much of an update.
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