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Old May 6th, 2011, 08:22 PM
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Years of Lies
 
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Location: Canada, Saskatchewan
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Based Off: The Hunger Games Series
RP Master: Eeveemaster9
Rating: 16+ For Violence, Blood, swearing, minor romance and drug themes
SU's Are: Closed
Plot:
Spoiler:

It is now the Twenty-fourth century here on Earth. Discoveries have been made. Technology introduced. Species inhabitted. However, everything humanity once knew back in the twenty-first century has been completely wiped out. Scientists over study calculated that angelic, demonic, or vampire beings did not exist, and they were simply a fairy-tale passed down from each generation. What they did not know, was that these three beings came into contact with humans long ago, but have kept themselves hidden as they worked on their plans for the future. They did not work together. They worked away from eachother. Demons in the hottest places on Earth. Angels in the coldest, or at sea. Vampires kept themselves in dense forests.

They were finally, officially discovered in the twenty-third century, when the angels collaberated with the humans to keep nature at peace. Soon, demons and vampire alike came out as well, though they were casted aside by the humans because of the popular belief of them being evil. The demons and vampires, angered that they were outcasted, began using their combined powers to slowly destroy the Earth. With the angels protecting the humans against the two, nobody saw that the humans were also killing the Earth by tearing down its forests and over-expanding their population.

That was when the Gods decided they had had enough. It was the year 2992 that they finally struck. Continents were moved together with their power, so now there were only two continents. North and South America was where the humans, vampires, angels and demons lived; each blocked off from the other with a magic barrier. These areas were soon known as districts. To keep populations from expanding too much, the Gods made this announcement:

"Each year, four living beings from each district will fight to the death in the arena. From the ages thirteen to eighteen, these children will be taken away, and only one from each district may live; at maximum."

Horrified, and no longer able to control, the four beings lived in silent peace, until the day of the 'reaping' came to take away their children to be slaughtered.


Extra Info:
Spoiler:

All humans know small amounts of magic, but they usually stick to physical weapons like guns, swords, ect.

= Means they get along. x means they do not

Humans = Angels
Angels x Demons
Demons = Vampires
Vampires x Humans
Demons x Humans
Angels x Vampires

Humans absolutely HATE vampires and demons in general. Well, alot of them do, anyhow. Angels have tried to get along with everyone, but....Vampires just try to fit in, while demons really don't give a dang what others think.


Summary:
Spoiler:

You are a teen present during the year 3000, eight years since the games began. Though everyone is living well in your district, many are killed each day for breaking the law. The reaping is today, and like every teen your age, you must crowd around your districts' government building awaiting possible doom.


Rules:
Spoiler:

+ I can not tense this enough. BE ACTIVE. At LEAST two times in seven days
+ I will have high expectations. No tiny posts. At least a paragraph
+ No godmodding, or else I'll kill your character right there
+ Even if your character is killed, I'll make sure to have something to keep you busy
+ Bunnying is permitted, but make sure you have my and that persons permission
+ If you're wanting plot twists with your character, make sure you PM me with ALL the info on it.


Sign Up Sheet:
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Name: Preferably, a japanese-oriented name. Such as Yukka or Ruike. Must include first and last names

Gender: Male or Female
Age: Between 13-18

Species: Angel, Demon, Vampire or Human. This does not affect your appearance or personality!

Appearance: Minimum two paragraphs. Description!

Personality: Minimum two paragraphs. Make sure its descriptive!

History: Not needed, since you can hint your history through flashbacks or something.

Element: Your specialized element. Fire, water, wind, earth, light, void, or Iron(Handling of weapons)

RP Sample: Must be included. It must be a recent time, and please specify which rp it is from.


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SkyIsUmbreon's Character:
Spoiler:

Name: Raike Destan
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Species: Human

Appearance: Raike wears a white jacket, which is lined with black. This
lining shows up around his collar, and at the cuffs of the sleeves, as well as the base of the jacket. His hair is colored jet black, and messy, so that it covers his left eye. His left eye is colored red, while the right is colored a deep purple. He has no facial hair, and his skin color is a light tan.

His baggy jeans are colored a dark blue, but a bit faded in the knees,
with a steel chain that is attached to his belt loops. He wears black steel toed boots, and metal plated on the bottom. His shirt is red striped black, and short sleeved. On his left and right hands, he wears special gloves that allow him to touch certain hazards such as fire or electricity without harm.

Personality: Raike's personality can be very hard to understand at sometimes. He doesn't like hanging around others, be them Vampires, Demons, or whatever very much, but will if he feels the need to. He can be very isolated at times, running off without telling others, and then returning as if nothing happened. He is also very unpredictable, doing the most unlikely thing in any type of situation. He is not the best conversationalist, so he will also seem sort of awkward at times.

He also can be seen to posses a knowledge far ahead of his time, but
can't always put it into words. Once he meets a certain group of people that he "likes" it is possible that he will open up to the group, being more free with words and expressions. But normally, if you see him, he will hide behind an emotionless mask.

Element: Fire


Supervegeta's Character:
Spoiler:

Name: Ryuu Akuma
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Species: Demon

Appearance: Ryuu Akuma stands at 6 feet 5 inches tall. He is of a rather large build and large stature, but is extremely fit. He has black piercing eyes and dark brown hair. He typically wears a dark blue or sometimes black shirt with the same color pants, and a dark blue or black coat reaching down to his ankles.

Ryuu's clothes appear as though they were once worn by nobility, as they were of fine quality, but he has worn them down from his strenuous work-outs and fighting to a more barren, half-noble half-mercenary appeal.

Personality: Ryuu Akuma has earned a reputation for being quite possibly the more ruthless person alive. He shows no mercy to opponents, and looks upon others as lower beings, especially humans. He has absolute disgust for them. He also views angels as lesser beings, not worthy of power and although vampires usually get along with demons, Ryuu tends to find them somewhat unworthy, yet he still views them in a bit higher appeal than angels, and certainly than humans.

Ryuu has taken pride in his given nickname, "The Rhino" because of his merciless efficiency, especially in a fight. If gotten into one, Ryuu Akuma would typically not stop for almost anything, usually fighting until his opponent is either incapable of fighting back or dead. His imposing stature usually gives him the appearance and demeanor of a brute, to which Ryuu is perfectly fine with.

Element: Earth


The_Original_Raitan's Character:
Spoiler:

Name: Xavier Harrah
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Species: Demon

Personality: Xavier is the reserved type, not usually interacting with other people and keeping quiet. Due to not much interaction he has become very observant of environments, people, etc. His father being a scientist and his observance has caused him to become an excellent strategist. He loves his mother very much and will usually try to help around the house, when father is away.

He absolutely hates people (Any Species) who are loud and most things that are loud. They give him a headache.Although his father has been teaching him survival skills as he was going to be in the drawings soon. He can't really talk to people, unless that person is family. Although he view his father more as a scientist instead as a father. This is because all conversations between him and his father were about science. Whenever Xavier would ask him about something personal his father would avoid it and lead to yet another science discussion. And that most of his knowledge came from his father.

Appearance: Xavier stands roughly 6,0 matching the muscle for the size. He sports a minor six pack. He has deep brown hair and eyes. His mother likes to compare the color to that of chocolate. His hair is shaggy and falls just over his eyes. His eyes are very sharp, but calm as well if you can catch a glimpse of them. He has a small scar on his left shoulder. It has healed mostly, but if you look closely you can see it.

The normal attire for Xavier is a black T-shirt with the symbol of Omega on his right shoulder. He wears a pair of black pants to match the shirt. As far as winter wear goes he wears a zipper Heavy coat which is silver with a pokeball symbol on the chest. He wears white winter pants with self insulation and is a tad big on him. And again sports a pair of black gloves with wrist cuffs to keep snow out. And has a pair of insulated boots which have small spikes on the end to climb and hike if the chance comes.

Element: Void


Social Kibble's Character:
Spoiler:

Name: Shizuka 'Shizu' Yoshiko
Gender: Male
Age: Eighteen years old.
Species: Angel.

Appearance: Angel's typically have a look that everyone expects to see once they learn someone is an angel, usually revolving around a lot of golds and whites and bright shiny aura's that come along with them. That's, of course, due to the Poster Child syndrome according to Shizuka. The higher up's like to present themselves as perfect and want anyone that represents them to fit that same mold, but Shizu never has and never wants to be just a cookie cut being so everyone will love him.

His wing span is of medium length, just the nature of how he was born into the world..the uniqueness about him is the color of his wings, which still to this day have left many baffled as to how it came to be. Cool gray colored wings that shimmer slightly in the sun and flow easy through the wind - some which would say, though not the blinding white you would expect, is still pretty common and maya blue tipped feathers that trailed around the very edges of his wings.

Moving into his facial features, Shizu has a pretty typical look. His hair, a light dirty blonde kept somewhere between short and shaggy, always hung down covering left eye. His hair is used to avoid others from staring, a scar slashed diagonally across his eye. However, as one might think, Shizuka was not ashamed of his deformity as some referred to it - he truly embraced his past, but didn't feel the need to be gazed upon simply for having a permanent reminder of where he has come from. His right ear is pierced with two hoops, one right next to the other, through the cartilage.

Standing at five foot ten with your general athletic/stay in shape, but not becoming crazy like the hulk, body build you will usually see Shizu in a gray or black tanktop - some looking brand spanking new, while others are riddled with holes, burn marks, etc. Living in the world he lives in, there are much worse things than destroyed clothes for him to be worrying about. Continuing downwards, you will see his pants changing from light/dark faded jeans (burns and rips sold separately) to gray sweatpants, on the darker side but still somewhere in the middle, depending on his mood of the day. It's hard to find time to where comfortable things and relax, so basically expect to see him mostly in his jeans.

Shoe's are a thing of the past for Shizuka as they were too fragile and in his constant endeavors that required "stabler" footwear, so he is only seen wearing various colors and forms of boots. Typically he sticks to the Timbaland colored ones as they match better with his style choice (yes I'm that guy who's worried about outfit matching even in a RP lol).

Personality: Shizuka was never really much of a talker, even when he was younger. He wasn't depressed, sad or lonely as he has multiple friends or colleagues that he is constantly seen with. Anger issues and a prior history of violence and hatred isn't present either, he never really saw a reason for someone to start a fight themselves or get upset over something without it being purely selfish or the typical bully persona of 'I'm bigger and stronger so I'm going to pick on you' deal. He's just an observer and a learner.

Shizuka's personality comes from his mother who was always introducing something knew and puzzling for him to learn, the puzzles and riddles making him use his mental abilities above all else to conquer whatever obstacles and challenges came his way. This nature, and his own desire to learn, led to Shizu to quickly master any task or object set in front of him.

Some people understand him and just leave him be, enjoying his company (with very few words) and just accepting him for the way he desired to live. Other's mocked him, teased him, tried to entice him into a fight or into doing something mischievous that would inevitably lead them into trouble. Shizu just ignored those bothering him for their personal pleasure, only defended himself once physically attacked and continued living his life as he knew how - by learning and observing.

Element: Iron


Skymin's Character:
Spoiler:

Name:Kerin Knight
Gender: Male
Age: 18 and a half
Species: Vampire

Appearance: Kerin's hair is short and black, with his dark fringe/bangs covering only slightly over his dark, blue eyes in a kind of v shape in the centre of his face, the rest of his hair windblown to the left. He's kind of pale, he's kind of tall (about 174cm) and just a little bit muscley but not enough for him to not look skinny. Due to his vampirism, his canines are a little sharper than the average human being but he was already pale before he turned. He has a number of scars adorned on his body, mostly on his knuckles, face and arms. Other than the fact he is a vampire, he actually looks quite human. He tries to keep it that way.

He doesn't dress that fancy, either wearing a t-shirt and jeans or a kind of japanese styled male uniform on other occasions when he's feeling good. His shoes however are always the same; black converse. He doesn't wear much jewelery except a thick, black, leather, buckled bracelet, similar to a biker cuff, to hide his bite mark. He never likes to show that he is a vampire.

Personality: Kerin has never been good at keeping his cool. He tries his hardest, he really does, but it doesn't take much for the guy to take a step forward and punch you in the face. He doesn't mind a few mindless jabs at his own personality or perhaps his clothing, but as soon as you even breathe a word about somebody else, consider yourself a painful, bloody lump. He acts as some kind of vigilante but he doesn't know why; he often regrets fighting after its all said and done. Despite this, he doesn't even hesitate to jump into a fight and usually ends up on top in most cases (three to one is usually his limit). A bloody nose, grazed knuckles or bruises are not considered unusual to him. Infact, lack of any sort of injury surprises him. That was before though. Before he was turned.

Kerin wasn't always a vampire. Infact, he was turned recently. About 3 years ago. Although since he moved to the vampire district though, Kerin has kept to himself. Vampires are a lot stronger than humans were and even though Kerin's strength was amplified when he was turned, he doesn't want to think what would happen if a vampire punched him. He does what he's told, doesn't ask questions and stays out of the way. At the moment though, he has a lot of stress built up and it won't take much for him to explode.

Element: Fire.


Ichigo's Character:
Spoiler:

Name: Akira Tsukuda
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Species: Angel

Appearance: Think of your stereotypical Angel… now ignore what you have conjured up because Akira is vastly unlike the stereotype. If people were to tell you Akira is an Angel, you would think they were trying to pull your leg, he just doesn’t seem… ‘Angelic’. If Akira were to describe himself, he would more often than not consider himself “punk”, but that’s just him.

His soft black hair comes together in a small Mohawk stretching from his forehead backwards down to the collar of his shirts. Often styled this way and natural colouring to his hair, Akira hardly ever changes his hair style. Below his hair lies a pair of green pigmented eyes that help to ‘soften’ his appearance. As eyes are the windows to the soul, Akira’s reflect his mellowed state, something like a windswept meadow. His teeth are not exactly perfectly white, having a slight discoloration to them, but the attention is taken away from them by a single spiked labret piercing below his lips.

Although physically fit and active, his body shows no signs of fat, rather toned and defined muscles that aren’t all that special. Just by looking at him, at five foot eleven inches and weighing around sixty kilograms, Akira looks like your average human. But appearances are deceiving.

As far as clothing goes he wears nothing spectacular, preferring use and comfort over style.

Personality: Akira is very distant from people. It’s not something he does unintentionally either, it’s that he prefers to keep the distance to refrain from being hurt or getting emotionally attached. It also makes it easier for him to manipulate people, without the attachment he finds no barriers. More than anything, he has a particular disgust for Humans. As an Angel, he feels that he is vastly superior to humans in almost every way possible. That is not to say that he doesn’t get along with them, but when he does it is reluctant at best; although if it came down to it, he would rather join forces with a Human rather than a vampire or Demon. However, he has in the past and occasionally still will try and get along with someone of a different race when he needs to.

Akira does have a soft side to him though. When he does allow people to get close enough to him to start to get to know him, he treats them with respect and looks out for them. This goes as well for females. Something inside of Akira produces this instinct within him to protect and look after females despite their race. If he saw a female getting beaten, he would not hesitate to defend them, however if they attacked him, then he values his life enough to fight back and throws these morals out of the window. Following this, he would not attack a woman unless she gave him a reason to; more often than not if his life was threatened.

Generally, Akira is a very emotionally stable person and vary rarely lets his emotions get the better of him; keeping them in check. On the very few occasions he has let his emotions get the better of him, he has snapped and done a lot of damage as well as things he is ashamed of, things he would rather forget and has done so. He rare speaks about his past, pretending that it never happened. Some pretty big events happened to Akira, ones that haunt him to this day and so to safe guard himself he tries to forget about everything but what is happening here and now.

Element: Earth


Eevee's Character: Bernkastel Vermillia
Eevee's Character: Paris
Eevee's Character: Amelia
Eevee's Character: Pewie
Eevee's Character: Nokoto
Eevee's Character: Fausto
Eevee's Character: Jin
Eevee's Character: Marisa
Eevee's Character: Fang
Eevee's Character: Shiro
Eevee's Character: Lucifier
Eevee's Character: Mammon
Eevee's Character: Vergil
Eevee's Character: Alice
Eevee's Character: Zane
Eevee's Character: Natruo
Eevee's Character: Venius Cloud
Eevee's Character: Somal
Eevee's Character: Seere
Eevee's Character: Raum
Eevee's Character: Malphias
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Chapter 1 - The Reaping of the Population

Spoiler:

Summary:
It is now the beginning of warm, beautiful weather. However, your blood may be shed within the week, to stain your local white roses red. To be exact, it is the beginning week of May. You know the saying: April showers bring May flowers. However, it seems that your blood will be the showers, and there will be no beautiful flowers afterwards.

What Will Be Happening?:
*You will be introducing your character like I did with mine. Point out key points to their personality, or their hobbies.
*You will either be guilded or dragged to the reaping. Go crazy with your reaction to participating in the games.
*Make sure you give off clues to how your district is different to others. Their systems of how they choose players.
*Your post will end after you are choosen for the reaping, and you can either have a reaction to something another player did, or you can move on to the trains.

Angels:
Spoiler:

*Government leader is Taniko Kunjui. Leader for over 4 years.
*Participants are choosen by having their names drawn from a box. If you're fourteen, there are fourteen slips of paper with your name on it, ect
*Your friends and family will most likely grieve and cling, before you are to board a train with the other three teens.



Demons:
Spoiler:

*Leader is Kuze Onoyazi. Leader ever since the games began. He is present during the reaping, but hardly take part
*Participants are choosen by vote, and almost always they are trouble teens that nobody likes
*Kuze burns the demon symbol onto their arm
*Shoved onto the train before they can say anything to the crowd


Vampires:
Spoiler:

*Leaders are Yua Anna and Calzus Zunigi, and just got into power
*This district is the God's favorite, so they are pampered to win the games
*Voting takes place for the best fighters, but some weak players are snuck in to even it out
*They do not go on a train, but wait in the government building


Humans:
Spoiler:

*Leader is Statia Maina. Leader for 11 years
*Choose participants through elections, but usually teens offer to go
*Participants board an underground railroad


*All train desinations are to District 5, which is a small piece of land outside the vampire district. Camera's are only at the reaping. This chapter is mostly for interaction between the participants of YOUR district.

Chapter 2 - Meet Your Allies and Enemies

Spoiler:

Summary:
You all have arrived in District Five. It is a place spilling to the core in misfit Gods that are set to work bringing you to your own personal hell, so I would act as polite as you possibly can. These people will be the first to judge you, so you do not want to make bad impressions on them. What with being in a tight compartment with the people you are either going to murder, or be murdered by, there will definitely be some tension. Will you be willing to make light conversation, or will you stay silent throughout the trip?

What Will Be Happening?:
* You will be arriving in different train stations from the other districts, but that doesn't mean you get any more alone time with the other three participants in yours. Cameras will be all over the place to flim your ever move and broadcast LIVE around the world.
* You are going to be led by a group of Gods to the center of the district, where you will board a huge helicopter; best part, the other districts will be in the same helicopter, and you will be seperated only by air and a couple of bored guards at your fingertips.

Angels:
Spoiler:
Since your district is above the vampire district, you will be arriving in the northern station.

Demons:
Spoiler:
Demons will arrive through the southern station.


Vampires:
Spoiler:
Will already be there.


Humans:
Spoiler:
The humans will be arriving at the western station.

*This chapter will focus more on eyeing your neighbouring districts, and how well you will react to the situation.

Chapter 3 - A Fesitivity Worth Dying For
Spoiler:

Summary:
You may have had a blast on the helicopter, and perhaps a word with the man planning your demise, but this doesn't prepare you for what's beyond. These few days prior to the games, are made just for training and relaxation. If you can even sleep, that is. If you have your eyes set on surviving this thing, you may find it to be in your best interest to the demon witch, Bernkastel. She, among others, knows what's going on.

What's Happening?:
*You will be exiting the helicopter, right into the training district just outside the God's District
*For the next few days, you will be hidden away from cameras and interviews, to train. However, you may skip individual training if you wish

Angels:
Spoiler:
Your building is on the northern side of the training center


Demons:
Spoiler:
Southern.


Vampires:
Spoiler:
Eastern.


Humans:
Spoiler:
Western.


*This chapter focuses on individual character abilities, alliances, and enemies.


Chapter 4 - The Melancholy of Bernkastel Vermillia

Spoiler:

Summary:
Your third day in the God's Realm has arrived, and wheither you like it or not, you will be forced to participate in a post-games show. It's interview time; the best few minutes you have to gather as many wealthy sponsors as you can. Will you have the points to afford a shiny weapon outside the arena? Or will you be unable to afford that antidote for your survival?

What's Happening?:
Immediately after breakfast, a new character will greet your main contestant. This person will be your designer and the person that manages your points, It's their job to make sure you survive and win.

Angels:
Spoiler:

Akira -- Natruo The Gamemaster (Controlled By Eevee)
Shizuka -- Malphias; Lesser God; Nervous/Awkward (Controlled By Eevee)


Demons:
Spoiler:

Ryuu -- Somal; Nekooni; Politely rude (Controlled By Eevee)
Xavier -- Seere; Horned Demon; Mute (Controlled by Eevee)


Vampires:
Spoiler:

Kerin -- Raum; Higher Vampire; Stereotypically gay (Controlled by Eevee)


Humans:
Spoiler:

Raike -- Venius; Higher God; Humorous/Animated (Controlled By Eevee)



Chapter 5 - Let The Games Begin!

Summary:
Your days of relaxation are over, as it is now the day of the games. Gods watch their televisions in excitement and antisipation for their favorite "reality" show to start. However, many who are actually participating in this are not exactly thrilled to get the parts as "Main character". There are no dialogue scripts to follow, or fancy special-effects over a green screen. This is real. As much as the blood courses through your veins, it may be spilled within this deadly game. Welcome to "The Population Games".

What's Happening?:
Today you will wake up at exactly eight o'clock to the sound of your Guide knocking at your door. Upon answering, you will be handed a set of clothing according to your gender and species to change into. You cannot wear anything else, and you cannot pack anything with you (Though you are allowed to pack one wearable heirloom from your district which will be inspected by your Guide. (Such as a pendant, small rock, ring, ect)

After changing, you will be led downstairs to your vehicle. Each participant has their own vehicle to ride with their Guide. You will eat your final meal here, which can be as much as you want, including non-alcoholic drinks.

You will arrive at yet another building, where you will board a hovercraft based on your species. You will be in your own cubicle, so you cannot interact with the other participants here, or at any time before or after.
You will land in an underground base, so you cannot see the outside world (ie: where you are exactly). You will be taken by guards to individual rooms for final preparation by your Guide, before entering a glass tube within the room.

Description of attire (female):
- simple black pants that can only be described as "yoga" pants. You will wear a fitted sports bra and underwear according to your chest size for the most comfortable and flexible fit. The black tanktop will be made fully of cotton, and each participant will be given a black wool coat of light material to be worn overtop. There are exactly two 4'' by 4'' pockets on either side, and it is done up by a black zipper. There is also a hood that can be tightened via the strings on both shoulders. For footwear, women have two options; durable black-grey running shoes with automatic clasp fitting, or 12'' tall boots made specifically for rough terrain and weather conditions (water proof). Optional, is a belt to be worn at the waist and simple black gloves.

Description of attire (male):
- Similar to the female clothing, male participants will wear black pants and a cotton black t-shirt. The coat is indifferent to the female's design, save for the zipper being replaced with metal clasps. The strings for the hood are located at the front (collarbone) and the pockets are in the same place as the females, with the same measurements. Men have two options for shoes. The first option are the running shoes mentioned in the female section with automatic fitting clasps and grip capabilities. Second option, is a pair of 12'' boots also specially designed for all terrain and weather. Optional, is a belt to be worn at the waist and simple black gloves.

Differences In Attire For Species:

Angels - Slits are cut into the backs of the jacket and shirts to perfectly fit your wings. On the left side of the chest, is the Angel District emblem, which will be shown in a later sketch.

Humans - On the left side of the chest is the Human District emblem, which will be shown in a later sketch.

Vampires - On the right side of the chest is the Vampire District emblem, which will be shown in a later sketch.

Demons - Slits are cut into the backs of the jacket and shirts to perfectly fit your wings (The exception is Ryuu, who will not have slits in his clothing). On the right side of the chest is the Demon District emblem, which will be shown in a later sketch.

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Alliances:
Spoiler:

Kerin = Marisa = Fang
Bernkastel = Xavier = Marisa = Kerin = Fang = Shizuka = Amelia = Ryuu
Xavier = Bernkastel = Marisa, Kerin, Fang?
Shizuka = Amelia
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"The lies of your world will be exposed. My rebellion will rein over your realm, and no longer will this time be plagued by war." - ???

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I have no complaints! Perfecto, aside from a couple typos in the text~

Hm. I shall give it 8.5? Maaayyybbeee a bit of work from Ryuu's house to the reaping may have added flavor. .5 for the minor typos and grammar I found. Although, my grammar isn't the best, so... xD

Hopefully, I should have the Human District up~! Finally got the internet working on my main computer!
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Old May 11th, 2011, 10:53 AM
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Haha, no problem. I will be giving suggestions, ratings, ect to everyones posts~

I'd like it if I got some feedback on everything I'm doing as well. This is my first major rp, and I'm seriously wanting to have this finished. I, will never scrap this thing >D
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Old May 11th, 2011, 11:28 AM
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Well, I figure I'd let you know ahead of time I intend to see it finished, but I am visiting my family in Europe this summer, and as such for two periods of time, I will be away without Internet connection. The first time will be about 1 week long, at the beginning of June, the second one will be 2 weeks long and will be in the middle of July. Other than that, I will post whenever necessary. I hope this is ok.
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Oh~! It's quite alright. I suppose, if we're on an important chapter, you may have to have a responsible person NOT apart of this rp already, bunnying your character for that two-week period. The week period may, or may not be a problem.

Anyhow, I'm glad you gave us a heads-up.

I'll try to have the human district up today. It's half-finished currently.
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I want to join and I'll have an Angel bio up by Saturday.
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The Flock: Lawrence 'Lance' Black
Pokemon Perfect Being Delta: Tommy Sanders
Years of Lies: Kaito 'Rai' Hirosaki
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Old May 12th, 2011, 02:26 PM
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I am definitely interested in joining this RP, I actually just created my PC account because of this RP. I've been dabbing in it for years because of my creative imagination but it never fully led anywhere because I always wanted to join so many RPs. That being said this will be the ONLY RP I will be taking part in until it is completed, that is if I am accepted.

So without any more run on paragraphs about why I'm here, here's my SU!

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Name: Shizuka 'Shizu' Yoshiko

Gender: Male
Age: Eighteen years old.

Species: Angel.

Appearance: Angel's typically have a look that everyone expects to see once they learn someone is an angel, usually revolving around a lot of golds and whites and bright shiny aura's that come along with them. That's, of course, due to the Poster Child syndrome according to Shizuka. The higher up's like to present themselves as perfect and want anyone that represents them to fit that same mold, but Shizu never has and never wants to be just a cookie cut being so everyone will love him.

His wing span is of medium length, just the nature of how he was born into the world..the uniqueness about him is the color of his wings, which still to this day have left many baffled as to how it came to be. Cool gray colored wings that shimmer slightly in the sun and flow easy through the wind - some which would say, though not the blinding white you would expect, is still pretty common and maya blue tipped feathers that trailed around the very edges of his wings.

Moving into his facial features, Shizu has a pretty typical look. His hair, a light dirty blonde kept somewhere between short and shaggy, always hung down covering left eye. His hair is used to avoid others from staring, a scar slashed diagonally across his eye. However, as one might think, Shizuka was not ashamed of his deformity as some referred to it - he truly embraced his past, but didn't feel the need to be gazed upon simply for having a permanent reminder of where he has come from. His right ear is pierced with two hoops, one right next to the other, through the cartilage.

Standing at five foot ten with your general athletic/stay in shape, but not becoming crazy like the hulk, body build you will usually see Shizu in a gray or black tanktop - some looking brand spanking new, while others are riddled with holes, burn marks, etc. Living in the world he lives in, there are much worse things than destroyed clothes for him to be worrying about. Continuing downwards, you will see his pants changing from light/dark faded jeans (burns and rips sold separately) to gray sweatpants, on the darker side but still somewhere in the middle, depending on his mood of the day. It's hard to find time to where comfortable things and relax, so basically expect to see him mostly in his jeans.

Shoe's are a thing of the past for Shizuka as they were too fragile and in his constant endeavors that required "stabler" footwear, so he is only seen wearing various colors and forms of boots. Typically he sticks to the Timbaland colored ones as they match better with his style choice (yes I'm that guy who's worried about outfit matching even in a RP lol).

Personality: Shizuka was never really much of a talker, even when he was younger. He wasn't depressed, sad or lonely as he has multiple friends or colleagues that he is constantly seen with. Anger issues and a prior history of violence and hatred isn't present either, he never really saw a reason for someone to start a fight themselves or get upset over something without it being purely selfish or the typical bully persona of 'I'm bigger and stronger so I'm going to pick on you' deal. He's just an observer and a learner.

Shizuka's personality comes from his mother who was always introducing something knew and puzzling for him to learn, the puzzles and riddles making him use his mental abilities above all else to conquer whatever obstacles and challenges came his way. This nature, and his own desire to learn, led to Shizu to quickly master any task or object set in front of him.

Some people understand him and just leave him be, enjoying his company (with very few words) and just accepting him for the way he desired to live. Other's mocked him, teased him, tried to entice him into a fight or into doing something mischievous that would inevitably lead them into trouble. Shizu just ignored those bothering him for their personal pleasure, only defended himself once physically attacked and continued living his life as he knew how - by learning and observing.

Element: Iron.

RP Sample: (As I said, I created my PC account specifically for this RP so my sample is from an RP I originally tried to start long ago, that lead know where. But this was my intro for it.)

"Accessing Login Screen...
 
PLEASE ENTER USER NAME AND PASSWORD..."
 
The information below was what appeared on the screen:
Username: Nelson Winnids
Password: **********
 
"Login check...Access Granted...
 
Welcome Back Nelson...How May I Help You..?"
 
Some typing begins echoing throughout a room
 
"Accessing Charodic historical file: Number 00-067..."
 
After a few seconds, and some buzzing, the following information was read aloud
 
"The Charodic is an assassin based organization that was started at the dawn of man. Since then, destiny has chosen select people to rid the world of evil in the stealthiest and quickest way possible. Started by the worlds first assassin, Winston Bellings, the Charodic has had a hand, if not a full body, in all the major killings of super powers in the world. For many years Winston took these jobs on alone, knowing full well the risks to anyone who got involved, and did not wish to change this. Unfortunately, one of his missions turned bad, and his decision was changed and he began taking on students and taught them the ways of an assassin."
 
Historical file: Number 00-067 has been paused."
 
The person listening to this historical file began typing something else into the computer. More buzzing bounced off the walls of the room, and then the computer began reading aloud again.
 
"Personal file: Number 78-145..Winston Bellings..
 
After taking the assignment to take out target 126, Jeremy Collins, Winston was ambushed by another assassin known very well to him. To this day, no one knows the name of Bellings betrayer, as he refused to give up his name, and he has been dubbed Lexin.
 
Winston escaped the ambush, and completed his mission, but was seriously injured and the destiny of The Charodic  was nearly quashed after only being around for such a short time. It was then that Bellings changed his mind about a former decision, and made arrangements to share his knowledge with the coming generations and continue The Charodic until the end of time.
 
End of Personal File: Number 78-145..Winston Bellings."
 
Again the mysterious person began typing
 
"Historical File: Number 00-067 has resumed transmission..
 
Since then, Bellings teachings has been passed down through students, families and friends in the form of a book. Every ten years, a leader is chosen to lead The Charodic and adds their own form of training or technique to the book. But then everything was changed, and the Charodic became divided.
 
The newest leader, Mitchell Saunders, didn't appreciate his heritage and wanted to change the ways to benefit himself and his followers. For some time, everyone went along with what he wished, knowing they would not be able to just uprise and overthrow a leader. Then one day, Mitchell Saunders' second in command betrayed him and they began to battle. Bullets, knives and physical fighting were all seen as both combatants gazed at the horrifc and gorey battle.
 
In the end, the former second in command defeated Mitchell and reinstated the old ways of The Charodic. Mitchells men fled, a new leader already rising to power of the group, to seek revenge one day against their traitorous former comrade.
 
End Historical File: Number 00-067."
 
A squeak emitted from a chair, the person leaning backwards - placing their hands on the back of their skull. A smile crept across their face as the story had been finished.



I look forward to hearing back from you about my acceptance or rejection. Also any constructive criticism on my application, such as anything that may need altering or more detail, I love to hear! Thank you =D
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Alright~! Your reservation is set! I should also have the angel districts' post up by Saturday.

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Never SEEN such a profile! I'm simply awed, right now.... The only small problem I see, is a run-off sentence at the start of Appearance's paragraph #4. Otherwise, it seems completely flawless. I'm honored that you have joined PC just for this particular rp!

Accepted.
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Old May 13th, 2011, 04:29 PM
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Hey, I have a question: How do these fights work? Is it all one-on-one or do we have teams, or does everyone just duke it out? Just curious.
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Old May 13th, 2011, 04:49 PM
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Mind defining your question, Vegeta?

Sure, the district teens go in as a group of four, but they're all individual in the arena, unless they made alliances.

And about killings in the arena...Well, my extra characters (The ones like Paris from the demon side. I'll make a list of killable characters, though you could make alliances with them) are probably going to be the first to go. I have this all planned out, so no worries~!

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Pretty much, you're thrown into an arena and you're supposed to survive being killed by others, or the game designers.
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Old May 13th, 2011, 04:52 PM
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Ah, I see. That basically answer the bulk of my question. I'll see the rest as the RP goes along.
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Old May 13th, 2011, 04:54 PM
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Glad I could be of help, now....Feel like helping me with the human district?! It's so BORING.;;; *No motivation*

Gah....*Attempts*
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Old May 13th, 2011, 04:59 PM
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Lol, I'd hate to leave you in the dust, or however the phrase goes, never really was any good with sayings...

What do you need help with? :D
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Old May 13th, 2011, 05:03 PM
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Eh, like...Making it unique compared to the other posts i've done. I'm at the reaping part, and so far...

Shiro was picked because she's a crazy psycho

Bernkastel is participating for the third time

Scarlet, I'm planning on being a complete mistake with the voting.

And Nokoto? Maybe something like the real "The Hunger Game" reaping...With her little sister being chosen, and then her taking the child's place....
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Old May 13th, 2011, 05:13 PM
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Well, I've never read "The Hunter Game", but I like that idea. I notice that most of these people are troublemakers, in one sense of the word or another, so perhaps her sister has been doing a lot of, um, 'troublemaking', and maybe make her take her place. But I guess I really don't know... I don't think I helped much, but...good luck to you..
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Gender
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Age
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Species
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Appearance
: Rai doesn't care much for his appearance or for that of the other angels. Rai doesn’t care how he looks due to the fact that he had no family and finds more solace in being alone with his own thoughts.

His wing span is of quite large length although they still fold against his back, and he can pass for a human, his wings are also black as night, which is why most people called him Crow, and bad child for most of his life, making him cold and ruthless, which explains his very hardened demeanor.


Now, for his facial features, Rai has a pretty scruffy look, at least for his standards. His hair, reaches to his shoulder, and it is the same exact color as his wings, dark black. He wears the hair down to his shoulders because his neck has various slash scars from when some tried to cut off his neck.


Rai stands at six foot one with your general soccer player stature (somewhat buff but not too big) but not hulk big body build, you can usually find Rai in a black shirt or white tanktop - some looking brand spanking new, while others are filled with blood stains and whatnot. Living in the where he lives and in his situation, bad clothes are the least of his worries. Continuing downwards, he wears faded dark blue jeans to navy blie sweatpants. It's hard for him to wear comfortable things and relax, so he is mostly in his jeans.


Rai cannot wear sneakers due to the way he lives excluding basketball sneakers, so he is only seen wearing navy blue and black Jordans, and black And1’s.


Personality
: Rai doesn’t like talking to people. He is depressed as no one his race likes him besides a select few, he spends a large amount of his time fighting with plenty of other people which has sharpened his fighting skills to a point. He has anger issues but it won’t be noticed until he has stockpiled a large amount of anger and needs to release it. But, he does have reconnaissance skills because he likes listening.

Rai’s personality came from the years of ridicule and insult he went through due to the angels filing him a reject due to the fact that both his parents had white wings, and his were black. Eventually, the years of attempts on his life made him think on his toes, and he is a master tactician, although his plans rely on recklessness and some luck. This skill allowed Rai to live alone, and to fend for himself for years.

He has had a few friends of his race, but those had parent’s or one or another person who pushed them away from Rai. He usually hangs by himself and comes off to most as a loner. Some people insulted him, tried to kill him, some tried to take his wings, and others find him as a freak of nature and want to study him. Rai didn’t care about those who degraded him for pleasure, only attacked out of self-defense, and he listened and learned.



Element: Darkness/ Void.

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Pokemon Black And White:


After strolling around the town for a short while, Lance and Pidove went along the seaside trail heading towards the next town on their adventure. Figuring that working too hard to get to the next town would be too tedious, the duo decided to take a rest, watching their surroundings change as day gradually transformed into evening. The multicolored sunset was a sight to see, and it was mostly quiet with the exception of the sounds of the forest pokemon.

The two were taking a break near a clearing that the duo recently found in the forest, and Lance closed his eyes just to wake up a few moments later with water squirted in his face, and as he was about to retaliate when he remembered that his pokemon was naive and he decided to relax, but when he opened his eyes in a few moments he saw Pidove picking at a tree with his beak. As he realized that it couldn't have been Pidove that had hit him, he spun around to find a small white pokemon standing near a lake that was about six feet from him.


The pokemon was an Oshawott, the Oshawott was very small about the size of Pidove, but it packed a certain energy into that small body. The pokemon stood on two legs which could obviously barely support it. It had averagely proportioned arms, which it had crossed over its chest. The Oshawott was looking at him mischeviously. Once Lance looked Oshawott began showing off its water gun skills, and it was an effort to anger Lance at the prank that was pulled.


Lance remembered some facts on the pokemon that he read about while walking on Route 1 trying to get acquainted with his new possesions. Oshawott was a starter pokemon, very rare and very hard to get, as far as his knowledge knows, the pokemon is nearly endangered.


The pokemon in front of Lance was very cocky, because there were two generic pokemon reactions upon meeting a human:

a) ran away out of fear, or b) attacked. This Oshawott was shooting some more water in his face, smirking at him almost as if challenging him.

"So, you wanna tussle? Is that what you want?" the Pokemon got asked. It came out of his habitat and went to Lance , waiting for him to make the first move. Lance called Pidove to his side as he smiled do.


"Pidove, are you ready for your first battle?" Lance asked. Suddenly, Pidove changed from an innocent bird type pokemon to a fierce predator just from its demeanor. Meanwhile, the Oshawott had jumped back getting into a position in which it would be closer to the water.


Lance said, "Choosing your strengths. Hm, it makes sense."

Then almost immediately, he shouted "Pidove use Gust!" He didn't feel the need to hold back because, well, this was a test run.

Pidove began flapping its wings and began hovering, while blowing intense winds at Oshawott. Oshawott then shot back with a torrent of water, being the pokemon that it was.


Oshawott then jumped out and rammed Pidove, knocking it out of the air and to the ground. Pidove then quickly got up and then without warning turned red. Pidove rose off of the ground in it's red form and at lightning speed rammed Oshawott, and that knocked Oshawott way off balance.


Lance leaped backward in surprise at the fact that Pidove could attack like that, and the attack must've been Brave Bird, but he was still dumbfounded at the sheer power of the attack, but then he saw the one drawback. Pidove suffered some damage too, and was struggling to shake it off.


Oshawott quickly ran in, and tried using another water gun. But then Pidove used another Gust, and it knocked Oshawott off balance and into a tree.


But, Lance remembered that flying damage was light on water pokemon. Oshawott, already annoyed that this battle had gone on as long as it has then came to ram or tackle Pidove.


"Pidove, please try and manage another Brave Bird, this is probably the end!" Lance ordered. Pidove suddenly lit up red, levitated in the air and quickly soared and hit Oshawott.


This attack seemed to be the table turner for Lance and Pidove. It seemed barely able to stand, trying not to fall forward, but back into the water. Lance said, "You have talent, when you come with me, then you'll become one of the best ever!" he said into the air as he threw the Pokeball at Oshawott. The ball opened, releasing a red beam that turned Oshawott into white energy, and then compressed itself, before retreating back into the ball as it clicked shut. Oshawott was still trying to get out of the Pokeball, and was resisting the ball, causing it to shake a bit.
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Melonymon's Assistants Birthing Breezomon: Alexander 'Atair' Ola-Martins
The Flock: Lawrence 'Lance' Black
Pokemon Perfect Being Delta: Tommy Sanders
Years of Lies: Kaito 'Rai' Hirosaki
Trackers: Avatar Operation : Thomas 'Sonar' Kiranos
Ye' Pokebeasts Journeye' : Wayne 'Slash' Ronam
Swing High, Swing Low : Ariel Hernandez
Seven Deadly Sins: Markus Markov
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Hmm..nice first sentance for your appearance Cross. What do you think eevee?
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The first thing I can point which is incorrect is that he has current demon and human friends. No species can contact eachother, and they only make contact once in the God's Realm for the games. Only angels live in that district, and each district has miles of space between.

Second, it could be me, but your first sentence sounds similar to mr.kibbles...*Shrug* And how he has a scar on his left eye, and hair is used to cover it...Actually, there are alot of characteristics about him that sound the same to Kibble's character.

For now, I will say that it is rejected. Please revise your appearance. However, I will put it under consideration. Everything else seems good to me. Just fix the appearance and the part about him meeting with other species.
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LOL, I use other people's bios as templates sorry Mr. Kibbles if it offended you or made you angry in any way. I've edited the bio extensively and if there is anything else I need to change please tell me.
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Melonymon's Assistants Birthing Breezomon: Alexander 'Atair' Ola-Martins
The Flock: Lawrence 'Lance' Black
Pokemon Perfect Being Delta: Tommy Sanders
Years of Lies: Kaito 'Rai' Hirosaki
Trackers: Avatar Operation : Thomas 'Sonar' Kiranos
Ye' Pokebeasts Journeye' : Wayne 'Slash' Ronam
Swing High, Swing Low : Ariel Hernandez
Seven Deadly Sins: Markus Markov
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Not upset or angry, flattered fits better. However, copying the exact same characteristics was definitely not the best way to go about it. You should always read everything and then rephrase it into your own words.

Eevee is going to get a knuckle sandwich if the Angel chapter doesn't go up soon! lol
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e.e;;; *Motivated now* Derp....I'll start the angel district, since I honestly can't think of anything for the human. *Postpones Human District, to SkyisUmbreon's dismay*
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Yay! I am super excited and have my hands hovering over the keyboard ready to create my first post.
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Old May 16th, 2011, 10:57 AM
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Finished the Human District~! *Finally*

Now, I PROMISE. To have the Angel District up within 24 hours!!
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