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Old June 2nd, 2009 (02:26 PM).
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Old June 2nd, 2009 (02:31 PM).
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haha where is ash in the maid uniform? :D

your ash trainer sprite really needs some work on the lower body. the positioning of the legs is just plain awkward, and as others have already mentioned, the hat is huge.
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Old June 2nd, 2009 (03:06 PM).
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Ok, for the overworlds, you need to add shading to the hair on the bottom line of sprites, and on the ones with no hat. And you need to redo the hair on the ones with no hats, they look horrible lol. (in the nicest way possible) ;]
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Old June 3rd, 2009 (12:01 PM).
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haha where is ash in the maid uniform? :D

your ash trainer sprite really needs some work on the lower body. the positioning of the legs is just plain awkward, and as others have already mentioned, the hat is huge.
No. Most definately not, I hated that... I might sprite Ashely... IDK

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Ok, for the overworlds, you need to add shading to the hair on the bottom line of sprites, and on the ones with no hat. And you need to redo the hair on the ones with no hats, they look horrible lol. (in the nicest way possible) ;]
Hmm, I'l try to fix the shading on the hair. Yeah, I hate Ash without his hat's hair... I shall try to fix it though. could you be more specific? Oh, and look at Brock at the top of Page 5, I think he looks a lot better.
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Old June 6th, 2009 (07:21 PM). Edited June 7th, 2009 by GFA.
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Old June 8th, 2009 (05:05 PM).
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I must ask for this thread to be locked. I go to Japan Thursday, and won't be back till the 4th of July. I'm not even sure I'll come back. My inspiration has been lost, and I kill threads. Middle School is over, which means the beginning of High School, and no one plays Pokemon anymore. So I leave you for now. Goodbye, Farewell, and Amen.
GFA you can't stop. I'm leaving Middle School and going to High School, but I still like Pokemon. And look how many members are on this website and others. Millions if not billions love Pokemon. Maybe you'll get inspiration in Japan.

On topic: The sprites look great, but a bit big for the games.
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Old June 9th, 2009 (10:44 AM).
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Old October 12th, 2009 (05:55 PM). Edited December 1st, 2009 by GFA.
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Old October 12th, 2009 (06:02 PM).
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those are rlly good.
i love the misty one.
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Old October 13th, 2009 (06:05 PM).
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Ash looks good.
Brock is good, i would reduce the larger spikes by one pixel.
Misys hair, the little flip on our left is a tad to big.
Jesse's hair doesnt look anything like that? I would redo it.
James hair needs some edditing, just fill in that gap on the top.
To much black outline on butch and cassidys hair (the front flippy parts)
Giovanni is good.

You've improved since last time :)
you seem to always have issues with hair lol.
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These are awesome.
They look better then the actual ones.
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Old October 14th, 2009 (11:36 AM). Edited October 14th, 2009 by GFA.
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Quote originally posted by Atomic Reactor:
Ash looks good. Finally
Brock is good, i would reduce the larger spikes by one pixel. Hmm, yeah but then he'd be to short in comparison to Ash
Misys hair, the little flip on our left is a tad to big. ... It's been bigger, but I'll see if I can make it look better
Jesse's hair doesnt look anything like that? I would redo it. I actually kind of like her the way she is. (With the flip and everything, though normally, you'd see it from the bac) Could you be a little more specific about what looks wrong?
James hair needs some edditing, just fill in that gap on the top. Okey-Dokey
To much black outline on butch and cassidys hair (the front flippy parts) I agree
Giovanni is good. Yay! He's Kind of simple though

You've improved since last time
you seem to always have issues with hair lol.
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Old October 14th, 2009 (01:16 PM). Edited October 14th, 2009 by Alucus_Of_Borg.
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Right well lets start from the top left shall we, with ash right everything looks great here, this is indeed a very good and acurate sprite, the hair looks perfect and i know from experience ash's hair is a pain to get looking right :D the only thing I would say is with his cap, i would make it a front view as the cap only got turned when he was catching a pokemon, also the shading should be a darker shade of red as it blends a bit much here. All in all 9/10

Good old brock next, he is for lack of a better word perfect everything just looks like classic brock very nicely done, especially on the hair. 10/10


misty much like brock is pretty much perfect, so not much to say here :D 10/10

Jessie once again looks very nice, she is almost perfect but her hair looks way to big and a bit like an affro, so maby make it a little bit smaller. 9/10

James, much like the opposite of jessie almost perfect but his hair isnt long enough I know its hard to get looking right but it would look much better if you could. 9/10

Butch, perfect but maby switch his hair for james's I think that might look a bit more accurate. 9/10

Cassidy, once again the hair is almost perfect but again switch for the james sprite, and keep the pony tails of course :D 9/10.

Giovanni, is just perfect seriously it looks so much like him that its uncanny, make his hair a tad bit darker and then its just 100% 10/10

Good job here mate truely, but a recuring problum that I can see is that the pants are always only one pixel row accross i would make it 2 and add an extra pixel at the top corners for shape, that should hopefully fix the slight squareness that the boddies have here. Fix those few things and these will be by far the best anime overworlds that I have ever seen, so I expect side, back and walking sprites :D
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Old October 15th, 2009 (12:12 PM). Edited October 15th, 2009 by GFA.
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The 1st sprite that seemed to be magorly critized was Jessie so, which jessie should it be? Or, is better than the others. A, B, or C?



And, apparently some of you don't know that I do have an Ash with a hat. So a here.

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Old October 16th, 2009 (04:47 PM).
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Quote originally posted by BaconBoy914:
The 1st sprite that seemed to be magorly critized was Jessie so, which jessie should it be? Or, is better than the others. A, B, or C?



And, apparently some of you don't know that I do have an Ash with a hat. So a here.

Hmm, the volume of Jessie's hair, is a bit, too big/spaced out? I'd suggest, make it less "spaced out". Hmm, is the hair outline black? Or maybe it's just dark for me. Er, around the forehead, a little over the eyes, the outline looks kinda straight, just like the other overworld sprites. It doesn't look right. D=. Eh, overworlds are kinda hard for me to give some CC to. XD Overall, it's pretty good. =o
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Old October 18th, 2009 (03:22 PM).
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Well thanks, its hard to give crit on subjects you don't much about, lol. Anyway, about Jessie's hair, no, very little is blac, just dark purple red.
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Old October 21st, 2009 (11:40 AM).
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Yeah, so yeah. His hair wasn't spiky enough before, well compared to his Anime counterpart anyways... And a little bit of a costume change, recolor, edit thing.
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Yeah, so yeah. His hair wasn't spiky enough before, well compared to his Anime counterpart anyways... And a little bit of a costume change, recolor, edit thing.
that's rlly good(:
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Old October 21st, 2009 (12:05 PM).
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Old October 21st, 2009 (12:46 PM).
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Oak looks good, edit of original right?
Shading could use a tad fix though.
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Old October 21st, 2009 (01:35 PM).
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Yeah, it's an edit, I had him as skinny before, and it looked odd. How should it be fixed BTW, more grey?
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Brock and Ash look fantastic, but the bottom first four all have hair that don't look natural. I can't picture what the characters would actually look like. Maybe take out the black outline on the bangs and make it more subtle, perhaps replace the thing under their bangs (I couldn't find a way to describe it, I tried circling the areas I'm talking about for you at the bottom of my post -kind of hard on this laptop of mine-, I hope you get what I mean) with a shadow, and thin out Jesse's hair a tad. Great job on the bodies and faces, though.


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Old November 2nd, 2009 (06:52 PM). Edited November 2nd, 2009 by GFA.
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Old November 2nd, 2009 (07:01 PM).
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You havn't really fixed anything i mentioned...
So I'm not going to critique your work again...

I do see that you attempted James though, and a little of jessie.
I'll fix them and show you what i meant in my critique when i get a chance
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