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Old November 2nd, 2009, 09:33 PM
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Jame's hair is too high up. Maybe making it a bit longer would make it more accurate-looking.

I think Jessie's is just a pixel or two too wide. Cassidy's hair outlines have a bit too much contrast. Gary's hair is too short.

I love Ritchie's hat. It totally looks like his.

4th Generation overworld sprites are difficult to create. The hair is so awkwardly proportioned, I could never get it right. Don't give up, though. I think you'll get it.
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Old November 3rd, 2009, 03:51 PM
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You havn't really fixed anything i mentioned...
So I'm not going to critique your work again...

I do see that you attempted James though, and a little of jessie.
I'll fix them and show you what i meant in my critique when i get a chance
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Jame's hair is too high up. Maybe making it a bit longer would make it more accurate-looking.

I think Jessie's is just a pixel or two too wide. Cassidy's hair outlines have a bit too much contrast. Gary's hair is too short.

I love Ritchie's hat. It totally looks like his.

4th Generation overworld sprites are difficult to create. The hair is so awkwardly proportioned, I could never get it right. Don't give up, though. I think you'll get it.
Thanks, I've never been able to do Ritchie hat,which is surprising considering I find Ash's quite easy now.

Jessie and James,are both my top priority, thanks to you and Atomic.

Yeah, th gen is tough, If I make it any taller than it is, he'll be taller than Brock...

Thank youthe both of you for the critique
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Old November 3rd, 2009, 04:51 PM
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Lol it's alright.
And no, you didn't fix misty. You moved her hair inward by 1 pixel, which didn't do anything.
The lip shouldnt be going upward like it is.

Oh and on oak, just fix the shading.
It doesnt need more grey... idk what that even means :/

Again, ill show you what i think jesse and james should look like when i get a chance :P

Ritchie does look very good.
Nurse joys arms look really manly, lower her shoulders a bit.

Gary's hair is simply horrible. It need to be rdone completely, make it taller, and make the spikes... wider? Idk, take a look at the official one and mine on deviant art(not saying mine is perfect, but it looks more like the actuall gary)

Delia could use some more shading on her shirt.

The ones i didn't mention from the new group look god. I can't think of anything to change. :P
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Old November 10th, 2009, 06:31 AM
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Tried to add more shadng to Oak an Delia, ot quite sure if it worked though...

Jessie and James hair have been changed to go with all of my repliers opinions

Gary's hair has been Animefied

Misty hasn't been changed and probably won't be, I like her this way...
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Old November 10th, 2009, 09:42 AM
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These are really good. I especially like the detail you put into the hair. The only thing I don't like is that they are slightly too chubby, but it seems to just be me who that bugs.
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Old November 21st, 2009, 05:47 AM
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OK,so I got a little sidetracked, and skipped fixing the Gym Leaders, but presenting...

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Old November 22nd, 2009, 03:52 PM
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OK, so the Gym Leaders will be in a bit, but still...

Magikarp Salesman, who better at scamming then the scammer of scammers?



Also, Flint. He's kind of minor, but I want to sprite everybody!!!!

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Old November 29th, 2009, 06:43 PM
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If y'all don't give some crit soon, I'm done...



Ash/Brock/Misty
Jessie/James/Botch/Cassidy/Giovanni
Gary/Ritchie
Delia/Flint/Lily/Daisy/Violet
Nurse Joy/Officer Jenny/Professor Oak/Todd Snap/Magikarp Salesman
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Old November 29th, 2009, 07:28 PM
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The cerulean sisters look like recolors of eachother, vary it up a bit, they dont all look exactly the same..
Flints shirt isn't the right color. It's not yellow.
Still need to fix the shading on oak.
Surges hair is to bright, just my opinion though, no need to fix it.

Your samurai turned out really well ;)
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Old November 30th, 2009, 08:57 AM
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The cerulean sisters look like recolors of eachother, vary it up a bit, they dont all look exactly the same.. Yeah, OK. There hair is different
Flints shirt isn't the right color. It's not yellow. ??? Find me a reference & I'll change it, Bulbapedia, Serebii, and Pokeani disagree. That or I'm a bit colour blind
Still need to fix the shading on oak. ... OK
Surges hair is to bright, just my opinion though, no need to fix it. Agreed

Your samurai turned out really well I know right! He's one of my best

For some reason answering your crit is to short to make a post.... Oh, wait, I found a way around that...
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Old November 30th, 2009, 01:00 PM
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Let me rephrase that, it's not that bright of a yellow. It should be toned down quite a bit.
I thought it was a different color when i said that, so forgive me lol.
But yeah, it's to bright of a yellow.
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Old December 1st, 2009, 06:07 PM
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Subtle changes, but changes that have been recommended
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Old December 1st, 2009, 06:38 PM
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Flints shirt is to square (forgot to mention that, sorry lol)
Decent attempt at varying up the sisters looks i guess lol.
There should be more hair on the right side of garys head.
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Old December 2nd, 2009, 04:53 PM
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Flints shirt is to square (forgot to mention that, sorry lol)
Decent attempt at varying up the sisters looks i guess lol.
There should be more hair on the right side of garys head.
Ye shall be happy with that Flint. So says teh BaconBoy

Yay Sensational Sisters are lol capable

In all seriousness, I agree about Gary, but IDK how to do that without it looking to much more like the games...
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Old December 2nd, 2009, 07:18 PM
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Well, if you made it from scratch, it should. It's not going to look exactly liek the games. Just give it a try man.
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Old December 3rd, 2009, 12:42 PM
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FEAR MY GARY! Grr...
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Old December 5th, 2009, 09:36 AM
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BUMP-DATE: GARY CRIT PLEASE NOW!! Or not, I guess, whatever...

Also, I redid the Ash with a flipped cap. So, what'd you think?

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Old December 5th, 2009, 12:04 PM
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You didn't change gary much. You still need to add hair on the right side more.
Ash looks good
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Old December 5th, 2009, 12:17 PM
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You, my friend are crazy... You're right though, I didn't change much, but look @ the difference? There's a hole lot.



Right? Or am I teh delusional one??? Hehehehe
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Old December 5th, 2009, 12:50 PM
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Yeah, i already looked at it in paint. You liek moved 2 spikes. Which didn't add to the hair at all.
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Old December 5th, 2009, 01:05 PM
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No! Well, No!

Different...

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Old December 5th, 2009, 01:09 PM
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Yes, you moved some spikes over. No big deal.
I looked at them a few days ago in paint, there's no need for you to show me lol.
Add more hair, don;t jsut change spikes around
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Old December 5th, 2009, 01:11 PM
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Well... Could you explain what you mean more? Like with a picture or something? Plus, it looks like he has more hair....
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Old December 6th, 2009, 08:13 AM
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In honor of her re-appearance, Jessiebelle!



And , also becuase I can and I feel like it.... Mr. Charles Goodshow!

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