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Old November 27th, 2011, 05:50 PM
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Introduction

Long ago, in a world of monsters and heroes, one boy, clad in a green hat and tunic, used a legendary sword and a magical ocarina to destroy the evil that was plaguing that world and all its inhabitants. That boy's adventures gave him recognition, not only as a hero, but as a legend as well. Aided by a mysterious princess, that boy would save the world a second time, this time from an evil entity known as Majora. From then on, every time an evil force threatened that world's safety, a boy in a green hat and tunic would save the people. For ages, peace would exist amongst the inhabitants of that magical world.

This is not that world.

Plot

In a parralel universe to the one described above, the land of Hyrule was darkened by the Gerudo Ganondorf. A young boy named Link attempted to defeat Ganondorf using the Master Sword and the Ocarina of Time. However, after a final, epic battle, Ganondorf triumphed over Link, killing the young boy and destroying the magical ocarina. Finally, Ganondorf laid greedy eyes on the powerful Master Sword that the boy wielded. Wishing to have that power for himself, that King of Thieves corrupted the sword, turning its blue hilt a blood red, and darkening its shining silver blade til it was blacker than night.

Using his now immense powers, Ganondorf named himself Grand Emporer of Hyrule, and inslaved all that country's denizens. For generations, Ganondorf opressed the people of Hyrule, slowly destroying the very land he so badly wished to rule. As was to be expected, there was one small resistance force, consisting of all the members of the dwindling Sheikah race. Though this valiant group of ninjas tried their hardest, Ganondorf easily defeated them, leaving none alive.

Now, it came to pass that the damage on Hyrule was so great, it affected the Twilight realm that existed withing Hyrule. The inhabitants of this Twilight realm, a peculiar race known as the Twili, grew tired of watching the people of Hyrule suffer, so Midna, their leader, assembled an army of Twili to destroy Ganondorf. Wielding the mighty Twilight Sword, Midna fought Ganondorf one on one in the Dark Lord's castle in Hyrule, while the Twili army destroys the monsters that serve as Ganondorf's servants. Eventually, Midna manages to defeat Ganondorf, although she is unable to kill him. So she threw the Dark Lord into the fiery pits of Death Mountain, convinced that not even one as powerful as Ganondorf could survive it.

After these events, the Twili, succesful in their campaign of defeating Ganondorf's servants, find the heir to Princess Zelda: a young thief living in Hyrule Castle town named Tetra. After placing young Tetra on the throne, the Twili depart, content that the land of Hyrule has been delivered from the dark plague that hung over their heads for so long. Where they went has ever been a mystery, but most assume that they returned to their beloved Twilight realm.

Five hundred years passed. The peace still held fast in Hyrule; however, major changes had occured. Not long after Ganondorf's defeat, the Sky Spirit Valoo came to Hyrule, who for some reason decided to reside at Lake Hylia for a time. This caused all the fish-like Zora who touched the spirit to grow wings and a beak. These bird-like peoples, now called Rito, desired to leave Lake Hylia, and with Valoo, went to live on Death Mountain with the Gorons. Similar changes where taking place in the Kokiri forests, where an unknown entity was transforming some of the child-like Kokiri into a strange race known as Koroks. The Koroks remained in Kokiri forest with the Kokiri, and they are friendly with one another as they search for the being that transformed them.

However, an ominous feeling is spreading throughout Hyrule. The clouds grow dark, and the wind is still. Fearing that the feeling is being caused by the return of Ganondorf, the current princess Zelda has summoned to Hyrule Castle the greatest warriors of each of the seven races in Hyrule, hoping that together, they may stop the rising evil before it becomes a serious threat.

You

You are one of the seven warriors summoned by Princess Zelda. There can only be one player per race.

The Races

Hylians - Hylians are an elf-like race who first established an ordered civilization in Hyrule. Physically, Hylians resemble humans, and the only difference appearance-wise between them are the Hylains' long, elf-like ears that supposedly enable them to hear special messages. Hylians are frequently referred to as humans, indicating that they are considered a sub-race of humans. They live in mainly Hyrule Castle Town.

Kokiri - They are a cautious, child-like and secretive race native to Kokiri Forest. The Kokiri believe that they will die if they leave Kokiri Forest, and therefore, they never leave the safe haven and know nothing about the outside world. Some of them have become Koroks.

Gorons - Gorons are a humanoid, rock-eating race that dwell in the mountains. Despite their hulking appearance, Gorons are a relatively peaceful species. They are usually considered, perhaps superficially, to be of low intelligence. They live on Death Mountain.

Zora - Zoras are aquatic, blue-skinned humanoid creatures. They are incredibly skilled natural swimmers. The appearance of Zoras can vary greatly; some are large and round, while others are slender and small. Many Zoras have become Rito. The Zoras live in the Zora's Domain.

Rito - The Rito, also known as the Bird-people, are a race of bird-like humanoids. No Rito is born with wings, and instead, must visit the tribes' guardian, the great Sky Spirit, Valoo, to receive one of his scales which enables them to grow wings. It is a coming of age ceremony of the Rito, to journey to the great Valoo to receive their scale. Children without wings are called Fledglings. They were once Zoras, and live on Death Mountain.

Koroks - Koroks have small bodies that are about the size of a young human child. These bodies appear to be made of wood, and their faces are marked by what are either leaf-like structures or masks of varying colors, shapes, and sizes. Due to their light frame, they can easily fly with the assistance of a special sprout on the tops of their heads that is used like a helicopter's dorsal propeller, though they are only capable of flying for a short period of time. They were once Kokiri, and live with the Kokiri in Kokirir Forest.

Gerudo - They are a reclusive tribe of thieves that consists entirely of women; however, every hundred years, a man who is destined to be their king is born. They have dark tanned skin, golden eyes and red hair. Their culture is extremely different from that of the Hylian race, and it is likely that their societies developed very independently of each other. Those born into Gerudo society typically have little respect for the Hylian people, and the only men they ever truly revere are the males born into their tribe every hundred years. They live in Gerudo's Valley.

Other Tribes include the Twili and the Sheikah.


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Hyrule Field - Hyrule Field is a large, open field situated in the middle of Hyrule. Most other regions of Hyrule can be accessed from Hyrule Field.

Hyrule Castle Town - It is an urban settlement, located within the same fortress as Hyrule Castle, which serves as the economical and cultural center of Hyrule.



Death Mountain - A huge mountain or mountain range that is the highest geographical point of Hyrule, Death Mountain has become a well known location within the series, and serves as the homeland of the proud Goron race.



Lake Hylia - It is the largest body of water in Hyrule, usually fed by a river that has its source in the mountains.



Zora's Domain - Zora's Domain is located in eastern Hyrule, behind the Sleepless Waterfall, the source of Zora's River. The Zora who dwell here are a secluded race, only allowing those who know "Zelda's Lullaby" — generally only taught to members of the Royal Family of Hyrule — to pass through the waterfall and into their Domain. However, Zora's Domain can also be entered through an underwater tunnel in Lake Hylia.



Gerudo's Valley - This valley is located to the west of Hyrule Field and is divided by a large chasm, at the bottom of which lies Zora's River, whose waters flow to Lake Hylia. To the west of the valley lies the Gerudo Fortress.



Lost Woods - This mysterious, forested region of Hyrule is typically a maze-like forest that requires one to navigate one's way through it by a variety of means. It is believed that the many different areas by this name are not one and the same. However, it is possible that they are somehow interconnected.

Rules:
  • NO GODMODDING. Bunnying is okay, but only if you have the player's permission.
  • NO ONE LINERS. I cannot tell you how much I HATE short posts. I realize this is an action RP, and during fights it's hard to post more than a few lines, but try to get at least four sentences down every time, please.
  • Respect the other RPers.
  • Check all grammar and spelling before posting, please.
  • Have fun. Please.
  • I like to hear if you have any problems with this RP, or ideas to make this RP better. If you have any, feel free to PM/VM me.
  • Oh yeah. BE ACTIVE. The number one thing that kills RPs is one person going inactive when they are important to the plot. Post once a week, please. If you go a week without posting, I will send you a warning; two weeks, and you'll be kicked from the RP. ToT
  • To let me know you have read the rules, make your password: "Triumph Forks".
SU form






Spoiler:
Name: Your character's name.

Age: How old is your character? Should be
older than 13.

Race: Either Goron, Hylian, Zora, Rito, Gerudo,
or Korok.

Appearance: What does your character look like?
One paragraph min, no pictures, please.

Personality: What is your character like? One
paragraph min, be specific!

History: What has happened in your character's
life before Princess Zelda's summonings? Two paragraphs, min.

Password: What could this be for? Hmm?

Other: Anything else you want us to know about
your character? Optional.

RP Sample: Make this what happens to your
character on their trip to Hyrule Castle? At least a good, thick paragraph.


Accepted Players

Spoiler:
1. Ella Cassier (Fuyu) - Rito
2. Seigefried Wagner (Rakiri) - Hylian
3. Mika (Nideous) - Kokiri
4. Goron - OPEN
5. Korok - OPEN
6. Marek Lygato (Xulek) - Gerudo
7. Hana Aquito (Juniebug90) - Zora





Note: I will be a player of important NPCs, such as Zelda. I will have a SU up soon, though, but I will not count towards the maximum number of seven people.




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Old November 29th, 2011, 09:37 AM
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Name: Elia Cassier
Age: 16
Race: Rito

Appearance: Elia is an adult by Rito standards but she happily bears a youthful figure. She is tiny, more like a fairy than an angel, about 4'3" and the weight of air. Her hair is long and white, like her wings. The middle part of her hair is tied in a loose ponytail with a blue ribbon. . Elsie's skin is a light color, like sand. She cares little for her appearance yet somehow almost always looks tidy, except for the few times her wavy hair sticks up. Her eyes are large and red, sometimes covered by her long bangs. Her beak is smaller than most and a dull yellow.

Elia's nails are neatly filed and glazed over. She doesn't pay any attention to them other than that. Her clothes are a long sleeved white dress, swirls embroidering the edges. She carries a small fannypack with her lyre and a quiver on her back. Because it gets cold, and all story characters can get cold, Elsie has black leggings on under the dress. She also wears grey boots because flying is really uncomfortable for the feet after a while.

Personality: Elia's a nice girl. She helps without asking, plays with animals, and enjoys her work on helping humans. She gets angry in the oddest ways such as pouting and glaring at people while tapping her foot. Yes she acts ten and thinks most men are silly in the head. Poor lass. It is hard to make her angry though, mostly because she's played too many adventure games and adventurers always lose when they give in to anger. Elia is incredibly oblivious to the world around her. She knows there's something going on but it doesn't click that she's involved in the bigger picture. It's similar to her original personality only much less carefree and a lot more oblivious, as children are.

Elia loves to tell stories and can make up the most fascinating worlds, exciting most of her audience. She is a very enthusiastic and apt storyteller. The only thing she loves more is music. She mostly sings psalms and music from prayerbooks but she'll sing anything if she hears it. Chances are she'll be found under a tree, daydreaming or playing. Her innocence is also incredibly worrying. Rito believe that if she is exposed too much to the reality of violence and death, it will trigger her memories coming back and she won't be able to complete daily tasks. So she is consistently told that the world is a game. Elia literally believes that she's a player in a game in daily life. Now the game isn't always fun but.. She has a very limited view of reality because of that and her sister can't help but wonder what will happen when she does remember.

History: Elia is the second and last child in her family, a wonderful accident that no one is quite sure what to do with. She was not an overly rambunctious fledgeling but following her sister around, who was rambunctious, well that just spelled disaster didn't it? Luckily they didn't have their wings or it could have ended awfully. Their parents tried to keep them in line but her father was a reknown mail carrier and their mother never had the strongest of wings. So she kept them away from Valoo's roost as best as she could. Unfortunately ten-year-olds are too curious for their own good. Her sister, now thirteen, had gotten her scale and wings. So Elia wanted to see her fly. They went out to the edges of Death Mountain, close to where the Gorons lived. For a while, everything seemed fine, her sister was practically above the clouds!

Naturally, it didn't last long. That area of the mountain was known for rock slides due to fast winds. Elia didn't notice it, having pulled out a book. But her sister did and she tried to warn her, slightly too late. Elia attempted to escape, only to get caught in a crevice while the rocks rolled past. Her sister made them go looking for her and found her unconscious. When she awoke, Elia had no memory of the event, only of that morning when they went out to play a game. It did leave her with a terrible fear of falling from the sky while flying and claustrophobia. Her mother sent her to be an attendant for Valoo not long afterward, and she's been apprenticing for the past four years, having gotten her scale only recently. The Rito have been in training to fight since young, the air being a dangerous place to fly at times. She is most certainly not the best of the group, but she's the best that's available at the moment. Knives are a dangerous thing.

Password: Triumph Forks

Other: Elia plays a lyre when she's not reading.

RP Sample:

Elia was sitting on the roof when her mother came outside that morning. The roof was comfy and she could see Daddy up in the sky when she did. HEr mother shook her head, noticing the loose way her fingers curled around the lyre on her lap. "Elia? It's time to go." Her mother's brown-speckled wings shook underneath the sleeves of her shirt as her daughter yawned innocently, rising to her feet and climbing down. THe girl leapt to land next to her, beaming. The woman's face, lined with anxiety, lightened. "This is your first big quest Elia. Do your best all right?" It was a game for Elia, an adventure that always ended with her safe in her mother's arms. If that wasn't how it was... the woman didn't know what would happen. She wasn't sure she wanted to find out.

"Okay Mom! Don't worry I'll make you guys proud!" Her daughter tapped her fannypack where the letter rested. Zelda was a princess and the princess needed her! Elia knew better than to let her down. She turned toward the edge of the mountain side where they live. It wasn't hard for Rito to simply take off but Elia felt safer running it first. Freefall was scary. She took off, hurrying as fast as her little legs could take her. Don't look down, she reminded herself, staring straight at the clouds as she jumped, spreading her wings and soaring in a few circles around the house. Ascending toward the clouds, Elia laughed happily, trying to avoid losing anything. She banked to the left and took off, diving away from the thin air and trying to say hi to the Gorons she passed by. "Hello!"

Reaching the lowest point of the MOuntain, she glimpsed Hyrule Castle! "WOW!" Elia gasped happily. "Just like in the books! Ah- Woah!" A Deku seed went flying toward her head and she hurried on, really not wanting to get hit. She was gonna be in a game, she was gonna be in a big adventure! She was gonna be a story hero! Wahoo! Elia couldn't wait!

Letting out a wild whoop, she took off again, eager to soar to the top of the towers.
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Old November 29th, 2011, 09:58 AM
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I'd like a reservation please for the Hylian. I'll have a SU ready soon.
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Old November 29th, 2011, 10:06 AM
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Bah... Someone took Rito... Oh well. Could you reserve me a Hylian?

Edit: Feh, got ninja'd... Fine, Kokiri for me please.
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Old November 29th, 2011, 10:32 AM
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Yesssss! LoZ for the win!

Reserve me for Zora please.
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Old November 29th, 2011, 01:49 PM
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Fuyu, Rakiri, Nideous, and Wymsical are all reserved!
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Old November 29th, 2011, 03:23 PM
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Ok, this post is going to have my SU in it, and I'll notify you when I'm done. :D This RP is going to be fun.

Name: Mika

Age: She appears about twelve, but she is definately older than that. Her real age is unknown, as she has forgotten it.

Race: Kokiri

Appearance: What does your character look like?
One paragraph min, no pictures, please.

Mika stands at about three feet tall. She's a bit shorter than many of the Kokiri, and is a lot skinnier than most. Her lithe frame holds lean, well toned muscles. She has light green hair that she keeps cut at her shoulder. Her hair is straight, and very thick as it hangs. Her eyes are a bright green, and seem to glow in the forest light. Her face is usually lit up with a mischievious grin. Her clothing is a drab green dress that is very loose around her legs, allowing her to move freely. Her dress has no sleeves, leaving her pale arms exposed. She wears a dark brown belt around her waist, which has her ocarina and her slingshot on it, as well as her pellet pouch. She wears a Kokiri Sword on her left hip. On her left arm is a small wooden shield she made herself. Her feet are covered by soft leather boots.

Personality: What is your character like? One
paragraph min, be specific!

Mika is a very happy person. She is almost always smiling, and having fun. Most everything is a big game for her, and she always wins. She is a prankster, often finding a place to hide and firing her Slingshot at people or stealing small valuables. She is very bold, fearlessly venturing into the Lost Woods by herself to train and practice her music. She is the best warrior in the Kokiri, and often regards herself as a protector of sorts, driving people away when they enter and don't belong, usually without even showing her face. She is often willful, and prone to get angry if things don't go her way. The only thing that calms her down most of the time is playing her ocarina. She's adventurous, and wants to explore as far as she can. She also loves to fight, though it's more of a game than a battle. She hardly ever takes anything seriously, but she has a genuine desire to help out... Most of the time.

History: What has happened in your character's
life before Princess Zelda's summonings? Two paragraphs, min.

Mika lived in Kokiri Forest her whole life. She is actually one of the younger Kokiri, and wasn't even alive when Link fought Ganon ages ago. She wandered the forest, her life a peaceful one. She used her trusty slingshot to keep the woodland creatures from attacking her. So she explored the forest, learning as many of it's secrets as she could. One day, she met a Skull Kid. She and the Skull Kid became friends, and would often play together, pulling odd pranks on the others. Mika eventually found, and stole, an old sword. This marked the start of her role as a guardian of the forest.

Mika trained hard everyday, thinking it was just another game to her. She could often be found training skills. She'd usually fight some of the monsters, neglecting her friend Skull Kid, who got jealous of this. He tricked her into an old part of he forest that was rather dangerous as a prank, and she ended up in a fight against a Stalfos. She fought hard as her Fairy companion, Sprite, went in search of help. Sprite found a shield for her, and brought it back, and she used it to help her drive off the Stalfos that was attacking her and Skull Kid. From that moment on, Skull Kid was ok with her practicing her swordsmanship.

A few years later, someone entered her forest. This person did not belong, and she didn't want him there. So she and Skull Kid drove him out, shooting pellets and seeds at him and getting him lost in the forest again until he finally got fed up with it. He threw a letter onto a stomp and took off. Naturally curious, Mika went over and looked at it. She saw that it was from the Princess asking for warriors. Knowing that she was the strongest Kokiri, she set off without a word to anyone.

Password: Got to love them Triumph Forks

Other: Anything else you want us to know about
your character? Optional.

As all Kokiri do, Mika has a fairy companion named Sprite. Sprite is a bit of a worrier, and disaproves of Mika's impish nature, but he is always there wanting to protect her and guide her with his useful information. Too bad he can't fight and Mika rarely listens to him.

RP Sample: Make this what happens to your
character on their trip to Hyrule Castle? At least a good, thick paragraph.

Mika stood still. One more step. That's all it would take. One more step. She shuddered. She wondered if she really would die from this. She hoped not.

"Come on Mika! You can do it!" Sprite said as he floated in front of her. Easy for him to say. He wasn't the one that was going to die if he left the forest... Which he had already. He was hovering in frnt of her, not too far from her. The seconds lengthened to minutes and she was still standing there. And where was Skull Kid? He had promised to be here too. She soon discovered where he was when she was roughly shoved to the dirt. She was on her feet instantly, drawing her sword and pointing it at him.

"Oy! Don't shove me like that!" Mika snarled as she stood next to Sprite, who was oddly silent, while Skull Kid laughed at her.

"Mika..." Sprite said. Mika looked at her Fairy companion. Then it hit her. She was out of the forest. She grinned widely and began laughing with Skull Kid, prancing in and out of the border. When she pranced in next to Skull Kid, he pulled her into a tight hug.

"I'll miss you!" he said as he placed an Ocarino in her hands. She looked don at the unadorned instrument and nodded. Skull Kid loved his ocarina. Sure, he had been teaching her how to play, as well as making her one, but this was his! She looked at him questioningly and he grinned.

"That one is yours! That's what took me so long! I was finishing it for you! Come back and play with me again! I'll be waiting for you!" he called out. Mika nodded and hugged him tightly. After a moment, they realised each other and Mika took a few steps back.

"I'll be back soon! Give the letter to the Great Deku Tree!" Mika said, handing Skull Kid the letter they had... Found, as well as a note of her own. Skull Kid nodded and disappeared into the trees. Mika nodded to herself and set off through the plains. She reached Castle Town by nightfall, and looked around in wonder. She had never seen so many people before. It was amasing!All kinds of odd looking people were about. She made her way to the castle, trying not to make Sprite nag at her. She didn't want to be late... That would make Sprite become annoying.
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Old November 29th, 2011, 09:27 PM
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Could you reserve me for the Goron spot please?

Name: Gogrigon

Age:60

Race: Goron

Appearance: What does your character look like?
One paragraph min, no pictures, please.

Personality: What is your character like? One
paragraph min, be specific!

History: What has happened in your character's
life before Princess Zelda's summonings? Two paragraphs, min.

Password: What could this be for? Hmm?

Other: Anything else you want us to know about
your character? Optional.

RP Sample: Make this what happens to your
character on their trip to Hyrule Castle? At least a good, thick paragraph.
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Old November 30th, 2011, 10:06 AM
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Age: 22
Gender: Male
Nature: Relaxed
Name: Merrick Malifique

Age: 19

Race: Zora

Appearance:

-Physical Appearance-

Merrick Malifique's scales are mainly bright blue in color, but mixed in with some deep green here and there, especially around the tips of his fins, his forehead and his hands and wrists up to his elbows. His gills are located on his hips, three of them in total. He is quite slender, making him a champion at swimming and underwater acrobatics, which he just loves. This, however, makes Merrick's dorsal fin extending from his head quite short, shorter than most. He likes it that way though, says if it's too long it would just interfere with the acrobatics. While others like their dorsal fins long, as it is a sign of experience, Merrick prefers his short.
As with most Zora, Merrick is beautifully adorned with dots, although blue instead of white, across his dorsal fin and his forehead. A straight line leading from the tip of his dorsal fin down to his forehead, and onto his nose, where it ends. Three similar lines of dots all take off from this point, ending on his left cheek and his right cheek.

-Clothing-

Merrick does not wear much clothing. Considering he is a guard at the palace of the Zoras, all he is required to wear is a helmet that covers his entire dorsal fin area and his head, in case of attacks from above. (The guards only guard against under-sea intruders. In case of a land-based attack, these helmets can prevent shrapnel from entering the tender skin of the Zora) It is also notable that he carries his spear wherever he goes. His spear is the classic model for the palace guard, although it may look completely made from coral, it is very sturdy. Able to pierce even the skin of a Goron, they say. Although this is hardly true, it give the spear good use and reputation, as well as the guards who wield it.

Personality: What is your character like? One
paragraph min, be specific!

History: What has happened in your character's
life before Princess Zelda's summonings? Two paragraphs, min.

Password: What could this be for? Hmm?

Other: Anything else you want us to know about
your character? Optional.

RP Sample: Make this what happens to your
character on their trip to Hyrule Castle? At least a good, thick paragraph.
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Old November 30th, 2011, 10:54 AM
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Old November 30th, 2011, 02:59 PM
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@ Nideous: Looks good so far! I'm excited to see your SU when it's done!

@Wymsical: Wow, really good appearance! I'm expecting good things when you finish your SU! No pressure, though. XD

@Yagerbomb: Very well, you are reserved!

@Genevieve: You are also reserved!

@ Everyone: Just as a note, and I apologize that I didn't mention this sooner, but at some point in the RP, each player character will recieve a special instrument. Also, maybe a weapon, I'm not quite sure yet. But it's OK for now for your character to have an instrument before the special one. Just know that you might have two instruments.
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Thanks, bro. Honestly I'm disappointed with the appearance. I coulda done better. Meh, that's life for ya. Ya ya, no pressure :D

An instrument? I think I'll just stick to the spear now. lol
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Oh, I didn't know that. But I guess you know which instrument I would like. XD And thanks. I can't wait to to finish it. XD I hope I get accepted.
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Name: Siegfried Wagnar
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Race: Hylian

Appearance:
Siegfried carries himself a certain level of regal upbringing. Considered handsome by his peers, Siegfried packs youthful energy with a sense of practicality. Standing at about 5"11, Siegfried has an a rather slim figure. While athletic and toned, Siegfried is not a walking tank of a muscle. Instead, he relies on guile, agility and a surprising amount of strength to overcome his enemies.

Siegfried has a full head of blonde hair that is rather long with no sense of style. Instead the hair is rather unkempt and untamed, giving Siegfried a wild yet surprisingly natural look. Peering through his unkempt hair, are a pair of light blue eyes. Siegfried's eyes are a fair size and quite expressive. People often comment that his eyes are warm and inviting, shining in the natural light. Siegfried's face is quite thin with rosy cheeks, giving him an innocent childish look. The face is free of impurities and any disfiguring marks. His nose is small and thin as well, in line with his general facial features. He also has thin lips and a rather small chin considering the fact his face is quite long. The one thing of note is a single silver loop piercing in his left ear.

Siegfried's outfit suits that of an adventuring noble above all else. He favors his obviously expensive red long sleeved shirt with gold accents and buckle on his chest. Over this, Siegfried wears a blue jacket with gold buttons. Black pants cover his legs with a brown leather belt with several utility pockets for item holding. He wears fine, expensive, durable leather gauntlets and boots. A signature golden scarf is worn around his neck, not only for personal sense of style but also to keep him warm in the colder environments of the north. All his clothing carries a sense of regal status, while also being tactically effective. Siegfried carries his steel broad sword on his back in an elaborate sheath, along with the standard Hylian shield. He carries his other tools on his belt and leather bag that he brings with him everywhere, resembling a vagabond above all else.

Personality:
Siegfried makes a good impression, possibly because he embodies some of the most respectable qualities one could find in a person. Aspiring to be a true knight, Siegfried carries himself with a noble aura that guides his life with chivalry and respect. Siegfried is committed to be the best man he can be and does with unrivaled conviction. Influenced greatly by the stories of old, Siegfried is brave, courageous and dreams of saving the land of Hyrule one good deed at a time. He even hopes to marry the damsel in distress (and personally hopes it is the princess herself).

Because of his knightly spirit, Siegfried is honorable, compassionate, trustworthy and good natured. Siegfried tells the truth, honors his word, helps those in need, stands against injustice and punishes those who seek to destroy the peace and harmony he desires. As to be expected, Siegfried has a strong moral character, taking the best course of action for the betterment of the society around him. He always works towards the greater good, rarely tending to his own self interests. Siegfried protects the weak and opposes the strong, unless their intentions are just from his perspective.

Siegfried values law and order, firmly believing that laws are necessary to keep a society morally conscious and good. Should a society recognize and follow the laws enacted by the government, order will be maintained and life will be peaceful. Peace brings progress and progress is necessary for a society to be pure. He sees as laws as a necessary to promote the welfare of all members of a society, protect their well being and guaranteeing a fair justice system. In this respect, he will follow the laws of foreign systems, recognizing that each society has its own harmony to maintain. This being said, Siegfried will willingly break the law if he feels the law is unjust or if the circumstances call for Siegfried to intervene on the behalf of true " justice" that he stands for. To this end, Siegfried upholds his variation of justice called "moral justice" in which the most morally good actions are the most justified.

He also values loyalty, never breaking an oath and expecting others to do the same. Carrying himself with a strict guideline, He remains loyal to any group he is associated with working towards the goals of said group with conviction (though he is not willingly to take morally questionable actions to achieve them). In these groups, he works for the betterment of the group not willing to impede progress on a personal level. He wishes to succeed and help his allies, therefore it is fair to say he will never leave a man behind. In groups, he often steps up as leader and tries to lead to the best of his ability. He does recognize, however, that his strict moral convictions can be abrasive and that compromise is a necessary option, though he dislikes having to do so firmly believing that his way is the best way. Betrayal is a sin and he strongly dislikes those that work for their own self interest. He will not purse vengeance for personal crimes but will attempt to punish those who cross them, often in creative ways if possible. The punishment must fit the crime in Siegfried's mind.

Adaptable, calculating, and intelligent Siegfried uses his natural talents to overcome the various situations he is presented with. Avid to continue his success, Siegfried hones his talents in training and practice. He is adventurous, and actively seeks out adventure in the outside world. He enjoys a challenge and continues to test himself whenever possible. Despite these ambitions, Siegfried lacks true outwardly experience and the wisdom to apply these talents. New situations sometimes stump him and he rarely thinks outside the box, relying on conservative academic knowledge. Siegfried has the tendency to over think things and often misses simple solutions.

Despite this rough strict description of Siegfried, his social interaction with the outside world may say otherwise. Siegfried follows the principle of treating others like you want to be treated. He treats people with respect, kindness and understanding, giving everyone a fair chance to speak their mind. That being said, he can be incredibly stubborn and does not enjoy when people disagree with them. He recognizes authority, but does not hesitate to stand against it when he conflicts with his own principles. He speaks his mind and is very vocal, being brash at times. This can be attributed to Siegfried's immaturity, which often gets him in trouble. Pranks, innocent jokes and displays of joy are all too common with Siegfried which can be attributed to him attempting to keep things from getting overly stressful or serious. Still young, he wants life to be enjoyable for all which may explain his strong desire for peace. Though, these jokes are often poorly received.

Siegfried remains humble at all times, never boasting though he remains ambitious nonetheless. Usually calm, Siegfried does his best to remain in control of his emotions. Regardless, he does get caught up in the heat of the moment which causes his emotions to get out of hand. When things go wrong, for example, he is the first to blame himself, believing that if he was stronger that the problem could be avoided. Anger will guide his courage from transforming into recklessness which endangers him and his allies. Siegfried is therefore a hinderance in times of emotional stress.

This goes hand in hand with his childlike innocence. In the gap between a boy and a man, Siegfried is beginning to learn many things and therefore displays a lack of knowledge on many topics. Immature in social interaction (outside of basic respect and understanding), Siegfried is slow to develop close bonds with people and has few friends and people he can truly trust (expecting many to take advantage of him, which is a common trend). This often leads him walking into awkward situations when he attempts to talk to people as he is excessively shy outside of professional dealings. Innocence is often a word to describe Siegfried as he does poorly in romantic situations, lacking "knowledge" of women and any such humor surrounding such a topic will go over his head. Siegfried is also excessively naive, seeing the good in everyone and is willing to give people several chances to redeem themselves. This has lead him being taken advantage of several times in the past. Therefore, he despises those betray others above all else. Siegfried is also a sheep (or a dog as he prefers to be called), following orders almost too well particularly from those in the government. This would explain why he loves to be leader, but is also such a poor one lacking the knowledge to do so. A kid with lots of power is what his mentors called him.

Siegfried still lives in his fantasy world of legends and story, which has bestowed a very uneducated view of the world (though he does have basic knowledge of the different societies). He has an idealized perspective of Hyrule and is relatively oblivious to societal problems, such as social inequity. As such, one could call him a blank slate that is waiting to be written on.

Siegfried is a young, earnest man with his heart in the right place with an ambition to help the world a better place, but his own innocence keeps him from being the man would can truly make a difference.

History:
Siegfried was the third child to Richard and Elizabeth Wagnar, and became a fine noble house with a legacy of serving the crown faithfully following the restoration of the throne following Ganon's defeat 500 years ago. Therefore, Siegfried was born into a family with high expectations to serve the royal family with zeal comparable to that of a religious cult. Fortunately for him, however, those standards were lax in comparison to that of his older siblings.

The third child and second in succession for the family title, Siegfried spent most of his life in, Harken, his older brother's shadow. Despite this, his early life was peaceful and serene. He remained in the richest district in the Castle Town, received a top-notch education, and trained in the art of warfare by the finest instructors. While sheltered, Siegfried's early life was something to be envied. Each and every day was a strenuous process to become the best knight possible. To this end, he followed in his brother's footsteps. Harken, 10 years his senior, became his tutor was Siegfried when he entered his teens and his education intensified. They spent many hours together and a close brotherly bond grew between the two. The fact that Siegfried learned from what of the best Hylian Knights was just an extra bonus for the young as an admiration for each other's skills developed, though Siegfried never quite caught up with his brother. Siegfried, not being selfish, even passed on his knowledge to his younger brother, Roland, as Roland became of age in the latter years of Siegfried's training. The biggest separation between these three brothers was Siegfried's fascinations with the stories of old. Harken was too much of a realist to believe them while Roland was wrapped up in his studies of the arts and sciences. Siegfried became a fantasy night, engrossed in the legends of Hyrule.

When Siegfried turned 16, his father experienced the sudden onset of sickness. While he eventually recovered, Richard resigned his position as head of the house to his son Harken, who became of the youngest noblemen of the era. Siegfried, as a result, lost one of his closest friends as Harken became engrossed in his newfound rule as the head of the house even with the sickly Richard serving as Harken's steward. Siegfried became a long process of educating himself alone usually with his mother's assistance and used training sessions with Roland to refine the skills he developed with Harken. The close bonds of the Wagnar family were further strained when Siegfried's sisters were married away to other noblemen for the sake of expanding the Wagnar influence. Losing the connections that kept him within the Wagnar manor, Siegfried decided to leave home as well, becoming a wandering hero (like the stories he read as a child) for a few years before returning as a man ready to become a knight.

At the age of 17, Siegfried officially set out of the Castle Town and wandered the land of Hyrule. He experienced a great culture shock as the land was far different than he imagined he would experience. His education exposed him to these cultures but to witness the world firsthand was far different than he would imagine. He worked a number of odd jobs, helping various people and families in simple ways. It was less stimulating than he had hoped, but Siegfried found ways to improve himself physically, mentally and emotionally becoming a stronger and better person through his deeds. He fought a few beasts in his travels, but nothing worth noting in the legends of Siegfried. His travels lasted for a little more than a year and brought him to a number of regions within Hyrule. Unable to reach every region, such as Zora's Domain, he had to cut his travels short and returned to Castle Town a little before 19th Birthday.

He enlisted in the Hylian military with the aspirations of becoming a Hylian Knight. Following orders obediently, Siegfried did more than go through the motions; he went to the next level. Anywhere he went, crime dropped. In every training session, he defeated his superiors. In every facet of his profession, he emerged as the best man in military.

A little after his 19th birthday, Siegfried earned the rank of Hylian Knight becoming one of the youngest knights in service to the crown. Since then, he freely wandered all of Hyrule, upholding the law of the kingdom as well as continuing his crusade to do good.

Password: My least favorite part of Legend of Zelda: The Windwaker was finding the Triumph Forks.

Other:
Siegfried typically refrains from wearing armor as he feels it impedes movement as well as creating an intimidating appearance. In his experience, people respond to him without the armor. That being said, he wears his shield with great pride.

Siegfried tends to avoid going to bars despite his brother's intention to get his brother drunk.

Siegfried loves food and enjoys dining in fanciful places.

Siegfried typically carries a number of weapons on him including: a steel broad sword, a well made Bow (with an opulent quiver to accompany it), and a pair of hunting knives. The sword, bow, shield and quiver rest on his back with the pair of hunting knives rest on his thighs with one knife sitting in holsters wrapped around his legs. He has also a utility belt with various tools such as keys, lock picks, a sling and rocks (for projectiles and distractions), a number of other small hand tools.

Siegfried is a self proclaimed ladies man and is known to flirt, though his own lack of speech craft makes it difficult for him to do so.

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Home. Siegfried rarely found himself here these days. Traveling, working, being out there in the wild fields of Hyrule and being with the peoples of this beautiful land, that is what Siegfried had considered his new home. Ever since he was 17, Siegfried was in and out the door, to the point of almost not considering himself a member of the family. It was a grim reality, but one he was coming to terms with. After becoming a knight, it became easier as he would find himself reporting to his superiors from time to time. This was a report of a different kind…one of greater importance.

Up until yesterday, Siegfried found himself in Lake Hylia, trying to keep order in the rural region. It was quite easy, as the population was quite low. Rather suddenly, a messenger came with an important notice for him. It was a letter, from the Princess, that he was to come to her for an important mission. He didn't read too much into it, and instead immediately left his post. A day's ride later, Siegfried had arrived in the Castle Town, shortly before the curfew. He had little choice but to rest at home for the night, getting his first good sleep in weeks.

When he awoke in the morning, Siegfried resumed his morning rituals like the older days. Mother and father discussed issues amongst themselves, Harken deeply involved. Roland would pester him with questions about his Knightly duties, trying to access whether or not he should become a knight or a scholar. His youngest sister was being helped with eating by the maids, as she was being difficult as usual. His two other sisters were absent. One lived in Kakariko Village, while the other lived on the other side of the district. Therefore it was difficult to keep a regular correspondence with them. Siegfried saw them from time to time to keep in contact. Outside of Harken and Roland, he enjoyed the closest relationship them due to similarities in age. His mother and father were too closely invested in politics and priming him for becoming a strong noble to lead the Wagnar family.

Siegfried finished his meal first: "Thanks for the meal. I apologize but I must depart early today. Thank you mother and father for tending to my needs last night. I had no intention of inconveniencing you." Siegfried said this with a formal bow as if his parents were strangers.

"No need for the formalities, Siegfried," said father. Harken nodding because of the piece of bread still sitting his mouth. He forced down rather quickly.

"You will be always welcome here, brother. Tell me what is the rush. I was hoping you could spend the day in town with us. We had not seen you for an extended period of time since you became a Knight."

"It's…complicated. I received a message from the Princess. She….needs….me for something," Siegfried struggled to say.

Everyone was dumbfound for a moment. His mother froze in denial, his father coughed, Harken sat stone faced, Roland leaned back and whistled while his little sister laughed like the child she was. "That's impressive. I can safely say I am jealous. One rarely deals with his the princess directly," Harken commended. "Good luck."

Siegfried nodded and made his way to his room. He dressed himself into his standard garb, equipped himself with his weapons and shield. His belt needed to be refitted, having lost some weight. He purchased new hunting knives and had new sheaths made as well, having them freshly delivered last week according to his mother. Equipped and ready to go, Siegfried bid farewell to his family and went outside. The castle was a short walk away. And he was ready.
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Sorry, I'm gonna have ta drop outta this RP. I know it's kinda sudden, but I suddenly lost all interest in Zelda. Sorry. Hope this works out cool.
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@ Wymsical: Sorry to hear it. Well, very well, and good luck with your other RPs.

@ Rakiri: Looks good so far! That's quite a personality!

@ Fuyu: Also looks good. Can't wait for the history!

While the rest of you are finishing up their SUs, I'll toss out a few announcements. First, I believe I have said I might give your character special weapons. Well, I've decided against that, so you get to keep whatever weapon you originally chose. I will still be giving out special instruments, however, but as I said before, it's ok to have two instruments. If anyone is wondering, the instruments that I am using are the Instruments of the Sirens. However, I will not be using them as they are used in Link's Awakening. I'm going to create some songs for each character to learn and play on whichever instrument they recieve.
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I would like a reservation as a Gerudo please if that's alright with yall.
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I finished my SU. I hope it's good enough. :D
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Since the orginal Zora guy dropped out, I shall be the new Zora! (If someone doesn't ninja me)

Name: Hana Aquatico


Age: 16


Race: Zora


Appearance: Hana looks, normally, like a regular Zora. However, since she wears clothing, she wears a dark blue T-shirt with a light blue collar and sleeves, purple shorts, and yellow sandels. She also has a blue amulet on a chain she uses for a necklace, and a purple training headband with two light blue ribbons hanging down that fade into purple when they go up the the main part of the headband. Hana somtimes wears a light blue dress that fades to white on the top when she goes to a special occasion.


Personality: Hana is very kind to everyone (including non-Zoras), and since she is Lulu's decendent, she also L-O-V-E-S to sing. She is also very daring, and her same aged non-Zora brother that they adopted is Skull Kid. She has adapted to play pranks with him, so she is kinda a trickster. However, if you look past that, you can see the young, smiling kind Zora that Hana is. Dispite this, some others mistake her for being only a trickster, dispite Hana being kind very often. She doesn't mind this though, just shrugs it off.


History: Hana was born many many MANY years after the death of Lulu and Mikau. She was their decendent. One day, she heard that the door to Hyrule from Termina was open, and surprisingly, was one of the Zora's selected to go on the journey to meet the Zora's in Hyrule. Hana had always wanted to go there, so she took her mini guitar and set of with the other Zora's chosen to go. She was accepted into the Hyrulian version of Zora Hall, Zora's domain, and soon after, Hana met Skull Kid.

She played with Skull Kid every single day, and took him in as her new little brother. They were both happy, and played instruments everyday, her playing the guitar or singing, and Skull Kid playing a Ocarina he made. Soon, however, Hana's brother went missing, making her feel very upset. However, soon, a letter saying that they needed a strong Zora warrior came, and all the Zora's chose Hana to go, making her feel proud and happy once more. She now takes this as an oportunity to find her lost brother, Skull Kid.


Password: Triumph Forks


Other: Hana is Lula's decendent, and the big sister of Skull Kid, whom she adopted.


RP Sample: Hana leaped over the bridge. Ever since she lost Skull Kid, she had been ancious to start her adventure, as she had been chosen to be the warrior that would represent the Zora tribe, by just a letter arriving from Princess Zelda herself. She knew that this wasn't going to be easy, but Hana HAD to do it. After all, this was Hyrule she lived in, and it could be in danger!

Hana then saw a small paper. When she picked it up, it read "Dear Hana, if you recieve this letter when it is in one piece, then I am alive and well. I am being taken care of, and loved. Do not worry, I am still in Hyrule. I just am somewhere....far from Zora's Domain. Please, I wish to see you again. Love, Skull Kid."

Hana almost burst into tears. At least her little brother was ok, but where was he? There was no envelope, so she couldn't see the return address. Wait...there was an envelope! It layed on the ground, near where she had picked up the letter. The place the letter came from was.....Kokiri Forest. She had something to do though, so if she went to Kokiri forest on her travels, Hana would definetly look for Skull Kid. She then continued towards Hyrule Castle, and where Princess Zelda has called her...
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Hey! Listen! Nideous is accepted!

EDIT: Ninja'd by Juniebug. Ok, let's see here...

I noticed that you used a lot of elements from Majora's Mask in your SU. In the plot, I mentioned that Link is killed by Ganon at what would have been the end of Ocarina of Time. This prevents Link from being able to save Termina, because it seems he was busy being dead. Now, I'm willing to say that because Ganon was never defeated, Termina was never threatened by any evil moons or masks or such. So I will allow you to have a character who was born in Termina. Just note that Link never went there. Also, remember that this RP takes place approximately 517 years after Link was born. Mikau and Lulu would surely have died ages ago.
I only have one more issue with your SU. I, for one, am awful at writing personalities, so I understand how difficult the task can be. But, I have to ask that you make it just a bit longer.

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Uh...GM, I posted a SU as well, ya know. No offense, just weird that I posted right before you, yet you ignored it.
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Name - Marek Lygato
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Age - 17
Race - Gerudo

Personality - Marek is known to be absolutely ruthless when focusing on nearly any task given to him not to mention his reputation to be absolutely fearless and more than willing to charge headfirst into the heat of any battle. Has difficulty showing some emotions like sadness sometimes due to his upbringing from birth but despite his rough exterior he's an excellent sympathizer and finds it child's play to motivate nearly anyone to keep fighting. Also very experienced in combat despite his age and incredibly swift in his movements.

Appearance - Marek tends to wear a dust covered zipped up black trenchcoat with leather gloves and combat boots accompanying torn up gray jeans and a plain wifebeater undershirt underneath the coat. Trait wise Marek is more pale skinned and has relatively shorter hair than most Gerudo he's been used to seeing. Is also known to give off a very nerve wracking feeling about him due to the 2 handed greatsword known as Blightweaver hoisted on his back and the numerous throwing daggers and pair of scimitars concealed within his coat.

Password - Triumph Forks

History - Bought up by his tribe meant to be a soulless killing machine meant to lead the Gerudos to rule all of Hyrule, Marek has fought battle after battle in his people's name slaughtering whatever or whomever he was sent to eliminate, Marek soon left his tribe by age 15 however much to their disapproval, Marek has been on the run from his tribe for 2 years now while making a living as a bounty hunter fighting for whomever paid the most in the end, Marek's reason for abandoning his people however was to find a reason to keep on living himself other than jumping into battle after battle, Marek has yet to find his reason to exist other than killing but still perseveres to this day.

But over the years Marek has grown to hate his kind more and more to the point where he believed that all Gerudo should be extinguished if they can be nothing more than war mongering animals in these times, Marek came to this conclusion after a year straight of random bounty hunting across the land trying to make a living for himself despite how hated he was by other races for his ties to his former clan particularly the Hylians, he has been able to find a place for himself amongst the Gorons though and the Goron home of Death Mountain is the closest thing he calls home right now but he knows like anything else, the life he's made for himself cannot last forever.

Other - Nothing at the moment, will fill in soon enough.

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It was nightfall at this point and the only thing that could be heard from the trail leading up to Death Mountain was the sound of heavy running from an exhausted Goron bleeding profusely from the side of his leg, a dagger wedged tightly in his flank as he kept running in vain from his pursuer. Another series of heavy stomps on the ground accompanied the waddling of the Goron but these steps were faster by far and started to split off from the trail the Goron was going down into and towards a cliff looking down upon the Death Mountain Trail.

The shadow pursuing the Goron then split from the chase almost instantly as it headed to the top of the cliff to pounce on the Goron as it dragged itself within the range of the cliff's view. The shadow timing his jump to near perfection, he lands right on top of the Goron with a dagger in each hand and lands both of them onto the Goron's shoulders as it still finds itself to stand despite the pain and grabs its assailant's right arm and flings the pursuer across the field like a rag doll sprawling on the mountain foothold as the Goron pulls the daggers out of its shoulders before charging towards the assailant.

Seeing the Goron charging in a blind rage now, the assailant takes the giant blade from his back not to combat the charging Goron head on but to slash at the underbelly of the cliff and immediately dashing away as soon as the blade made its mark, causing a rock slide to fall down upon the enraged Goron and crippling it almost entirely as it finds all but its head and one of its feet buried beneath the rubble.

Putting the blade back on its holster now, the assailant walks towards the Goron while removing his hood and taking out a white feather to rub against the Goron's blood showing that he had completed his task.

"Why.....why did you go to this much trouble just to bring me down Marek??" The bleeding Goron chuckles lightly as it feels itself losing its breath underneath the boulders.

"You're worth 10,000 Rupees alive and 15,000 dead, I think the price of your head should speak for itself Ogama. You thought you could get away with not only weapons smuggling but also trading Goron secrets to other races including the Gerudo tribes, you ended up pissing off a lot of people and here I am, collecting your bounty." Marek calmly states to the Goron as he watches the Goron start to gasp now.

"But Marek, agh.......you're...a...Gerudo....tooooo............" Ogama gasps as his eyes close for the final time with Marek walking back towards the mountain now, thinking about what the Goron said as those last words echoing through his mind.

"Yeah, I guess I am a Gerudo afterall. I'm the first of a new generation, the one that will change the ways of our people and bring us to new heights of glory." Marek thought to himself confidently as he returned to Death Mountain amongst the Gorons to collect his reward for a day's work.

Hope this is acceptable right now.
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Well, Xulek, I do like the character. Truly, I do. But I believe I asked for a minimun of two paragraphs for the history. If you could add the second paragraph when you return to do the RP sample, I'd be much obliged. That would be my only problem with your SU so far, and since you have yet to finish it, I'll keep you reserved.

@ Juniebug: Don't worry, I saw you, just took me awhile. Check my last post.
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Old December 4th, 2011, 02:02 PM
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Ok, I'll edit my SU! I shall edit.....now! XDDDD

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