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Old January 5th, 2005 (11:58 AM). Edited January 5th, 2005 by Pogiforce-14.
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"FAITH"


For the one I love,
Always by my side
In sickness and in health
Till death do us part.
Heaven awaits the faithful.








"Forever Yours"
I belong to you.
My body and soul are yours to command.
I'm happy simply as a slave to your love,
But your perfection gives me equality.
Yet I am forever yours.


Wherever I am I think about you
And when I'm asleep I dream about you.
You're always on my mind, a sweet reminder
of the love you give I eagerly recieve.
For I am forever yours.


You deserve it all, and it all I would give
Just to see your smiling face,
Feel the fluttering of my heart as I hear your voice
and the softness of your touch upon my skin.
My love, I am forever yours.


Our future is bright. May it never grow dim.
I'm guided by the light to the half that makes me whole
To a perfect future with my one true love.
We'll live happily ever after, you and me.
I am forever yours.
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Old January 5th, 2005 (01:22 PM).
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Awwwws, I like Forever Yours, it's a very sweet poem. I think you meant "swear" instead of "sweer". ;; The first one is cute but kind of questionable. It just seems a bit too short to me. ^___^ Well done on them both, Pogi.

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Old January 5th, 2005 (01:57 PM).
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The first one was intended to be short, and that was meant to be "Sweet", so I need to go back and fix that typo.
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Old January 5th, 2005 (02:07 PM). Edited January 7th, 2005 by Kelsey.
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Yes, I figured the first one was supposed to be short. ^______^ Great job on them both though. ^o^ Actually, there are several short poems people have writtenhere on PC and elsewhere. A lot of them are quite good, actually. Yours is very well done too, I must add.

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