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POKEMON: ETERNAL DIVIDE  Createdby: eternal dreamer Concoction Mania,2012 Crazed Inc. Information: Pokémon: Eternal Divide Created in RPG Maker XP, using the Pokémon Starter Kit (December 24th update). The project was started on January 27, 2012 and will combine aspects from gba and ds games while still creating its own unique iniverse. Areas: First Continent (Urix) 6 Towns 4 Cities 5 *Major* forests 2 *Major* Lake Tons of Caves The PKMN League Second Continent (Pyriel) Comprised of Ruins, Caves and Mountains Houses & Most, if not all, Legendary PKMN 3 Forests Tons of Caves Ruins Ancient Cities & More to come! Primary Island (Battle Island) 1 City Contains mountains and caves Battle Factory styled area. IV&EV Training area Secondary Islands (Outcast islands) Mostly wooded areas The SEA Multiple Dive spots around both continents Filled with Trainers Multiple Minor Caves Some Large caves Dream Worlds (Heaven & Hell) The Moon Area Details: First Continent details: A lush, forest infested area entangled in rivers and sea-like waters. An area that seems to have been untouched by the hands of man, but rather: man having been placed within. Although the waters may be difficult to overcome, and the forests filled with fear, one cannot oversee the beauty of its calming landscape. And at the peak of its wonderfulness, is home to the greatest of the great: The Pokémon League. Whoever shall lay a single foot in the halls of Glorious Triumph shall never leave the same. Will you dare test your might against the greatness that is the Elite Nine? (That's right...NINE...then the champion) Second Continent Details: A land ravaged by the Gods themselves. A land torn apart by years of endless wars. A land shrouded by the mist of defeat. A land…without hope. If the wars do not end, life as we know it shall cease to exist. Will you step up to the challenge condemned upon humanity by the recklessness of the Gods? Primary Island details: A calm and dreamy island that has become a refuge for those seeking shelter from the pains of life. But not only the weary have come to this island, but also the mighty. And in time, the battle for glory began. Over the years, many adventurers have passed through the island seeking fame, but few have found it. Welcome…to Battle Island. Secondary Island details: A small, uninhabited island that has become filled with wild and dangerous Pokémon. Dream World – Heaven details: A world created to house the world’s greatest of persons, and the strongest of Pokémon. A world secluded from everything, an entrance hidden away in the deepest depths of the wooded continent [first continent], and a legend with no bounds. Dream world – hell details: An uninhabitable area covered with fire and mindless trainers whose only goal isto battle. There is no actual life in this world, but in reality just a mirage created by a legend. Will you be able to quell the Beast and end the madness of Hell? The Moon details: A small colony was made on this naturally hovering satellite in order to advance science in its purest sense. Although the intentions are pure, the actions are not. The King of the Stars has awoken in rage, and none are sure why. Will anyone be able to stop his insane reign? THE STORY  The Gods created two continents;[First] to house the creatures they created, and [Second] for people to worshipand temples for themselves to live in. But over time, the Gods grew tired ofthe others, and the end was in sight. For through their rage, did the Originalsawake. One that created the heavens and all the joy within. Another thatcreated creatures in its image: the “Legendary Pokémon.” And the third, thatcreated death itself, along with all the suffering in the world. And, as noneknew, they despised each other. Through their hate, the wars began. A team arose in the madness, separated into three factions, whose only goal is to end the world. Now, it is up to you to end their madness. Screen Shots! Spoiler:
Some Features: Spoiler:
Change Log: Spoiler:
If you would like to assist me in my project, please PM me, or reply to this post!
I am open to any criticism, so be completely honest!
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POKEMON: ETERNAL DIVIDE   Uploaded with ImageShack.us Project start date: 1/27/12 Last edited by Eternal Dreamer; February 4th, 2012 at 07:34 AM.
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February 7th, 2012, 02:06 AM
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 God I hate that message text. "The water is dyed a deep blue", is that implying that someone actually dyed the water that color? It's just a nitpick, and if you don't want to do anything about it that's fine, but it will make your game stand out a bit. Check the spacing of your story synopsis. It seems some words that should be two separate words are getting meshed together. Could you go into some details as far as the characters involved in this story? Are you simply playing as Red as the screenshots suggest? |
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February 9th, 2012, 04:54 PM
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