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Old February 8th, 2012 (02:04 PM). Edited April 3rd, 2012 by AtavanHalen343.
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OLD FAKEMON
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Leaflet
Grass Starter
Arctic Pokemon
GRASS


Drafear
Fire Starter
Imp Pokemon
FIRE


Moltifer
Fire Starter
Molten Pokemon
FIRE/DARK


Ogringe
Fire Starter
Demon Pokemon
FIRE/DARK


Aquasect
Water Starter
Aquatic Pokemon
WATER


Bushlem
Bush Pokemon
GRASS


Fizzbur
Fizzle Pokemon
FIRE


Lamber
Lamb Pokemon
FIRE/GHOST


Feirberra
Aberration Pokemon
FIRE/GHOST


Charmoal
Blind Pokemon
DARK/GROUND

M
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Hipposaur
Fossil
Energetic Pokemon
ROCK/ELECTRIC


Boonket
Spooked Pokemon
NORMAL/GHOST


Patrobo
Robotic Pokemon
STEEL/ELECTRIC


NEW FAKEMON
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Saptus
Grass Starter
Mischeivous Pokemon
GRASS


Cactofear
Grass Starter
Regret Pokemon
GRASS/GHOST


Dacaytus
Grass Starter
Decrepit Pokemon
GRASS/GHOST


Embvaark
Fire Starter
Ember Pokemon
FIRE


Sizzark
Fire Starter
Flame Pokemon
FIRE


Aarsun
Fire Starter
Energy Pokemon
FIRE/ELECTRIC


Pomporb
Water Starter(?)
Puffed-Up Pokemon
WATER


Krull
Terra Pokemon
GHOST/ROCK


Dimwatt
Dim Pokemon
ELECTRIC/DARK
Not the brightest pokemon, figuratively and literally. They live in caves, where they are preyed upon due to their constant glow and inability to hide effectively due to said glow. The only thing dimmer than the light it gives is it's intelligence.


Thundertyn
LEGENDARY
Colossal Pokemon
ELECTRIC/GROUND
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Old February 8th, 2012 (02:52 PM).
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Drafear is adorable, I love the design! :D

Crit-wise, I think he's mostly all right, though the mouth could probably use some tweaking. Try to change the shape to make it look more "natural" - as it is right now, it's completely straight on the top and a near-perfect half circle (if not perfect) on the bottom rather than fluid curves. I'd recommend changing its position a bit, too; kind of looks like it's not part of the body because of where you put it. Not sure if you were aiming for such a style but felt like it was worth a mention. (: I love how you did the body though, looks very nice!

Additionally, the thick outlines where the legs are on your last sprite also look a bit out of place next to the one pixel-thick lines almost everywhere else.

Looking forward to more! Loving your concepts. :3
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Old February 8th, 2012 (03:09 PM). Edited February 8th, 2012 by AtavanHalen343.
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Here's Drafear's new mouth. Whaddya think?



Just finished a new scratch!


Hipposaur
Energetic Pokemon
ROCK/ELECTRIC
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Old February 9th, 2012 (08:31 AM).
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The mouth certainly does look better! :D It's cuter this way; glad to see you worked on it so quickly! :3

The second one you posted is very dark for me, though... can't really say anything about it until you brighten the black a bit.
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Old February 9th, 2012 (09:37 AM).
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Wow I love them, great job!
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Old February 9th, 2012 (02:01 PM). Edited February 9th, 2012 by AtavanHalen343.
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Hipposaur (RECOLOR)
Thank you very much for the comments guys! ^.^
The Grass Starter will be up soon!!!

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Leaflet
Grass Starter
Arctic Pokemon
GRASS


Charmoal
Blind Pokemon
DARK/GROUND
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Old February 10th, 2012 (08:11 AM).
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You should consider sketching your ideas down before spriting them. I don't see this hippo different from any ordinary hippo other than it being on its hind legs. Perhaps adding some appendages.
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Old February 10th, 2012 (11:05 AM). Edited February 10th, 2012 by AtavanHalen343.
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I actually do sketch the idea before spriting, thank you. though I do appreciate you looking, it would be nice if you commented on the other sprites as well. I will edit the sprite to show this, but the belly is actually made of a glass-like substance, and the glowing blue is the electrical energy inside of it.


There we go. I made the cavity shinier and added bolts going through it.

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Boonket
Spooked Pokemon
NORMAL/GHOST

EDIT: Final form of the fire starter ^.^

Ogringe
Fire Starter
Demon Pokemon
FIRE/DARK
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Old February 11th, 2012 (10:27 AM). Edited February 11th, 2012 by AtavanHalen343.
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Moltifer
Fire Starter
Molten Pokemon
FIRE/DARK

EDIT:
Made a few hanges to Hipposaur to show his electric half. Decided to make this the male form. ^.^ Any thoughts?


EDIT:

Patrobo
Robotic Pokemon
STEEL/ELECTRIC


Fizzbur
Fizzle Pokemon
FIRE


Bushlem
Bush Pokemon
GRASS



EDIT:
FINALLY! Finished the water starter! ^.^

Aquasect
Water Starter
Aquatic Pokemon
WATER
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Old February 13th, 2012 (03:47 PM).
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Well, my old fakemon weren't the best, so I'm scrapping those sprites. I've tried a new method of spriting, taking pictures of my drawings and going over them in paint, and I'd say the results are pretty nice. ^.^

Embvaark
Fire Starter
Ember Pokemon
FIRE


Sizzark
Fire Starter
Flame Pokemon
FIRE

COMIN SOON!!!
Aarsun
Fire Starter
Energy Pokemon
FIRE/ELECTRIC
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Old February 14th, 2012 (05:55 PM).
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FINALLY FINISHED WITH AARSUN!!! Feedback would be nice


Aarsun
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Energy Pokemon
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Old February 15th, 2012 (08:24 PM).
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I think that the Embvaark is really nice and doesn't need that much of a change.
Sizzark face could be a bit rounder and you are using colours way to bright. Try using colours from already existing pokemon so that it blends better.
Aarsun I think he needs a little more detail because for a 3rd evo it's kinda simple. And the colours also are way to bright.
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Old March 18th, 2012 (06:38 PM).
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Well, life ran off with my time, but the two day drive to Idaho for my grandpa's funeral gave me some time to work on and improve me spritin'.


new Aarsun


new Embvark


new Sizzark


new one!
POMPORB
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Old March 18th, 2012 (07:28 PM).
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Well, life ran off with my time, but the two day drive to Idaho for my grandpa's funeral gave me some time to work on and improve me spritin'.


new Aarsun


new Embvark


new Sizzark


new one!
POMPORB
These are pretty great. I actually liked their colors much more before they were changed, but each to his own. Aarsun loses the ears completely; is there any specific reason for that? I'm assuming these are based on an aardvark, which is a mammal. Most mammals have ears, so why not keep them?

It'd also be neat if you added little Pokedex descriptions after each Fakemon in your first post, for your new ones I mean. What sort of concept is Pomporb of? I can't really tell if it's a fish or some other creature. But you'll probably add on, I guess?
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Old March 19th, 2012 (07:53 AM). Edited March 19th, 2012 by AtavanHalen343.
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Well, they were originally based on Aardvarks, but I decided to go with a more "dire rhinoceros/triceratops" type deal. The original Aarsun didn't have ears, actually, but the new one has them behind the black plate on his face. I plan on adjusting Embvaark and Sizzark's colors, as I used Aarsun's as a placeholder pretty much. Pomporb is based on a Pufferfish, mixed with the idea and attitude of pompous royal and aristocrats. I got the idea from the term "puffed up". lol I'm gonna edit him a bit soon.

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Krull
ROCK/GHOST

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Old March 23rd, 2012 (12:54 PM).
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NEW! It's a legendary. It's still a WIP, but it's temporarily named Lightantes
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Old March 24th, 2012 (03:26 PM). Edited March 25th, 2012 by Atomic Pirate.
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Well, life ran off with my time, but the two day drive to Idaho for my grandpa's funeral gave me some time to work on and improve me spritin'.


new Aarsun


new Embvark


new Sizzark


new one!
POMPORB
I like the new Aarsun 500x better than the older one. It reminds me of Ganon from LoZ. You should make the shiny version blue as opposed to red, that would make it look like classic Ganon. As for Pomporb, it's a very simple design, but it's interesting enough. If Pomporb has an evolution, it should have a crown or something. Maybe even separate M/F forms looking like a king and queen, respectively.

Sorry for the wordwall of suggestions, but overall, these are really good sprites.

One more thing: The legendary looks a bit off, and it doesn't look like a legendary at all. I think it would be much better if the head wasn't part of the torso, but that's just my opinion.
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One more thing: The legendary looks a bit off, and it doesn't look like a legendary at all. I think it would be much better if the head wasn't part of the torso, but that's just my opinion.
In regards to the legendary; yes, it could use some work and development. But look at Heatran, an official Pokemon; it's not all that complex either. Just because it's head is a part of the torso doesn't mean it's not a Pokemon. Look at Hitmonlee. Its torso basically is its head.
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Old March 31st, 2012 (12:27 PM).
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Thank you for the comments and criticisms! But, as it says by the prite, it's a work in progress, which means it's NOT FINISHED. So, no need to jump the gun claiming it "doesn't look legendary" anyway, New sprite! it's the grass starter


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Thank you for the comments and criticisms! But, as it says by the prite, it's a work in progress, which means it's NOT FINISHED. So, no need to jump the gun claiming it "doesn't look legendary" anyway, New sprite! it's the grass starter


Saptus
Pretty good. However, the light green part of the Pokemon has shading that is a bit dark. I would suggest making the shading a slight bit lighter, but other than that, it is a good sprite.
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Old April 1st, 2012 (09:51 AM).
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Thanks! I'm working on him some now, and I just finished up working on the legendary!

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Quote originally posted by AtavanHalen343:
Thanks! I'm working on him some now, and I just finished up working on the legendary!

Cool! It look much more legendary-like than the last one! The head/neck part looks weird to me somehow. :D
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Old April 1st, 2012 (01:18 PM).
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Lol thanks! ^.^ I have a new pokemon! I'm gonna start giving little pokemon blurbs describing the pokemon!


Dimwatt
Dim Pokemon
ELECTRIC/DARK
Not the brightest pokemon, figuratively and literally. They live in caves, where they are preyed upon due to their constant glow and inability to hide effectively due to said glow. The only thing dimmer than the light it gives is it's intelligence.
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That description is LOL! By the way, is that Fakemon see-through?
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Old April 2nd, 2012 (03:50 PM). Edited April 2nd, 2012 by AtavanHalen343.
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Yes, it is. lol New! Saptus evo! I'm rather proud of how my spriting is improving.


Cactofear
The Regret Pokemon
GRASS/GHOST

EDIt: Saptus improvement!

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